Zkribbler
Deity
I have a more dastardly plan for them: matrimony. 

Meaning my main character should be overcoming inner demons6) Belly of the Whale
abyss – psychological trial (Trip to underworld?)
Face & overcome inner demons
Emerge as stronger & better person
Mental internal climax of story – rebirth
Fully committed to adventure
In Comes Erebus, Chapter 6 was going to take place in a underwater city and Chapter 8 was going to be in a floating city, but now those two sections will be combined. That's nice, because this is no longer going to be a novel, and so shorter is better.
Edit: I just super imposed a "Hero Journey" outline over my story. I should be at Step 6.
Meaning my main character should be overcoming inner demonsand fully committing to the adventure. He is not. He's just fleeing.
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but it's not overcoming inner demons.That is committing to the adventure.
What? Fleeing can be an adventure.
but it's not overcoming inner demons.![]()
You're in an argumentative mood, ain't ya?Depends on the demon!
I found these three useful sites which are helpful:
https://describingwords.io/
https://reversedictionary.org/
https://relatedwords.org/
The first one can also provide some laughssometimesall the times.
Official halfway party time!!!
My current writing streak is 71 days.
The good news is that I fixed the beginning.Last night, I tried to turn it into a dark fantasy so I could eventually sell it. It turned into a big ol' mess, like a dog chewing bubblegum.![]()