FfH Fan Fiction: The Age of Rebirth

Chapter One: Orthus

The battlefield was heavy with the stench of death, the smell pervading the air like it had always been there. Healers, escorted by guards to protect them, searched the sea of bodies to find those that may still be helped. Survivors from the barbarian side were tended to and taken to the main healing sites, while those of the enemy side were rounded up and taken to the command tent. For a barbarian army, they were strangely disciplined - the fires in the fallen town were being systematically put out, trusted officers emptying the houses for any valuables to be fairly distributed. There was none of the uncontrolled looting and rampaging that usually followed in the aftermath of such struggles.

"How are they, Chalice?" The speaker was tall, taller than most orcs. That wasn't the only thing that set him apart from his kin, either - there was a definite air of command around him, a sharp intellect gleaming in his eyes. Not a brute, this one - even if his natural bloodthirst was still there, a burning desire for power and dominion that had thrust him to become the king of this barbarian horde.

"The way they usually are, Orthus." Had Orthus seemed unusual, Chalice seemed truly out of place. A delicate woman nearly two heads shorter than her king, she was dressed in flowing white robes that had - as usual - gotten dirtied during the battle. Shaking her head distastefully, she pulled out the ponytail she'd had hidden below her robe and opened it, letting the long brown hair fall freely on her back. Looking at her, few would believe that she was the group's second in command - and even though the priestess was Orthus' lover, she had only become so after earning her position fairly. "Frightened, desperate, some of them still defiant. But they have all heard the rumors and are sure that they'll die in a horrible way."

Orthus nodded. "Do what we usually do. Find the ones you deem most suspectible and bring them to me. If our soldiers want to enjoy the pleasures of the flesh with the others, let them. Just have all of the townsfolk you don't bring to me killed afterwards."

"My king", Chalice bowed and rose. Orthus watched her for a while as she left, then sat a moment in thought before rising and leaving the command tent as well. He walked through the field, stopping every now and then to speak with some of his soldiers. Apparently safe from the challenges of leadership that so often sounded in armies like these, he slowly left the battleground behind him. Like always after a victorious struggle, he needed time alone to think and reflect on his plans.

He walked a long time, long enough to lose all sight of his men. There was a hill nearby, a forested, rocky hill, and Orthus climbed it. There was a clearing at the top, and he stopped there, turning his eyes towards northwest. Narrowing his eyes and staring for as far away in the horizon as he could, he could almost imagine catching a glimpse of the famed Kwythellar in the distance. For a long time he only stood there and imagined the city.

It would still be a time before they would be able to take it.

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By the time Orthus got back, Chalice had finished picking the prisoners to be taken to him. Not many of them, only a couple of dozen. They were all young men, most of them wounded in the battle before. Guarded by a couple of barbarian warriors, the prisoners all took a good step back when they saw the orcish leader approaching. He smiled a little and turned to face them.

"Men of Aranthar. I am Orthus, the Barbarian King. When we came to your gates, we offered you a chance to surrender peacefully. We said that should you resist, you would all be killed. You chose to resist, and therefore your town will die." He gauged their reactions as he spoke. A few looked down when he said his final words, a few clenched their jaws and look defiantly at him. He smiled a little, at that. Defiance was good, courage was good.

"Of your town's death, there can be no negotiation. Many of the townsfolk were killed during the battle, and the rest will be slain during this night. If somebody you know isn't standing here now, know that you will never see them again." Some ears perked up at that, and some of the men looked questioningly at each other. "Are you going to make slaves out of us?", one of them asked, stepping forward and glaring challengingly at Orthus. The orc smiled wider at that.

"No, you will not be made into slaves. Neither will you be killed, if you take my offer. For I am giving you an opportunity. Your home is destroyed, your families are dead. Not all of them have been put to the sword yet, but you might as well think of them as gone. You have nothing left to lose and everything left to win." He paused, eyeing them - some were beginning to realize what he was saying, he could see it on their faces. He began pacing around them, letting his eyes fall from person to person as he circled.

"We have been on the move for a year now, and in every battle we have been victorious. Yet we are those who've been the most ravaged by time and destiny, those who have suffered from hardship after hardship. You don't look so rich yourselves, have the last seasons not been a fight for survival? Have you not forever lived in fear of a barbarian invasion, just like this one? Hasn't your life always been one of difficulty and pain?" There was something magnetic in eyes now, his voice rich with promise. It was hard for the captives not to stare. "You saw how we beat you, just like that? Is it really a life you would like to live, wouldn't you rather be part of something greater?"

"You know the city of Kwythellar, just like I do. You've heard the rumors of it, maybe some of you have been there." He had stopped now, to give his words more weight. "The largest, richest city in the whole world, they say. Full of rich, fat arrogant cityfolks. Do you think they care for your suffering? Do you think they care for anything but their own fat bellies? What happened here today was their fault, why didn't they have their legions defend you? You've suffered a lot more, wouldn't you want to storm that city and take its riches to yourself?"

"For that's what I'm offering you. For we are building an army, nay, a nation where none of you will suffer anymore. You will be trained and taught how to fight and hold your own, and if you're threatened, this whole horde will be your brothers and come to your aid. Do your best to excel, and you'll become my trusted leaders, thousands of men under your command. Kneel down and swear your loyalty to Orthus, Barbarian King, and become richer and more powerful than you could ever imagine... or stay on your feet and refuse me, and die like the rest of your kind. Which shall it be?"

They on their knees before Orthus had even finished his speech, staring up with fear and worship in their eyes.

"Very good", Orthus smiled with satisfaction. "Tonight you will get your baptism in fire, leaving your old world behind you and joining my legions of vengeance."

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The bonfires rose high and tall, the flames fueled by wood the army had collected for the occasion. Night had fallen, and most of the barbarians had gathered around the huge funeral pyres to celebrate their victory and say their goodbyes to the ones slain in battle.

Somber and quiet, the men who'd chosen to join Orthus stood around the fires, watching as the bodies of their families and former loved ones were one by one fed to the flames. Some of them wept openly, while others grit their teeth and only stared in front of them, the fires reflecting from their eyes. In the shadows, Chalice stood watching them, observing the faces and expressions of each one.

Orthus stood at a distance, watching his followers from the hill he'd found earlier. Many races were united under his banner - humans, orcs, lizardmen, even some skeletons brought to life by the orc shamans' magic. For all their differences, the same things united them all - a past of pain and exploitation, a desire to strike back at those who were responsible for it. They wanted safety, they wanted the riches the city-dwellers so flaunted and were proud of. They wanted bloodshed and vengeance.

And by gods, Orthus slowly swore. He was going to give them their revenge, even if it was the last thing he ever did.

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Just in the nick of time. Nothing ever gets done without deadlines, so I promise that the next part will be posted no sooner than next week. ;) Feedback's welcome.

Oh, and shameless plug: if you have difficulties waiting, my website has more of my writing. Just click on the "stories" link in the top menu.
 
Nice! I smell a battle at Kwythellar in the near future. I wonder how close this is to Kael's original. :)
 
evanb said:
Nice! I smell a battle at Kwythellar in the near future. I wonder how close this is to Kael's original. :)

Its not like the origional, but there is nothing wrong with that. FfH is an origional creation, not a recreation. There are so many parts that are completly new or significantly changed for the mod that never existed in the D&D campaign. Wilboman and Corlindale do all of their writing without the benifit of any detailed backstory besides what you have already read. We are creating a new world and with Xuenay's permission when this is complete I would like to check this in as Orthus's pedia entry so that this can become "true" FfH history as well.
 
Xuenay,

I like this Orthus. Yes, i like him.
Again and always a pleasure to read.:goodjob:

Thx.

The Frog.
 
Excellent stuff (even though I always pictured Orthus as human)! Question, though: Is Orthus an orc and the Priestess human?
 
:) Again, glad to hear that people are liking this. That'll keep me motivated to write more.

wilboman said:
Excellent stuff (even though I always pictured Orthus as human)! Question, though: Is Orthus an orc and the Priestess human?

He thought of him as a human too, until I noticed that he was listed with the Orcish promotion in the Civilopedia. ;)

The priestess is a human, yes.
 
Are there any other Ages other then Ice and Rebirth? What about Fire, and Death, and other Ages. Is there a Age where they are in a Modern Age like we are (talk about post-Apoclypstic Gothic Fantasy Sci-fi)?
 
darkedone02 said:
Are there any other Ages other then Ice and Rebirth? What about Fire, and Death, and other Ages. Is there a Age where they are in a Modern Age like we are (talk about post-Apoclypstic Gothic Fantasy Sci-fi)?

The Birth of Time, the Age of Dragons, the Age of Magic, the Age of Ice, the Age of Rebirth, the Age of Enlightenment. See Kael's history extract here: http://forums.civfanatics.com/showpost.php?p=3458409&postcount=2
 
Xuenay said:
He thought of him as a human too, until I noticed that he was listed with the Orcish promotion in the Civilopedia. ;)

The priestess is a human, yes.

@Orthuss being an orc: Ah, yeah, see what you get from just skimming the pedia:blush:
@The priestess being Orthuss' lover::twitch: Complicated issues:lol:
 
wilboman said:
@Orthuss being an orc: Ah, yeah, see what you get from just skimming the pedia:blush:
@The priestess being Orthuss' lover::twitch: Complicated issues:lol:

Hey, Woodelf got a human wife, why not Orthus?
 
Kael,

Woodelf has a human wife. What a lucky man !!! :lol:
My (ex) girl friend was a demon, a lovely and clever one but really a demon !

The Frog.
 
@The Frog

I hear you man, i hear you.

@Xuenay
You are an excellent writer, keep it up!
 
This thread is awesome, I just noticed it today and had to spend the last two hours composing something. The Orhus and Saverous stories are excellent...I hope my story is half as good...I guess I would like to write Baron stories for different civs and religions...we will see if I have time...

Spoiler :


“Commence the incantations.” Hemah whispered almost wordlessly. Although his command carried no sound, the entire horde of zealots massed beneath the ominous gloom of the Demon’s Altar began chanting simultaneously as the order was instantly conveyed in each cultists mind. They all knew that what ever it was that Hemah desired it was what the Octopi, their Overlords desired.

“Prepare the incense.” Hemah shouted this command loudly more for the effect on the prisoner than out of necessity. Below him on the floor of the temple several cultists slowly loosed the chains which seemed to even more lazily lower the massive braziers full of incense into the ceremonial pool that had been the baptismal fount of thousands of the Drowned. Adepts on either side of the pool weaved patterns of fire which spiraled from their hands into the mirror stillness of the pool. The wonder that the flames were not extinguished by the pool but swirled within the pool immediately above the braziers was lost on the entire assembly except for the prisoner, naked shackled and on his knees before the pool struggling even now to escape his bonds.

“Ignite the incense.” thought Hemah and he was obeyed. The flames swirling from the fingertips of the adepts into the pool now focused on the braziers and beneath the stagnant sea water of the pool the incense seemed to come to life. The adepts promptly retreated while the cultists now hurriedly yanked the chains bearing the blazing braziers toward the surface of the water. As the braziers rose through the pool they first filled the chamber with what would seem to be natural orange-red light and then as the braziers breached the surface the magical fire was extinguished leaving only the smoldering incense as the shadows thickened beneath the thick clouds of smoke.

Hemah motioned to the Stygian Guardsmen on either side of the prisoner. Hemah knew that his motion was obscured by the thick pungent cloud which now surrounded the platform, but old habits such as visual and verbal cues were difficult to erase. In their minds the command to ascend the dais appeared. The Stygians resolutely dragged the prisoner up the 19 steps of the dais seemingly making each step as painful as possible on their charge. After reaching the summit they flung the prisoner onto the floor at Hemah’s feet and promptly retreated from the platform. The prisoner lay face down at Hemah’s feet, a large man and even as a prisoner prostate before him, Hemah still felt the prisoner held a regal bearing.

“So…” started Hemah, out of practice and having difficulty speaking aloud he cleared his throat. “You would be our king?” He finished with as much sarcasm as he could muster. Hemah could muster a great deal of sarcasm…had the question become material it would have melted the entire temple and the Demon’s Altar itself with its acidity.

The prisoner made no reply. Hemah yanked the prisoner to his knees by his bloody and disheveled mane of hair. “What say you?” Hemah growled studying the face of his captive.

“I AM the rightful heir to the throne” was the sharp and indignant reply of the prisoner. Hemah guffawed, laughing hysterically and then quickly shuddered and stopped. Hemah wasn’t Hemah anymore…he was the Voice.

“There is no throne to inherit…fool.” The words from Hemah pronounced in a monotone drone which didn’t sound remotely like the Hemah who had begun to question the prisoner.

“You have a choice…obey us or be destroyed…the Overlords will not suffer any man to be ‘king’.” The monotone voice continued, totally devoid of emotion.

“The people will not stand for it…I will…” the prisoner started but didn’t get a chance to finish as the hand holding up by his hair released him to crash into the floor once more.

“You will serve or you will be forced to serve, thus will come your destruction.” was the measured response from the Voice now facing the Altar and not the prisoner. The body of Hemah shuddered as the Voice left him; he slowly wheeled around toward the prisoner and gently put his foot on the prisoner’s temple forcing the opposite side of his face into the cold, slimy floor with deceptive strength.

“Baron…I understand you are quite fond of dogs…is that same true for canines in general?” Over the drone of the cultists, the sarcasm had returned to Hemah’s words and the Baron knew that some change had taken place.

“I have no special fondness for animals of any sort.” The Baron managed to grumble from a most difficult position.

“Me-thinks you be lying.” Hemah quickly retorted. “Nevertheless, I had planned to baptize you into the Drown, but it seems we have had some developments in our research. The Overlords believe that you are a perfect candidate for an experiment.” He finished matter-of-factly as he released his foot from the Baron’s temple and wandered a few steps away. The Baron shook his head given the respite trying to get blood to return to the portion of his face which now bore the imprint of the floor.

“Do what you will sorcerer.” The Baron growled as he continued to struggle against his bonds.

“You fight to the end…and it seems you do not enjoy your bonds…are they too tight? No matter…I have an even greater bond for you to struggle against.” Hemah clapped his hands, again more for effect than for necessity as the beast keepers were already approaching.

The beast keepers appeared through the haze of the smoke of the incense with a great black wolf leashed between them. The Baron struggled to turn his head to see the newcomers but could only hear the slow rhythmic panting of the beast behind him. The beast keepers left the wolf next to the Baron so that two could take the measure of one another and then like the others before them, they also made a hasty retreat. The wolf took one slow look at them as they departed and then focused his attention back on the Baron.

“This beast has been dominated and trained to follow the commands of the Overlords.” Hemah spoke as soothingly as possible in sharp contrast to the dripping sarcasm that he had used previously. “It will control you...this will be the form of your destruction…it will guide your rage to the ends of the Overlords…you shall be a symbol to all of the realm…demonstrating the power of the Overlords.”

Hemah snapped his fingers and Baron Duin Halfmorn fell asleep.
 
Qthzandra said:
BTW, how do I post with the spoiler button?

Put your text within [spoil er] and [/spoil er] (just without the spaces between the l and the e) to use the spoiler tags.

And an excellent story, I am really enjoying these stories.

Incidently I was at the mall last night and I came across the player that played the real Orthus. I told him about the mod and he got a kick out of the fact that Orthus was still running around terrorizing nations.
 
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