aPT- Ok, nothin bad here. Very good move on moveing the slider to 50%. Believe it or not, there is no MMing pontentials here. Though there was a trading move here that would save what you would've done next turn, the Arabs were willing to trade Horseback Riding for our Writing and 25g. I would've taken this, you need to check every turn for trades even if you think the player before you did already, check anyways.
a1. The whole dilemma wouldn't have came up if you traded for HBR before. Uuuuuummm, you didn't type that Karakorum finished settler and started what?? This is what I meant as more details in your turn report. If I didn't have the save open when I was checking your turns then I would've never knew that the settler would've finished. You didn't type that you MMed Karakorum so it finishesthe settler in four turns from now. I need to know these things. Good moves on defense and offense here with the barbs abd russia, and keep that upgrading gowing! Though my science would have went straight to Mathematics so when we meet some more people we will have a great trading chip and Currency in the way. Thinking for future trades is the way to go, spend high, get high, just like business, only if you know how to run it

. Luxury was able to be lowered to 0% so I guess you didn't check that or just didn't tell me

. I also upgraded 2 warriors, I would like to know how much u did.

Killed a barb encampment with a warrior, and moved a settler. All those things I mentioned is what you should have mentioned
if you done them, if not, then that is what you should have done and you didn't.
a2. Blocking the Russian Settler is wonderful and going great! For me, Kazan finished Sword, but u didn't say that, I started a spearmen after that. Daland started Harbor which is a good move, we need one, though I would've started a Galley straight up from somewhere to get some exploring before the Russians and Arabs research Map Making. Great victory in the barb camp!

Luxury at 10% would've still been in effect.
a3. A settler finished, which you didn't specify. Flood plains finished in Hovd. No luxury still in effect...
a4. I killed a barb. Moved some troops and Raised luxury becuase Capitol was at size 6.
a5. Even though I dont think HBR was good, Literacy wasn't a bit better...
a6. Nothin wrong here...
a7. Did our settler finish???? 4 Turns??? Did you accept of refuse, I am confused, aaarrggh.
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Overall: I can expect more from your CivGeneral. I was disapointed that every turn I had to say something nagative about the same reason. I am not talking about the trade, or your little tweaks, I am talking about NOT ENOUGH INFO. I wont be able to grade you on your turns if you dont put effort into writing these turns. I should be able to read right though your turns withought haveing to go back to the game and check what else happend. Do not get discouraged, but I realy want you to listen to what I am saying, take a look on how I write my next turns, that I will say every single little detail that happend just so I can help you guys understand what happening and not try to guess what actually happend. I hope I wasn't too harsh but it was needed. About you learning list, ABSOLUTELY NO PROBLEM

. I will take extra note to watch so you can see how to do these affectively.
I will be playing my turns now like in 5min.