Here is the ad so far, it is short and to the point. I do think it needs a little improving not in text but in graphics. Something that gives the people an idea of where the game is at and whereit is going. The brewing civil war may be a good theme. Anyone that wants to participate in the project is welcome and will receive compensation for graphical work from the RPG market account. EDIT: Civplayah it is crucial that you participate in the creation of the ad. As Clerk of the Realm you head the EG.