HPL's 'The music of Erich Zann'

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I re-read it this night. :)
It is a short story about a musician whose music is utilised as a means to fend against a much more sinister source of music, which remains unseen behind the curtains of the sole window of the attic where he lives.
The story is a first person narrative, with Erich Zann being the main character the narrator is focusing upon, along with the object of the road where he and Zann were to be found in the past; the rue Ozeig.
While the story is not very descriptive, as most of Lovecraft's work, there is a logical amount of decriptions about the road, the decaying state of the building where the narrator has lived for a while, and the apartment of Zann, with some further descriptions of the staircases and the door to Zann's room, which are used so as to give a sense of space, which in a horror story ussually is used so that to convey the feeling of distancing from the object of horror.
The description of the characters is even more schematic, with the landlord being merely named as "paraplegic", and Zann described shortly as old, having the head of a satyr, a mute, and some details which are going against the general feeling of decadence, such as that he had blue eyes. However Lovecraft does not at all expand such descriptions into anything organic for the story, and my own impression is that they work against him since Zann ends up looking vague and artificial.
Of much greater decriptive power- although again with some errors in my view- is the built-up of the connection between Zann and his musical interests, and the nameless notes which from time to time are heard from behind the curtain in his room. Zann is able to perform two very distinct types of music. Being proficient in both, he reserves his more relaxed, virtuosic, methodical, calculated plays for the narrator in his first visit. Then, in the final visit, and also while the narrator is not in his room, he explodes into his more personal music, which is revealed in the end to be not amined at impressing, but in defending himself against the source of his inspiration, behind the curtain. Zann is incapable of any other movement, or perhaps even of any other thought, while he is sunk into his world of exchanging music with the darkness outside the window. In that he made me think of forgotten defensive mechanisms of childhood, against horrors which at the time seemed entirely threatening, but in the future were forgotten, much like the narrator is unable to remember clearly Zann's music whereas Zann was obviously experiencing it very clearly or rather was the embodiment of it.
There is one clear point of climax for the story, which takes place when the narrator decides, in the midst of Zann's chaotic playing, to get up from his chair and observe what he expects to be the lit-up city panorama, from the window, only to see a void where music echoes from what sounds like an infinity of gaps.

Overall the music of Erich Zann is in my view the best short-story by Lovecraft. In his view it was also his greatest work. However i was left with the feeling that the thematology of the artist who uses his art as a defense against a forgotten horror was not examined deeply in this story. However it is a good source for inspiration on such a matif, which i will probably try to use :)

-Your views on the short story? (you can even find an etext of it online; there are various sites with the complete works of HPL)

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I read all of HPL writings and enjoyed it, i somehow know that it is a kind of story that you would like as well. Its theme has a resonance with many of the stories that you mentioned on this board.
However i was left with the feeling that the thematology of the artist who uses his art as a defense against a forgotten horror was not examined deeply in this story.
I think HPL was more exploring the concept of a man caught up in what man is not meant to know and expressing it as art, but i read books for enjoyment and seldom put much effort into analysing the authors thought.
 
Blue eyes are less decadent than brown?

Not in reality, however since Lovecraft mentioned the colour of his eyes (without sayting anything more about them, or them being significant in any other way to the story) one has to assume that they were blue and not a more common colour so as to signify a supposedly nobler trait of him. :)
 
I read all of HPL writings and enjoyed it, i somehow know that it is a kind of story that you would like as well. Its theme has a resonance with many of the stories that you mentioned on this board.
I think HPL was more exploring the concept of a man caught up in what man is not meant to know and expressing it as art, but i read books for enjoyment and seldom put much effort into analysing the authors thought.

Reading books for enjoyment definately is one of the best ways to read them :)
As an author i am interested in what triggers emotions and interest on a story, so i have to be more watchfull of it, although of course there is no clear answer to such a question ;)
And HPL's work has been quite significant for me as well, since actually i wrote my first story with the will to be an author when i was 16,5, past midnight for some hours, after i had read for the first time the horror at Danwitch (spelling?) :D
 
"The Dunwich Horror".

Back to Zann's tale, I felt it was too abstract to really work as a horror story. Apart from the impossible window view, about the only reason to be scared is the fact that Zann is scared.

As useful contrast may be "The Colour out of Space", which I'd consider HPL's most scary story. We don't learn much about the colour, but we're abundantly shown that it's to be afraid of.
 
I like the colour out of space as well. I think that it does not quite manage to reach the heights of the first part of the dunwich horror (at least for me, due to the depiction of Wilbour's character, and i liked the description of how he was at the same time invlolved in the occult, but also miserable for his state which he did not cause) but it does not suffer from the ludicrous second part of the Dunwich horror where imo the entire novel is ruined by too much cheap writing.
However Hpl's characters rarely are too lively depicted. Even in the colour out of space they are somewhat puppet-like, but at least the plot of the story allows for such a nature for them since the colour has infested their life. I think that in this way HPL in that novel (perhaps by chance, perhaps more calculatively) has managed to not show his weakness in character presentation :)
 
The other lovecraftian story, titled if i remember correctly 'Pictman's model" is a bit similar to the music of Zann. The catacombs below Pictman's studio function like the window on the border of the strange world in Zann's apartment. However the model of Pictman suffers from Lovecraft's characteristic eagerness to depict scenes of battle between humans and beasts, which in my view do not suit his stories well (although it could be that they just do not hit a note with me). However most of Pictman's model i liked :)
 
Hehe. :coffee:

I'll agree that Pickman going off and shooting "rats" is rather extraneous, but it hardly amounts to a "scene", does it? One thing I like about HPL is that when he describe fights, he generally does it briefly, impressionistically. Confusion is more scary than gore, when it comes to fighting. IMNSHO :)
 
IMHO Pickman's Model has a great build up, but the ending is incredibly predictable and anti climatic.
From the stories i've read, i liked the ending and climax of "Rats in the Wall" best.

Not only does it leave much to your imagination concerning to what horrors lurk beyond the explored area, it also makes you wonder what exactly happened... He really mastered the art of using suggestions to create horror in this one.

One thing the Pickam's Model story does does manage, however, is to make the character of Pickman interesting. I would have liked to know more about him!
 
Another nice short story by Lovecraft is one of the earliest one that survive of his, and it is titled 'the beast in the cave' (etext can be found here )
This uses the always potentially emotive image of the labyninthine cave, where the narrator had been once lost.
Were it not for some careless lack of any description of the guide, who the narrator had been seperated from, coupled with an equally rigid contrast between the modernity and wordlyness of the guide's attitude and that of what the narrator had been met with in the cave, and, finally, the rather poor ending, this story could have been one of his best ones in my view :)

Also there is the more known story "The stranger", which had been one of the first of his that i read, and it is more delicate, but again suffers from a somewhat artificial and a bit predictable climax, and then a very vague ending which is not flowing from the rest of the story, but is in a different style (one of Lovecraft's main influences had been Lord Dunsany, who frequently wrote in such a style, but HPL has a very different one).
 
Also there is the more known story "The stranger", which had been one of the first of his that i read, and it is more delicate, but again suffers from a somewhat artificial and a bit predictable climax, and then a very vague ending which is not flowing from the rest of the story, but is in a different style (one of Lovecraft's main influences had been Lord Dunsany, who frequently wrote in such a style, but HPL has a very different one).

I think you're refering to "The Outsider", in which case it was the first HPL story I read. I had no idea who Lovecraft was when I encountered it in some anthology, so when, years later, I borrowed my brother's copy of the Penguin Classics collection I was surprised to find I had read a story by the same author before.
 
:)
In the greek translation its title had been "the stranger" (o xenos ;) ) which i remember very well because the first time i heard of that story was when someone from school remarked about it, and for the following five minutes we were talking about it while i was under the impression he meant the small novel by Camus :D
When it was understood that he meant something very different, i got to read that story :)
 
Ah, 'The music of Erich Zann' is my favourite HPL story as well, and also one i find the most disturbing. I've never found his more explicit tales to be particularly frighterning, no matter how grotesque was he trying to be. The music's strength lies mostly in its sheer abstractness.
 
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