My First Story (Napolean's Golden Age)

dune297

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This "Comic" story is a year by year simulation of what happened in a game. I will be making a "Comic" behind each screenshot and turn I put. It's not going to be a descriptive as hell story, as I'm not that good of a writer, but it will be an enjoyable "Comic".
AND REMEMBER FEEDBACK AND CRITICISM IS WANTED!
Turn one, 4000 BC
Paris has been founded.
Work has begun on a Worker.
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Welcome to my civilization. I am napolean, leader of the French Civilization and Paris.
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And I'm Carlo Buonoparte, this stupid kid's dad. Don't tell him, but hes a greedy bastard. I have no clue why he was appointed after that great ruler Charles François Lebrun.
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Hey I heard that.
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No you didn't.
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I command you warrior to go explore. I want a full report when you get back. Just don't mess up. Or it'll be the dungeon for you now.
Turn two, 3940 BC
Technology Bronze Working
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FATHER, WHAT IN GODS NAME DID YOU DO WITH MY WARRIOR?!?!
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Stupid kid, I didn't touch your warrior. You TOLD him to go explore.
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Well uhh, I WAS JUST TESTING YOU.
Turn Four, 3820 BC
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Hay Look at those little pink animals! If only our worker foundation was built. Maybe we could eat some. They might be better then snails!
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Good idea.
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Turn six, 3730 BC
Technology Bronze Working Finished Started Mysticism
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Hey dad dad guess wut! I found out how to make an axe! It's a pointy object I can chop off your head with! Want an example?
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Stay back, if you threaten me again I'm leaving france.
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Don't you talk back to me, this pointy object is waiting for a victim.
Turn eight, 3580 BC
Meets Roosevelt
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Greetings Napolean, would you like to be an ally of the fat nation america?
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Can I chop off your hand with my pointy thing?
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What he meant to say was he would love to be your ally.
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Great, lets go celebrate at a fast food joint!
Turn eleven, 3340 BC
Worker is finished. Work has begun on a warrior.
Technology Mysticism finished. Started Animal Husbandry
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Hey dad, WHY DIDNT MYSTICISM HELPPPP ME?
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It will in the long run, watch. Let me give you a hint. Obese!
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America?
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No! Obelisk.
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Shut the heck up! I knew that.
Turn fourteen, 3160 BC
Animal Husbandry finished. Started Meditation
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Hey dad, meet my new wife, her name is Cow.
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Why is a cow your wife?
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I learned animal husbandry.
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(Facepalms and walks away)
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Turn Eighteen, 2920 BC
Warrior is finished. Work has begun on a settler.
Technology Meditation finished. Started Animal Husbandry
Buddhism Founded
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I founded buddhism, religion of the flower-budds.
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Ehh son, Buddhism is not about that. It's about getting enlightened after you go through your duties.
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Do I have to take you away for lying about our religion?
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Ehh, I was just saying.
Turn Nineteen 2860 BC
Acess to food resource, corn
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Hey dad we got corn!
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Leave me alone.
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Why are you acting like that?
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You never shut the hell up!
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Guards, take him to jail.
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Whats a jail sir?
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FORGET IT!
 
Looking for feedback, really enjoying writing this. Great fun. Gonna do this more often :D
 
Feedback here :)

I like the idea of presenting Napoleon as "childish". It's... an unusual point of view on him.



Wainting for more turns, and the situation to develop :)
Thanks for the feedback, I'm working on it now. :)
 
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