Still, I will be able to get many hammers into Lyon fast. Perhaps it is better if worker 1 and worker 5 chops forests before improving deer?
Perhaps I should not let Paris grow since it will soon have extra pop from Hanging gardens.
The options for Lyons are:
whip for 3 pop with 9 or fewer hammers committed.
whip for 2 pop with 54 or fewer hammers committed.
I don't know where you pulled 37 from, but we should take full advantage of Org Rel. Revolting after whip overflow is not beneficial, because we have to invest more hammers into the aqueduct beforehand, negating any bonus to the overflow.
Yes, let Paris grow. We will have Hereditary Rule happiness soon. However, I think you should whip the market for 2 pop when you can, because the grassland and mine are not doing anything else.
Orleans:
There's got to be a faster way to produce three units.
Something like:
on the last turn of the worker, whip the worker, then switch to a swordsman and invest 2 hammers or fewer. Yes, that means switching all the citizens to flood plains.
Then whip the swordsman for 2 pop, and complete, on the next following three turns, swordsman2, worker, swordsman3.
edit: After trading, you should revolt to go to the civics menu and revolt to Hereditary Rule and Organised Religion.