Embassy to Team Sirius

As I said in the other thread, we shouldn't make a secret of that we want an alliance. It isn't a secret that we can't tech as fast as the other teams.
 
Sirius wil find our city in 5 turns so sharing our location is a good option to build trust.
 
We should definitely tell them that they are the only team we have met. They will know this anyway from the :espionage: numbers. You get 4 points which are automatically allocated to the first team you meet. Telling them they are the first team we met will give them no excuse not to tell us the same. If they don't tell, they know it will make them look untrustworthy.

They know our Jenny will meet anyone they met soon and we would know that they lied. So they prob won't lie.

For the same reason, we should share how far away our capital is, and ask how far away their capital is. Always give them the choice between sharing info or giving away their hostility by NOT sharing info freely.

We ideally want to get them headed for Alphabet so that we can tech trade. We need to do this before they meet someone else.
 
I agree that we tell them how far to our borders and that they are the only team we have met and put in in a way that would lean on them to tell us if they've met anyone else.

I don't know if we want to mention anything other stuff to them.

I think we should definitely show a strong interest in perpetrating a tech-trading alliance. Team Sirius was out of the loop on the tech trading alliance last game, and will most likely be very keen to work with us. For us an expansion oriented team, speeding up tech rate through a tech alliance while we expand faster than others is the way to go.

A NAP is not directly of use, but it forges the bond stronger, cementing the alliance. I suggest we support the idea of a auto-renewing NAP with a cool-down period. I think this is a good to show support and to build trust.

Open Borders are not so useful at this point, since we don't need to go through borders right now and trade routes won't exist between our home islands until Astro. OBs will be of financial benefit once we both have cities on the main continent, until then it will only be helpful if we have to pass through Sirius's culture to advance Jenny.

What are the opinions of the AMAZONs? Do we offer NAP? What kind? OB? Tech trading is probably agreeable to everyone, but if we'd rather not get involved with Sirius for other reasons that could be something to discuss.
 
My two cents: Tell them our location and how far it is and anything else they will find out soon any way. Then maybe discuss a tech trading partnership, while leaving open the possibility to discuss NAP or OB later when it becomes more relevant.
 
What are the opinions of the AMAZONs? Do we offer NAP? What kind? OB? Tech trading is probably agreeable to everyone, but if we'd rather not get involved with Sirius for other reasons that could be something to discuss.

My preference is to get as much involvement as possible. I can't think of any (in-game) reason not to offer them a full alliance.

Another piece of info that you could give away/trade is what resources we have on our island. The fact that we don't have strategic resources shouldn't be a shock and it might actually be interesting to know if they have silver like us, or have gold so we can trade it.

We could even start discussing how to build a trade network.
 
I agree that we tell them how far to our borders and that they are the only team we have met and put in in a way that would lean on them to tell us if they've met anyone else.
I agree, we should do that right away, while we discuss the other stuff. May be a short introductory letter from you SilCon "introducing yourself" as the AMAZON Diplomat. You could express a desire to be friends, share information and discuss a trading partnership. Share the info above as a "gesture of goodwill" and gently ask them about the same. If they respond honestly. That suggests a possible good partner. If they obfiscate, lie, stall or avoid the question, this might give away hostile intent towards us. At a minimum, it will show that they are not trustworthy, and thus not a good candidate for an ally.

I think we should definitely show a strong interest in perpetrating a tech-trading alliance. Team Sirius was out of the loop on the tech trading alliance last game, and will most likely be very keen to work with us.
Agreed (Although I think you mean Saturn;)). LP was stinging about being left out of the last tech alliance and as I have said before, he would be very unlikely to repeat that mistake. As you can see, Sirius built a scout workboat right away... precisely for that reason. They are Looking for a tech alliance early on... that is WHY they probably sent out the wb so early. And we should not drag our feet in recognizing and taking advantage of this.

For us an expansion oriented team, speeding up tech rate through a tech alliance while we expand faster than others is the way to go.
This is the Key for us. We are NOT FIN, so we CAN NOT keep up in tech on our own. We have to convince a FIN civ to be our tech workhorse, while we expand relentlessly. Team Cavalieros used this strategy to perfection in the last game.

A NAP is not directly of use, but it forges the bond stronger, cementing the alliance. I suggest we support the idea of a auto-renewing NAP with a cool-down period. I think this is a good to show support and to build trust.
Agreed, this should go in the first letter to them. Hopefully something can be sent out soon (today?:please:). As I have mentioned earlier, LP responds favorably to frequent contact. Especially Swift, swift, responses to his communications. He will not appreciate "long careful deliberation time" by us.

Open Borders are not so useful at this point... it will only be helpful if we have to pass through Sirius's culture to advance Jenny.
OB is useless TO THEM, because they don't need OB to pass our city... But they dont know that... they may be concerned that they will need OB to pass our borders. Plus, They will be unlikely to refuse OB because they know that it will be seen as a sign of hostility.

On the Other hand, by the time we reach THEIR borders, we might need OB to pass by. Don't dismiss the possibility that they chose wb as their FIRST build. Remember LP was probably paranoid about being left out of the trading loop in this game because of what happened last game. IIRC Sirius had a high Manufacturing rate at the beginning of the game. They may have worked a forest hill to get out a wb fast, which would explain why they seem a little behind in tech... and why the city did not grow while the wb was being built.

If they built a wb first, then Voyager is closer to us than Jenny is to them and their border may pop again BEFORE we can pass it. In that case, we will need OB or permisson to DoW (Declaration of War) just for the purposes of sailing through, with Jenny (if neither of us has Writing yet). We should offer such an agreement to them right away, BEFORE they realize they have reached the other side of the landmass. Finally, they can not use OB to enter our land anyway, because their wb can't enter ocean tiles. Even ones of countries they have OB with.

We should also gently suggest that they tech Writing so that we can make our OB official, and DoWs unnecessary. Mentioning Writing gives away that we don't have it, but they probably know this anyway, and we will need to give away some info to engender trust. We could also gently ask about their plans to get Alpha so that we can "cooperate towards shared tech goals" or "enter a tech trading alliance"

if we'd rather not get involved with Sirius for other reasons...
I have some concerns in this area, but I'd rather not "poison the well" by discussing them in detail until it (if ever) becomes relevant. For now, we should really just treat Sirius as our first potential ally in what will hopefully quickly become a lopsided 4 on 1 or 5 on 1 alliance. The best way forward is to keep forming and reforming lopsided alliances to elimminate the odd man out while we keep out-expanding everyone.
 
I like the idea of establishing an alliance this early in the game, assuming they're trustworthy. My only concerns are that they may be too close to us and we might run into problems expanding onto our ally.
 
@leonisgod: Hopefully they will give us some idea as to how far their work boat has traveled.

Here's a sample letter to introduce myself as diplomat, and lets them know we are interested in working with them. The bracketed part needs polishing for sure. I'm not sure how much of that we want to tell them in this letter. I'm wondering about the outright questions. If we don't put them, they might not feel they should answer, but are the questions too direct? We can also tell them as suggested about resources, but I think that can definitely wait for a future communication.

I'd like to get something out tonight. Let me know what you think about any of the language used in this letter or about anything else regarding our diplomacy with Team Sirius.

Greetings To Team Sirius.

You previously received a welcome letter from Sommerswerd, Team Captain of the AMAZONs. We in turn received a reply from Irgy on behalf of Team Sirius. The joy expressed in that letter has made us hopeful that there will be a friendly and profitable relationship between our nations.

I would like to officially introduce myself to the members of Team Sirius. I, SilentConfusion, have been chosen as the foreign relations officer to Team Sirius. I will be working to facilitate the communication between our two nations, so feel free to address future emails to myself, or simply just to Team AMAZON.

The AMAZON people wish to extend our warmest welcome to Team Sirius. We are interested in being friends, sharing information, and discussing a trading partnership with our stellar neighbors. Hopefully you will also be interested in exploring opportunities to bring our nations together.

[As a gesture of goodwill and in an effort to establish a trust between us, we would like to share some information with you. We can tell you a little bit about the immediate geographical area around and ahead of your scout ship Voyager. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. Voyager is at the top of a peninsula and the land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight of Voyager. How far has Voyager voyaged from your homeland? You are the first civilization we have met. We haven't met whoever is on the other side of us yet. Are we the first civ you have met?]

This letter is mainly to give myself a chance to introduce myself to you and to ensure that Team Sirius knows that we are very interested in getting things rolling between our two nations.

Sincerely,
SilentConfusion, AMAZON Diplomat
 
I'd say there's a bit too much repetition in the letter, SC, but I think the basic premise is there. I would rephrase some things, and reorganize it just a little bit. If, like Sommer says, Team Sirius is interested in quick, professional correspondence, these things might make a difference. I can do a quick edit with my suggestions if you like.
 
I'm wondering about the outright questions. If we don't put them, they might not feel they should answer, but are the questions too direct? We can also tell them as suggested about resources, but I think that can definitely wait for a future communication.

I think the letter is fine as it is: polite yet straightforward. It definitely shows we want to do business. As for questions: if you don't like asking them directly you could instead write something like:

We would appreciate it if you could also share some of your knowledge of the world and its inhabitants with us.

I agree that you shouldn't talk about resources right away. I think it's good to know for yourself what info you are willing to share, but not give it all at once. Instead, give it gradually, while they are giving us info.
 
@wideyedwander: I would like to see what you suggest. Go ahead and post suggestions. Feel free to do an edit or a rewrite. The process will only make it better.

@Norton I: I like the suggestion of how to rephrase the questions.
 
Here are my suggestions. I will explain the reasoning behind my suggested changes in a moment.


Greetings to Irgy of Team Sirius,

Thank you for your prompt reply. Your letter was met with excitement and rejoicing as AMAZON nation has, for the first time, made contact with another civilization.

Previously, you received a brief welcome letter from Sommerswerd, Captain of the AMAZONs. I, SilentConfusion, would like to introduce myself as the elected foreign relations correspondent to Team Sirius. I will be working to facilitate the communication between our two nations, so feel free to address future emails to myself, or simply just to Team AMAZON.

The AMAZON people wish to extend our warmest welcome to Team Sirius. We hope to bring our two nations closer together by learning about each other, sharing information, and forming mutually beneficial trade agreements.

We wish the Voyager good luck as it continues it's journey of exploration. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. The land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight. Has Voyager traveled far from your homeland?

We are curious to know if you have met any other civilizations as of yet, and would like to discuss ways our two nations can work together and assist one another for the betterment of our people. We look forward to hearing more from you.


Sincerely yours,

SilentConfusion, AMAZON Diplomat
 
A detailed explanation of my suggested changes:

Greetings to Irgy of Team Sirius,
Spoiler :
Even though this is a letter of introduction, you are still replying to Irgy's letter, so I put Irgy and Team Sirius. Used a comma instead of a period as it suggests continuation, whereas a period suggests "the end."


Thank you for your prompt reply. Your letter was met with excitement and rejoicing as AMAZON nation has, for the first time, made contact with another civilization.
Spoiler :
"We in turn received a reply from Irgy on behalf of Team Sirius." Removed this sentence because it is only stating what they already know. "Thank you for your prompt reply," not only thanks them, but I think flows better. Why were we excited to hear from Team Sirius? Because they are the first people we've met. Saying it simply is best, IMO.


Previously, you received a brief welcome letter from Sommerswerd, Captain of the AMAZONs. I, SilentConfusion, would like to introduce myself as the elected foreign relations correspondent to Team Sirius.
Spoiler :
I suggest the word "correspondent" in this instance because it hints that we want a lot of corresponding, instead of "officer," which might suggest "looking after."
I will be working to facilitate the communication between our two nations, so feel free to address future emails to myself, or simply just to Team AMAZON.

The AMAZON people wish to extend our warmest welcome to Team Sirius. We hope to bring our two nations closer together by learning about each other, sharing information, and forming mutually beneficial trade agreements.

We wish the Voyager good luck as it continues it's journey of exploration. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. The land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight. Has Voyager traveled far from your homeland?

We are curious to know if you have met any other civilizations as of yet, and would like to discuss ways our two nations can work together and assist one another for the betterment of our people. We look forward to hearing more from you.


Sincerely yours,
Spoiler :
Addded the "yours" because the changes I made kinda made it sound more formal, and the "yours" adds a bit of personality.


SilentConfusion, AMAZON Diplomat

Basically I removed most of the repetition, and reworded it to help it flow better, and also made it shorter. I try to go for "short and sweet." I do wonder if it lacks personality though.
 
How about this? I incorporated a lot of what wideyedwanderer suggested, though I tried to put in a little personality.

Changes:
-"Irgy and Team Sirius" instead of "Irgy of Team Sirius": it's to all of them.
-"excitement, drinking, and displays of AMAZON prowess" echos the sentiments of our welcome ceremonies, which they must have at least glanced at. It's something personal to us and I like it.
-The "intelligent life out there" comment is a humorous play on their theme, but also lets them know we haven't met anyone yet.
-made the introduction sentence feel less awkward by not starting with "I, SilentConfusion,"
-"Voyager voyaged": I like the play on their work boat's name.

Greetings to Irgy and Team Sirius,

Thank you for your prompt reply. Your letter was met with excitement, drinking, and displays of AMAZON prowess. We are happy to find that there is intelligent life out there in the universe.

You previously received a welcome letter from Sommerswerd, Captain of the AMAZONs. I wanted to officially introduce myself, SilentConfusion, the foreign relations correspondent to Team Sirius.

I will be working to facilitate the communication between our two nations, so feel free to address future emails to myself, or simply just to Team AMAZON.

The AMAZON people wish to extend our warmest welcome to Team Sirius. We hope to bring our two nations closer together by learning about each other, sharing information, and forming mutually beneficial trade agreements.

We wish the Voyager good luck as it continues it's journey of exploration. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. The land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight. Has Voyager voyaged far to get here?

We are curious to know if you have met any other civilizations as of yet, and would like to discuss ways our two nations can work together and assist one another for the betterment of both of our people. We look forward to hearing more from you.

Sincerely yours,

SilentConfusion, AMAZON Diplomat
 
The bracketed part of the letter is the best part and should definitely be included as-is. That is the whole point of the letter IMO. As for the rest, the suggested edits seem fine, but the most important part is SPEED.

In future communications, I suggest AMAZONing them up a little bit... maybe putting in some references to Diana, Zenobia, The Matriarchy, the Alliance, our Gods, our history, our wild parties, our weapon prowess contests... etc. Just to add a little personality.

LP mentioned many times how he enjoyed the diplomatic "niceties" employed by team SANCTA in the last game... but for dealing with LP, the MOST important thing is we reply right away, and say something of substance... Give some info, ask a question... etc. Don't JUST say we want to be friends... they already know that from the 1st letter.

This letter needs to advance the conversation a little. I would not worry about asking direct questions IF and ONLY IF we volunteer the same info "as a gesture of good faith."

Asking naked questions without offering anything in return will be seen as rude and arrogant, especially by LP... But AGAIN, I can not stress this enough, we have to send something meaningful right away to avoid frustrating our potential allies.
 
The bracketed part of the letter is the best part and should definitely be included as-is. That is the whole point of the letter IMO. As for the rest, the suggested edits seem fine, but the most important part is SPEED.

In future communications, I suggest AMAZONing them up a little bit... maybe putting in some references to Diana, Zenobia, The Matriarchy, the Alliance, our Gods, our history, our wild parties, our weapon prowess contests... etc. Just to add a little personality.

LP mentioned many times how he enjoyed the diplomatic "niceties" employed by team SANCTA in the last game... but for dealing with LP, the MOST important thing is we reply right away, and say something of substance... Give some info, ask a question... etc. Don't JUST say we want to be friends... they already know that from the 1st letter.

This letter needs to advance the conversation a little. I would not worry about asking direct questions IF and ONLY IF we volunteer the same info "as a gesture of good faith."

Asking naked questions without offering anything in return will be seen as rude and arrogant, especially by LP... But AGAIN, I can not stress this enough, we have to send something meaningful right away to avoid frustrating our potential allies.

I tried to add some AMAZONification, but more could be added if you think it a good idea.

I think this should be added back in.
As a gesture of goodwill and in an effort to establish a trust between us, we would like to share some information with you.

And maybe the last sentence should be explicit about not meeting anyone:
We haven't met our other neighbors yet and are curious to know if we are the first civilization that you've met. We would like to discuss ways our two nations can work together and assist one another for the betterment of both of our people. We look forward to hearing more from you.
 
Greetings to Irgy and Team Sirius,

Thank you for your prompt reply. Your letter was met with excitement, drinking, and displays of AMAZON prowess. We are happy to find that there is intelligent life out there in the universe.

You previously received a welcome letter from Sommerswerd, Captain of the AMAZONs. I wanted to officially introduce myself, SilentConfusion, the foreign relations correspondent to Team Sirius.

I will be working to facilitate the communication between our two nations, so feel free to address future emails to myself, or simply just to Team AMAZON.

The AMAZON people wish to extend our warmest welcome to Team Sirius. We hope to bring our two nations closer together by learning about each other, sharing information, and forming mutually beneficial trade agreements.

As a gesture of goodwill and in an effort to establish a trust between us, we would like to share some information with you. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. The land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight. We wish the Voyager good luck as it continues it's journey of exploration. Has Voyager voyaged very far to get here?

We haven't met our other neighbors yet and are curious to know if we are the first civilization that you've met. We would like to discuss ways our two nations can work together and assist one another for the betterment of both of our people. We look forward to hearing more from you.

Sincerely yours,

SilentConfusion, AMAZON Diplomat

Updated version. I can send it soon.
 
The bracketed part of the letter is the best part and should definitely be included as-is. That is the whole point of the letter IMO. As for the rest, the suggested edits seem fine, but the most important part is SPEED.

[As a gesture of goodwill and in an effort to establish a trust between us, we would like to share some information with you. We can tell you a little bit about the immediate geographical area around and ahead of your scout ship Voyager. Voyager is skirting the coast of what we call Jennilund. Voyager is at the top of a peninsula and the land turns sharply south just beyond where Voyager can see and continues going south past more desert. On turn 40, if Voyager continues it's present course, our cultural borders will be within sight of Voyager. How far has Voyager voyaged from your homeland? You are the first civilization we have met. We haven't met whoever is on the other side of us yet. Are we the first civ you have met?]

I suggested a change to this because the last part sounded a bit too much like writing-as-you-think. Kinda nervous sounding, and not well thought out. Sorta like Han Solo in the Death Star: "Everything's under control. Situation normal. We had a slight weapons malfunction, but everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here now thank you. How are you?"


LP mentioned many times how he enjoyed the diplomatic "niceties" employed by team SANCTA in the last game... but for dealing with LP, the MOST important thing is we reply right away, and say something of substance... Give some info, ask a question... etc. Don't JUST say we want to be friends... they already know that from the 1st letter.

This letter needs to advance the conversation a little. I would not worry about asking direct questions IF and ONLY IF we volunteer the same info "as a gesture of good faith."

Asking naked questions without offering anything in return will be seen as rude and arrogant, especially by LP... But AGAIN, I can not stress this enough, we have to send something meaningful right away to avoid frustrating our potential allies.

The only question asked in the letter as it is is "Has Voyager voyaged very far to get here?" We do offer a decent amount of info though, regarding the map as we know it, how long it'll take them to reach our borders, and that we haven't met anyone else yet. Though we don't explicitly ask for info in return, I would think Sirius would find it necessary to share it with us, or risk being seen as rude. I would think that asking questions explicitly might come across as too direct, but if you think it is a good idea, it probably won't be a problem.

In future communications, I suggest AMAZONing them up a little bit... maybe putting in some references to Diana, Zenobia, The Matriarchy, the Alliance, our Gods, our history, our wild parties, our weapon prowess contests... etc. Just to add a little personality.

We talk about speed being the key here, so adding references might be difficult. Might be a good idea to work on our history and gods so that we know it better, so we can be able to draw upon it when we need to.
 
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