legalizefreedom
Inefficiency Expert
The BE teasers are written in immense detail and depth. And yet, they fall flat compared to AC's economy of characterization and world-building. Take Lena Ebner's teaser for instance. It does introduce cool ideas like how a game of the future would be Canonical/Non-Canonical in response to Elodie's obsessions. But so much of it is just empty buzzwords and meaningless jargon, signifying nothing. INTEGR accuses the Franco-Iberians of representing the “Ancien Regime of Western rationalistic technocracy” - but aren't they themselves for technocratic rule, just green-oriented? And what does her faction- uh sponsor- stand for? "Effective and transparent governance, political activism on behalf of the disenfranchised, and environmental resilience." Wow, riveting. Not to mention, completely inoffensive. So why would anyone not be in favor of them? (How would a proponent of such a boringly sensible platform be considered a "trivial clown"?) Where are the tradeoffs of AC, of prioritizing the planet over survivalist defense? Or wealth over democracy? And finally, this is classic telling and not showing. The AC faction profiles depicted men and women who were active in the dying days of Earth, doing Big and Important things or at least personality-revealing things to show their importance and larger than life characterizations amidst a doomed world that needed to be escaped. The BE teasers sound like biographies of corporate board members and career politicians of a planet that's oddly functioning well despite the Great Mistake.
I really do need to give credit to the modern Firaxis team for trying with BE's writing. And putting in a lot of effort. But it really feels like they're trying and failing. And worse, it's almost as if they're trying to bottle the lightning that was AC's writing, by almost imitating some of the stye. Listing the leaders' educational pedigrees, their government/NGO/corporate careers prior to going to space, dropping in futuristic names like the Malala Merit Award aplenty. But it just feels hollow, not least of all because everyone is so damn agreeable, none of them has any blood or fire or shred of villainy or even aloofness to them. And I would argue that the extra content they wrote into it just piles on the additional blandness.
I think most everyone would agree that the writing could have been better, but I don't think it is as bad as all that. I get where you are coming from though, with the lack of hell bent personalities. Thing is, if they make all the leaders rigid in one belief system... number one people would criticize it for being too rigid

I know it is a natural thing to compare BERT to SMAC, but they have somewhat different focuses and different mechanics. It's not an all together fair comparison. Maybe the best written game of all time versus a game that didn't even have enough (fan and/or corporate) support to be finished.
I have to laugh at: "And what does her faction- uh sponsor- stand for? "Effective and transparent governance, political activism on behalf of the disenfranchised, and environmental resilience." Wow, riveting. Not to mention, completely inoffensive. So why would anyone not be in favor of them? (How would a proponent of such a boringly sensible platform be considered a "trivial clown"?)"
Unfortunately, we currently live in a world where probably more than 1/4 of the people on the planet are firmly against boringly sensible. Boringly sensible as a platform isn't in a good place and we live long before the events of BERT.