Not sure what kinds of comments your are looking for so here is a small note. I guess you got the short end of the stick as far as Iron goes. All those mountains and none.
Placement seem ok, did not look it over real careful though. I would prefer a harbor in Cataractonium. The spear won't save the day and a harbor will let you get another settler to grab the rest of the island. Not to mention bring in the happiness.
I see a few spears going up in non barracks towns, not a useful thing if in Republic. No MP and they are not worth anything. You are over the unit support anyway.
Just my preference, but I do not like to see 1's, 2's and 3's working on jungle. gang them up or leave the tile alone. I would be inclinded to have them back doing something with the forest any how.
Looks line you could drop another town on the coast by Chartiers. The land is in fog, but it seem clear a grass tile is there.
One of the towns making an archer needs an aqua. Try to get towns up to cities and that is where the workers should concentrate.
I think I would make horses rather than archers anyway. I know you are thinking of longbows, but you do not have any money. I would make some troops to replace a few of the warriors. get them near the front.
You need that Iron of Hammi as you know. No research is being done, so why make even more libs? Look at some the jokers they can go to work.
Look at the lux slider and see if it can be lowered. If you do need a specialist make it a taxman (if not researching).