starlifter
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In Democracy, there is a duplicated sentence... the first bullet can be deleted... It looks like a double paste or something.
In the "City Defenses" section, phrases like "land behind city walls" are confusing because it can mean several things.
Maybe "Land unit (with city walls)"
or "Land Unit + City Walls"
"Any Unit + Coastal Fortress"
etc.
In testing.... well, actually in a real game, I discovered that the "book" is wrong about something else. It takes either Nav or Invention to cancel the doble trade bonus before turn 200, not both. Here's the new wording:
Tech Tree, Note 1. If either Navigation or Invention are discovered (by anyone) before turn 200, the TRB is reduced to "normal"
Note 4:
A wonder immediately expires when any civ discovers the associated cancelling Advance.

Looks pretty much ready! There will doubtless be a correction or two someone may notice in the future,but you can perodically just add them in as a lump, and bump the rev. up by .01 (e.g., 1.01)
In the "City Defenses" section, phrases like "land behind city walls" are confusing because it can mean several things.
Maybe "Land unit (with city walls)"
or "Land Unit + City Walls"
"Any Unit + Coastal Fortress"
etc.
In testing.... well, actually in a real game, I discovered that the "book" is wrong about something else. It takes either Nav or Invention to cancel the doble trade bonus before turn 200, not both. Here's the new wording:
Tech Tree, Note 1. If either Navigation or Invention are discovered (by anyone) before turn 200, the TRB is reduced to "normal"
Note 4:
A wonder immediately expires when any civ discovers the associated cancelling Advance.

Looks pretty much ready! There will doubtless be a correction or two someone may notice in the future,but you can perodically just add them in as a lump, and bump the rev. up by .01 (e.g., 1.01)
