1895-1920: America's rise to Empire

oh, my pleasure :D great to see AoI in print :goodjob:

from a designer/producer standpoint, the infantry units, or the regular ones, are equal to roughly a division (in-game). of course, this is just a designer's note and in no way am i disputing your accounts. i mean, keep going with it and the size of each unit is clearly subjective. so no worries. cav units in-game were set to represent a troop. so i think you mentioned that. arty pieces are equivelent to a battery and each ship is equal to a single ship.

no sweat on the uniform stuff. like you said, it could very well have been khakis in the jungles. so i'm only going by recollection.

San Francsico was indeed a major staging point for troops heading to the P.I. and Tampa was the primary point for Cuba.

screenies, or even ones cropped down, are great supplements to a story :D
 
from post #18:
"Do you know who we spent the next 8 years fighting? Those same bastards. Turns out, liberators often become occupiers, and occupiers quickly become oppressors."

Sigh.

The real world has intruded into my enjoyment of Civ3 once again.

Enjoyable story, by the way. I appreciate you putting so much effort into breathing life into the story. Screen caps wouldn't capture the flavor of your story, of course, but could you post a map or two to help visualize where all the events are taking place?

Keep up the good work!
 
@BuckyRea

Wow, to be honest, I really hadn't even thought of that connection there. Sorry.
On the flip side, thanks a lot for the support! The same goes to El Justo.

The computers acting really weird, but i'll have an update either tonight or tommorw
 
Corporal Collin Sullivan, U.S. Marine Corps, 1st Battalion, Pacific Force

With the 1st Marine Battalion ashore, and digging into a beachhead perimeter, the first part of the Pacific force comes ashore. The Marine beachhead is reinforced with the 2nd Battalion, and the Sims-Dudley dynamite guns are brought it. With the 1st Battalion leading the way, American forces move towards Agana, swatting aside feeble opposition from native sentry units. Within a week, Marines have captured a high ground position outside of the capitol, and the artillery digs in. The first substantial confrontation between American and Spanish forces in the Pacific is about to begin.

…

Sullivan sat in the trench line, listened as the artillery opened fire, a crashing sound so loud that the Marines couldn’t even speak to each other. The gunners had taken off their shirts in the intense heat, and those not stricken down by malaria worked at a feverish pace, jamming rounds into the breach.

Agana, a small town compared to Boston or San Francisco, was being battered remorselessly. The picture perfect buildings, the largest being three stories, were being pummeled remorselessly. The Sims-Dudley guns had fired almost non-stop, a continuous bombardment. Gunners had wrapped soaked rags around the barrels, or poured buckets of water down onto them.

Sullivan’s ears were ringing, and he couldn’t hear Pope until the man came up behind him and tapped his shoulder, motioned for him to follow. Sullivan pulled up his Krag, a thin blanket wrapped around the barrel to keep mud out, and followed him, climbed out of the trenches with the rest of the squad. Pope walked them back 50 yards or so, turned around and kneeled. He looked at them, waited.

“We’ll be attacking in an hour. We’re going straight in, bayonets first. Sims-Dudleys will provide fire for us. Once we get maybe,” he paused, thinking “75 yards into town, they’ll bring down some of the guns. There will be little kicking down of doors. You find some of the enemy, surround the building and wait for a gun to come and blow it down.”

Sullivan waited for more. Pope stood, began walking back to the trenches, paused and turned around.

“That’s all there is. Those are the orders.”

…

Sullivan looked over the edge, a sugar cane field separating the 1st Battalion from the Spaniards. The guns reached a crescendo, a rolling bombardment, and silence. Sullivan waited for the whistle, heard it, and rushed up, the others doing the same, charging towards the broken town, rifles extended, bayonets in front.

From Agana, rifles began to crack as the Spaniards opened fire, a single Maxim off to left. The Sims-Dudley guns opened fire on it and the Maxim went silent. Sullivan moved forward, running, Pope in front of him moving in a tireless marching run. Follow me. Sullivan angled towards the town, couldn’t stop to return fire, saw Pope get hit, his body jerk, dust come off of his jacket. He dropped almost instantly, just hit and down.

Sullivan kept going, reached the first building, used the solid wall to stop his movement. Contadino came in behind him, the new men too. One of them had been killed out in the field, and so had the sergeant. Sullivan moved up and leaned around the corner, saw a muzzle flash up ahead in a shop window. Sullivan got to his stomach and opened fire, Contadino standing over him and doing the same.

Sullivan reloaded his rifle twice, and got up and waved his arm. “Move forward!” He shouted, and he ran, knew the other Marines would follow him. Sullivan was out of breath, his head pounded. Keep moving dammit! The thought went through his head again and again. Bullets kicked up the dirt near his feet, and he got across the street, another ten yards ahead, his marines following him. Contadino came behind him again.

“Where’s Pope?”

“Pope’s dead.” Sullivan answered. He had to shout over the rifle fire, a continuous series of pops and cracks. Contadino was silent for a second.

“So what’re we gonna do?”

“We have to,” he paused. “we have to get to that house.” He pointed down the street, the shop where the Spaniards had been. “That’s 75 yards. We get there, they’ll bring the guns up and blast ‘em.” Sullivan turned and leaned back against the wall, looked at them. “We’ll clear it down quickly. I’ll go through the front, Contadino, with me. What’re your names again?” he looked at the new men.

“Dawls.”
“De Souza.”
“Jackson.”
“Cardis”

Sullivan nodded, putting names to the faces. “Okay, Dawls and De Souza will go around the back, Jackson too. Cardis, how do you shoot?”

“I shoot ok corporal.”

“Okay, good, you’ll cover us all from here.” Sullivan said. Cardis nodded, and Sullivan turned back towards the street, the muzzle flashes and shouts and screams. “Lets get going”

(to be continued over several updates)
 
Sullivan edged back around the corner to the main road, looked to the shop. Nothing moved at the windows that he could see. He raised his arm, waved it forward, and went running, his feet pounding the dirt road, the other four men following him.

Sullivan saw movement in the second floor, where the roof had been, a man standing, raising a rifle. Sullivan hit the ground, a crack, and the man crumpled. Sullivan got back up, waved back to Cardis and kept going. He reached the front of the building, waved De Souza, Dawls, and Jackson around to the rear. Contadino swung his rifle butt into the front window, shattering it, and Sullivan went in from the front door. Contadino climbed in from the front window.

Sullivan slung the rifle and pulled out the .38 revolver. He moved to a small set of stairs, could hear the other three breaking in from the rear. A man appeared at the top of the stairs and Sullivan flipped up the revolver, fired, the round hitting the Spaniard in the chest. He kept coming and Sullivan fired again, moving backwards. The man kept coming, a rifle extended, a long bladed bayonet attached, his eyes wild. Sullivan fired again, and the man fell, clattered down the stairs.

Sullivan glanced back at Contadino.

“We need a better pistol for this kind of stuff.”

“Or a shotgun.”

Sullivan stepped over the body, stopped, grabbed the man’s rifle and took the bayonet off. He looked back to Contadino. The small man shrugged, and Sullivan kept going, putting the knife through his belt.

Sullivan opened up the cylinder, and let this six shells clatter out of the revolver. He put in another six and kept going, kept close to the wall, sweat running down his forehead into his eyes.

He reached the top and went first to the right, through a small doorway. The roof had been blown off, and Sullivan was once more outside in the heat, the bright sun. Several dead men lay slumped over the wall, rifles, some shattered, sat next to them. Contadino went through to the left, and came back after a second. He looked around.

“It’s the same thing over there. The house is empty.”

Sullivan nodded, watched as the other men came up, and waved to Cardis, who began to move towards them. He turned back to his men, ducking. Bullets and shells still filled the air.

“Dawls, get that bed sheet,” He pointed to a small, blood stained piece of cloth, “and set it here, facing the guns. Pope had the flag showing we had reached the 75 yard line, but he’s out in that damned sugar cane field. When you’re finished, meet us in the street.”

Sullivan holstered the revolver and un-slung the rifle, opened the bolt and checked. A round popped out, and Sullivan caught it, checked, four rounds, and pushed it back in. The Krag was fully loaded.

The squad rallied on him and Sullivan moved them off to the right, where the main street split. Dawls joined them as they went, and Sullivan moved them out in a single file line, keeping close to the buildings. The Spaniards had clearly already left this side of town, and Sullivan could see dead men in the street, bits of clothing, and spent shells.

Dawls shouted and dropped to the ground, his rifle firing as he went. Sullivan could see them, a group of enemy troops fleeing out of a building, maybe six.

“Open fire!” Sullivan shouted and dropped to a knee, aimed at the backs of one of the men, and squeezed the trigger, the Krag jumping back into his shoulder, the man dropping to the ground. He worked the bolt, and around him, his Marines opened up, a steady pop pop of rifles. The Spaniards went down, and Sullivan stood up, raised his hand.

“Move forward, as you are. Stay spread out, they may be playing dead. Bayonet the bodies if they look suspicious.”

They moved forward, further into Agana.
 
“Marines?” a voice shouted from one of the smaller buildings, a block from where the Spanish troops had been shot down as they ran.

Sullivan, his khaki uniform stained with sweat from the ungodly heat, rose from his crouch, shouted back, “1st battalion, A company! You?”

“B of the 2nd. We came in to reinforce. Come on down!”

Sullivan waved them forward, and they moved towards the ruins of a small house, rifles poking out of the windows, Sullivan saw them, the Marines, nodded.

A man, the one who had shouted to them came forward. He held out his hand. Sullivan grabbed it and shook hard.

“Sergeant James Deinhart.”

“Corporal Collin Sullivan, A of the 1st.”

The sergeant nodded again, turned around and looked at the other Marines. “Anyone from A of the 1st?”

A couple nodded and grabbed their rifles and gear, moved to join Sullivan. Sullivan looked at Deinhart, a look on his face.

“The 1st got scattered in all the side streets. So we’ve been picking up stragglers, and mopping up the Spaniards who waited till they got passed by.” Deinhart, counted them, the A company men. “16 of you. Ok, as far as I know, most of your 1st boys are attacking the town hall. So I say you go there. We’d join you, but we’ve got orders.” He frowned ruefully. “Best of luck to you.”

Sullivan nodded, understood. Orders. Go through the field, follow me. He could hear Pope’s command, the last the man had made. Damn, it was a shame. A real tragedy.

“Alright, follow me. We’ll move up this street, and go towards the sound of the guns. Any questions?”

No one said a word. Sullivan nodded again, thanked Deinhart, and left, his troops following him, spread out but moving more easily. B company men had cleared the area, and were visible, pointing towards where the 1st Battalion was, yelling encouragments.

Sullivan fell into step with each man, talking to them.

“What’s your name, Marine?”

“Roscoe, sir. Roscoe Greene.”

“Where’re you from?”

“California, sir.” Greene replied, and Sullivan laughed lightly.

“I’m a corporal, not an officer or a sergeant. Relax. Did you see your folks before we left? Back in San Fransisco?”

A shadow flashed across the man’s face.

“No. Lieutenant said we didn’t have the time. I sent them a letter though.” He smiled, easing up, “My pa, he’s really proud of me. He was a Marine too. Never saw combat though. He’s really proud. And my ma, well, I can tell she is too. She cried a lot, but I know she is.”

Sullivan nodded, thinking about his own parents, his tough father trying to be two different people, the husband of a rich Boston woman with his wife’s friends, and the tough Irish immigrant who had walked off the boat with his friends, his eyes wild and full of hope. He thought about his mother, her thin, frail body and crane like neck, a slight smile in her face and in her eyes. Sullivan hadn’t written them, and by now they had to know something was going on, had to be worried.

Greene kept talking, but silently, letting Sullivan think. He said lightly, “Thanks, Corporal. This talking…it sure helped, I guess. All this, I…I dunno. I thought it’d be different.”

A rifle cracked, and Greene’s neck exploded in an arterial spray. Sullivan didn’t know what happened; The man was just down, and Sullivan’s face was warm. He brought a hand up, wiped it, saw the blood, sticking to his fingers, realized what had happened.

“Open fire, wherever that sniper is, open fire!” He shouted over the pock of rifle fire, dropping to the ground and turning to Greene, the man still, blood seeping from his torn throat. He was dead, one hit and down, like Pope and Keyes, just dead.

“Corporal, I see him. He’s surrendering. White flag and everything.”

Sullivan turned, watched the man approach, waving a small piece of stained cloth, his hands up. Sullivan stood up, watched him, the ragged blue uniform and haggard moustache, a grin, like he was glad his war was ending.

Sullivan pulled out his .38 and pulled back the hammer, aimed at the man’s head, and fired. The top of the Spaniard’s skull exploded, and he fell to the ground, dead, not even a chance. The same as Pope and Keyes and Greene. He had barely known the man, only a minute or two of conversation, but it affected him just like the other two.

No one said anything, one man went over to the body and picked up the small white flag, and threw it away, muttering “bastard.” The rest slowly gathered around the Corporal and the dead man, helped up Sullivan, who had fallen to his knees. He wasn’t crying, but his eyes stung. The others stood there for a moment. No one gave him hell for killing an unarmed man, or for showing even this emotion. The espirit de corps was too strong for that.

Sullivan finally looked away, and walked to some nearby ruins, tugged out a cloth from the rubble, and brought it over to Greene. With reverence, he covered the man. A Marine uttered a prayer, and they picked up the body and moved it into some shade. Sullivan stood still for a second, his head hung, and finally looked around.

“We’ve got a job to finish.”
 
He walked along the shore, avoiding the patrols, stayed out of sight mostly. Bastion carried nothing other than his deranger and knife. He was dressed in a black suit, no tie, looking like a man lost in his thoughts. It was an act, and he wasn’t watching the ocean intently because of anything on his mind.

He could hear it now, a slight slapping on the water, just above the sound of the tide. Bastion looked around, saw no Spaniards, let out a sigh of relief.

Thank Christ, he though. Took you damned well long enough. He crouched in the sand, behind a small boat, looked back inland, looking for anyone, any movement. It had been Monty’s idea, a rendezvous in the middle of nowhere, said he had contacts who would be willing to help him equip a rebellion. And so here he was, crouching in a damned nice suit on the beach, clutching the little deranger, as if it could compete with a Spanish mauser.

The boat came ashore, a small rowboat. Four men jumped out, dragged it up onto the beach, began pulling out bags, rifles. Bastion watched them, judging. Yep. Professionals, for sure.

“Nice night huh?” He called, crouched behind the boat, thought don’t shoot, Spaniards would get here pretty damn quick.

“It’d be better in Algeria,” a reply came back, heavily accented English. “But, beggers can’t be choosers, eh?” The group got their gear, and moved towards him. All were unassuming, didn’t stand out. Except for their eyes. Bastion saw it immediately, hard, cold eyes, points of darkness in the night. These men had killed many times before.

One extended his hand. “Mr. Bastion?” Bastion shook it, “Lieutenant Beaumont?” The man nodded, and Bastion glanced back at the others, looked back at Beaumont. “You’re Canadian aren’t you?”

The man laughed slightly, nodded. “Yes, very good. You’re good with accents. Yes, I’m Canadian.”

“How’re you here? Royal Navy?”

“No. French cruiser dropped us off. We're Foreign Legion. Turns out, our good Colonel owes a mutual friend of ours.”

Bastion nodded, grinned. “A Frenchman owing something to a Brit. Imagine that. What did you bring?”

“American rifles. Lee straight-pull rifles. Two bandoleers per rifle.” Beaumont looked around. “How’re we getting out of here?”

“I’ve got a wagon. Come on.”

They ran, loaded up the wagon, and covered the rifles with straw. Beaumont got up front, the other three Legionnaires went into the back. Bastion sat onto the bench, nodded to him. “Well, lets go.”

4 hours later, the Legionnaires and the American were in a small building in Sidi Ifni. Sweat ran down their face and soaked their clothes. To call the building primitive was an understatement. But Bastion was willing to put up with it. In front of him, was a gathering of men who opposed Spanish rule. The beginnings of a coup.

Bastion looked around, stood, up said in Spanish, “Gentlemen, let us begin. You are about to be engaged in treason to Spain…”
 
He ran forward, waving his arm, “Move up the damned hill! Hurry, go!” From the top of the hill, he could see muzzle flashes, Cubans. He raised the revolver, fired, waved his hand forward again, saw Captain O’Hara, yelled “Captain, move your men, we’re taking that hill!”

O’Hara responded, shouted and organized his troops, moved them up. Around Butcher, he could hear snaps and pops as rounds came in. The battalion was spread out around the base of the hill, lying down and returning fire. Butcher moved to the left, towards Vater’s troopers, the thick brush covering his movements.

He saw the captain moved up, put a hand on his arm, “Captain, move your men forward!”

Vater stood up, shot at the top of the hill, went back down. “Sir, we can’t move that well. Not gonna lie, those bastards are damn well entrenched for a bunch of guerillas. They want to fight here.”

“O’Hara is moving up on your flank. You can take that position. Send a runner to the 22nd, Inform them of the move.”

“Yes sir,” Vater nodded, waved a man forward, “Templeton, job for you!”

Butcher moved back to O’Hara, watched as the cavalrymen moved forward, would drop to the ground, fire and then move again. The men had gone in dismounted, it ended up better that way.

A cavalryman rode up, brought the horse to a halt. “Sir! Major Butcher?”

Butcher nodded. “Yeah, get of that damned horse!”

The man jumped off, hit the ground in a cloud of dust, stumbled. “Sir, I’m from Captain Moore’s battery. We’ve got a couple of the Hotchkiss guns, 6 of them, ready to support you. Sir.”

Butcher knew Moore, a good man, nodded and grinned. “Alright. Go and inform Captain Moore to open fire on the top of that hill.” The man nodded, scrambled back onto the horse and rode away, a flurry of rifle fire following him. Butcher moved back, pulled out some binoculars, looked, watched as his troopers moved up, saw men falling, the air alive with a wail of snaps and cracks, the sound of men’s fury and screams.

Moore’s battery opened fire, the shells screaming into the hill, and Butcher looked at the crest, saw the eruptions, the incoming fire slackening. He put the binoculars away, could see his troopers reach the crest, knew that there, the fighting was fierce, men going hand to hand, bayonets and carbine butts. An American flag was slowly brought up, flapped in the wind, and Butcher looked at it, thought, yes, this is where I belong.

…

The 21st and 22nd Cavalry pushed the Cuban Rebels back into Nuesvistas, and, reinforced by two battalions of Infantry, surrounded the city, entrenching. As the main thrust of the army moved towards Santiago de Cuba, and the last Spanish hold out, the forces at Nuesvistas slowly continued to dig trenches even closer to the city, and the slowly starving rebels. In desperation, the rebels begin to stock pile their ammunition, prepare for one attempt to break the lines and bring in supplies.
 
The trench system they occupied were elaborate affairs, made by the engineers who had accompanied the invasion force. Butcher himself sat on a small folding chair in a dug out, the second line of trenches, writing. To his front, his remaining 350 troopers were in the front row of trenches, trading off the watch. The engineers had dug wells, so water was now in fresh supply. And his men needed it, Butcher knew. It was hot, almost a hundred degrees, and the ground was packed solid, every step bringing up clouds of dust, until every man was breathing it in, choking on it.

Butcher stood up, put his pencil in the small book on his desk, pulled on his gloves and slouch hat. He walked stiffly, looked out to the front. The second line of trenches was on slightly raised ground, Butchers quarters at the highest point, and so he could see Nuesvistas well, and his men going about their business. He looked through his binoculars, stared at the city, thought what in the hell are they doing in there? He wiped his forehead, the sweat soaking into his white-khaki gloves. So similar to Arizona…but not. Curious.

“Major!” A man had arrived, soaked in sweat, panting. “Sergeant Kelly told me to tell you, his recon men have spotted a large force moving towards us, and damn fast.” Butcher looked at him, looked back through the binoculars, could see the dust now, could hear Kelly’s men open fire.

“Sgt. Kelly is to withdraw back to the main lines, form in to our front. Move!” Butcher yelled it, looked to his front, could see Kelly’s recon men hold, stiffen. “Captain Moore!”

The man was in the front row of trenches, his six guns dug in at regular intervals. To their left was the 22nd, to their right was the 11th Infantry. He looked up, recognized Btucher’s voice. “Sir? They’re coming, I can hear them!”

“How much canister do you have?”

Butcher could see him pause, thinking, heard the reply, “Hell Sir, we’ve got plenty of it.”

Butcher nodded, good, damn good! “Alright, fire when they’re close, we want to punch holes here.” The alarm began to go off, the troopers who hadn’t heard the fight to the front were now alert, taking positions. Butcher looked back through the binoculars, could see the recon men mounted and retreating, angling for the only part in the trench line where they could bring in the horses, rear-echelon men would handle them. Butcher put them away, pulled out his revolver, scribbled up a request to Col. Beckett, the 11th commander, and ran to meet up with Kelly.

The man had dismounted, was sucking in air and dust and drinking water when Butcher arrived. “Sir!” He said, “They’re coming, whole damn lot of ‘em sir. Maybe 1,600, two of our battalions in size, for sure.”

“Get your men to the front line. You got a fast rider?”

“Yes sir. Whitback!” Kelly turned and yelled. Another man looked to him.

“He’d dead sir, took a shot retreating.”

Kelly swore, yelled another name, “Averdick!”

“Sir?” a tall thin man led his horse up, saluted.

“Take this, bring it to Colonel Beckett on our right, move now.” Butcher handed him the request, the plea for reinforcements, and Averdick was mounted and off in a cloud of dust. Butcher waved the recon men forward, arrived at the front line, turned “You men spread out, you see a hole in the line, take it. You’re the reserve.”

They were silent, and Butcher moved down the line, his troopers standing on the raised posts, the fighting positions. He came to one, knew it was Vater’s, joined him up top. Vater was stroking his beard, watching through a set of binoculars, turned. “Major, glad to have you hear on this fine day.” He was one of the Arizona men, was informal when it came to fighting.

Butcher moved up, crouched next to him. At 5 yard intervals were the firing positions, each one holding roughly eight men. Others had been carved in between him, and from here, the center of the line, at 15 yard intervals, were Moore’s guns, the crews gaunt and ready, licking their lips. Each position had been stocked with ammunition and extra canteens, plenty of water. The gun crews had spare buckets of the precious liquid.

Butcher waited could now see them, the Cuban rebels thin, their clothing in tatters. This is it, Butcher knew, their do or die attempt. They were close, 600 yards. “Gun crews, hold fire. Everyone else, fire at will!” He yelled it and the line erupted, a rattle of rifle fire, bursts and pops. Holes appeared in the Cuban line, men screaming, and the Cubans opened fire too, rifles erupting. Butcher could hear the pops and cracks, rounds glancing off the sand bags and wood of the trench wall. “Keep shooting! Gun crews! Tear them down!” He turned looked around, to his right. No sign of the infantry yet, just the Cubans moving closer, his cavalrymen firing and reloading, non-stop, the men sweating and swearing.

The first Hotchkiss gun opened fire, canister, and Butcher could hear that too, that damned strange hum as the balls tore through the men. The Cubans kept moving, the holes now massive, and they were running, couldn’t stop, and Butcher was amazed, couldn’t help but to think of Gettysburg, of Pickett’s charge. This is what the old man went through, incredible valor against technological devastation.

They were close enough now, and Butcher stood, pointed the revolver, began to shoot, centered his aim on one man’s chest and fired, blew him to the ground. His cavalrymen were now taking causalities, the recon men patching up the line, but it wouldn’t be enough, the wounded knew it, pushed their way back into the line. Damnit! Where in the hell is Beckett and the damned infantry? Butcher unloaded the pistol firing it at the Cubans, now 25yards away, and he knew they’d reach the trench line, looked around him, knew what had to be done.

“Fix bayonets! Fix bayonets! Prepare to hold the line!” He took his hat off, waved it, shouted, Vater repeating it. He could see some men take the break, fix the knives, or drop the carbines and pull out sabers, just as the Cubans reached them. A man scrambled up the front of their post, and Butcher shot him in the face, knocked him off, shot another. The air erupted, a cacophony of screams and shouts and grunts, the big guns still firing, the crews defending their guns.

“Major! Major Butcher!” a voice behind him screamed and he turned, moved away from the wall, could see the emblem on the man’s hat. Butcher blinked, looked harder. Infantry.

“Yes?” He had to shout to be heard.

“Sir! Captain Lejeune, sir! Beg to report, I’ve got 400 infantry men from the 12th battalion moving up to your lines, sir! Colonel Beckett apologizes for not being able to send anything himself, hopes this’ll do. My men have fixed bayonets and are moving forward as we speak!”

the man had pulled out his own pistol, began to fire, and now Butcher could see them, long lines of khaki and blue moving up, rifles flashing, the bayonets gleaming, and now the yell, the charge, and they surged forward, over the top. The Cubans wavered, began to move back, ran, and Butcher could see the opportunity, knew this was it, turned to Lejeune, yelled, “Keep moving, we’re taking this damned town today!”

Lejeune nodded, waved his men forward, rejoined them as they formed a line and began to march forward, bayonets extended, and Butcher ordered his own men over the top, to fall in behind the infantry, these saviors in khaki and blue. Today, he thought. Nuesvistas falls today.
 
You write very well, I like the level of description. I can picture the events in my mind. Keep up the good work!
 
I appreciate good writing when I read it. I'm a former wannabe writer myself, I'm just too lazy to work at it. Keep at it, good stories are desperately needed in this era of "reality" series and hack writing all around.
 
Sullivan led the men to the town square. A Sims Dudley gun had been moved into position, its barrel pointed towards the governor’s home, an elaborate building, looking more like a castle. The crew worked quickly, loaded a shell into the breech and fired, the gun flashing, a whiz-bang, and an explosion. The section of the wall that was hit cracked but didn’t break.

Sullivan moved them into a position around the gun, noticed even more of the Marines, most of the 1st battalion, waiting, firing the rifles. Sullivan spread his men out, found a sergeant, made a quick report and found a place in the line, next to Contadino. The two were shielded behind a blasted piece of furniture. To the front, leading into the shattered villa, were the bodies of Spaniards, men who hadn’t moved quickly enough. Sullivan watched, could see more men coming into view of the windows, firing at the Marines, trying to keep them in place. A Maxim gun opened fire from the top floor, and the Sims Dudley fired at it. The first round missed, the second struck near the window. The gun quit firing a second before a third round was drilled through the window.

Sullivan stayed low, saw a man moving through the lines, crouched, a big revolver in his hand. It was Captain Galle. He moved to Sullivan’s position, stared out at the Villa, watched, wet his lips.

“Corporal.” He said it quickly, a greeting, and Sullivan replied similarly, surprised.

“Sir. What’s the situation, sir?”

Galle ducked, a round popping by his face, splintering the wood. “Well, that was their last Maxim. We’re gonna rush the building, get in close. Sims Dudleys and the rest of the battalion will provide cover fire. Bayonets fixed. Pass the word along.” He said that last bit to Contadino, and he slid out of the position, moved to the right. Galle moved into the spot. There was a pause.

“Sergeant Pope is dead, huh?” He asked.

“Yes sir.”

Galle swore, shook his head. “Damn. Knew Pope. Best noncom in the Corps. What happened?”

“Got hit on the sugar cane field. It was quick. A single round and he went down.” Sullivan fingered the bolt of his rifle, looked at the Villa, the enemy.

“So now you’re leading the squad, huh Corporal?”

“I suppose so sir. No one told me any different.”

“Well, I’ll make sure they won’t. I’ll put you in for a promotion. Sergeant. How many boys you lost?”

Sullivan stopped, thought. “Two from the original squad, Keyes and Pope. One of the stragglers. Roscoe Greene.”

Galle nodded, seemed to think. “You did ok Corporal. Don’t worry. You led them ok.” He looked around, saw Contadino coming back. “Alright. A comp’ny! Let’s move!” He shouted it, waved his head, and Sullivan hoisted himself up, his hand on the rifle, the bayonet leading forward.

The villa erupted in fire, the Sims Dudley guns. Along the line there was a steady pop and rattle of rifle fire. Sullivan moved forward, rounds cracking around him, snapping the air. The Captain moved forward, waved them forward, and Sullivan moved, his head bent forward against the incoming fire The rifle pushed forward, the blade extended. Pope’s words in his head, follow me. Don’t stop, damnit, Sullivan thought and he pushed himself forward, moved, hit the wall, had gotten through the hell of fire. More men came in. Sullivan looked around, spotted the Captain, looked more. Oh no…

He yelled it, a shout, “Where’s Contadino?”
 
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