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Kael said:
I like the sacrifice writeup a lot. But it doesn't involve a spell of any sort.
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It could also be for valor. I was trying to be more "story" to get a sense of sacrifice, than the spell itself. :). Which is why i think its more apt for valor.
-Qes
 
BCalchet said:
Possible that one or more of these are done already, but I still feel like posting:

TXT_KEY_SPELL_SUMMON_TREANT
Spoiler :

"Uh, capt'n, one o'them trees just moved."
"Trees don't move, soldier! Return to your position."
"Yessir."

"Sorry, capt'n, but me and me sqad all saw them trees moving jus' now."
"Soldier, did you not hear me the first time?
Trees. Do. Not. Move! Now get back to your position and be quiet, those tree-hugging pointy-ears might be nearby."
"Yessir."
"Honestly, moving trees..."


TXT_KEY_SPELL_RAISE_SKELETON
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I loved my chosen: how then to face the day when she left me?
So I cast upon her body a single spell - perhaps, to love her again.
-Unknown Author "On the Various Applications of Necromancy"

(Slightly modified Alpha Centauri quote)
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I can apprecaite good theft as much as anyone. I believe it was the "Cloning Vats" Wonder.
"I loved my chosen: how then to face the day when she left me? So I took from her body a single cell - perhaps one day, to love her again." -Commisionaer Pravin Lal

-Qes
 
TXT_KEY_SPELL_FEED

"Humans are nothing more than livestock: We prey on them as they prey on beasts, this is the rule of nature."

(quote from vampire hunter d)
 
TXT_KEY_SPELL_GIFT_VAMPIRISM

"Awaken to darkness on this place we call Earth,
One vampire's bite brings another one's birth.
A vampire wakes with blood thirsty needs
On the warm rich sensation he feels when he feeds.
He stalks in the night like a disatrous beast,
And what once was alive will soon be deceased.
So when the last bit of sunlight disappears from the sky,
You better watch out unless you want to die."
-Victoria Boatwright
 
Frozen-Vomit said:
TXT_KEY_SPELL_GIFT_VAMPIRISM

"Awaken to darkness on this place we call Earth,
One vampire's bite brings another one's birth.
A vampire wakes with blood thirsty needs
On the warm rich sensation he feels when he feeds.
He stalks in the night like a disatrous beast,
And what once was alive will soon be deceased.
So when the last bit of sunlight disappears from the sky,
You better watch out unless you want to die."
-Victoria Boatwright
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OO. I like this one alot, i hope it gets in.
-Qes
 
Hello Kael and the rest of FfHII team, this is my first post, and I hope I can help on this amazing mod.

Another thing, if you accept any of these you will probably need to fix some spelling and grammar as english is not my main language.

TXT_KEY_SPELL_SUMMON_NIGHTMARE
Spoiler :
"As the skies got darker, a scream devastated our wills. People run around, in panic, defenseless, and one after the other fell before the shadows and flames. I still wake, everyday, screaming when it comes haunt my dreams." William Sert, Only Survival


TXT_KEY_SPELL_DEFILE
Spoiler :
"Twisted shall be your branch, and rot shall be your fruits. Grease shall be your water and bleak shall be your mood. For nothing shall live or birth in here."


TXT_KEY_SPELL_GRAFT_FLESH
Spoiler :
"It's Alive!"
 
Frozen-Vomit said:
TXT_KEY_SPELL_GIFT_VAMPIRISM

"Awaken to darkness on this place we call Earth,
One vampire's bite brings another one's birth.
A vampire wakes with blood thirsty needs
On the warm rich sensation he feels when he feeds.
He stalks in the night like a disatrous beast,
And what once was alive will soon be deceased.
So when the last bit of sunlight disappears from the sky,
You better watch out unless you want to die."
-Victoria Boatwright
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Very nice work, checking it in. I especially like the "Victoria Boatwright" name. It sounds very gothic.
 
YohanLeafheart said:
Hello Kael and the rest of FfHII team, this is my first post, and I hope I can help on this amazing mod.

Another thing, if you accept any of these you will probably need to fix some spelling and grammar as english is not my main language.

TXT_KEY_SPELL_SUMMON_NIGHTMARE
Spoiler :
"As the skies got darker, a scream devastated our wills. People run around, in panic, defenseless, and one after the other fell before the shadows and flames. I still wake, everyday, screaming when it comes haunt my dreams." William Sert, Only Survival


TXT_KEY_SPELL_DEFILE
Spoiler :
"Twisted shall be your branch, and rot shall be your fruits. Grease shall be your water and bleak shall be your mood. For nothing shall live or birth in here."


TXT_KEY_SPELL_GRAFT_FLESH
Spoiler :
"It's Alive!"
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I like your writing style, but I don't want any more quotes in. Do you think you could make the Nightmare or Defile one into a short (1-2 paragraphs) story about the spell?
 
Kael said:
Very nice work, checking it in. I especially like the "Victoria Boatwright" name. It sounds very gothic.
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Hmmm...

Just to get it straight: I never suggested that I wrote this poem. I found it somewhere when searching quotes from vampire movies, so Victoria Boatwright might as well be the name of the poet as far as I know. Strange thing: Sites like wikipedia have nerver heard of her...
 
Frozen-Vomit said:
Hmmm...

Just to get it straight: I never suggested that I wrote this poem. I found it somewhere when searching quotes from vampire movies, so Victoria Boatwright might as well be the name of the poet as far as I know. Strange thing: Sites like wikipedia have nerver heard of her...
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Ahh, np. Still a nice poem.
 
Kael said:
I like your writing style, but I don't want any more quotes in. Do you think you could make the Nightmare or Defile one into a short (1-2 paragraphs) story about the spell?
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Ok mate, let me try it.

TXT_KEY_SPELL_SUMMON_NIGHTMARE
Spoiler :
A sudden cold stroke the village. As the panic grew, dark clouds covered the sky night. There was no face without fear, there was no place to hide. They were doommed, and they knew it. Futile prayers of salvation could be heard amidst the cries of the children and the lament of the old.

Red lightings struck, opening an abyss in the middle of the village. And a foul beast crawled from beneath, shrouded in cloak of shadows and engulfed in vile flames. There should be no sunshine for those in its path.


TXT_KEY_SPELL_DEFILE
Spoiler :
The forest was bleak and silent, Rojfar* was devastated for its visage. He heard stories of a dark place deep in the forests, but couldn't imagine such desolation. Twisted branchs, rot fruits and decayed bodies covered the floor. The lake was black and grease. He cried, as an aura of sorrow crushed his heart. He cursed to the skies, in agony, as promisses of revenge were muttered. He would not be able to save this sacred woods, but nothing would be able to save he who did it.

*Insert an Elf name here
 
YohanLeafheart said:
Ok mate, let me try it.

TXT_KEY_SPELL_SUMMON_NIGHTMARE
Spoiler :
A sudden cold stroke the village. As the panic grew dark clouds covered the sky night. There was no face without fear, there was no place hid. They were doommed, and they knew it. Futile prayers of salvation could be heard amidst the cries of the children and the lament of the old.

Red lightings struck, opening an abyss in the middle of the village. And a foul beast crawled from beneath, shrouded in cloak of shadows and engulfed in vile flames. There should be no sunshine for those in its path.


TXT_KEY_SPELL_DEFILE
Spoiler :
The forest was bleak and silent, Rojfar* was devastated for its visage. He heard stories of a dark place deep in the forests, but couldn't imagine such desolation. Twisted branchs, rot fruits and decayed bodies covered the floor. The lake was black and grease. He cried as an aura of sorrow crushed his heart. He cursed to the skies, in agony, as promisses of revenge were muttered. He would not be able to save this sacred woods, but nothing would be able to save he who did it.

*Insert an Elf name here
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Ahh much better, exatly what I was hoping for, adding them in.
 
Kael said:
Ahh much better, exatly what I was hoping for, adding them in.
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Thx mate. Just one thing, you should update the first post with the choosed spells, so there is no need to keep checking the whole thread. =D

Ah, and I updated my last post, to fix some typos.
 
Xuenay said:
Thought I might see about writing some new ones. The list of empty entries still up to date?
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Yeap .
 
TXT_KEY_SPELL_BURNING_BLOOD

Sometimes the best way to channel your rage is by letting your body fully feel it, while observing the energy move through your body's every vein. It is when the feeling of power and total painlessness is the greatest, that you are capable of doing everything that would seem to be physically impossible before.
- Handbook of the Bloodsworn

Probably needs a rewrite to become what you want. But maybe something like that?
 
TXT_KEY_SPELL_GIFT_VAMPIRISM

"So when we eat the people, we gain in power?"
"No. The eating is for fun. The killing is how we gain power."
"Because we absorb their life force, right. And that is passed through the blood?"
"Again, no. That's a ruse made up for the populace. It keeps us mysterious, and frightening, to keep the herd in line."
"I see. Trickery and deception are key. How is it done, then?"

-- Losha Valas and Alexis, on the former's induction to the Order of the Blood.
 
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