Hail Caesar

Antony watched as Cleopatra drank the sour mixture. Twelve of the finest pearls in the world were crumbled, then poured into vinegar. Cleopatra had won the bet. She had spent one million in gold in one night. It started with a wonderful banquet, followed by dancers and jesters. All in all, it was a fun, albiet expensive evening.

Cleopatra was becoming more and more of an influence in Antony's life. He was drinking too much, and making poor decision. This party in Alexandria was just another example. He should have stayed in Caesaria. He should tend to his cities and allow Cleopatra to tend to hers.

The Queen had other ideas, though. Marriage was not far off in her mind. As the two grew closer they shared more. Had Antony been aware of the espionage taking place in America he would have stayed in the Northern Province. No, who was he kidding? He would have followed Cleopatra.

She was changing dramatically. With Caesar, she was compassionate. She cared for her people. She would not have wasted a million in gold on her own entertainment for the sake of a bet.

Yet Egypt was never richer. The value of the occupied lands in Zululand was immense. If only the Zulus themselves had known of the treasures there.

Some said that Cleopatra was using Antony to regain entry into Rome's inner circle. He knew otherwise, though. There was genuine effection between the two. Someday they would rule together, but on his terms. Not hers, as some suspected.

If anything, Antony was using Cleopatra. His armies in the Northern Provinces were strong, but they would not stand up against the combined armies of Octavian and Lepidus. Nor could they last long if the Americans were to attack. Cleopatra had unwittingly signed a right of passage agreement with Antony. She felt that Egypt should have a presence near America. Now those armies could be used to fend off Octavian.

His lands were safe now. Antony had seen to that at the expense of Cleopatra.

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The seas were red with blood. Thousands of men had been slaughtered on the beaches. Someone had made a terrible intelligence mistake. Someone had followed industrial age warfare rules when their enemy had followed modern warfare guidelines.

With a lack of air cover, the Aztec army was eliminated in a matter of hours. Hannibal, while not exactly happy, was pleased that his defenses had been so successful. On the other hand, his country's reputation as a backwards, innocent, and peaceful civilization was no more. People around the world would have to take note of this. They would have to respect the military power of Carthage.

They seemed to have risen overnight. From a far off island with little more than sailing galleys, they now had fighters, battleships, and infantry. Their armor divisions were just now coming online.

Hannibal's turned to his brother, Hasdrubal. "It won't be long now. The demands of Rome will change."

"Now that we can protect ourselves," said Hasdrubal, "the world will change."

Hasdrubal was young, thought Hannibal. He was passionate, but not wise to the ways of the world. "We bested the Aztecs today. That is all. If these were Americans the situation may have been different."

"We must find a way to defeat the Americans. You swore vengeance on them to our father."

Hannibal thought back to the Franco-American war. So long ago his father fought alongside the greatest of the French generals. De Gaul and Napoleon honored the man as a great warrior. Yet he was only a warrior. The Carthaginians had declared their loyalty to the French. They had no contact with the Americans, however, so could not fight directly beside the French. Hannibal's father brought him to France when he was a boy. He watched his father fight. He sat beside his father while he died and swore that the Americans would pay for this.

"We'll find a way, Hasdrubal," Hannibal said as he continued to look over the sea of blood. "We must."

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"We may want to think about it before giving Hannibal an ultimatum," said Lepidus, holding up the newspaper.

Octavian sat drinking his morning coffee. He held up his own paper as an indication that he had already seen the news.

"What is he up to?" continued Lepidus.

"Moreover, where did he get his materials and how did he gain all of this technology?" said Octavian.

"I hate to say it, but we need to talk to Silvio," said Lepidus.

"Ah, what timing," came Silvio's voice from the doorway. He had an uncanny knack for timing, thought Octavian.

"How did you get in here!?" asked Lepidus.

"Through the back door," Silvio answered.

"You broke in?" asked Octavian.

"Well, it was open. You shouldn't do that, because you got a lot of nice things here." replied Silvio.

"Why are you here?" asked Lepidus.

"Because you need answers."

Octavian grew tired of the movie references. "Silvio, tell me what you know before I have my guards place you in lockup tonight."

"The same guards who couldn't keep me out?" asked Silvio.

"Silvio!" shouted Octavian.

"Alright, alright. You want to know how Carthage went from the stone age to the modern age overnight. It was the Americans."

Octavian looked to Lepidus. "What do the Americans have to gain from this?" he asked.

"Spices and Dyes," interrupted Silvio.

Now it was clear, thought Octavian. "Our spices, and our dyes," he said.

"Precisely," said Silvio. "The Americans are a Democracy. The people need imports far more than our people. They are addicted to luxury items. Without them, they must lower taxes. When they lower taxes they cannot pay their scientists enough. When their technology falls behind they feel threatened."

"Why didn't they just trade with us?" asked Lepidus. "We can offer them whatever the Americans have.

"The Americans offer information," answered Octavian. "We only offer protection."

"Which, apparently, they do not need," Silvio said, holding up the day's headlines.

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wierd historical twist, instead of vengence on the Romans, Hannibal hates the Americans. This should be interesting
 
Yeah, I was going to do some Punic war thing against the romans, but Hannibal was all about revenge, and how could he have revenge in this story against the Romans? It had to be the Americans who defeated his "friends," the French. If PTW had come out before I started this story things may have been different.
 
"The Egyptians have attacked us near San Franscisco," stated Eisenhower.

This news was not unexpected by Roosevelt. He had delayed punishing the Egyptians for their espionage, and actually wondered how long it would be befor Egyptians would carry out a pre-emptive strike.

"We've got carriers off the Egyptian coast, along with four armed nuclear submarines," stated Nimitz.

"I don't want to use the nukes yet," stated FDR. Killing millions of people was the last thing that he wanted.

"I have spoken with the ambassador from Carthage. They may be willing to intervene on our behalf should the Romans attempt a counterstrike," said Kissinger. "However, they'd like a "Right of Passage" agreement with us in order to be closer to the Roman Northern Province."

"I don't see that as a problem," stated Eisenhower. They probably will want to exploit some of the lands in that section. I'd rather that they be Carthaginian lands than Roman lands any day."

FDR thought for a moment. Yes, having Carthage as a neighbor was much better than having Rome. He'd have to seriously consider this option. He wondered, though, of the intentions of Egypt. Certainly they could not expect to beat the Americans. Rome, while still a threat, could not hope to fight a determined war while their country was divided.

"Do you all remember our first war with the Romans? We were embarrassed. We thought that our navy was the elite force on the seas, yet we were trounced by the Roman's new submarines. The Iroquois thought that they had the leverage during their next war, but the Romans picked them off from the skies. Just a few years ago we held the Roman's hands against the Iroquois and anihilated them."

"What is your point, sir?" asked Nimitz.

FDR turned to the Naval Chief. "My point, Admiral, is that we cannot underestimate the Romans, no matter how dire their situation."

"We may not have to estimate them at all," said Dr. Ryan.

"Why is that, Jack?" asked FDR.

"Wait a day before attacking the Egyptians," he said. "Wait a day and you may not have to worry at all about the Romans. Yet I would still allow Carthage access to the Northern Provinces. Their beef with the Romans has nothing to do with us."

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Rome and Egypt had long shared the same view. They both wanted the Iroquois stopped. They both wanted to keep the Americans at bay. Times were changing, though. The Egyptians had betrayed the Americans, and Rome was caught in the middle.

Now Octavian sat with the pen in his hand. One signature could preserve the balance of the world. On the other hand, he could turn the world upside down by tossing this document into the fire. The thought of doing so intriqued him. Was it time for a change? This could backfire terribly.

The long-held alliance with Egypt was coming to an end. He renewed the alliance several years ago out of fear. Caesar had just been murdered, and the country was in turmoil. He needed protection. Now, though, this alliance could cost the lives of many Romans, and for no good reason. Even though his country distrusted the Americans, they still had no reason to go to war.

To not sign, though, was to move forward naked. There would be no more intelligence from Alexandria. He also risked an attack in the Northern Provinces from the Egyptian troops who were already there.

Lepidus had not yet signed the treaty extention, no doubt waiting for Octavian, who was the true leader of Rome. Even though Antony had already signed, without one more signature the document was meaningless. Lepidus certainly would not turn on Octavian in his present state. Lepidus' armies were Caesar's old armies, and they were loyal to Octavian. Lepidus power was meant to allow Octavian to rule without appearing as though it was a hostile maneuver.

Octavian would not sign this document, and as the flames rose from the fireplace, so did the alliance with Egypt. Now would be the time to face the consequences. Too long had Antony been associated with the Egyptians. They were a useful ally years ago when Caesar could control Cleopatra. Now they were dangerous, as evidenced by their espionage in America.

Antony must decide where his loyalties lay, thought Octavian. He must choose between Rome and Cleopatra.

Octavian telephoned Lepidus. After a few moments his secretary connected the two of them.

"We're done with Egypt," said Octavian.

"You're not signing?"

"No. I cannot trust Cleopatra. Not after what happened in America."

"You know what this means, then?" asked Lepidus.

"Yes," replied Octavian.

"The Egyptian troops will be forced out of the Northern Province. Antony will either fight us, or join us."

"Either way, this will be done with."

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Brianna watched as Christopher took the receiver from his ear. If only he had been out, as he was suposed to be. This was a conversation that she needed to hear.

Christopher wasn't aware that she knew of his wiretaps at the palace. He knew that she suspected something, but didn't know what. That much she could tell. But he was so misguided by what Brianna had to offer that he turned a blind eye.

This one hurt, though. She knew that Octavian had the papers in his hands. She knew that the decision to extend the alliance fell to him. However, Christopher was home, and he heard the conversation instead of her.

Cleopatra would not be pleased, she thought. This was too important. But what could she do? She couldn't drag the information out of him. And what was he doing listening to palace conversations for anyway? Christopher was a thug. When he wasn't picking up whores at the strip bar, he was beating up drug dealers when they didn't pay him tribute. What could he possibly want with palace conversations?

She may as well give it a try, she thought. "Anything interesting?"

"With what?" replied Christopher.

"You're phone call?"

"Are you watching me? Watching what I'm doing?"

"No...I"

Suddenly, Brianna felt fear for the first time in a long time. Christopher stood up and approached her.

"Stop," she said. At least she meant to say it. Brianna wasn't sure if anything came out.

Christopher grabbed her by the shoulders and shoved her against the wall. Brianna felt a tight pain as Christopher held her head with both hands and squeezed.

"You don't pay any frigg'n attention to what I'm doing," he shouted. "Do you hear?"

Brianna tried to shake her head, Christopher did it for her, shaking her head violently. "DO YOU HEAR ME?!" he shouted again.

A meak "yes"

Christopher just looked at her for a moment. Brianna could see it in his eyes that he could kill her now without feeling one way or another about it. The thought frightened her. She had always been the one with the upper hand in all of her assignments. In the past she could read the people she dealt with and went right to what mattered to them. Christopher was different, though. What frightened her now was that he could do whatever he wanted to her and she could do nothing about it. She had no control over the situation.

His eyes softened a bit. "I...I just don't want you to get hurt, Brianna." Funny, she thought, then why was he hurting me? "There's a lot of bad stuff that goes on, and you don't want to be a part of that."

Brianna had to play this right. "I'm sorry, Christopher. I'm sorry." Best to play the obsequious girlfriend in this case.

"You shouldn't be asking me about this stuff. It's no good for you to get involved."

"I won't ask again," she said timidly. Thankfully, the phone rang. Christopher looked at her in the eyes one last time, then left for the phone.

This would have to end, she thought. Christopher was too dangerous. She would leave soon.

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Christopher reached the phone. It was Silvio. Turning to Brianna, he saw that she had sat down at the kitchen table. He stepped onto the balcony with the cordless phone.

"What's up, Sil?"

"Did you hear anything?" asked Silvio.

"He's not signing. Niether is Lepidus."

"You heard that where?"

"On the phone. They just got done talking. What's this mean for us?" asked Christopher.

"It means that we have work to do. Paulie is going to the Northern Provinces tomorrow. Things should start to heat up. This could really hurt our business. Do you know how much merchandise we move in the Northern Province?"

"A lot," answered Christopher.

"It's easy to move it now. Technically it's not an import, because Rome controls the lands. If Egypt gets the Northern Province we may be ok. They're about as corrupt as anything. I worry that the Americans will get it. Roosevelt is not likely to allow us to move materials around as easily as we do it now.

Christopher pondered this for a moment. They made a ton of money on their "imports" from the Northern Province. If that were to end it could mean the end for their family.

"Oh, and one more thing, Christopher. Anthony wants you to come to dinner tonight at his home."

"Should I bring Brianna?" asked Christopher.

"I guess. She doesn't know anything, does she?"

"No, she tried to find out about the treaty, but I played abusive boyfriend on her and she clammed up."

"Good. Give her a little bit," said Silvio. "Mention something about Antony going back to the Northern Provinces. She'd find this out from Cleopatra anyway, so there isn't really a risk. At least she'd stick around for a few more days."

"What are we going to do with her?" asked Christopher.

"What do you think?" asked Silvio. Christopher was left with a dial tone as Silvio hung up.

She deserved it, Christopher thought. She was using him, and he knew it.
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Dr. Ryan was in trouble, and he knew it. Once again, the Romans had spit on his intelligience. As he walked the halls of the West Wing he fully anticipated the glares and indignation of the rest of the cabinet. Hoover, especially.

The FBI director was constantly fighting with the CIA. Ryan could never understand why. If they just worked together they'd get so much more done. Hoover didn't see a need for the CIA, though. His philosophy was that as long as he had peace domestically there was no need for an organization to watch the other countries.

A utopian idea, thought Ryan, but not a very realistic one. The need for the CIA was obvious. They needed to know what everyone was up to. Information about Antony and Cleopatra was crucial to understanding the Roman situation.

This latest news was trouble, though. He had to explain how the Romans detonated an atomic bomb without the CIA knowing that they even had a program.

He entered the doors to the Oval Office expecting to hear comments about his group's failure, but there were none. He sat next to Henry Kissinger as the group watched MSNBC live news.

"What's going on?" he asked the Secretary of State.

"Tanks. Lots of them. Unloading north of Caesaria," replied Kissinger.

Ryan watched as Peter Arnett reported, live from Caesaria.

"...the Egyptians are showing that they've finally had enough. They've lived in the shadow of Rome for a long time. They played second fiddle to Caesar in their alliance, then Octavian rejected them. One has to wonder what has happened to Antony during this crisis. One third of the leadership of Rome still sides with Egypt, yet he has not been heard from in months. Well, tonight you'll hear from Mark Antony in my exclusive interview."

The shot went back to the studio where some talking heads gave their uninformed opinions on the matter.

The President turned the volume down and turned to Ryan. "You knew of this, Jack?"

Ryan did know of it, and mentioned it yesterday. "Yes, Mr President. The Romans were almost baiting the Egyptians. It is most unusual."

"Can they withstand this invasion?" asked Kissinger.

Eisenhower responded. "Initially no. However if Dr. Ryan's suggestion that the Romans were baiting them is correct, then they must have a plan for this." He looked toward Ryan, who could think of nothing to say.

"Octavian and Lepidus declined to continue their alliance yesterday," stated Hoover. "Obviously this was a wise choice, based on our relations with Alexandria."

Ryan couldn't get past one thing, though. It looked as if the Romans had baited the Egyptians, as he just told the cabinet. But why? The Egyptians had information for atomic bomb. They knew where the Uranium was. This placed them squarely ahead of the Romans, and Octavian knew it. So why bait them? Why not sign the alliance to preserve the peace and keep up the pressure on America?

"Ryan, you said to wait a day. Is this attack the reason why?" asked Eisenhower.

"Well no, actually. The reason was that if we had attacked yesterday the Romans would have been forced to honor their alliance with Egypt. By waiting a day we remained the martyrs, so the Romans are not obligated to fight against us."

"Instead they'll be fighting with us!" said Hoover.

"Well, not exactly," said Roosevelt. "Although we may be able to arrange something.

The men in the room continued to discuss the situation, but Ryan was oblivious to them. The Egyptians had waited until the day after their alliance ended before attacking. The Romans allowed the Egyptians to maintain troops in the Northern Province during the alliance. Certainly Octavian knew that this would cause a conflict. And yesterday they detonated the bomb. The men here hadn't even begun to discuss that, yet. Once they did, he was in a....they detonated the bomb, declined the alliance, and allowed the Egyptains to invade.

"That's it!" he shouted.

The chatter in the room abruptly stopped, as all heads turned to Ryan. Feeling rather sheepish, Ryan looked at them, surprised at his outburst.

"Do you have something to add, Dr. Ryan?" asked Roosevelt.

"Just a moment, Sir. I have to get some information." He stood up and moved away from the group. Ryan made a phone call to one of his intelligence analysts. Then he rejoined the group.

"Yes sir. There is a complicated set of events that happened over the last few days. First, the Egyptians attacked us. Second, the Romans declined to extend their alliance. Third, they moved their navy an much of their troops from Caesaria - suposedly at Antony's bidding. Finally, they detonated an atomic bomb yesterday."

"Are these events all connected in some way?" asked Kissinger.

"Yes, don't you see?" replied Ryan, excitedly. A knock came at the door as one of Ryan's intelligence officers explained that the information was ready. They chatted for a moment, then Ryan returned.

Ryan dimmed the lights. "Gentlemen, I'd like to show you all a picture of Keparta from a month ago. You see, there is no road leading up to the are here," he pointed to a position on the map. "That is the area where we found uranium deposits."

"Now, look at this next slide. This is a high altitude picture taken from a U2 plane two weeks ago. Still, there is no road." He clicked the button on the remote again. "Now look. Last week. Look at all of the activity around Keparta. Engineers are everywhere. They are building a road." He clicked the button again. "Now look at this shot from yesterday. The road is completed. Now look at this high altude shot of Caesaria. Nothing. Not today, or yesterday, a week ago. Nothing.

"They knew the Uranium was there a week ago. They went for it in Keparta, but ignored it in Caesaria. Why is that? As I said before, they were baiting the Egyptians. Without Uranium, Egypt's knowledge of Atomic Weaponry is moot. Cleopatra had to get the Uranium one way or the other. It looks like Rome discovered this last week. Not just Atomic weaponry, but Egypt's lack of Uranium. They've set a trap for them. Look at this shot of Albany."

Ryan again clicked the remote. They saw a picture of the former American city of Albany. Scores of ships were in the harbor. Thousands of men were there. "They've trapped the whole Egyptian invasion fleet north of Caesaria. They'll let them land, then move down to Caesaria after moving their fleet south to bottle up the smaller Egyptian fleet. In the end, Egypt will get no Uranium, and their protection from Rome will be forever lost."

"Do you see? Octavian knew that she needed uranium a week ago. If he had signed they would have been obligated to send them some. By discontinuing the alliance he has denied them Uranium, and he knew that they would go after Caesaria. They already have troops there from the alliance, and somehow they must have known that an invasion fleet was enroute. That invasion fleet was suposed to be used against us, but was deverted last week." Ryan flipped another slide that showed a before and after of the Egyptian invasion fleet. It showed one gigantic fleet, then showed two large fleets.

"But what does this Uranium get them?" asked Eisenhower. They're still spread too thinly to fight a decent war. We'll trounce them on all fronts! Especially with Roman intervention."

"They don't intend to fight with troops," said Roosevelt. Ryan saw that he had a somber look to him. "They will not fight. They will send the terror down from the skies. They cannot get the Uranium."
 
Octavian watched the live feed from Caesaria. The MSNBC broadcaster, Peter Arnett, was interviewing Mark Antony, who was teleconferenced in from Alexandria.

Arnett: Remember, viewers. This is an exclusive Peter Arnett broadcast that you'll only catch on MSNBC. Emperor Antony, thank you for joining us on this trying night. Can you tell me anything of the situation within the Egyptian government?

Antony: Well, the general mood of the people and government here in Alexandria is one of impatience. As you know, the Egyptians have held the technology for creating nuclear weaponry for some time now. It is no secret that this type of weaponry requires a supply of Uranium. Octavian and Lepidus have refused Cleopatra's requests to purchase this supply.

Arnett: Emperor, you control the Northern Province. There are uranium deposits near the very city I sit in now. Why does this request have to go through Rome instead of through you? Especially in light of your position here?

Antony: It is not as simple as that, Peter. Yes, I do control the Northern Provinces. However, the imports and exports from that region are controlled by the central government; of which I have a one/third say.

[Arnett interrupted Antony]

Arnett: Yes, that is the projection from Rome. But you are more or less in exile here. The leadership in Rome has abandoned you. They consider you a maverick. In reality, Lepidus is a puppet leader on the Unfinished Isle. Octavian pulls his strings. You are the only strength within the Roman Government who can challenge Octavian.

Antony: I will not challenge Octavian. My loyalty is to Rome.

Arnett: To Octavian?

Antony: [pause] To Rome.

Arnett: Let's move on. You are in Alexandria now. What -

Antony: Yes

Arnett: In Alexandria

Antony: Yes

Arnett: Your country has been invaded by the Egyptians, and you, as an Emperor, are in the capital of Egypt. Are you a prisoner?

Antony: No, I am free to do as I wish.

Arnett: Yet you are one/third ruler of Rome. You are staying in the enemy's capital?

Antony: They are not my enemy, Peter. They are the enemy of America.

Arnett: But they invaded Roman lands. How -

Antony: They are in need of protection. Rome and America have the capability of making nuclear weapons. Egypt does not. Octavian and Lepidus have denied Egypt the opportunity to defend itself. I cannot stand by and allow the people of Egypt, our allies, to be slaughtered in war.

Arnett: So you stand behind Egypt in it's attack.

Antony: I stand by Egypt in its attempts to defend itself.

Arnett: Let's move on. You've been closely associated with Cleopatra for some time, now.

Antony: I'll not hide it, unlike my predecessor. I have a relationship with the Queen.

Arnett: If the invasion of the Northern Province is successful, will the two of you rule together?

Antony: We will.

Arnett: Then your loyalty is to the queen, rather than to Rome.

Antony: Rome is controlled by men who do not understand the way that the world flows. Egypt and Rome must stay together in order to fight the Americans. That is the only way to maintain the peace in the world. With Egypt and the Northern Provinces, we can save what Romans we can from the Americans, while maintaining a position of strength.

Arnett: This is incredible, Emperor. It is tantamount to civil war.

Antony: I do not fight the Roman people. I only fight to save the Romans whom I am responsible for.

Arnett: And all of the Northern Province is behind you on this?

Antony: Yes. The mayors of each city have declared their loyalty.

Arnett: Even Albany?

Antony: Not yet. Albany, after all of these years, still has some American roots. They are slow to follow the rest of the north. But they will come around.

Octavian had seen enough. He switched the television off.

Antony did not see what was happening, he thought. Cleopatra was different now. She was charmed by Caesar. Even admired him to a certain degree. Yet she and Octavian were always peers; seeking to gain Caesar's favor. She would never side with Octavian. Nor would she side with any other Roman ruler. Antony had to see this. What he thought was to soon be an autonomous Northern Province was in reality to become an Egyptian state.

His messages to Antony fell on deaf ears. The man refused to listen to him.

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General Tut began moving his tanks into position. Their troops had been unloaded onto the beaches north of Caesaria. He was supposed to be fighting in San Francisco now, but was diverted last week. Now those men fighting the Americans were having a tough time. Every acre gained one day was lost the next. Tut had to get this battle over quickly. Once Caesaria fell, the rest of the Northern Province would fall in a matter of days. The infrastructure here was good, thanks to Antony. His tanks could move fast through the mountains to take the other cities on the land mass.

His objective was to take the Caesaria and build a harbor as quickly as possible. Engineers had been brought along in case the Romans pillaged the roads near the city. Once the Northern Province was secure he was to leave a security detail, then head to America to fight.

This would be the battle where Tut's name would be made. Egyptian generals were not thought of in the same breath as Geronimo, or Patton, Lafayette, or even Antony. Now he would add his name to that list.

Rameses entered the tent of Tut. "General, I have some interesting news."

Tut didn't much care for General Rameses. Luckily, the man was a subordinate, so he could be dismissed easily enough. Rameses had seemed a capable general early on, and Tut enjoyed having him in his ranks. Now, though, the younger general second guessed his every move.

"What is it, Rameses?" Tut said impatiently.

"The Roman fleet has arrived to the south. Our invasion fleet is unable to get out."

Tut was not suprised by this. He expected the Romans to send a fleet up here. "Are there any transports?"

"No, General. Just warships."

That was good, Tut thought. They had caught the Romans completely off guard. It was now just a matter of fighting them.

"Very well," he said.

"Does this news not alarm you?" asked Rameses.

Tut wished he would just shut up. "Not in the least. We expected this to happen."

"That is not my point, sir," said Rameses. "Why would the Romans send up warships without troopships to beef up their defenses here?"

"This land is lost to them, Rameses," answered Tut. "The Romans must send something up here, but they do not stand a chance of keeping this land, so why waste the troops fighting a lost cause?"

Rameses looked suprised. "So they will just sit there and let us take their lands? I don't see the Romans as capable of doing that."

"No," said Tut. "Their reaction will be to counter-attack the Egyptian homeland. That is Octavian's way. When Hiawatha struck him in Zululand, he struck the Iroquois in Iroquoisland. Octavian tends to go for the source of the problem, rather than to the symptoms."

"We have almost no protection in Egypt, General," said Rameses. "If the Romans strike there we will be done for."

"They will not strike there, if we do our jobs here."

Bombs began to fall outside without warning. Both generals went to the operations tent to see what was happening.

"What is going on?" asked Tut.

"I don't know, General," replied the radar operator. "There was nothing on radar. There's still nothing on Radar."

They couldn't see anything. Yet they could feel it. After each pass they could feel the ground shake, followed by a loud roar signifying that a jet had flown overhead.

"Get some fighters up there. Now!" shouted Tut to the air wing commander, sitting nearby.

"To do what? We can't even see them," answered Rameses.

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you should move this to Apolyton, the people there would love this i bet.
 
I just edited the post from last night. My apologies, but I forgot that Reno 911 (my new favorite show) was on and I had to cut it short.
 
They were watching the live feed from MSNBC. Once again, Peter Arnett was broadcasting from Caesaria. This time in a hotel as the bombs dropped.

"The bombs continue to fall here tonight, as the Egyptians have concentrated all of their firepower on this city. Shell after shell of artillery has fallen, some outside this very window.

"The Romans have pushed the Egyptians here from the North. They have noplace else to go. The fleet is bottled up in the harbor. What's worse, the tanks that the Romans are using are far superior to any other in the world. While the Egyptians are using tanks from the last war, the Romans have significantly upgraded theirs. The firepower is greater, as is the speed and the armor plating. Frankly, it is a slaughter.

"It is not all bad news for the Egyptians, though. This morning several bombers hit Caesaria and were able to do extensive damage to the Roman defenses. Now it is only a matter of time until the Egyptian flag flies over the palace here. How long it will fly is unknown, as the Romans will surely take the city back quickly."

Montezuma looked at the faces of the men in the room. Atahualpa was speachless. Hiawatha's face had turned red. Santa Anna looked as if he wanted a piece of someone.

"I think that this is one that we should stay out of," said Montezuma.

"Agreed, although Egypt will be ripe for the taking when the Romans and Americans are done with them," said Hiawatha.

"Either the Romans or Americans will take care of that. I firmly believe that to do anything would place us in over our heads. Remember what happened against the Carthaginians?" replied Montezuma, shooting a glance toward Atahualpa.

"I agree," said Santa Anna. "Our technology is nowhere near that of the Romans. It is time for our nation to admit that we cannot compete with the world powers. Egypt is finding that out now."

Montezuma did not like that last remark. Certainly his people could compete, if only given a chance. If they had not followed the warpath of the Iroquois so many years ago things may have been different. "We will not surrender," he said, "to these oppressive governments. The Romans goal in this war is to keep the Egyptians down. The Americans are angry that the Egyptians had stolen from them. Neither of these nations wants to see Egypt succeed. They already believe that they've defeated us, yet we still have spirit.

"However, now is not the time. We must reform our government in a manner that suits growth."

"I recommend, then, that you build a palace in the south. In Inca lands, so that corruption may be deterred," said Santa Anna.

This was not what Montezuma had in mind. Didn't these people understand their places? Their input was not desired here. This was not a republic. These were not senators. Montezuma's word was the law. "Excuse me, General. Do you presume to be the King of the Aztecs?"

There was a long pause as Montezuma's scalding remark sunk in. "No, your Highness. I am here only as an advisor."

"I do not ask for advisors, General. I ask only that you carry out my programs. We have come a long way due to my decisions, and I will not have them challenged now. Is that understood?"

"Understood," replied Santa Anna.

"Very well. Atahualpa, see to the building of Police Stations and Courthouses in all of the Inca cities. Any corruption in those cities will be dealt with swiftly. I will not allow those thieves to continue to steal the money that rightly should come to this palace."

"Shall we hold elections for the new positions at these police stations and courthouses?" asked Atahualpa.

Another insurgent, thougth Montezuma. "No, I will appoint government employees at those positions."

Throughout history, Montezuma had guided the Aztecs in the image of the Iroquois. This was to change, now. It was certain that only he could lead the Aztecs, yet he needed to get more out of his people. Currently, they worked only to survive. Now they would work for the government. A new age would begin shortly.
 
Santa Anna stopped Atahualpa in the hallway outside of Montezuma's office. He was not yet desperate, however the problems plaguing their leader would not be solved without new leadership. Only one man could give them that leadership. One man could bring the Aztecs and Incas together. Atahualpa held the key.

"Do you agree with Montezuma?" asked Santa Anna. He knew the answer already, but had to ask.

"I..I don't know. Developing a police state would seem to serve only him. Yes, we may be stronger, but at the cost of our people's freedoms. In the short term it might work."

"I'm not in this for the short term. I want to see a greater nation."

"Are you suggesting that you will challenge Montezuma?" asked Atahualpa.

Santa Anna pondered this questions. He had long ago dreamed of being the leader of the Aztec people. He led them into war against the Incas; making them stronger and putting down Inca revolts while he was at it. Times change, though. Wisdom comes with age, and wisdom told him now that the Incas would never follow him.

"No, Atahualpa. I have a desire to be the Aztec ruler, but not the means. I could never lead this nation. Still, after all of these years there are more Incas than Aztecs. Only an Inca could lead us from this oppression."

Santa Anna could see a rush of pride come to the face of Atahualpa. The former Inca ruler spoke. "My father inplanted the seeds of leadership into all of his children. It is in our blood. If possible, we can end Montezuma's rule and free the Inca people."

"I do not wish to "free" the Inca's," replied Santa Anna. "I wish Aztecs and Incas to live together freely under the leadership of one man. To split apart at this point would only server to weaken both of our nations further."

"I understand," said Atahualpa, beaming with pride. "You are right. An Inca as leader of both the Aztecs and Incas would serve us best. What do you propose?"

"We must cause a collapse of the government. We must give the people something to hope for."

"Yes, I should give a speach of some sort in the south offering myself to once again take the throne."

"Well, no. Not quite. You need to find Huascar. He is to be our new leader." Santa Anna could see the pride in Atahualpa's face drain withing moments. It was replaced by anger.

"Huascar. I have not seen him in years. Why would you bring him up?"

"Because only you know where he is now.

"He committed crimes against the Inca people. For that he has been punished."

"Atahualpa, his only crime was that he did not back you as supreme ruler. We all need him now. You cannot take Montezuma's place. You failed the Inca's years ago by surrendering to the Aztecs. You failed the Aztecs this year by promoting the was against Carthage."

Santa Anna looked at the face of Atahualpa. Most assuredly, he was not used to being spoken to so directly.

"One more thing," said Santa Anna. "I have a security detail that is loyal to me, and only to me. If word of our conversation should get out I will not be afraid to use them.

"Find your brother, Atahualpa. Or it will be your head."
 
Zeeter, i can't find the words to describe your story...
Marvelous!!!
(i even named a GL after you in one of my games!!!) :)

On the other hand, i managed to compile all your story so far into one big word file. I will only attach it on a post if you allow me to do so (128 pages, on a 10 size Times New roman font)

Keep it up!!!

PS: Do you by any chance remember how your map looked like, just roughly, so that we get an idea of the initial stages of your story? ;)

Edit: i'll print it later in the day, in order to read it all over again and check that i did not miss any part ;)
For info: Size of the word file is 484 kb (unzipped of course)
 
Originally posted by zeeter

"Aye aye, sir." The BMOW

Soon the Pharsalas had come alongside the Bren. They could hear the Caspias a few hundred yards to the rear. Trajan located the captain of the Bren.


Zeeter
As i was reading again the story, in page 1 of this thread, the sentence seemed cut. I wonder whether you had a paragraph there erased by mistake ;)
Still, it doesn't change anything of the wonderful story ;)
 
Globetrotter - I emailed you.

Outside of that, the map was Huge with large islands. The Romans were in the middle of the map and slightly to the south. Within Galley distance was the Iroquois to the east. The "Unfinished Isle" was found to my south at about the same time by the Iroquois, Aztecs (to my south west), and Romans (me). While this Isle was within galley distance from the Iroquois and Aztecs, it was not directly within galley range of me. Therefore I had to either try to go through Iroquois waters (which they tend to get uptight about) or I had to risk a two turn galley ride.
Anyway, the Americans were far off and northeast of the Iroquois. The French were eliminated early by the Americans before anyone else had made contact. The Northern Province was found late in the game and was unsettled. This was odd in that it was within galley distance of the Americans.
The Zulus were to the east of the Iroquois and were pretty much non-factors in the game.
I played the game up until, I think, the second war against the Aztecs and Iroquois. At that point my old computer couldn't take the Huge map with the amount of civs so everything after that was just made up.
Also, the Egyptians were not really in the game, nor were the Carthaginians (since this was before PTW). In this story, the Egyptians are southeast of the Iroquois, and West of the Aztecs.
I hope this gives a better description of the landscape for the game.
 
Originally posted by Globetrotter


Zeeter
As i was reading again the story, in page 1 of this thread, the sentence seemed cut. I wonder whether you had a paragraph there erased by mistake ;)
Still, it doesn't change anything of the wonderful story ;)

I never noticed this. It probably should have been "...The BMOW said."
I type everything into Notepad before posting, so it doesnt' give me the grammar and spell checking that Word does. I like notepad for this because it is quick - if that makes any sense. I also got tired of all of the spelling errors that Word found with the different names in the story.
 
I am awestruck, and await the next segment.... Write On!!!
 
YES, WE MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!
 
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