Sir Donald III said:
Ravensfire, are you refering to only Section E, or the whole proposal?
If you mean the Whole Proposal, then it takes away the ability for a citizen to ask for a redirect for "any" reason. Not necessarily a bad thing to drop, but still please consider that.
Another thing is that if another Nation completes the Wonder, then, assuming the Chat is stopped for the Veto Poll, what if the veto Poll fails? What do we do then?
And how do you "alleviate" another Nation building the Wonder faster than us? Divert the construction tho a Cruise Missile or a Tactical Nuke to strike the City?
Also, since this is a Code, and not an Article, I think that it is required to define the format of the Veto Poll. That way, the issue of "interpretation" is taken off the table.
Yup - the entire proposal.
To address your concerns:
1. Yeah - I did remove the ability for a citizen to ask for a redirect. We don't need continual polls/discussions on these matters. Discretion is given to the Minister of Culture to determine if an emergency exists. I deliberately left the description of emergency missing - it's their job to prove/demonstrate that there is a bonafide reason to change a wonder build. Citizens can request of the MoC to declare an emergency, but it's at the MoC's discretion.
2. If another Civ actually COMPLETES the wonder - There is no veto poll - it's vetoed! Common sense needs to apply to something like that. There is no veto poll - other options are considered, discussed and implemented as directed.
3. Alleviating another Civ building the wonder faster - If we discover that scenario, that's pretty clearly an emergency. The options at that point are many, and should not, and must not, be part of our ruleset. Let the people, and the leaders, determine the best approach. Improve our city, damage theirs, move builds around, change to something else, even a building or a unit - all of these will alleviate the situation. There is no requirement that the alleviation means we do, in fact, get the wonder. Sometimes we won't, but we still alleviate the problem of producing a wonder we won't get by building an improvment, or a unit for defense/offense. Likewise, shifting another cities production to a tac missile is a means of alleviating the problem. The proposal doesn't limit what we do, and doesn't care. It gives flexibility to the leaders, and the people, to find and present the best solution, whatever that might be, to the people.
There are some things that we need to be specific on - elections primarily come to mind - because they have such a dramatic impact on the DG process. This isn't an area where we need to be so specific. The proposal come, in part, from a desire to limit how often we can change wonder builds, moving them from city to city at the latest whim that strikes. Both proposals do that, I feel that a simpler, clearer approach is better.
I guess the difference is trust. I trust that the leaders, and the people, will act in a manner respectful of the WotP, in an open discussion, and come to a viable decision, without restrictions on how or what they can discuss. The only thing leaders cannot do is cancel/change a Wonder build without a poll. The other proposal does limit the leaders, and directs explicitly a great deal of their behavior.
-- Ravensfire