The Malakim just got eliminated by the Khazad in my game too, heh. The Khazad had 3 cities for most of the game and now they declared war on like 3 civs and started taking over everything. It is really quite impressive.
I just destroyed the Hippus (though they have one small city left). The ljosfalar are in first - no surprize. I think they need to be nerfed more. Whoever told me to add more plains to their land just made them even more overpowered, heh.
Yea the khazad are evil little buggers, in every game yet even when they suck in start they begin to rise and kick varn gorsam right into his so loved sun. Nerf the poor elves ? doh, well i can give you two reasons for why they are always good but not great: 1. Their location is very protective, ocean to the east, small coverable iceshield to the north, water to the west, just a small southern and southeastern border. 2. Their ability to upgrade forests with followers of the leaves + building stuff enables them to settle almost anywhere and grow a size 20 city, especially when you transfer the land just a little. You could increase the size of the iceshield in the north, it would mean more barbarians and probably slow their expansion, which is already slow btw. I checked your savegame and i think they are not overall reasonable, their offensive abilitys are just poor, i always struggle in taking citys, i bet the ai will do even worse. In mid and late game they have at least 6 20+ citys of course, so no ai can keep up with their population.
In your game the lanun are a joke, 3 citys !? they didnt even leave their homeisle but guybrush is sitting on a hill

Yet they have 1300 points, and are not far behind from you. Strange huh ? Its because of their techrating, silly ai build only cottages but that fool cant build a thing in his citys. Anyways they need more hammers, and probably less of the pearls and more crabs/fish. The isles to the far south could use a little beef up, the one with the black powder, if the fish would just be in reach of the coast

The isle to the east of the ljosfalar coast definetly needs a workover. Also it seems the hyborem like the isle west of the khazad ? Probably you could increase the size to the northwest and give him more room. Oh and help the poor malakim! Move the startloc 1 square to the left, so they reack the marble and 1 more hill ? The problem is imo they are wasting too much space and so run out of it after placing 4 citys, while lots of room between them is unused.