Unit Preveiw: Gungan Rider

[Dragon Warrior]

This is my first unit, it still needs a lot of work and is going to take me awhile i have attack for 1 direction...

 

[Ed O'War]

The head of the animal he's riding looks too much like a horse...I presume you based it off of the rider or another mounted unit? Otherwise, looks good.

 

[akinkhoo]

the gungan animal is like an amphibious 2 legged lizard.

here are some suggestion :
the head should look front, (to counter balance itself)
the head should be more streamline (amphibious looking)
the tail should be longer (it should look a bit more curved)
the leg should be more bend (this allows it to move quickly)

 

[Dragon Warrior]

Originally posted by akinkhoo
the gungan animal is like an amphibious 2 legged lizard.

here are some suggestion :
the head should look front, (to counter balance itself)
the head should be more streamline (amphibious looking)
the tail should be longer (it should look a bit more curved)
the leg should be more bend (this allows it to move quickly)

I agree with all that except for the tail. I thought that too at first but i found some pics on the net and actually the tail is supposed to be pretty short

 

[Dragon Warrior]

Heres the "streamlined version" (havent done anything about the legs)

 

[Dragon Warrior]

Heres the default:

 

[Dragon Warrior]

Whoops...

 

[Jagdpanther]

Jesus Christ! to bloody hell with jar jar already! genocide against the gungans...

 

[Blasphemous]

Nice
Just a few problems: The riding beast is supposed to be of only one color, which is rather greenish-gray then brown; The beast's head is not so "horse-ish", its more squashed towards the lips; The animal isn't moving at all. It need to at least waver; Legs need to be bent and recoulored; The tail doesn't look right, why is it plit like that?; The rider isn't very clear, and he seems a tad too bright....
Sorry, I know this is just a preview, but these things really bother me...