Fall from Divine Intervention I: Amurite Analogies

What the, how does getting a double post with another guy's comment sandwiched in the middle? Any way thanks ^_^

I hope you guys give me one more day though, to write story and stuff
 
If you can get FoL and convert two (2) civs to it, i shall grant you the sweet fruits of your labor ;)
 

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Can I join as Amathon?

And if I can I'm sure that I haven't approved any blessing. Yet. I would probably manually cut the number of resources to half to have some manoeuvring space.

Also. Due to the number of gods and the basic equation more gods = more fun we should have 48 hours for all the gods to make their changes. Maybe 72 for the first round to ensure that each of them present their first quest.
 
Can I join as Amathon?

And if I can I'm sure that I haven't approved any blessing. Yet. I would probably manually cut the number of resources to half to have some manoeuvring space.

Also. Due to the number of gods and the basic equation more gods = more fun we should have 48 hours for all the gods to make their changes. Maybe 72 for the first round to ensure that each of them present their first quest.

True, there IS an obscene amount of sugar around me :lol: But Yes, you can join as Amathon. Just remember the "Do not screw the player" Rule.
 
As I decided to poke around the save and complete writing my flavour stuff without posting a "got it", I pretty much have a ready thing waiting for posting as soon as the file is ready for editing once more :P

So, I hope to catch the file for the short while making the edits again will take sometime soon :)
 
The garden looked beautiful as the spring brought the warmth of the shining sun upon the red roses. Valledia caught herself almost smiling while admiring the beauty around her as she walked through the bed of roses to reach her quiet getaway cabin by the lake. It was the only place where she felt comfortable, safe; away from the all the hassles and responsibilities of running an empire of arrongant, self-servient, self-righteous mages. She was in the middle of her daily stress-relief ritual, when she was startled by the intensity of the vibrations she felt.

"Something's not right," she thought. She opened her eyes and looked around her to see the whole cabin vibrating vigorously.

"What's this? Is someone playing tricks on me? You think this is funny? I'll rip your head off!" She yelled as she jumped out of her bed and bolted out of the cabin. To her surprise, a massive statue of an intimidating female warrior stood before her. It looked like it had just come out of the earth, dirty and covered in wet soil as it was. She was sure it wasn't there before.

"Valledia the Even. I am Kilmorph, Goddess of the Earth and of all who dwell within." said the statue. Or rather, Valledia heard this voice in her head, but the statue was not moving at all. She stood there, waiting for the statue to continue its speech.

"One of my children is in need. He is called Danath. I have come to you to ask you to rescue him from his pursuers. In exchange he will be grateful for your rescue and offer you his services. However if you do not act and he dies because of your inaction, his blood will be on your hands. That will not make me happy."

Valledia continued staring at the statue, unsure of what to say.

"Look to the north. There you will find Danath and his pursuers. I hope you do the right thing, Valledia the Even."

The statue disappeared into the earth.

Spoiler :
You can choose to save Danath as soon as possible and found RoK earlier than anyone else, or you can simply ignore him. If he dies for some reason, you'll then suffer the consequences (not sure what those are yet).
 

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Bhall felt weak. It was not a feeling she was accustomed to. Furthermore, it was not a feeling she enjoyed. But she was growing stronger. She was certain of it. She could feel it. The worship. The blood sacrifice. The power. As she realized where it was coming from she smiled, in a joyless, horrifying fashion. Braduk had not abandoned her. And from Braduk, power streamed into her.

Bhall concentrated, straining her mind, reaching for Erebus. She was still weak, she realized, but she must reach and touch Erebus. She must! If she can touch but one mind, bind but one soul to her bidding, she thinks, she can find that which she lost so long time ago. That which she cast away!

And sparks streamed from Bhall's mind and settled on the land. Under an aurora borealis night sky those sparks took root, and the land burned.


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In her palace in Cevedes, Valledia was standing in front of a window overlooking the great lake to the north, observing the smouldering remains of a great forest on the opposite shore. Something about it worried her, while she was glad the fire apparently had not spread, and wouldn't threaten the city. Approaching footsteps interrupted her, and as she turned she saw a young officer of the palace guard approach. The man stopped and saluted. "Forgive the intrusion, my queen, but a peasant is giving us trouble at the gate. He has stood there, demanding an audience with you ever since the day broke. He has refused to state his business and insists it is of great importance and he should speak directly to you. I no longer knew what do do with him... forgive me, my queen". The young man is shaking, as if realising what a stupid thing he has done, bothering the queen with such a trivial matter. It is obvious to Valledia the man is quite inexperienced. "It is fine", she says, reassuringly. "He hasn't said anything about his business?". "No, my queen... wait! No, now that I think of it, when he first came, he said it had something to do with a fire in the north". The man is staring at Valledia, cursing himself for bothering the queen with something this trivial, not sure what to expect. He is surprised to hear Valledia's reply. "Very well then. I will see him here. Please have the man escorted here".

Shortly after a man is escorted inside by the same young officer of the guard. The man, a bearded man in his fourties, the queen estimates, and dressed in woodman's garbs, falls down on his knees at the sight of the queen. "My queen...", the man begins. "I was told you desperately needed to see me", the queen interrupts, "and that it was important. So get up, join me by the windows, and tell me what your urgent business is. What is your name?", Valledia asks as the man gets up and, carefully, walks up to her. "Nariac, my queen. I am Nariac the Forester". The man bows deep while introducing himself, and as he gets up Valledia notices a feverish burn in the man's eyes. "Well met, Nariac the Forester. Now, please state your business". Nariac nods, clumsily, and turns to the window. "Over there, on the other side of the lake, my queen? Do you see that burnt forest?". Not waiting for a reply, he continues "I saw it, my queen, close by. I was near. I was there. The fire broke out of nowhere and it consumed the forest faster than any fire should. I was lucky to escape the fires into the water...". Nariac takes a deep breath and looks Valledia into the eyes, a burn in his eyes "The fire was already over when I got out of the water. I knew I should have left, went south to my family, but I felt this strange calling... something in the ashes was calling for me. I could not force myself to leave, so I followed the call. It should have been too hot to bear still, but I could feel no heat. And amongst the bare, burnt trees I discovered an old path, leading north. It must have been hidden under the forest for forever. My queen, there is something powerful at the end of that trail. I can feel it. I have come to beg your permission to follow the trail and discover the powers that lie at its end". Valledia turns to look out the window once again, to the other end of the lake. "And if you should not return?", she asks the forester. "Then send my sons, or send your soldiers, but send someone. Can you not feel how important it is?".

No, she could not, she thought as she watched the man leave. But it was obvious he could. She wondered what it was that had affected him such. She and her counselors would decide what to do with the man's request. They knew the man lived on the eastern shore of the lake. He had given her her word not to leave without her permission, even if it visibly pained him, saying his obligations were primarily for his people. The decision could be sent to him with ease.

Spoiler the task :
Added a scout with woodsman called Nariac. Created a semi-visible trail to follow, starting at the north end of the lake. You will be rewarded for reaching the other end of the trail (you'll know when you get there). Nariac's survival is not mandatory


Spoiler Not for Korias' eyes :
Created the trail (including burnt forest here and there)
Added a fire or two on each continent
Gave Braduk the Burning an Elder Council
Added two hills and copper in Braduk the Burning's BFC

I'll be giving the clan a little help here and there over the course of the game. Let me know if you think I'm going too far with any of it at any point
 

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Nantosuelta smiled at Valledia. Her smile was breathtaking. "I need you to worship me, to Kylorin, the man who founded your empire and a great student of mine. If you can bring three religion spreaders (Savants, Zealots, etc.) to the same city, I shall have your city enhanced with a couple buildings. Buildings that are advanced. Do you chose to listen to me, or ignore my request and risk consequences?"
 
I'm a bit confused. I called the Angel of Faith in the last thread. How did someone else get it?
 
Lugus walked upon Erebus. He was willing to wander the entire planet to find the one he was looking for. He looked from country to country when he finally found her. "Ah, Valledia. You're doing well this age. But, sadly, I need someone to worship me. If you take up the task of giving me my Empyrean, I shall reward you with two Vicars for each city you have. If another culture discovers my faith first, I shall give them the same reward. I trust you will make the right decision."
 
Esus lurks... (looking around the save)
 
A small caravan is seen approaching the gates of the small amurite settlement.

'Hail and well met, friends!' the tiny cloaked man shouts to the guards who patrol around the gates to the palace. 'I have come here as an envoy of peace and prosperity to your wise queen, Valledia, from our enlightened leader, Amelanchier.'

The guard captain shouts a couple of orders and the gates open. He responds to the small man's greetings:

'We welcome you, elf... Let our man handle your belongings and you shall be escorted to our queen.'

The reception room was small and Valledia's brow seemed troubled and tired.

'Who is this man?' she sighes as the elf kneels before her.

'Fair Valledia of the Amurites. I come before you as an envoy of peace from the summer court. I can see that you are tired and wish to trouble you no further. Know that i am a skillful scout, advisor and bard, so Amelanchier wishes that you make use of my skills any way you please, for our people to thrive together in these uncertain times.'

Spoiler :
Ok, named elf scout with mobility and winterborn granted to player. Happy hunting.
 

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Nantosuelta awoke to find Chaos in the hearts of Man. As she looked closer at the emerging civilizations she was dismayed to find that no Faith was to be had in any of them. Unmoved she leaned back and watched even as the other gods began shouting for the attention of man. She would wait to see which of these people would find faith in something larger than themselves. Until then she would be content to wait.
 
Oghma looked down on the world. She knew at once (or rather: Had always known) that the Amurites would play an important role soon enough. But everyone should have been able to, with the amount of Angels circling around Cevedes.

Oghma simply wrote her words into the mind of Valledia, for now:

"I trust you know what to do."

Spoiler Gods :
I need someone who can edit the save for me, once it becomes necessary.


Spoiler Valledia the Even :
Oghma was the Angel of knowledge. And if anything could strengthen the Amurites, it was knowledge. Had they not bloomed when Kylorin had taught them? And had they not decayed when he left them and took his knowledge with him?
While some of it might be lost for good, Oghma would certainly be able to enlighten the Amurites in some of the knowledge of the ages past, if they paid her respect.

For now, all she required of the Amurites was their own caring for the only thing she appreciated - Knowledge
 
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