Outstanding story! Very entertaining. You probably spend more time noting the alliances, peace treaties and betrayals than playing the game!
And just because you said that part of the reason for this is to help your English (otherwise I would never have mentioned it considering the typos in my stories ):
and Uriburu never intended to brake that promise
In this context the spelling would be break. A brake is something used to slow down: "I put the brakes on to stop the car". On the other hand you can "break a promise". Break is almost always the correct spelling when it comes to the two - 'brake' has limited usage.
And just because you said that part of the reason for this is to help your English (otherwise I would never have mentioned it considering the typos in my stories ):
and Uriburu never intended to brake that promise
In this context the spelling would be break. A brake is something used to slow down: "I put the brakes on to stop the car". On the other hand you can "break a promise". Break is almost always the correct spelling when it comes to the two - 'brake' has limited usage.