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Pax Romana

I was never good at Latin translation. Is that: I came, I came, For Grace. Not my dying face?

And if so, what does that mean? I'm sure I bungled the translation somehow and on line dictionaries aren't much help.

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EDIT: Cross post with Arameal. Thanks!! Carmina Burana. Reminds me of my youth going to the Limelight and the Bank, sweating and dancing to what I still refer to as Technogoth. Wonderful trip down memory lane. Glad you're still reading and enjoying.
 
Marakuru looked over the city with a satisfied smile. Isandahlwana. It had once been often referred to as the sweetest place on earth. The plains north were home to great fields of wildly growing sugar cane. Every year during the hot summer months, great stalks of the bamboo like plant would be cut down for the Syrup Festival; a time every youth throughout the kingdom would look forward to with anticipation.

After control of the city had been lost to the Arabican people, the Syrup Festival had gone out of practice; no Zulu could grow merry enough to celebrate such frivolity while the birth place of the Festival and their brothers and sisters were under the heel of foreign powers. But now, after many generations of bitterness and despair, Isandhlwana was free.

True, the flag that flew over the marble columned capitol house was the red and black banner of Rome, but everywhere else the city was undoubtedly Zulu in appearance. From the roads to the buildings to the smiling populous, the hand and influence of hundreds of years of Zulu culture shone brightly.

“Count Marakuru.”

The one time War Chief was still unused to that honorific, but was growing accustomed to it as the days dragged on. Turning he answered the page’s call. “Yes?”

Standing there were a pair of filthy, travel-stained out runners; their dark skin weather-beaten, their hair unruly. Out runners had always been as aspect of Zulu life; warriors fleet of feet who rejected the ways of city life, taking up the self-imposed mantel of royal scout. They would many times run the perimeter of the nation’s borders, seeking trails and pathways; shadowing any who ventured too close to Zulu land. Many times they were the first warning of any incursion of a foreign power; often times they were the last possibility of freedom for the captured.

Inclining his head in respect, he said, “Out runners. Welcome.” They said noting, replying with only a blink and a stare. Nonplussed, he continued, “You have news?”

The rightmost one slid a bag off his back. Untying the frayed strands, he withdrew a squat blade, tossing it to Marakuru. The Roman Count caught it deftly, spinning it to better see the design etched into the blade. “Incan,” he said.

The out runner withdrew a handful of small, irregular coins, handing them abruptly to the Count. They too bore the stylized symbol of the Incan empire. “Hmm.” The Incans were very far from here, far beyond the Arabican kingdoms, weeks by boat, months by land. Their belongings on one time Zulu, Roman soil did not bode well. The ambassador from the Cuzco hadn’t returned to Rome in many years, so the state of aggression between the two countries was still unresolved. “These items,” he asked, shaking the silver coins loudly, “were there more?”

Both out runners nodded. The sack was reached into a final time, and the severed head and hands of a surprised looking Incan were placed on the table. In a croaking voice, one of the dirty Zulu spoke, “Five days run from here. Four hundred of hands walking. Slow. No runners, no riders. Iron shirts, weak swords. Half of half again with carts and bundles. Long dust cloud, tired yet angry. This one peeing. We took. Came here. Marakuru chief, no matter Zulu or Roman. Marakuru warned.”

The Count was surprised; most of the time out runners didn’t talk at all, to be spoken to at length was a sign of esteem. From the litany he just received, he found himself to be overwhelmed and honored by the respect these truest of Zulu warriors had paid him. He bowed his head again, this time deeper in thanks. “Zulu/Rome thanks you for your warning.” He held out his hands, palms up. “Women, wear, or weapons?” he asked, the traditional rewards offered to out runners for the service they performed.

“Women.” “Wear.” Both men answered, each choosing differently.

Marakuru clapped his hands once. “Page. Bring him to the brothel. Pay for his attendance there for 48 hours. Whatever manner of drink and debauchery he wants, reward him.” Pointing to the other out runner, “Take him to the tailor. Have him bathed, cleaned, groomed and outfitted in whatever manner of clothing, boot, and raiments he wishes.”

The page nodded, escorting both visitors from the chamber. “Inca, eh?” he thought, striding back to the window. He looked southwest towards the newly constructed barracks the Romans had built right after the Arabican governors were deposed. He could see the milling knight companies and musketeers going through their training exercises. From their disinterested motions and sloppy formations, he knew that they were disheartened at being left behind as their brothers in arms had run north to assault the Egyptian forces. No soldier liked the thought of missing out on battle. It was no surprise that the Romans’ war god, Mars, was also called the Red God.

And the Red Spirit, whatever guise he cloaked himself in, protected his own and filled their hearts with battle; regardless if they were dark skinned Zulu or light haired Romans

He left the chamber, his stride still strong and wide even with his middle years approaching. He grinned as he made his way towards the barracks and what his news would do for their flagging spirits.

I imagine the word of approaching hostilities will rekindle the fire in their hearts. The Incans have made a mistake in coming here bearing anything other than sorrow and on anything other than their knees.
 
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MSTK said:
It's from the infamous "One-Winged Angel" from Final Fantasy VII, which is a game commonly refered to as the "best ever" (though I disagree, completely).

Of course... the FF6 boss theme: "The Decisive Battle" is waaaay better... by a long shot (what was Umatsu Smokin' when he wrote that?)

It's good to see Makakuru survived his wounds and is fitting in quite nicely
 
Thanks for clearing up the Incans V.

No, wait... That didn't quite clear it up, that just created more suspense. Now I have to know what those Incans are up to! ;)
 
V you're the only one that consistently uodates and I thank you for that.
 
Poor, poor chicken...

Anyway, very good. I love it when your Romans get into the field again. But do tell me - it IS Egypt that started the war, yes?

P.S. It's a man's life in Zulu out runners!
 
@ das - Egypt joined a Mil alliance with Arabia to destroy us. Stupid people. We declared on Arabs to snag 2 cities, Arab sucked Cleo in against us. And 'Zulu Out Runners - Where a man can be a man and sissies can stay home behind their momma's skirts!'. ;)

@ MSTK and Cataphrak - Love the FF music, wife has 7, 8, and 10 on CD and plays it often (I seriously enjoy the opening song and sequence to FF8, but that's just me.) Sephiroth at the end of 7 with his chimera form and wing and what not - that's just over and above the top..

@ Specialist - Incans - as requested. And I have no idea what they're doing. It's a LONG trek over land from hom to me, and the Arabs just let it happen. 3 Sword units and an MDI. There's more to their tale. It's coming.

@ Rbis + - Thanks! Like I said, if I wasn't going to finish the story I wouldn't have started it.

More later today (still have a job here so far, but am counting the days till I'm out!).

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The Caliph Ali Quidam tried to maintain a fierce expression but after a few moments realized the foolishness of his posturing. His shoulders sagged and his form deflated as he lowered himself tiredly onto the simple wooden bench. “Fine. Fine. You win.”

Caesar kept his face neutral; his eyes cold. “No, Caliph,” he said, voice pitched low with a threatening edge. “It’s not a question of winning. There is no ‘winner’ in war. There is no ‘winner’ in the rampant exchange of blood and bullets on the battlefield.”

“So say you,” the Caliph replied sulkily. The Roman throne room was brimming with dignitaries from both countries. Guards decked in freshly cleaned red and black doublets, gleaming muskets held at the ready over their right shoulders, lined the walls both as a show of strength and a deterrent for any Arabian hostilities the Caliph’s men might be entertaining. “But it is your people who have seen the victor’s spoils. It is you who has struck out with unrighteous indignation at our gentle people and wrongly taken from us what is and once was our lands.”

“Please, Caliph,” Caesar said, exasperation coloring his answer. “The lands in question were from the Empire of the Zulu Nation; lands that your people annexed under the force of arms and violence. And, it is from these same lands that your aggressive forces made many forays into Roman territories and performed acts of cruelty and destruction against my people.”

“Lies, Caesar. Always you’re words are dripping with lies; honey to the ears, poison to the soul.”

“Really? Was is my soldiers that burned Utica to the ground or yours?”

“It is my understanding that during the siege of that city that many fires broke out and raged out of control. It was an accidental tragedy that we, as a peaceful people, still feel saddened ever occurred.”

The room was filled with angry murmurs and heated looks. Caesar’s brows rose. “Accident? Tragedy?” He clenched his hands tight to stem his growing anger. “It was not the first and was most definitely the second. What is was, was a deliberate and cold strike against a peaceful town and the citizens that were trying to defend themselves.”

“We had made amends over this matter years ago, Lord Caesar. Is that what this most recent attack against my people was about? A horrible mistake that occurred long ago? Neither of us were kings then; suckling on our mother’s teats and wearing swaddling cloths. Are you and yours so filled with war mongering that it was with lying hearts when you accepted our peaceful terms at the end of the last conflict between us?”

“Now who is honeying his words? Do not seek to put a pretty face on something that was initiated by your soldiers callous regard for human life.” Caesar shook his head. “You are right, though. This recent war between us was for the single purpose of freeing our friends and long term allies from the harsh yoke and whip of your government’s control and lordship. We have brought freedom to the Zulus the only way we could that you would understand: at the tip of the sword.”

The Caliph frowned. “Again with the war, the violence. Allah will judge you harshly in the next life, war-king. Judge you for your great evil and your tainted blood. Jihad will come to you and yours, make no mistake.”

Caesar leaning in, brows lowered. “It was you who came to me for peace, Ali.” Steel tinged his words. “I’ll gladly send you from my borders, spears at your back, and then finish off your country one building at a time. Just say the words and we’ll continue this for a dozen years if we have to.”

The Saracen said nothing, body tensed to rise. He glanced around the chamber once, his gaze piercing everyone with hatred. Finally, his eyes settled back on Caesar and through clenched teeth uttered, “No. We seek peace.”

“Fine.” Caesar sat back, muscles relaxing. “Then lets get on with it.” The palpable tension eased from the room; hands released pommels, muskets were once more rested against shoulders. “I’ve read your treaty and am willing to sign it except for one concession.”

“What?” he growled.

“You’ve gathered a great deal of knowledge from the Egyptians recently in regards to their elections and new governing agencies.”

Guardedly, the Caliph replied, “Yes?”

“I want a complete copy of your notes and papers regarding this ‘rule by the people’. I want every stick, every scrap, every illegible scrawl Nephtys sent and released to you given to me.”

“What?!”

“Oh yeah,” Caesar snapped his fingers, smiling broadly. “You will pay me war reparations equal to…the entirety of your treasury. The money will go a long way towards rebuilding the homes, temples, and businesses of the recently freed Zulu provinces that we liberated.”

The Saracen’s right eye ticked as he struggled to find the words.

“Failure to do this, my dear Caliph,” threatened Caesar, “will result in an immediate end to these proceedings. Understood?”

Time passed. The Caliph had turned red with rage, his shoulders uncontrollably hunching up and down as he sat there boiling with anger. The room had grown silent. Only the low grunts and inexplicable noises the Arabian ruler was making could be heard.

After almost three-dozen rapid heartbeats, he answered with an explosive, “FINE! FINE! Take what you want! Take everything you blood sucking parasite! You want my teeth?! Take them too! I want this over. I want to remove myself from even looking at you! May your children be stillborn! May your blood turn to ash! May the fleas of a thousand camels infest your night chambers! Just take it! Take it and leave yourself from dealings with me and my people from now until forever!!!”

With a jerking start, he launched to his feet and stormed from the chamber, his retinue following in his furious wake as he continued his harangue. “May Allah repay you in kind! May your balls shrivel and fall off! May the sun burn out your eyes! May the seas swallow your people! You and yours are but ghosts and spirits to us! Seek us out at your own peril! Stay away from me and mine!”

Caesar watched them reach the door and prepare to leave when he called out, “Caliph!”

The Arabian whirled about, eyes seething. “WHAT?!”

Caesar made a deliberate show of writing a short line on the treaty and signing his name to the bottom. “Unless you sign this and sign it now, we have not accorded a cessation of hostilities.” He proffered the quill. “Sign it first. Then leave my lands.”

Ali Quidam fumed back, snatched the pen from the Roman’s hand, and scrawled his name in jagged scratches at the bottom of the page. Throwing the quill to the floor, he turned around, returned to his waiting people and marched out of Caesar’s chambers without another word.

A few moments after he had left the throne room, one of his advisors leaned in and whispered, “O great one, what of our alliance with the Egyptians?”

He ignored the question, the same way he ignored the rousing applause that the foul Romans were heard to be giving to their thieving king.
 
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There's nothing to replace fine Roman negotiating skills. ;)
 
I think The Arab got a nice deal. Had he refused he could be able to deal no more...

Besides, any deal with the romans you can walk away from (unassisted) is a good one! (wildly paraphrased without permission)
 
Marakuru stretched uncomfortably in the boiled leather armor. The restricting breastplate pulled tightly over the stab scars that crisscrossed the flesh under his shoulder blades, causing him an itchy discomfort that failed to improve as his muscular form began to sweat. “Is this really needed?” he asked, glancing down at the youthful page buckling the last of his guards into place.

“Yes, Count. What if the Incans were to come close enough to wound you?”

Marakuru grunted. “Slim chance of that.” He sighed as the page stood with a satisfied nod. “I guess it’s my own doing for demanding to be here.”

“Count is very brave to risk coming here.”

“Maybe.” He swung his leg over the horses’ back and settled himself into the saddle. Glancing down he added, “But being brave is not the same as being foolish. I am wearing the armor. Remember that lesson boy.” He tossed a slim copper coin, smiling as it was snatched by his helper’s quick hands.

“Yes, Count.”

Clucking his teeth, the Zulu goaded his horse into a cantor and then a gallop, guiding the animal to carry him to the impromptu battlefield that had been drawn up west of the city. On the arrival of the Roman knights and musketeers, the Incans had drawn themselves into a long formation, blocked on each end with over 800 chain mailed warriors. Earthworks were erected, tents pitched, and the distant copse of trees had been chopped and trimmed to build wagons, weapons, and towers.

The western people had made it obvious they intended to stay.

Attempts at parley had been met with cool rebuffs and threats of violence. Marakuru had specified that the Incans were to be contained but not harmed unless they began hostilities. Any attempts that were made to scout out the lowlands, the sugar canes, or the city proper were met with a line of hardened Roman and Zulu warriors gripping muskets aimed in their direction.

The Incans always retreated back to their encampment.

Until lately. Gunfire had filled the air on this last week as the mass of fighters were growing either bold or restless. Small melees and exchanges were growing into larger ones. The Count had decided that this would be enough. Either the Incans turned away and went home or they would be left to feed the soil where they fell.

The knights had been drawn into three massive waves of almost a thousand men each. Even though it was becoming apparent that the era of plate and shield was coming to an end under the increasing power and accuracy of the deadly musket, this was not an issue with the Incans. Marakuru wanted to be here, to see this first hand.

He arrived just after the call to attack had rung out. Positioning himself on a knoll, he watched with rising admiration the pure majesty and power evoked in the charge of the Roman knighthood. The flowering of man, the allure of chivalry, the clank of chain and stirrup; it didn’t fail to bring a tear to his eye as he was able to behold this most valorous of sights.

For their own part, the Incans remained firm; resolute and unyielding in their formation of iron and shield. Watching the thundering hooves and dipping lances work their way across the plains unerringly towards them. Even at almost a thousand meters away, the sound of puffing horses and the rumble of their galloping was still easily heard as well as felt through the earth beneath him.

The western warriors closed the gap on their own, elite fighters with flail, mace and axe leading the charge. Their standards held high, drums and trumpets blaring, the Incans launched themselves at the charging Romans.

Impact.

The clouds of dust and debris kicked up by both armies collided half an instant after the lines had, rolling into each other to obscure the details of the battle. Through the breaks and holes, Marakuru could spot brief glimpses of the furious combat: the heads of lances broken and left in bodies and shields, riderless horses frothing as they pawed the air, helms and shields being torn aside by sword and spear.

After the fog of dust had settled, it was apparent that the Romans had the upper hand of the battle. The formations had not held under the relentless force of the mounted knights. The Incans had to learn that battle tactics and weaponry from a bygone age could not repel the, until recent days, unstoppable combination of advanced armor, keen training, muscled stallions, and the best and brightest the families of Rome had to offer. They had been outmatched the day the left their homelands to travel on a fools errand.

Even now, after their numbers had been carved and whittled, their remaining fighters staggering around bereft and stunned at the carnage about them, Marakuru could see they were ill prepared to face the reforming lines of the Roman elite. With flag, pennant, and trumpet, the knights once more coordinated themselves into a solid front of lance and steed; their face presented to the fragmented Incans. Without pause the cry to charge was shouted again, spurring the valiant riders back into the fray.

The Incans turned to run; weapons, shields and helms cast aside in an effort to lighten their load and aid their escape. The true measure of Rome’s chivalry came to light as the blows struck were done courteous; softened impacts with flat of blade and the broad edge of spear. Marakuru smiled. Many a warrior, Zulu or not, would have just run the fleeing men down and been done with it. But not these men. Honor and honorable to a fault. He was saddened to learn their twilight was upon them but hoped the newer cavalry corps and horse borne musketeers would still remember the noble men who paved the way before them.

He nudged his mount, coaxing her to ride down the hill and towards the now finished battle. He would see to the slaves and learn of their trip to Rome and what they had expected to find. He would see them branded and enslaved, the taciturn ones nailed to a cross for the crows to feast upon.

But as he rode, he didn’t think on the Incans and their plight; he thought of the knights and their glory and how much he was looking forward to speaking with them. He chuckled to himself. Excited to meet one, aren’t you? Just as exciting as meeting the hunters after a successful trip. Just as exciting as watching the Impi run to battle. Just as excited as having Prospero train you. Still a boy at heart. He shook his head, smiling fondly of his long ago youth and the quadruple handful of summer seasons that had passed since those cloudy days.

Watching the knights in action one last time, reminded the aging warrior and Count of lost years and glories. He was surprised to find his cheek wet from a rolling tear that escaped his eye. Wiping it away with an idle finger, he laughed to himself once more. By the Red Spirit, I’m getting old.

Flicking the reins he goaded his mare into a trot and rode up to meet the assembled horsemen and their newly captured charges.
 
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You must have kicked the incans something big, uknow killed a SOD or something
 
“Ramses, I simply don’t have the time for your foolishness. If you have nothing useful to add, then I suggest you leave my office now.”

Nephtys, President of the United Provinces of Egypt maintained her dour expression as she watched her younger brother and the Secretary of Defense refuse to leave her chamber. “Sorry, Madame President,” he drawled slowly and condescendingly, “But I’m afraid that’s not going to do.”

She lowered her quill, brows arched as the hallway behind Ramses filled with musket and spear wielding men. Her Madjai immediately took up positions on either side of the President, their own ivory handled firearms sliding into ready grips. She held her hand up, signaling them to stand down. “What, in the name of Ra, do you think you are doing?”

Ramses thrust his chest out, defiance etching his stance. “I’m doing what needs to be done, Madame President; removing an inept ruler from office.”

“Inept!” Her cheeks colored, forcing her to grip her desk tightly in an effort to relax. After taking a steadying breath, she continued. “A matter of opinion; one that the populace doesn’t agree with you on. As much as you and your entourage might have hoped otherwise…I won the latest election. That makes me President once again. The people have spoken.”

“Hmmph. The choices given to the average fool on the street is you, one time divine daughter of Osiris, direct descendant from the first Pharaoh, or someone else. For the common folk, there is no other choice.”

“Whatever Ramses. Enough of your posturing. Leave.”

“I stand by my charge of inept. Our lack of successes at Byblos against the Romans, as well as their continued encroachment onto our sovereign soil, proves that you have ham handedly handled the campaign. Plus, your inability to maintain good relations with the Arabian League and the subsequent loss of the Caliph’s army in the field to bolster our own forces leaves us in an unenviable position of running a prolonged military campaign against a foe who has proven himself to be better than adept at war.”

“First, you are the Secretary of Defense. We followed your plan on attack and conquest. Failure resides with you.”

“You’re the commander in chief, don’t shift the blame to me.”

“You were handling the invasion, Ramses.”

“More proof of your ineptness,” scorn dripped from his lips. “If it was failing, then you should have taken over. YOU’RE the commander, remember?”

“You underhanded bastard!” she screeched, voice cracking. “You’re twisting the facts. You’re doing it now. You did it during the election. You’re always playing games, warping truths. Just like you’ve done since we’ve been kids.”

Ramses grit his teeth, jaw clenching. He stabbed his finger out accusingly at Nephtys. “The people of Egypt cannot in good faith and conscience have you remain in power.” The tension in the room rose as he faced off opposite his sister and the Egyptian leader. “By their will and demands, I hereby strip you of the title of President and place you under arrest for crimes against the populace and nation of Egypt.”

Before he or his insurgents could make a move, two of the Madjai raised their firearms and fired right in Ramses face. The flash of fire and stench of cordite filled the chamber at the same time the rebel leader’s face burst in a red spray, his head snapping back as he crumbled to the floor. Nephtys was knocked backwards as her own guards kicked her feet out from under her, catching the President under the arms before she hit the floor and ran, dragging her stunned form through the back door and out of her office.

The crack of musket fire sounded as both sides volleyed lead balls into each other. The opposing cries of “Save the President” and “Down with Nephtys” echoed throughout the capital building. Running guards tackled invading rebels, dropping the militants with knife and fists. The chaos spread, spilling into the senate house as both camps of supporters of the President and those not were taken to conflict; words leading to screams, leading to accusations, blows, and more death.

The cry to throw down Nephtys reverberated across the city, racing from quarter to quarter. It flowed up highways and thoroughfares, infecting city after city until every aspect of civil life was affected and basic lawlessness broke down.

The Romans watched fires spring up along the courthouses and senate buildings in Giza and Thebes, unsure of what it was they were watching. All they knew was that the normally cohesive Egyptian nation was in some state of civil upheaval.

When word reached General Gaius of the state of affairs and rampant anarchy consuming the northern nation, he wasted no time in capitalizing on it. By the next day, every commander, unit, and regiment that had been waiting patiently for the right moment, received orders by riders and aviary with a simple message inscribed:

Commence assault on Egyptian cities.
 
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Sorry about this, I was accidentally banned today by TF. Someone had a similar IP address as me and I was "shut out" by proxy. Scary. :crazyeye: Thought I was pissing someone off by my huge thread of doom or using too much bandwith or something.

Story'll resume tomorrow.

Preemptive answer to Cataphrak below question: Gaius was 17 when he was knighted in the Rome 1st Knights. Then, Trajan had created the 1st Knight Army. Trajan was removed from power after the 1st Giza conquest and Debacle by Marcus Aurelius Caesar. Gaius got promoted to General of the Knight Army. Lots of time passes. Gaius is in his 50's or so (older than his father was for most of the story) and is still in charge of the Knight Army. However, I have Generals run not only the Army, but also the entirety of the units that are in he advances or SOD's, hench - he also controls the lovely musketmen, Treb's, MDI's, and Cavalry (thank god, riding up as we speak).

Remember the 1st Giza wars? Iuldias and Trajan were both Generals (Legion army and Knight army), and they both called the shots on the war. Due to the antuquity of the Legionnaires at this point, I have downgraded the controlling officers in rank from General to Major (Major Cicero). Hope that answers your questions (below) and some of my rationale on this story.

Preemptive answer to Metarthio question below - Still in Middle Ages, no commie yet. Even for her. She's studying Physics, along with me at this point. Knowing her though, she'll get a slingshot bonus on a mutual trade swap with the Arabs, she'd been doing it all game.

V
 
what I don't get is how this Gaius guy went from commanding the first Knights to an army of soon-to-be obsolete (I'm thinking that your getting clost to industrial age) musketmen, This reminds me of Eric Flint's book The Tyrant
 
I guess Democracy didn't really work for Egypt. Let's hope she's not changing into Communism (which, given her tech lead, she might be).
 
Finally! I made it to the last post in the story! Do you know how long it has taken me to get this far? Vanadorn, this has been an awesome read so far, keep it up!

What will I do now that I cannot read as much as I want, when I want? :eek:


Jonathan
 
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