Haiku Instead?

[Bozo Erectus]

Hypocrisy is
what I should have called that thread
about the hippies

 

[Swedishguy]

I must say that I
(even tho' hurts to say it)
agree with Azash

 

[Bozo Erectus]

'Hypocrisy' is
the favorite word here,
right behind 'drivel'

 

[Swedishguy]

"Swedishguy" is the
most common word, thank you quite
very much - hurhurhur

 

[Rambuchan]

Haikus were once cool
But these ones are really poor
Raise your game please gents.

 

[Gr3yL3gion]

Singapore, NZ
Australia....I don't know
Which place should I go

Feel like leaving soon
Do whatever I want to
Meeting new faces

Couldn't care any more
Nobody to be trusted
Playing games with words

Scars heaped upon scars
Never know where the truth lies
It doesn't matter

Tired, need some rest
As long as you're happy
I will forget you

 

[Azash]

..And still I struggle
Still I cannot express it
Love the unknowing

 

[Swedishguy]

I love making these
quite heartless haikus - even
you must admit that!

 

[Azash]

Actually, Swedish,
I find that a good haiku
Has thoughts or beauty

 

[Swedishguy]

Actually, Azash,
I find that a good haiku
Has humor and/or wit

 

[Azash]

The red blossom bends
and drips its dew to the ground.
Like a tear it falls

The Rose, by Donna Brock

 

[Swedishguy]

That haiku does not
actually say something,
it's just ********

 

[Azash]

I say unto thee
Use those lurking wits, my child
'Tis metaphoric

 

[Swedishguy]

Lurking wits? Stop with
the babbling and speak like a
person like you should.

 

[Azash]

Sit by my window
And you will see what I did
Light sees no shadows

 

[Bozo Erectus]

Haikus were once cool
But these ones are really poor
Raise your game please gents.

Very deep first line
Even more deep second line
Very deep third line

 

[Hitti-Litti]

Bozo Erectus
and Kan Sharuminar are
cycling together

 

[Bozo Erectus]

Bozo Erectus
and Kan Sharuminar are
cycling together

You sure about that?
What are you saying Hitti...
Cycling, whats that mean?

 

[Hitti-Litti]

Bozo Erectus
wants to nitpick today and
Hitti meant biking

 

[Veritass]

Bozo Erectus
and Kan Sharuminar are
cycling together

By cycling you mean
Their menstruations converge
The moon laughs at both.