18 Civs; the Mongol Version

XIV - The Continent Ablaze

Part II

1720AD

Jun announces another technological breakthrough

GENGHIS: And this time, it had better be something worth hearing.
JUN: Why, sire, I like to think all of my announcements are worth hearing.
GENGHIS: You do, do you? Well you’re kidding yourself I’m afraid. Get on with it, I’m not sitting here all day.
JUN: You aren’t, sire, right you are. Well, you might be of the opinion, as I was, that Cannons are pretty outdated by now.
GENGHIS: Yeah, I suppose you’re right. They do suck a bit.
GRIZNAKH: I miss the old days. Technological improvements that had to do with FOOD. We haven’t had one of those for ages!
GENGHIS: Shut up Griznakh, don’t interrupt. So?
JUN: So I created this beauty.

he whisks the cloth from a scale model of an Artillery.

GENGHIS: Now I’m no technological expert, well, actually I’m not bad, it’s a figure of speech, BUT, THAT couldn’t blow a hole in the table.
JUN: It’s a scale model, sire. The real things are much, much larger. And they can easily blow holes in this table, and in walls too.
GENGHIS: Good. How’s their accuracy?
JUN: Far better than the cannons’, in fact, you can hit a dartboard 100 metres away every time.
GENGHIS: Lush!
JUN: The reason that these are so much better than Cannons, sire, is that the shells they fire are far more destructive as well. Add in the increased range, and you’ve got a unit that is half as strong again as a Cannon.
GENGHIS: Good advancement. You’ve done well for once.
JUN: Thank you sire.
GENGHIS: Stop being cocky, though. One decent thing isn’t going to make you my favourite guy. Now scoot.

Jun scoots

GENGHIS: Right, losers, what else is happening?

Montezuma enters

MONTEZUMA: Genghis. You seem to be a little trouble, over here.
GENGHIS: As if! I’m just making sure this continent gets taken as quickly as possible! Multiple wars, you can take multiple empires simultaneously.
MONTEZUMA: Well duh. But you … you can’t manage it. So I’m going to declare war on you! Mwa-ha-ha-ha-HA!
GENGHIS: Great. Ok then. See ya.
MONTEZUMA: Erm … but WAIT! There is one thing you can do … one thing which might persuade the Aztec supremo to change-i-change his mind.
GENGHIS: I couldn’t care less.
MONTEZUMA: You know, of course, of the English. Well these rats have started to settle across on MY continent! Up in the north-east corner, where they thought Monty wouldn’t notice! BUT, dayum! They were wrong. Wrong, see? Monty noticed, and Monty squashed them with his army like he would a beating heart on the altars with his fist! Mwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!
GENGHIS: Oh well done Monty. What a brilliant guy. It’s about the only action you get over there, isn’t it?
MONTEZUMA: Quiet. Now, I could reach across the Pacificap and do the same to you. Easily. Napaj would be MINE, before you even got word! But if you accede to my reasonable request, you can rely on me to relinquish my grip. Understand?
GENGHIS: That was a mildly entertaining little narrative. Now scram, before I decide to bother crushing you.
MONTEZUMA: You’re REALLY not going to cancel your deals? Remember, it would … ahem, could mean WAR!
GENGHIS: I like war. I don’t like giving in to outlandish orders. So the obvious choice is to ignore you.
MONTEZUMA: Fine! You MAY hear from me. And you MAY not. It will come down to the flip of a coin back in my palace.

Montezuma exits

GENGHIS: What an irritation. Now get lost. This meeting’s over.
KOLAI: Sire, Bactra is waiting.
GENGHIS: Haha! Let’s go!

Kolai and the Khan arrive at the fortress city of Bactra, recently retaken by the Greeks. A Mongolian army had lain siege, and bombarded the defences. Genghis assessed the situation.

GENGHIS: It wasn’t THAT bloody long ago we were stood here, and Cyrus was stood up there. And now we have to do it all bloody over again.
KOLAI: It shouldn’t be too hard though.
GENGHIS: Not at all! Cavalry, advance!

The Mongol cavalry started up the steep hill towards the remnants of the Bactran walls. Looking ahead, the cavalry captain saw a line of men, silhouetted against the fierce mountain sun; the horses kept going, and the captain was now able to make out the faces of the Greek Macemen, stern concentration on their faces, as they prepared to receive the Mongol cavalrymen.
The captain was having none of that.
He bellowed an order, and the cavalrymen drew their pistols and, at full gallop, shot six rounds at the Greeks. The Macemen howled as they fell to the invisible arrows. The few survivors managed to stagger back to their feet, only to be grounded once more by the cavalry as they reached the city.

Watching the maces fall, Genghis raised his fist, made a gun, and pumped his thumb repeatedly in a trigger motion.


GENGHIS: Boom! Boom! Boom! That level was easier that time.
KOLAI: Damn right! Back to court then.
GENGHIS: Yep. Let’s assess the situation.

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SENTRY AKEDAI: Please sir! I beg you; spare me!

The Lord Kachiun gave him a withering look, then turned to his second-in-command.

KACHIUN: Vice-general Nacer, what is your assessment of this incident?

The burly vice-general bit back on a sharp reply as he turned to face his superior.

NACER: It could have led to an enemy army surprising the fort, leading to a massacre of us all, and setting the war effort back by many years. In light of this consideration, I would rank this neglection of duty at the highest level.
KACHIUN: And I agree. Powderbreath, shoot him.
SENTRY AKEDAI: No! Sir!

Powderbreath grinned, showing yellowed, uneven teeth. The gangly trooper unslung his rifle and took aim at the sentry’s neck.

AKEDAI: Sir, please …

Powderbreath fired, the bullet slicing into Akedai’s neck. As a waterfall of blood gushed out, and Akedai’s head slumped forward, his body collapsing on the dusty ground, Vice-General Nacer Ombolgu watched a small smile play upon the lips of the Lord Kachiun, as he watched the man die. His superior was clearly enjoying the man’s demise, thought Nacer. Another shred of proof that the Khan’s brother was developing a merciless and sadistic streak that greatly unnerved the bull-necked warrior from the Taklamaklan, hard as he was.
Nacer had known Kachiun for some time. The man was intelligent beyond all measure, and a great military commander, and Nacer had enjoyed working under him. Having a competent, harmless superior made life in the army much, much easier. Nacer had even begun to joke and dine with him on occasion, in the years before Pasargardae happened, cultivating a friendship with his superior in a way seldom seen in military practice.
But then, of course, Pasargardae HAD happened. Kachiun had been through hell and back during the months before the betrayal and death of his wife, and, as the general’s detachment left the new sentries and the signal box behind, few men went through Hell and returned a better person, thought Nacer. He began to trudge back down the hill path towards camp.
When Kachiun had returned after Pasargardae, having seen his brother the Khan, he had never again invited Nacer or any of the other senior military commanders to his tent for a dinner or a drink again. Instead, the Lord had treated Nacer in a completely formal manner, in a detached, professional tone. As he would any common trooper in the army.
Then the order had come from the Khan; Kachiun was to take his tuman and ride north, settling in and around Ghulamann, to conduct a guerrilla war against the superior Russian army, based now at Kassite, discouraging them for further advancement, whilst building up his forces. And so Kachiun had marched them all up north, at an unrelenting pace. That was when Nacer had first observed the change in the general.
During the Arabian campaign, Kachiun had treated his soldiers kindly, greeting them with first names, promising donatives for hard work. But during the march he drove them north so fast that, before the column had even reached Tarsus, men had started to drop out of column.
Kachiun’s response to these troopers had been to strip them naked, tie them to rocks in the desert, flog them 100 times, and then leave them. Tied, with no supplies, the troopers were left to the vultures. This incredibly harsh punishment left the men reeling, the first time it had been meted out. Nacer had protested lightly to the Khan’s brother, who had promptly replied that the vice-general was welcome to join his men. Stunned, Nacer had kept his mouth shut, and endured the torturous march up to Ghulamann in silence.
Once they had arrived in the region, there was no respite. Kachiun ordered his men to dig a permanent fort. The path to the fort was well hidden, through a nasty patch of thorny brakes, leading steeply up to the fort. Cliffs surrounded it on all sides, it afforded terrific views of the surrounding valleys, and there were only two exits, the entrance and the back exit, which led only up to the signal post from which the column was now descending. The ground had been chosen well.
So the men built the fort. Since then, the army had been skirmishing lightly with Russian patrols, knocking them out in systematic fashion. It was progressing well. But Kachiun kept up hard drills for any soldier who wasn’t skirmishing, made them sleep practically on rugs on the floor of the barracks, and also punished the slightest offences with death.
Nacer shuddered, thinking back to the latest incident. Every hour, the sentry in the signal box was supposed to raise the all clear pennant, just to reassure Kachiun that no enemy was near the fort. But Akedai had been late with the pennant. A full twenty-six seconds after Kachiun had judged the hour to have passed, the all-clear pennant had been raised. Twenty-six seconds late.
Whether Akedai had been caught short, whether he had marked the sundial slightly incorrectly, whether a bird had attacked him at the crucial moment even, Nacer would never know. Kachiun had never given him a chance to explain. He had just told Powderbreath to shoot him. And from what Nacer could see, the Lord had enjoyed the man’s death greatly. Veteran though he was, Nacer never delighted in the death of a fellow human; it was something which he felt set humankind apart from animals and demons. And he himself despised heartless men as such.
That was another irritation to the Vice-General; his new choice of companions. Kachiun now seemed to surround himself with the biggest, crudest thugs he could find, men totally without morals. Powderbreath was just one example.
The column arrived back in camp, and, to a barked order from Kachiun, Nacer set off to inspect the gate sentries. The Vice-General set off without complaint. Secretly, though, he was deeply disturbed with the situation, and passing through the camp to the surly glances of his disgruntled comrades, he was just beginning to get fed up with the situation.


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1740AD

Jun has caught up with the Khan’s advancing army, resting in Bactra, to reveal his new discovery.

JUN: Khan, I would like to talk to you and the council today about the properties of water.
GENGHIS: Well this sounds like a riot. Go on then, if you must.
ISHAK: Like, just a clarification like; Water is that stuff that runs in rivers, right?
JUN: Yes, that is water. Well …
ISHAK: And what’s in the sea and that?
JUN: That too.
ISHAK: And what about rain? Is that, like, water as well? Nah, surely not.
JUN: Yes, that is water as well, of course!
KOLAI: Wait, can we just go over that again? I forgot what you said about rivers.
JUN: No, no we cannot go over it again, you morons! Right, water! WHEN you boil it, it turns into a gas, which we call steam.
ISHAK: Really? That’s like, a well awesome tech discovery!
GENGHIS: Ishak, we have known about Steam for ages and ages. What about it Jun? This is starting to look like leading nowhere.
JUN: On the contrary, my lord. It will allow us to drive engines, still in development, but they will be powerful, increasing production. And we can build ships out of, get this, Iron, using such powerful designs!
KOLAI: That sounds good!
GENGHIS: Not bad. Anything else about Steam?
JUN: Only that it is the name of a notorious online gaming platform with incredibly useless tech support, but that isn’t really relevant or useful.
GENGHIS: Alright. Fair effort I suppose. You survive to research the next technology!
JUN: Sire?
GENGHIS: Didn’t I tell you? One tech I deem bad or can’t understand, you get sacked! Now off you go.

Jun hurries off.

GENGHIS: Now if that ain’t motivation I don’t know what is. Anyone got any interesting news? Kolai?
KOLAI: The most interesting news I can come up with is that Louis, our weakling vassal, has lost Paris to the Germans over in Eporue.
GENGHIS: Bloody loser! I mean, come on, he’s only surrounded by 4 powerful hostile civs, can’t he even hold just one city?
ISHAK: You, like, can’t get the vassals these days, like, or something.
GENGHIS: Indeed not. Oh well lads, we’ll be putting in the main shift, AS usual.

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General Vladimir extinguished the candle, and was just about to collapse into bed, when he heard something; a tapping noise at his door. Then a voice, high and shrill.
“Gen-ee-ral!! Ze sentries require you at the main gate. Zay say eet is urgent.”
Do they now, thought Vladimir. He growled a reply and the tapping stopped, replaced by the sound of echoing footsteps, which faded away. Vladimir himself relit the candle, dressed again in his dusty uniform, and then went to see what was occurring at the main gate. Striding through the dim corridors of Kassite, the sun long settled in for the night, Vladimir reeled off the possibilities in his mind. An attack, no, the sentry would have sounded the horn. A messenger then? Or supplies? But no-one was scheduled to visit the fort in the next month. Vladimir should know. He was in charge.
By the time Vladimir reached the gate, he was intrigued.


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“Sit here” barked Vladimir. The four men sat.
Vladimir looked them over. Their story was that they were deserting Mongol soldiers, fed up with the regime of their commander. They were certainly dressed appropriately, in crude barbarian uniforms. One, the squat, bull-necked man in the centre, evidently the leader of the group, even claimed to be some sort of vice-general. Vladimir had his doubts; the man looked hard enough, but the Russian general had a hard time convincing himself the man had the brains for the job. Even by Mongol standards, he snorted. Still, they should prove very useful indeed.
Vladimir addressed the men. “Tell me, where is the Mongol army encamped?”
The Mongols told him.
Vladimir sat back, in his mind trying to decide if they were telling the truth. The location was a plausible one, certainly. But was it a trap? Possibly. After all, when was the last time Mongol soldiers had ever deserted to the enemy?
Never. That was when.
Vladimir decided to try calling their bluff. He was unsure. “Alright gentlemen. Understand you are under MY hospitality in this fort.” He paused, and then whispered softly, “So tell me where the effing fort really is or I will start cutting off your limbs, one by one.” The Russian general drew his knife. His guards followed suit.
The Mongols, of course, had been disarmed. Yet they did not shrink away from the knifes. The leader responded by looking Vladimir straight in the eye.
“We do not lie. And we are not afraid of your cowardly threats.”
The bull-necked Mongol and Vladimir stared each other down for a good three minutes. Vladimir at last looked away. Perhaps the Mongols were telling the truth after all. He would at least look into it.
“Very well” he said. “Throw the Mongols in the dungeons and assemble the army to move out tomorrow. Leave only a skeleton garrison behind.” He sheathed his knife and exited the room. His guards escorted the four Mongols to the dungeons, where they spent an uncomfortable night.
The next morning, 85,000 Russian soldiers marched through the gates of Kassite, Vladimir at their rear.


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To be continued …
 
A fairly short update, just so you guys got something today; it is still Saturday in America, right? :D
Anyway, not sure when the next update will be, but it should be within a few weeks! This story is limping towards the finish line, it's almost there!
 
And while I wait for more updates, I will re-read the beginning because I forgot what has happened already :D
 
I assume you've read Conn Iggulden's Conqueror series? They're very well written, and worth reading.

Your story's coming along brilliantly. :)
 
Face it, there are another 6 or 7 months of constant bumps until he updates (again)
 
JaGarLo cannot work properly.

Missing 18civsTheMongolVersion.exe


I can't wait to see how it ends! ;)

Spoiler :
But weeks turn into months, and then years, and then, decades... :(
 
You can relax guys, I finish exams on the 25th, and then one of the first things I will do is to crank out an update for you :cool:
And I'm getting towards the point where I need to start thinking about an epic ending story :D
 
How about the last guy around tries to take your capital,

captures Genghis, and storms away the next turn *minute*?
 
James, please don't bump old, dead threads like this... It's unnecessary.
 
Well, they're old stories, dead/finished stories... Needn't bump them, if people want to find old stories they can search through S&T (I've done that before, just skim through the pages :p).
 
Old threads stay old.

There are other ways to get stories noticed: mention them in the Central thread for example. Bumping them may be a burden on those who have old email subscriptions to the thread.

I know, I'm a hypocrite :D
 
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Alll we needed was one more post.
:cry:
 
Just a quick bump on this :) and to tell you that I made the mistake of leaving my old laptop with the story on at university - where it has sat for 3 months with me unable to collect it!
Fear not though, I'm back at uni within two weeks, and whilst I'm waiting for term to start (and my housemates to get back) I'll crack on with the story. I'm already halfway through the next update, and I swear there isn't long to go - as I think I've said before, the actual game is finished, and my screenshot gallery tells me what happened.
So the story isn't dead - look out for an update before the month changes :) this story needs finishing soon!
 
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