A plot about the crisis

Kyriakos

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I was pondering writing a (second; but the first did not turn out to be that decent) short story which is linked to the current crisis of the country (and to a lesser extent the rest of the EU and the west).
In it two little girls decide to play a game so that the loser will commit suicide so as to alleviate some of the economic burden off the shoulders of their parents. Naturally they say nothing about it to the parents. They are happy that they found a way to contribute in this crisis, which they barely understand, but realize it as a major problem in their household.
The plot in a way is similar to an ancient greek tale, about two young sons who carried their mother around the city, on a cart in which they commited themselves as if they were oxen. The story ended with their death due to exhaustion, but it was argued that they died in their finest hour, people praised them for their action and they were loved and eternally remembered through the ages for it.

I do not really mean to make the story more gloomy than it should be. The idea itself is already melangholic, or perhaps even darker than even that.

I wanted to ask you what you think of the idea, and also if you are of the view that such works, playing upon a current issue, serve a purpose in literature. Personally i think that if a story becomes important for the reader then it has a reason for existing, and after all through pain comes the cathartic moment.
 
Why not go for a Greek drama instead of a short story?
And follow the Greek drama structure...

Let me try:

Persons:
Giorgos, mayor of Athens
Kostantinos, his sophist (advicer)
Christos, general of Athens
Eleni, christos wife

Vasilis, weapondealer from Thessaloniki

Part 1 (morning):
Giorgos a mayor in Athens is in love with his general Christos wife Eleni.
In order to get her, he plots to get Christos and his men to travel war and fight Sparta.
Christos says they need new spears, before he is going to war.

Part 2 (midday):
Kostantinos, recieves a letter that confirms that Giorgos and Christos actually are brothers, but don't tell anyone of them about it.
Kostantinos knows that Athens don't have enough money to pay the spears, so he lies to Giorgos that they can pay them as he wants to.
Giorgos meets with Vasilis and gets the spears and agree to pay him at the evening.

Part 3 (afternoon):
Giorgos flirts with Eleni and she says that he is so much like Christos.

Part 4 (early evening):
Vasilis come to collect the debt, but the mayor cannot pay.
The weapondealer wants the spears back, but they mayor refuses and says that he needs more time to pay the loans.

Part 5 (late evening):
Vasilis go to collect the spears anyway, but the general refuses to give them up and they get into a fight. And the general gets killed, and the weapondealer captures his wife too.
The mayor sees it, but he cannot fight. He then gets a letter that says the general was his brother.


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The reference to the crisis is that Greece is the largest weapons importer in europa during all of the 00-decade and the politician did cheat with the balanssheet giving impression that they had more money than they really had.

You probably know alot more about the crisis than me Kyriakos, so you can modify it.
But I think a greek tradegy is a great formula for this.
 
BTW Kyriakos,

I saw a reportage in a Czech TV programme about the Czech Greeks - that is, the descendants of the refugees who came to Czechoslovakia during and after the Greek civil war. Very interesting. The second and third generation Greeks integrated fairly successfully into the Czech society (my classmate in high school was 1/4 Greek I think), but many left Czechoslovakia for Greece when it became democratic in the 1970s.

The irony is that many of these people are now leaving Greece and returning to the Czech republic - they know the language and they want to escape the economic turmoil in Greece. In the TV report there were several of these people. One of them said that even though he is ethnically Greek, he was never really accepted as such when he returned with his parents to Greece 40 years ago. They always called him "the Czech guy".

Perhaps this could be an interesting story to write, even though it's probably not your cup of tea.

(Oh, a fun fact - the oldest citizen of the Czech republic is a Greek woman who doesn't speak a word of Czech :lol: )
 
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