OOC: You know, when I just tyep something everyone can read it. When I add flavor, revise, edit, and such it sucks.
I have no PM space, I did what I thought will happen. That is what my dude saw, that might not be what truely happened. If one didn't even read it twice how can one hope to understand anything.
I hope that you understood the word 'Message' because that is what you received IC.
I you guys want, I can quit all NESIng. That is how I feel: I try very hard, I risk my privilages and bam, two seconds after post someone says that they don't understand, or that it doesn't work, or that this republic is actually a kingdom or this kingdom is actually a republic or saying my troops lost in that sector or saying that they actually one in that sector or saying that that was impossible or saying that what I described is not understandable or just staring at me or just PMing me 'Stop Writing Stories, they suck.' or declaring war with ambigous meaning or ignoring me because my brother hacked my account again.
(Pants Heavily)
I layed everything in chronological order: He arrives, (backround) he saw something interesting (notices it) he *Info Deleted* and it got *Info deleted* he froze, got scared, and returned home.