Putting It All Together - The Provisional Constitution of $COUNRTY_NAME

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As March 1 rapidly approaches, it should be noted that some sort of governing document is needed.

To that end, I've gone through anything labelled an 'approval poll.' If passed by a good majority, I included it in the following document, the Provisional Constitution of $COUNTRY_NAME. (I know we're England atm, but we haven't polled a name just yet).

There was one exception of that rule - Articles B, C, and D. I took those straight from Black Heart's proposal. These are hardly final by any means (but did win an unofficial poll by Provolution some time ago). They are also the definitions that were assumed during the election phase, so I simply assumed the point to be moot until Term 2.

This provisional document is still missing some things, most of which could probably be drawn out of Strider's traditional government proposal.

- section on citizen's rights. Rights to free speech, to gather w/o political parties, to a fair and speedy trial, to redress of grievences, etc.
- Freedom of Information Act. This is a constitutal mandate that all elected leaders must keep threads in the government forum, all with relevant, up-to-date information.
- Will of the People. All leaders must plan and act according to it, as determined by polls/discussion. Leaders - play nice for now! :p
- Amendments to the Constitution/CoL. We'll need this soon!
- Provinces. A poll was conducted earlier, but wasn't very conclusive.

And now, the document so far, in all it's temporary glory:


Code:
We, the people of $COUNTRY_NAME, in order to create an atmosphere
 of friendship, cooperation, and pride, establish this Constitution
 of our beloved country. We uphold the beliefs that each citizen
 must have an equal voice in the government and ruling of our
 country, that government itself is a construct of and servant
 to the people, that rules, regulations, and laws should be 
 established to  facilitate the active participation of the 
 people and to make possible the dreams and desires of the citizens.

Article A. The government will consist of four layers of
 government. These layers of government are the Strategic
 layer, Tactical layer, and the Administrative layer.

Article B. The Strategic layer consists of the President, the
 Vice President, and the Consuls. The Consuls, as listed below,
 are in tasked with deciding on the broader picture of how
 $COUNTRY_NAME will operate. The President leads the Strategic
 layer and leads discussions involving more than one Strategic
 Consul. The majority of the Strategic layer's policy is
 based on discussions and polls.

	1. President - Leads discussions crossing over
 multiple areas of different Consuls. He/she will also
 decide on any strategic tasks not designated to another 
 consul in this constitution. The President is the primary
 designated player. He/she has the following responsibilities,
 and may appoint a citizen to oversee a responsibility:
 Naming of Cities and Units, Elections, and Polling Standards.
 These appointed officials remain in office until removed by a
 President.

	2. Vice President - Assistant to the President.
	 He/she may take over the President's tasks when the
	 President is absent. If the President should be removed
	 from office for any reason the Vice President will then
	 take the position of President and appoint a Vice
	 President. The Vice President must be approved
	 by a majority of the consuls, if the Vice President
	 is appointed mid-term.

	3. Consul for Domestic Policy - Oversees
	 long term settlement, long term worker plans,
	 and long term build queues goals(not specific goals).
	 Also in charge of government switches.

	4. Consul for External Policy - Oversees
	 long term planning of policy regarding other nations.
	 This includes military plans, long term foreign affairs,
	 and long term trading goals. Pushes for military improvements.

	5. Consul for Cultural Policy - Monitors culture.
	 Pushes for culture improvements. Fits science and religous
	 improvements into the big picture. Develops wonder strategy.

	6. Consul for Resources and Technology Policy - 
	Decides on long term tech queues, long term resource policies,
	 long term rushing(in governments where gold is used to rush)
	 policies, and long term slider plans.


Article C. The Tactical layer consists of the the officials
 in charge of micromanagement of the game, within
 the boundaries of the Strategic layer's policy. The
 Tactical layer is not required to receive instructions
 from the people as long as their policy is within that
 of the Strategic layer's. However any citizen my start a
 discussion about the decision of a Tactical Leader. The
 Tactical layer is consisted of the officials below.

	1. Commander of Armed Forces - Micromanages the
	 military operations against foreign countries
	 and unit (excluding worker, settler, and 
	 non-military transport) movements.

	2. Director of Commerce - Decides on foreign
	 affairs and trading. Sets exact tech queue.
	 Adjusts slider and approves/denies requests
	 from governors regarding rushes(in a government
	 requiring gold to rush). Also decides on espionage
	 missions.

	3. Director of Infrastructure - Controls
	 the worker actions. Reviews requests from
	 governors about worker requests and
	 accepts/denies these.

	4. Director of Expansion - Decides on 
	 where to settle with settlers.

	5. Governors - Manages citizens in
	 cities under his/her control and
	 the build queues. May request rushes from
	 the Director of Commerce, and request worker
	 actions from the Director of Infrastrucute.


Article D. The Administrative layer consists of
 officials not directly related to the gameplay
 of the game. The Chief Justice, Judge Advocate,
 and Public defender make up the court. They
 are tasked with upholding, protecting, and
 clarifying the constitution and the code of laws.
 Court procedures may be made by any court by having
 two out of the three justices agreeing. The Court
 procedures must comply with the constitution and
 Code of Laws. The Court procedures can be treated
 as a set of laws below the Code of Laws.

	1. Chief Justice - Organizes and heads the
	 affairs and discussions of the court. May
	 take place of other Justices if there is no
	 pro-term justice.

	2. Judge Advocate - Prosecutes Citizen
	 Complaints if the Citizen Complaint is filed
	 anonymously or the accuser wishes to have the
	 Judge Advocate prosecute. He/she ensures CCs
	 are following constitution, code of laws, and
	 court procedures guidelines.

	3. Public Defender - Acts as Chief Attorney
	 for the accused, unless the accused wishes otherwise.
	 Ensures the accused understands his/her
	 rights and the accusation. 

Article E. All elected positions shall have a fixed term of
 one month. Each position will be granted to the candidate
 receiving the largest number of votes in that election. 
 In the event of a tie between two or more front runners, a
 runoff poll shall be opened between those candidates only.
 This poll shall run for 2 days, and be repeated as often
 as needed to resolve the tie.

         1. All Executive and Legislative positions shall have a
            deputy. The Deputy will be permitted to conduct the
            affairs of the office as directed, or during a planned
            Absence of the elected official. If no instructions have
            been posted for an office within 24 hours of the upcoming
            Turn Chat, the deputy for that office may post the official
            instructions for the office.

         2. The Judiciary does not use deputies. In the event of an
            Absence, a pro-tem justice(s) may be appointed by the
            Chief Justice (or Judge Advocate if the Chief Justice if
            absent) and confirmed by the President and the 
            remaining justice if not also absent. If both the Chief 
            Justice and the Judge Advocate are absent, the Public 
            Defender may appoint pro-tems to the other seats,
            with Presidential approval.

         3. The President will appoint a citizen to any Vacant
            office. If a deputy exists for that office, the President 
            must appoint that citizen. This appointment may be 
            challenged by any citizen by that citizen posting a 
            confirmation poll within 24 hours of the appointment. 

Article F.  No person shall hold multiple positions of
 leadership (President, Vice-President, Department
 Leader, Judiciary, Provincial Governor, Deputy)
 simultaneously,nor shall have more than one
 accepted nomination at the commencement of
 the general election.
              
[b]Code of Laws[/b]

A. Elections
    1. Nominations and Debate
    a. Nominations will be created by the Election Office 7 days prior 
    to the end of the month.  Citizens may nominate themself or 
    another citizen in this thread.  Citizens may also post pre-
    nominations in the Election Office thread if they will not be 
    present during the nomination period.  This nomination thread 
    should contain a description of the office.
    b. All debates will be within the nomination thread, and will 
    continue through the end of the election cycle.  Any citizen may 
    post questions for the candidates to answer.  Candidates may answer
    or not answer as they wish.
    c. A nomination is not considered Accepted until the candidate 
    makes an explicit post.  All self-nominations are considered 
    Accepted unless otherwise stated.
 2. Election Polls
    a. Election polls will be created by the Election Office 3 days 
    after the Nomination threads are created.  These polls will contain 
    the names of all Accepted candidates for the office, a description 
    of the office, a link to the nomination thread, be set to run for 
    3 days and be marked private.
    b. Should a citizen Accept multiple nominations, and does not 
    explicitly clarify which office they wish to run for, the Election 
    Office will use the first office they Accepted.
    c. The citizen with the most votes at the close of the poll is the 
    winner of the election.  Should two or more candidates tie at the
    end of the election poll with the same number of votes, a runoff
    election of two days duration will be conducted with the tied
    candidates only. This process shall continue until one candidate
    receives the most votes.
 3. General
    a. The Election Cycle will run from the first nomination thread is 
    opened until the last runoff poll closes.
    b. All threads and polls should be posted at approximately 00:00 
    GMT on the correct day.

B. Citizen Rights
  1. Naming Rights
    a. City Names
       All cities founded by $COUNTRY_NAME will be named by citizens 
       using a rank-based system.  The President will maintain this 
       list in a thread.  Should a citizen fail to provide a city name,
       they will be skipped until they provide a city name.  The 
       $DOMESTIC_LEADER_TITLE will include the city name to be used in 
       the instructions to found that city.  No citizen may name more 
       than one city until all citizens have named a city.
     
       1.  Ranking Order - elected officials
           The rank order is based on the term and the Chain of 
           Command.  All officials of an earlier term have priority 
           over officials of a later term.  Within a term, the Chain of 
           Command will determine who has priority.  
       2. Ranking Order - citizens
           Once all elected officials have named cities, the Citizen 
           Regsitry will be used to name cities, using the order 
           citizens were registered.
          
    b. Province Names
      The first Governor of a province will name the province.
     
    d. Unit Names
       Units of renown and fame may be renamed by the $MILITARY_LEADER.  
       Units renamed as such are subject to a confirmation poll.
     
    e. Natural Feature Names
      All natural features within a province may be named by the 
      Governor of the province.  

  2. Confirmation Polls
    a. Confirmation polls are used in certain, specified situations 
      to challenge the decision of an elected official.  Confirmation 
      polls may be used only when explicitly allowed by law.  Any 
      citizen may  create a confirmation poll, should one not already 
      exist.  This poll must be created within 24 hours of the
      appointment or decision, and ask the question "Do you approve of the 
      <description of decision>?", with Yes, No and Abstain option. 
      If the confirmation poll directly concerns a citizen (e.g. 
      appointment), this poll is to be private, as it is a form of an
      election.  The poll will run for 2 days. At the end of the time,
      if a majority of the citizens vote "No", the decision is 
      overturned. Any other result approves the decision.

C. Deputies and Vacancies
  1. Deputies
    For all positions with deputies, the leader may appoint the 
    citizen of their choice as their deputy.
    
  2. Vacant Offices
    a. An official or Justice may declare themselves to be Absent for
       a period of time. This period may not exceed 1 week.  During 
       this time, the deputy or pro-tem will act with all power and 
       duties of that office, surrendering them to the official or 
       Justice when they return or at the end of the planned absence, 
       whichever comes first.

    b. Should an official fail to post in the DG forum for 3 days in 
       a thread related to their area without prior notice, the 
       Judiciary may declare that office Vacant.

    c. If a Justice has not posted on any active Judicial matter for 
       three days, the remaining Justices may declare the Justice 
       Vacant.  If all three Justices fail to post on any active 
       Judicial matter for 3 days, the President may declare all 
       Judicial offices Vacant, and immediately appoint a new Chief 
       Justice.

If I've missed something that's already been approved, or if some other article is still needed, remember that I'm only human. Please post a reminder!
 
Article D. The Administrative layer consists of officials not directly related to the gameplay of the game. The Chief Justice, Judge Advocate, and Public defender make up the court.

Firstly, "gameplay of the game" is repetitiously redundant. Either "play of the game" or, preferably, "gameplay" should be used.

Secondly, since the Administrative Level appears to consist solely of the Judiciary, why don't we call it the "Judicary Level" or plain "Judiciary?"
 
Ah, that - I knew I forgot to mention something. Like I said, that was taken verbatim from this thread. That particular section hasn't been officially polled as of yet.

I'd greatly appreciate it if all discission on the matter of government structure be taken there. This thread is really meant for placing all the approved disparate articles of the constitution in one place, and for putting into place a temporary governing document.
 
Were not going to get anywhere, doing as you say "putting it all together." Our last constitutional was based on individual articles, instead of the book in itself. It lacked any overall plan or goal. The reason for this was precisely what your wanting to do right now.

Those polls should not have been "ratifying" certain amendments, they should have been deciding what our citizens want in a amendment of that type. They were posted based off of past efforts that were illogical and caused more confusion than anything else. Every single amendment effects another one some way or another, and we've spent 3 Demogames changing amendments and then tossing them back into the book, expecting it to make sense.
 
I'll have to apolgize, then, for working with what I've been given. I agree, there's something missing in the overall coherence of the document, but when the game is about to start, and no one has given any forethought to the matter, it's hard to do a lot.

Something will get done - there's no need to be negative about it.
 
Octavian X said:
I'll have to apolgize, then, for working with what I've been given. I agree, there's something missing in the overall coherence of the document, but when the game is about to start, and no one has given any forethought to the matter, it's hard to do a lot.

Well, if you haven't noticed. I've given a hell of alot of forethought into it, and you can find almost all of that inside of my citizens group. If we had went with my ideas, my theories, and my proposals we should not be in this situtation. However, we did not, because a majority of people believed we should give our elected officials the same powers they had before. The Alternative government achieves nothing, but to make our elected officials weaker. During the very first couple of discussions about this game, I made a statement about needing to make our leadership poistions more power. To give our citizens a reason to want to run for an elected office, instead of just making them feel like they have to run to keep the game going. At that time, a huge majority of people agreed with me.

However, an increase in workload caused me to be away for awhile, and when I returned, guess what I found? A theory that not only achieves the opposite of what I intended, but achieves nothing else in the process. Instead of taking the time to fix our problems, we re-created something that we already had. Hell, in doing so we managed to make three of our problems even worst!

Do you know what I did to try and fix some of our problems? I modified the traditional constitution to fix them. Oh yeah, I fixed the problems, every single one I could think of. What did I achieve? The chance to be blamed because the alternative structure is a piece of crap. I want to see the alternative structure crew build there own constitution. Not throwing together abunch of articles that lacks a singular purpose, or stealing something from me. Will that be done? I somehow doubt it, and even if it is done, it will only be because I said this, and not for any real attempt to fix the problems.

To sum it up, your wrong, there is someone who put alot of forethought into the next demogame. Someone who spent alot of time searching for problems inside of the game and attempting to fix them. Someone who is now forced to watch the game collapse because of others idealistic goals and pointless changes.
 
I'm sure we all appreciate your petulant, infantile whining, Strider. Thanks for helping out. Here's a jump-rope, go outside and play.

Octavian- The Constitution looks workable. Not good (though I suppose that's not even possible at this late date), but it certainly won't fall apart. No doubt there will be a lot of amendments proposed in the coming term, and hopefully that will take care of any inconsistancies. If it all works out, we should have a finalized Constitution by Term 2 (right on time, right?).
 
Ashburnham said:
I'm sure we all appreciate your petulant, infantile whining, Strider. Thanks for helping out. Here's a jump-rope, go outside and play.

Octavian- The Constitution looks workable. Not good (though I suppose that's not even possible at this late date), but it certainly won't fall apart. No doubt there will be a lot of amendments proposed in the coming term, and hopefully that will take care of any inconsistancies. If it all works out, we should have a finalized Constitution by Term 2 (right on time, right?).

Wrong, do you know why we usually undertake major constitutation changes inbetween games? It's not an easy process, almost every single article inside of the constitution effects another one somehow. So usually changing just one simple thing takes 2 or 3 ratification polls just to do it correctly. What we have at the end of the game, is what were keeping for most of the game. There will be few changes, it's far to difficult to make them.
 
Just a quick note -

Looking at what we're lacking in the way of uncontroversial aspects of the game, I've posted a list of articles taken from Strider's Traditional government proposal here so we can hopefully approve them quickly. It's all simple stuff, really, so we can get back to working on the rest of the document.
 
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