HOUSE OF LORDS!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! That strongly emplies Nobility which is something I'm dead set against. Any minister (or citizen for that matter) who puts thier support behind nobility is a traitor to the idea of democracy. Democracy means equality and equality does not allow for nobility!
This system should be based more on the American System with a House of Representatives (the citizens in this case i guess), and an ELECTED Senate. I can't see how taking power away from elected assemblies can be a good thing.
To answer another question: It was asked what the Senate should do. It should be similar to real life. It should be able to propose laws, ammendments, conduct impeachment trials (after it goes through the judiciary of course), as well as propose government policies. For each point in my last sentence there should be a procedure. For Laws it should be proposed by a Senator or President and passed with a simple majority and subject to veto* by the President. For Ammendments it should be proposed by either a Senator, the President, a Minister, or a Provincial Governor and passed with a 75 pct majority. I'll Adress impeachment lower in this reply. For proposing Government policies** it should be proposed by any member of the government (including the Senators) passed with a 60 pct majority subject to veto* by either the president or the applicable minister. Also the senate should at all times consist of at least 3 Senators at the least and go up at the rate of 1 per province. Ill provide an exaple:
1 province - 3 Senators
2 province - 3 senators
3 province - 3 senators
4 province - 4 senators
5 province - 5 senators
etc.
Impeachment trials run as follows.
1. The question is proposed to the judiciary. If the Judiciary finds the performance of the official warrants possible impeachment then the matter is referred to the Senate for Impeachment proceedings.
2. During the Impeachment Proceedings the official up for impeachment will be represented by anyone he chooses (but by default by the JA and PD). The senate itself will choose a team of up to 2 Senators and no less than 1 to prosecute the case.
3. A special thread (not to be posted in by anyone but the representatives of both parties, witnesses, a judge to be appointed by a joint decision of all representatives, and impeachable official) will be opened and the proceeding shall be held there and if needed in a special chatroom to be named in advance.
4. When the judge (through due procedure) declares the proceedings concluded the Senate will vote on the matter (impeach/don't impeach/abstain) and the verdict of the Senate is final barring a declaration of an unfair proceeding by the Judicial branch of government.
* - vetos may be overridden with a majority of 80% or better
** - government policies should include power of the purse in some fashion?
i dont really see that impeachment trials will happen often or even at all but i felt it should be written in. furthermore, NO NOBILITY!
I would be willing to write something up to be proposed to the people if yall would like.