Orthanc's Creation Thread

The HunterAnubis and Partizanac civilizations have captured some of the Orthanc civilization's workers. King Orthanc is willing to trade Hajduk Run Preview for Enslaved Worker:
 
I think you need to make the body rock slightly from side to side, and also twist, as it runs - otherwise it looks like he's floating and simply using his legs to push himself along, as it were.
 
Alrighty, added a little more wobble to his step:
 
his clothes seem bit to static if you know what I mean BTW now he looks like terorist to me :D
anyways seems ok to me
 
Alrighty, added a little more wobble to his step:

His legs look a bit TOO wobbly now. In fact, they look like jelly strings hanging down from his hips. It also seems more like he's gliding than running now, especially if you look at his feet when he brings them to the front. Like he's Hermes floating on air or something. Maybe miminimze the range that his legs go forward, basically so that he's taking smaller steps each time rather than some gazelle-like hurdle.

Minimize the wobble on the upper body a bit as well, it is a bit dominating at present.

Looks good otherwise though.
 
Now with reduced wobble! (and forward leg motion)


@HunterAnubis: Well the gun-weilding rebel occupation isn't far off from the terrorist one. And sorry, the clothes are solid shapes, so I can't ruffle them at all...
 
Why would you want the guns in the belt during the run animation as well? It gets quite monotone if he has them in their ALL the time, so making the run animation as it is right now is a welcome change from the norm. I'd personally leave it, but it's really up to Orthanc (by the way Partizanac, I'm not attacking you, I just wanted to mention it ;) ).
 
-The Run animation should be he's holding his guns (witch are in his belt) and he's walking (sword should also be in his belt near the guns).
@Orthanc put the guns in his belt! please! and then make his hands move while he is running. And thats that! :)

Orthanc is confuzzled:crazyeye:, he can't move his hands while holding the guns that are stuck in his belt.
 
@Orthanc that first quote I was aiming for walking stile! but when you decide to make running one, I tried to compensate. Cause they originaly walked just like I described (the guns where in their belt in X position, so his right hand would hold left gun thats leaning to the right side. and the other way around)

@Sword first of all I disliked the unit I didn't hate it, second you made it for @Mirc he liked it so why are you constantly bothering me with it? thirdly @Orthanc takes my notes and criticism and at least tries to make them happen. And please be patient for him to finish the unit (this will take awhile cause hes never done a real human unit) so he could do your ships.
 
@Sword first of all I disliked the unit I didn't hate it, second you made it for @Mirc he liked it so why are you constantly bothering me with it? thirdly @Orthanc takes my notes and criticism and at least tries to make them happen. And please be patient for him to finish the unit (this will take awhile cause hes never done a real human unit) so he could do your ships.

I can understand that it is a unit request on your part, but you should still grant the unit-maker in question full creativity freedom. Making him exactly like you picture, meaning all animations and poses how you want, will be near impossible when you're not the actual person making the unit. Therefore, I'd leave him a bit of playing room to create the unit, so that it's also a creation he can deem as such. It is a form of art afterall. Think about it, what would da Vinci have said if Mona Lisa had started complaining about her looks in his painting of her? ;)

Of course, the fixing of the mustache part is a legitimate request, but don't be such a nag about it, afterall this is a favor he's doing for you. Again, no offence towards you, just a thought. :D
 
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