Haiku Instead?

Azash · May 30, 2007

My gloom soon will pass
But I can't quite lose the murk
of loss no one saw.

Azash · May 30, 2007

Swedishguy, the fool
Thinks I am a female man
This is not hentai

Eran of Arcadia · May 30, 2007

It's not semantics
This thread is about haiku
not random poems.

Gr3yL3gion · May 30, 2007

Relationships sucks,
What a waste of time indeed
We don't need romance

Azash · May 30, 2007

These lines are confined
Never can I scribe the heart
I know this.. I try.

Azash · May 30, 2007

Sigh.. Ultimately
I cannot express that well
How my mind walks lone.

These will end now, too
Perhaps humour is a way
I hope so, for you

Swedishguy · May 31, 2007

Hey, join the navy
hey, join the navy, repeat,
hey, join the navy!

Bartleby · May 31, 2007

to say what I want
in such a limited space
I'm having trouble

bhsup · May 31, 2007

Tranquil ocean serenity
The burnt smell of sulfer
HAK's frigate serves Davey Jones

??? - I've no real talent for this sort of thing...

Azash · May 31, 2007

Bartleby said:
to say what I want
in such a limited space
I'm having trouble

Azash said:
These lines are confined
Never can I scribe the heart
I know this.. I try.

I hope sincerely
For our short, earnest poems
To reveal ourselves

Chairman Meow · May 31, 2007

Very very bad
Is the haiku written here.
Poets we are not.

Eran of Arcadia · May 31, 2007

There once was a man
from Nantucket - wait, that's a
limerick, not a . . .

soul_warrior · May 31, 2007

drum sounds low.
pigeons fly, acid
in my brain, joyous!

Masquerouge · May 31, 2007

Eran of Arcadia said:
There once was a man
from Nantucket - wait, that's a
limerick, not a . . .

(times 5)

Darn 15 images limit...

GoodEnoughForMe · May 31, 2007

Intrigue sets in now
First touch, heavy breathing starts
Emotional noise.

Bozo Erectus · May 31, 2007

Azash said:
My gloom soon will pass
But I can't quite lose the murk
of loss no one saw.

I really like this
use of words that conveys true
meaning to us all

Azash · May 31, 2007

Chairman Meow said:
Very very bad
Is the haiku written here.
Poets we are not.

Should we will it so
Then our haiku will be art
"Bad" cannot be used.

soul_warrior · May 31, 2007

Bad to the bow, NO!
Lonely mountaintop View, why not?
music died tonight!

Azash · May 31, 2007

Tired, head swirling
Lose my thoughts in dizzy spins
Blink.. Then clarity

Azash · May 31, 2007

Thorough confusion
Soul warrior, enigma
Your poem speaks.. what?