Thanks for creating this map. It is similar to Sven's Europe, but I prefer your map (though I liked his renamed natural wonders etc from being a full mod). I played as the Byzantines and had some fun wars with Alexander and Ashurbanipal in the classical and medieval age. Carthage swallowed Spain, Rome and Greece eventually, and I declared war on them when the rest of Europe did as well, taking Greece for myself and liberating Rome.
Apart from the fun I had playing this map, these were some of my experiences after winning a space victory on Epic.
1) In my game, the Persian placement North and very close to the Mongols seemed to have the opposite effect as intended. It blocked Persia from filling its natural territory, created immediate tension between the two empires, hampering both Persia's as well as Mongolia's growth; though the latter was less hamstrung... in fact, it expanded in Northeastern direction towards
their historic area of origin instead of heading West and harrying the Russians. For the Mongols, Russia was more or less blocked off by meager Persian attempts at expansion. I'd be interested in hearing your reasons for their placement in the current position. I'd say putting them in their historic spot would be better - and in fact, is that not the point of TSL maps? Dealing with the peculiarities of certain starts? Otherwise, a map of the region without TSL might suffice just as well. At this point in time, I'd have no interest in playing either Persia or Mongolia. Even Babylon is less interesting, as for me part of Babylon's appeal is being beset on all sides.
2) I don't know whether the Celts need the help of a religious city state right next door. I think they have plenty of faith generation as it is. Besides, would Ireland as a militaristic city state not make more historical sense?
3) The Thera vulcano (Krakatoa) is too close to Turkey, and Crete seems a bit too small. The tilt of the map makes it impossible to get the island to "point" in the right direction, but I'd tend to go the other way and make Crete three tiles long and have it point towards Anatolia. Perhaps put cattle on the island as a nod to Minoan bull-leaping ;-) ?
4) The Ethiopians start with a Natural wonder within their capital's radius, with a few more close by due to the reefs. This seems a bit much. I'd split up the red sea reefs so they cannot be used by just one city, and possibly move the Ethiopian start one tile west. Alternatively, I'd put the lake in Sweden as the
Vänern lake, as Northern Europe is rather starved of Natural Wonders right now.
5) Germany seemed a bit squeezed compared to France, Sweden and Poland, possibly due to Prague. Maybe you could change Prague into Geneva? However, I am just guessing there, I really don't know if that would improve the playability of the map.
Hope I don't come across as too critical, I had good fun playing.