First of all - this is the best Great War scenario I could have hoped for first off. Trip, your realisation of the frontiers and the positioning of cities, etc. is absolutely brilliant, as is the use of the flags instead of leader heads that might look wierd (as in the WWII scenario way back in Civ2). It is also really fun to play (I've so far tried Germany and Britain).
Fantastic stuff, but I do have one or two nit-picking little problems that have been bugging me, as well as a few suggestions, if you'll indulge me.
Firstly, there shouldn't be any French Dreadnoughts (spelling needs to have an 'o' rather than an 'a' to be accurate) in the English channel or North Sea - Anglo-French naval talks in 1912 concluded with Britain assuming responsibility for the defence of northern waters, with France holding the Mediterranean and Bay of Biscay (except for some British battlecruisers at Malta). Also, perhaps there should be a German dreadnought in the Mediterranean to represent the Goeben, which was 'gifted' (in Civ terms) to Turkey at the end of 1914? I also think that October 1914 is way too early to be letting 'barbarian' strikers appear in Germany - unrest on this kind of scale (of a size to seriously trouble German military units) did not occur until the wave of insurrections that led to the fall of the Kaiser and the proclamation of the republic in November 1918.
Also 'King Wilhelm' of the Netherlands should be 'Queen Wilhelmina' (she assumed the throne in 1890), and is Sweden ruling Norway for any reason other than a need to cut down on AI civs (Norway was independent from 1905)? I'd also be in favour of renaming the Italian leader King Victor Emmanuel III (Orlando did not become premier until 1917), and the Bulgarian Tsar (yes, he was that arrogant!) Ferdinand I.
Apart from this, my only other problems are historiographical - it's wrong to say in the intro that Britain had an 'alliance' with Belgium (there was an agreement to uphold Belgian sovereignty, which Germany broke, giving the British an excuse to get involved); the Austrian archduke's name was 'Franz Ferdinand' (like the awesome Aussie band!).
Please feel free to disregard this stuff, but I just thought it should be pointed out for when you do World War I.2.
Awesome scenarios like this are what makes the CIV series the greatest!!!