Not that bad
You didn't asked for adviced, but i give some anywhere:
1. Your world seems to be huge, but you should not waste so much space. Between your core cities theres a lot open space where several cities could be founded. A tighter placement could allow the double number of cities on the same space without to much overlapping. Your are producing settlers, maybe you already know this
2. Several cities producing wealth. At this point thats just wasting production. For instance Bactra could make an immortal every 2 turns. You produce 8 gold in this time. Maybe you think you don't need more troops. But you could still move these units to somewhere, where production is lower and disband the them for 7 shields. You get 7 shields for 8 gold. Thats a temple for 64 gold. Try to rush a temple for these few coins. You see the point.
Actually you have quite few immortals, but a lot of warriors. Disband them (the warriors), they cost money and won't do anything good in the future. Build more immortals instead. Upgrading would be a little bit to expensive.
3. You spent 10% of your income on luxery. Why? Thats >50 bucks, and you absolutly dont need it. You have 5 luxury resources and due your monarchy enough military police. Spend this money on science. Banking one turn earlier.
Well, thats all i see at the moment. You show promise. Whats your plans for the next stages. Which victory condition do you aim for?
