Catastrophe of Caesar; the story of a demo

Shardie

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This story is an ancient tale, of a DVD drive that would just not run a certain game, and the girl who, in desperation had to play over and over the demo to this certain game in order to get her fix. But one tiny thing bugged her, that this demo ended after 100 turns. But what would happen to the game world after those 100 turns ended? Well that is where imagination comes into being!

So, behold my story the Catastrophe of Caesar; a story by Shardie, based on the tutorial game which shipped with the Demo. Which I was only playing to releave myself of not having to play that same map over and over... our tale begins in the year 375 BC...

Part 1; Onimous signs

Caesar sat alone in the dusty throne room, reading from the Analects. He would often do this these days, in his years, he had found peace in reading. It was here that Julius, or just Caesar to his people had ruled his lands for the past 3625 years, since they founded the great city of Rome. Since this time, hardy Roman bands had explored to the far depths, finding a strange and foreign land known as India, Settlers had founded two new cities, Cumae and Antium, and religion flourished like never before.

In Cumae, many moons ago, the one simply known as Buddha taught the way to the innocent and heathen populous of the city. Soon, the entire city was under Buddha's sway, but before his teachings could be spread beyond the borders, he was struck down by a fatal illness, dieing on the road to Rome, by the Roma river. (some say the Emperor Caesar poisoned him as he was a charismatic figure, rivaling the population of Caesar himself) Even now, pilgrims and followers of the religion he founded, Buddhism pray by the river. Local religious leaders were saving up to construct a shrine there, however they were nowhere near completion.

Just recently, another holy man, known as K'ung-fu-tzu (he was a foreigner, you see, so the locals called him Confucius, which you MUST agree, is a lot easier on the tongue) arrived from an unknown place in the City of Antium. His followers stated he came from the fabled Mt Shangralah. His teaching promoted the following of Rites and Traditions, and that rulers lead by example rather than by bribery and coercion. His teachings so impressed Caesar, that he was summoned to Rome to enlighten the population. Caesar soon turned to the teachings of Confucius, and the reform of the government begin, the rites of Slavery were abolished, and a caste system was established, as per Confucius' will. It is a pity, then that the great sage recently died, at the grand age of 89. Caesar still morned his faithful Sages death, and funds were being gathered to construct a shrine where he first entered the city of Antium. Confucius was buried under the great monument to Caesar's power, Stonehenge. It was here the heroes of Rome were buried. It was also useful for calculating the dates.

Caesar put down his copy of the Analects as his servants brought in his daily meal, which was rice, with a side of steak. He said his prayer, and began to eat. Yet his meal was interrupted as a young scribe burst into the room, 'Lord Caesar, Lord Caesar, something Terrible has happened!'
'And what would it be, scribe, is it worth disturbing my meal?' Caesar replied, quite angry at the interruption
'I was studying the dates inscribed in Stonehenge... it predicted something terrible, that this world, OUR world will end in twenty years!' the scribe said, absolutely terrified
'This is none of our concern. If the world was to end, the Sage would have said so' a priest, Caesars spiritual advisor replied. He was one of the Sages first followers, and had gained great prestige since Caesar had first taken an interest in Confucius' work
Caesar was less skeptical, he knew that Stonehenge was rarely wrong with its calculations. It could predict when spring or autumn would come within days, it predicted how close the darkest day was, how close the lightest day was. In all seriousness, it could most certainly predict when the world would end, at least in Caesar's mind, 'Now now, Romulus, we should not just ignore this remark, I believe it requires further study into the matter. Romulus, you go take a look at Stonehenge, see if our scribes calculations are correct. Then I will make my decision'
'Your wish is my command,' replied Romulus, the head priest, as he and the scribe left the room, leaving Caesar to finish his Steak and Rice.

'So where is it, where is the evidence that the world is to end in twenty years?' asked Romulus impatiently. A small crowd had gathered, including one strange looking man. He looked a lot like the great sage, but a lot younger, it was like he was from the same region... in fact, Lao Tzu was from the home town of K'ung-fu-tzu, he had been sent by the towns elders to discover what had happened to their town's wise man.
'Here, look at the runes, and look at the suns shadows. My calculations have indicated that the shadows put out by the central stone have been decreasing ever since the year that Stonehenge was constructed, over 400 years ago. Each of the runes seems to indicate twenty years, and here are 20 runes,' he gestured to the runes, where it was evident, the midday sun was only casting a shadow to the last and 20th rune, 'I have no idea what this rune says, its in a language which only the mysterious artisan that created this monument knows, but what will happen once the shadow passes by this last rune...'
Lao Tzu was curious too, ever the scholar and Philosopher, he walked to the central stone and smiled, 'That is a symbol from my language, the same language that my predecessor K'ung-fu-tzu and before that, the great sage known as the Buddha knew. It means catastrophe,' Romulus looked shocked, here was a man who spoke the same language as the great sage Confucius, he even looked the same, speaking highly of that other great sage, the Buddha, Lao Tzu continued, 'I know not what will occur when the shadow passes the catastrophe rune, but it is not likely be good. The Tao always says one must be weary of such things, premonitions from the Tao can be seen in anything.'
'The Tao? Can it save us from this catastrophe?' one of the onlookers yelled
'The Tao can save us!' Another yelled
'Stranger, use the Tao to help us!' a third yelled, a group of spearmen approached, and forced the crowd back from the monument.
'If the Tao believes you to be saved, the Tao will' Lao Tzu replied, as Romulus ordered the guards to take him away. Yet the guards were followed by a ever growing crowd, chanting, 'Tao, Tao, Tao'

'And what exactly is that unruly crowd chanting outside?' Caesar asked his chancellor
'I believe they are chanting Tao' replied the chancellor, stating the bleeding obvious
'I know that, but why? And what does it mean?' Caesar replied, walking to the balcony, overlooking the unruly crowd
'They believe that it can save them from Catastrophe, and they are demanding you release the man who can save them' the Chancellor replied, walking up to the balcony beside Caesar
'We have the man who can save us from Catastrophe? Then what are you waiting for, bring the man here, Cassius!' Caesar yelled to his Chancellor, who bowed and left to retrieve the prisoner.
What would his teacher do, thought Caesar, if faced with Catastrophe. What would Confucius do?

***

Part 1 is finished, I will get around to part 2 shortly, here is the map at the point where our story starts, and will be the only map in the story. As you can see, there is a source of copper to the SE of Cumae, which I hooked up on my very last turn, so could not use it (cry) Incense near Rome, but no Calender, and wine near Antium, but no Monarchy. Hooked up, however, is some Rice and some Cattle. The River flowing past Rome and Cumae is the Roma River.

Replys and that are most welcome, I enjoy feedback, even negitive feedback
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I will, thanks for the comment, next update should be sometime tonight (my time) keep the comments comming (I will take a look sometime... but not now, dont have the time :()
 
you cant install civ 4? whats wrong with your cd/dvd player? anything in particular, or does it just not like this game
 
angelickitty said:
you cant install civ 4? whats wrong with your cd/dvd player? anything in particular, or does it just not like this game

Yeah, apparently the DVD drive cant get its head around the complex (sure it is) security that is on the DVD itself. MY computer technician dude says that formating the computer may fix it... or I can go get another drive that will play it... But I have seen other threads in one of the forums (dont know which ones) that narrow it down to DVD not reading the disk due to not being able to read the code. So this is not a thread on that, its a thread on my story (which part 2 is being written as we speak... but it does take alot of effort to write a story) But feel free to PM me with possible solutions if you know some :)
 
Lightzy said:
A tale expertly reflecting the grief and woe of a person with a faulty DVD drive

I wouldnt say the DVD drive is falty, I would say LG is a pile of Censored, at least thier DVD players, thier screens are top notch

Anyway, onto Part two of my tale, and finally, I have a plot in my mind of where this story will go!


Part II, The way of Peace

'So, dear prisoner, what is the Tao?' Caesar asked, pacing the room impatiently
'The Tao is what created us, it is higher than us, and it is what controls us. The Tao is the way of peace, the way of War. The Tao is the way to enlightenment, through the Tao...' Lao Tzu was interrupted by Romulus
'And what does these teachings have to do with our beloved sage?'
'Your sage? K'ung? He was merely like me, a Traveler from our village.'
'He speaks the sages name so easily,' whispered Cassius, before starting, 'Where do you come from?'
'I come from a place called Beijing, it is a city beyond the hills'
'Beijing? Is that the name of heaven?' whispered Caesar to Romulus
'The great sage came from there, it must be...' the high priest Romulus replied
'Then how can we save our empire from catastrophe?' Asked Caesar to Lao
'Only the Tao can save us now'
They were back to where they started, this mysterious Tao, what could it mean? And was it really their salvation?
'Then how can we stop it from happening? The Catastrophe, that is'
'We cant. If the Tao wills it so, it will be so,'
'We have kept your time long enough, send him back to the dungeon' Caesar motioned to the guards, who dragged him away.
'The populous will be furious that their savior is still in prison...'
'That Heretic can rot there'
'He is not their savior, you remember what he said, if the Tao wills it so, it will be so. But what is the Tao? I will go calm the populous, you, Romulus, go study up on what this Tao is, Cassius, just... umm... just do whatever it is you do'
'Right on it' they both said in unision, as they left. To the balcony Caesar walked, and to the protesters, calling for their savior.

'People of Rome! We must not fear the oncoming catastrophe! The Savior of Tao, a follower of the Great Sage, sent from heaven to reassure us, and assist us in defeating the catastrophe that has been predicted by Stonehenge. He has entrusted his powers onto myself, and has enlightened me with the method to save us from catastrophe, returning to the heavens, to the Sage's side,' he finished. The people, none the less, were quite impressed that this so called savior had entrusted onto their leader the honour of saving the world. And so the crowds dispersed. Caesar's Chancellor, however was quite irate at this display, Caesar was not leading by example, he was once more leading by coercion, something even the Sage dismissed as evil. He had friends in Cumae who could help get the word out, that Caesar was lying.

The citizens of Cumae did not fancy Caesar much. Ever since the Buddha's death, many centuries ago, the people long suspected Caesar of his death, due to the Buddha's overwhelming popularity amongst the population of Cumae. It just happened, that this was Cassius' home town. His family owned a large series of rice farms, and the lone copper mine in the country. They were rich, powerful and Buddhists, and that is exactly why the shrewd Caesar picked him as Chancellor. With rumours of rebellion in the west, nothing could shut up an angry populous like one of their leading citizens becoming chancellor. Cassius had grown quite disillusioned with his position, ever since he learnt that he was nothing but a pawn to control the west with, and this issue with this Tao fellow was just too much.
'And so he imprisoned the scholar and took credit for himself?' Marcus said plainly
'Indeed he did,' Cassius replied to the head of the Buddhist church
'And did he find a solution to this catastrophe?'
'No he didn't. I don't think he even worries about these things. He believes so strongly in the words of Confucius, yet he contradicts himself at almost every turn'
'It is not even a religion, the teachings of that Confucius' Marcus replied, 'He was merely a philosopher of great renown. His teachings were a way of governance, not a way to salvation. His words were wise, yes, but they do not lead to salvation. This may be the key to gain our independence,' Marcus stood, and looked out the window of the monastery in which he lived, over the Roma river, and to the city of Cumae on the opposite side, 'Bring this man to me, this Lao Tzu I wish to speak with him'
'I shall try' replied Cassius as he bowed low and exited the room. Marcus looked at a curtained arch in the corner, where a shadowy figure could be seen, 'Brutus, I would like you to disrupt copper supplies to Roma. A blocked barge should cut the river off from transport, or bandits on the roads. Be imaginative, Brutus'
'Yes, your grace, it shall be done' Brutus left as silently as he came
 
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