weimar_republic
Warlord
here it is!!! the story of the KEE Empire, updated and spell checked.
I have characters and plot, but no setting... also note, there are footnotes attached., signified with numbers (1) (2)... they are full of information, for instance, (1) describes the governmental system Tedofsky wants to have, if this info to you is useless, then don't read the footnotes, but if you are interested, then go ahead.
Our story begins in a year I will refer to as year 0 for ease of reference. Something happens in this year, but it is remembered further along in the book, so lets jump ahead to year 26 when our story begins.
First you are introduced to Theodore James Tedofsky, he is 16 years old, the son of James Tedofsky. He is smart, and good at sports and is relatively good looking, being 5'10" 160lbs, mostly mussels, blonde, blue eyes. He is either Russian or Polish. He is lonely, however. He wants a girlfriend more then anything in the world. Not only that, but in his quest to get a girlfriend he ended up founding an empire of amazing strength. His Empire was made up of two things, one, people that were really lonely, and two, a strong opposition to the government, and a way to replace it. (1) He called the people that were really lonely, Ju's, and those that opposed the government, Ki's, after Kemal Ki, a man of strong opposition to the government, he was a military general, but some feared he may one day make a grab for power, so the government executed him. These people, were commonly called Ki-Ju's. The original name of the empire, the Ki-Ju Empire, KJE, failed in the long run as non Ki-Ju's felt too excluded to support them, so he renamed the empire, the Ki-Ju Ethnic and Extrinsic Empire. Ki-Ju Ethnic, meaning the Ki-Ju's and related people, and the Extrinsic, means foreign or others. Henceforth the KEE Empire was born. Tedofsky had this empire, but most members were poor, they had little or no weapons, but had the will to fight. When James Tedofsky died, Theodore became the true ruler, he began to consolidate power, but by the year 26 he had only 1000 members. That day, Theodore ran across Osmand Ki, who was 26 years old. Osmand was one of two sons of Kemal. The other, his elder brother, Kemal JR. was estranged with Osmand. Kemal never continued his fathers war, but Osmand did. Osmand Ki had a large following, 100,000 members-in-arms, who were ready and willing to fight, 550,000 members who would be called up to service, and 1,850,000 additional members of the public that were sympathetic. Osmand's force, which totalled 2 million, had the money, guns, and support to fight, but not the will. Osmand was about the only one who showed up regularly for meeting, and then only between 5 and 25 members showed up at each meeting. The national council, where all 2 million members were invited, only about 250,000 showed up. Theodore had a force of will and no power. Osmand had a force of power and no will. When they met all hell broke loose... Teddy and Ozzie decided to merge forces. The merge gained support, by now almost 3.5 million said they would support the force, and enough volunteers and money poured in to equip 750,000 men for battle. The Government realised the threat to its rule, and decided to move in to crush the movement, this is when "the war" begins.
Teddy, 16, and Ozzie, 26, had shared history together. At this time, about 2 weeks from when our story began and about 10 days from the merger, James Tedofsky dies. Teddy and Ozzie both had their mothers die at an early age, so now both were without parents. Nether had really had a brother, and they didn't have any real friends. They immediately became the best of friends. At James Tedofsky's death bed, Osmand was there. This was the first time James saw Osmand and remembered he knew his father. After thinking about the movement, he told both of them something that had happened to him 26 years ago, when he was just 20, and before the current King {or president} came to power, and before Kemal was famous. He told a story that He, his date, Kemal, his girlfriend, and 2 other couples. These 8 were sitting together, and a mystic walked by, he pointed to the 8 of them and said "your empire will be born today. This empire will reign for 500 years, not a day more, not a day less. Your families will be its birth and will be its death. Your greatest strength will be your greatest weakness..." at that point the mystic turned around and literally vanished into thin air. James realised that it was that day that he and his date fell in love, and that very day that Kemal and his girlfriend conceived Osmand. It was also this day that one of the other couples, a man by the name of Lappa, would start an empire of his own, and the other couple, the man would rape the woman, who would give birth to a child she later abandon, that child later named himself, Ken Hiss.
It was about this time that a Teddy met Julietta Andropov. Theodore James Tedofsky pointed out that his name had 8 and 8 letters, and so did Julie's and that his middle name, James had 5 letters, as did Teddy and Julie {Pellaken=8 Nicholas=8 Boragina=8. Do you now know why 8s is my lucky number? What month is the month we met in numbers, august...}. He said they were "made for each other" Julie was rather small, only 5'2" blue eyes, blonde hair, and was rather feisty, but lonely at the same time {my dream girl...} Teddy only knew Julie for one week before she was captured by the evil King. During this time, the 2 of them had sex. The battle for control over the nation, between the rebels, Teddy and Ozzie, lasted 9 months, and started with Julie's capture. At the end of it, there is a real romantic, dramatic scene...
Teddy and Ozzie both are commanding troops that are storming the palace, Teddy enters from the east entrance, Ozzie from the west. Teddy's troops made it to the Imperial Bedroom first. Where the kind was holding Julie, and holding a gun to her head. Teddy ordered the troops to secure the building and let him alone with the King and Julie. The bedroom has 2 entrances, east and west. Teddy noticed Julie was really fat, was she pregnant, who was the father??? Julie couldn't talk as the king has his hand over her mouth... a verbal struggle insured, until Ozzie's troops {without Ozzie} entered the room. Theodore said to hand Julie over and noting would happen. He did so, and Julie began to slowly walk towards Teddy. At the moment, the king made an evil laugh, and mumbled "THAT would be so cruel..." then aimed the gun at Julie. At that moment, one of Ozzie's officers shot the king, but it was to late, the King had shot, the bullet got Julie right through the heart... Julie fell into Teddy's arms
"JULIE!!! NO!!! You'll be ok, I will make sure of it, I am King now, I will use all the powers of the kingdom..."
"no... uurgh... my time has come"
"NO!! I LOVE YOU!!!"
"Teddy! Promise me, you will find someone else, I don't want you to be lonely forever"
"But Julie, I love you"
"PROMISE ME!"
"I promise..."
tears
"Julie.... goodbye"
"goodbye teddy..."
"I will always love you"
"as will I... you--- uurgh..."
"save your strength"
"No!. The child..."
"yes, YES"
"is... is.... yours."
At that moment Julie dies, and Ozzie rushes into the room he sees Julie lying there. Teddy yells "save the child" then falls from an earlier sustained wound...
When Teddy awakes, he sees his child, a daughter. He names her Julie. Julie Tedofsky. Through out the next year, Theodore gets sick from his sustained wound, eventually, he dies when his daughter was only 1. At this time a great argument starts over the future of the nation. Teddy and Ozzie had always conflicted cause Teddy was Liberal and Ozzie was conservative. (2) The 2 had ruled as Joint rulers, but when Teddy died the question arose, would Julie take Teddy's place, or would Ozzie rule alone. Ozzie tried to quell the anger by adopting Julie and renaming her Julie Ki. Saying that he would have no children, Ozzie wanted to merge the 2 families. The Tedofsky supporters, however, weren't to happy with this. Julie would be raised with Conservative values, not Liberal ones, and the name Tedofsky would die out. He also renamed the nation Julie-Ki, Tedofsky's wanted it renamed Julie-Tedofsky. A referendum was held on the issue, and Osmand won, 50.1% to 49.9%. This meant two things. One, Osmand won, two, if there ever was a civil war on the issue, the nations would be totally destroyed. Osmand then implemented his idea for peace, he founded 2 parties, the Ki Party, full of his supporters and conservatives, and the Tedofsky Party, for Teddy's supporters and liberals. The planet was also renamed Ki-Joulie, and Ki-Ju came to represent a person of Ki-Joulie, not someone lonely anymore. Osmand then handed Julie over to the Tedofsky party, where she was renamed Julie Tedofsky. Osmand, however, ran into his curse. Despite never wanting to be in politics or ever be the leader of anything, he was now the King of the nation, and could not resign, as his brother Kemal, would probably start a civil war, and if a Tedofsky took the throne, it would spell disaster as a civil war would surely ensure, so the man that never wanted power, was stuck with it.
The story takes a break, and doesn't pick up for another 100 or so years.
Note-all footnotes will be sent by request
Le part, deux
Part 2 picks up in the year 114. Osmand Ki is now 114 years old, and STILL ALIVE!! He has been King for the past 92 years, making him the longest living ruler of any nation, ever. {all you really have to know is that Theodore James Tedofsky III is a relative of Julie Tedofsky and Theodore James Tedofsky the original. Lappa II and his son, Lappa III, are related to Lappa I, who was one of the "8" I talked about earlier. Peter Hiss, is also a relative of one of the 8, his life was unhappy however, as all the Hiss children were a result of rape, and all grew up in unloving homes.} Osmand had a good relationship with the Kingdom of Lappa, but a bad relationship with the Tok Empire. Lappa II was the king of Lappa. Lappa was a large 'paper tiger'. These nations look powerful, but in truth are not. Lappa claimed itself to be extremely powerful, but in truth, it was weak and empty. Tok however, was the opposite. It appeared weaker then it was. It was a large nation with many people, but it was poor. When Peter Hiss came to lead Tok, he realised that only through war can he save his nation. He declared war on all his neighbours. Ki-Joulie took this chance to take advantage of Lappa, whom it has been warring with for the past many years over a piece of land both nations claimed. In a hand to hand battle, Peter Hiss killed Lappa II. Due to the government of Lappa and other nations, (3) Lappa III took over. Lappa III was young, and lonely. He was depressed and seemed never happy. He now lead his nation in war against Tok and their massive forces.
Theodore James Tedofsky III was the Chief General, or Generalissimo of Ki-Joulie. He wanted to declare war on Tok now, before they could annex all of Lappa. (4 map). In the land there were many nations. Lutt-Le and Elt-Le were at constant war, they have been since the beginning of time. Dete'n with filthy rich, more then half of all the money in the area was in Dete'n, but their military sucked. There were also 3 nations between Dete'n, Lappa, Tok, and Ki-Joulie. The war began when Tok declared its support for Elt-Le it its war against Lutt-Le. LL had recently gained the advantage on EL in a large battle, and Tok wanted EL in power in the area, as the government of EL was friendly to that of Tok. To get troops to EL, Tok needed to cross AMSTAR, and AMSTAR refused passage of Tok's Troops. Tok threatened war, at which time the southernmost of the 3 small nations between the 4 large powers, declared war on Tok, in support of AMSTAR. Tok's forced annexed the nations quickly. They then wanted to move on to the next, the north westernmost of the small 3, which also bordered Lappa. Lappa feared an attack by Tok, declared that it would move in to that nation, in support of it, should Tok invade it. Sure enough, Tok invaded, and Lappa declared war on Tok.
Lappa II was killed when Tok made a run for the capital of Lappa, Lappa Primus, which was rather close to the Tok-Lappa boarder. Lappa II met the Tok army in the field, and challenged Hiss to a hand to hand combat. Hiss won, but had to retreat his forces in the end, he could not capture Lappa Primus... for now. After the 2nd of the 3 was captured to Tok, they moved on to the 3rd, and it fell quickly. Tok then moved on to greater conquests, attacking both Aero and AMSTAR. Aero was Dete'n's 'little brother' kind alike Canada is to the USA. AMSTAR surrendered before to long, but Dete'n sent troops in to defend Aero and pretty soon, Dete'n was in it war. Tok now could send troops to EL, and did so. Peter Hiss' #1 friend, advisor, and Vice President, Melvin Affleck, wanted to finish of LL and Aero, but Hiss had other ideas... Hiss gathered a large army and readied it to attack as Ki-Joulie. Melvin was appointed in charge of the attack. Mel's army crossed the boarder, and made quick gains. Osmand and Teddy tried to defend as best they could, but their armies were simply not ready. Osmand appealed to Dete'n for assistance, but they had signed a cease-fire with Tok and were unwilling to ally with Ki-Joulie. Osmand even offered a federation at the end of the war, that would include Ki-Joulie, Dete'n, and other nations. Eventually, the armies of Tok were closing in on Ki-Joulie City, the capital of Ki-Joulie. Osmand fled to the capital of a recently annexed nation, north west of Ki-Joulie. Osmand declared that if Tok captured the capital, he would surrender. Dete'n also declared that should Tok capture Ki-Joulie City, it would sign a peace treaty with Tok, and Lappa, which had recently lost Lappa Primus in battle, declared it would totally surrender to Tok, if Ki-Joulie City was lost. Teddy III was placed in charge of defending the city. His forced took on Mel's forces at about 11pm, August 27th. The next day would be, not only Teddy I's birthday, but the official birthday of the empire. The battle raged, and Tok's forces came closer and closer to the city, just across the river. Tok pushed Ki-Joulie's forced back, and back. 100 meters from the river... 50 meters.... 25.... 10.... 5.... Eventually, only a small number of troops were left, just on the other side of the embankment... an area that would normally be flowing with water, but part of the river was diverted upstream to try to flood the Tokish troops out. At that exact moment, a rather large army from Dete'n emerged from across the river, out of the city. Teddy III thought that the Dete'n had attacked first, to gain the city, and keep it in any peace settlement, he turned the gun to his head, prepared to kill himself. But as the forces of Dete'n approached, they did not shoot at Teddy and his troops, but rather at the forces of Tok. They crossed the lowered river with ease, and quickly forced the troops of Tok back, Dete'n had finally accepted the alliance with Ki-Joulie, and was now in this war against Tok.
Soon there after, Dete'n and Ki-Joulie pushed Tok back to the boarders it had been to when the war began, Lappa, however, was literally out of troops. It surrendered, unconditionally, to the Dete'n, Ki-Joulie Federation. The 3 leaders of these 3 nations agreed on some basics about the Federation. First, to inspire the troops, they would call it the KEE Federation, named after Teddy I's old empire. The capital would be Jerin, and the area of Jerin would not be a part of Lappa, Ki-Joulie, or Dete'n, but rather a federal zone. Soon, KEE Federation troops were scoring victory after victory against Tok. They pushed deep into Tokish territory, making their way to TOK, the capital of Tok. Lappa III commanded the forces around TOK, but Lappa quickly found himself surrounded. Tok had gained the upper hand, and surrounded the force surrounding TOK. Tok also regained all land it has lost since the time the KEE Federation was created, including capturing Lappa Primus again. Peter Hiss, who was in TOK, knew if the city was captured, all his gains would be useless. It was this day, Osmand Ki died. His brothers granddaughter, Lauren Ki, only 15, would take over as Empress of Ki-Joulie. Peter Hiss took this chance, Dete'n never had 1 single powerful leader, and Ki-Joulie was in a period of Change, he therefore negotiated with Lappa III, as commander of the KEE Federation. The 2 signed a peace deal: KEE would pull out of the area around TOK, and Tok would be allowed to keep all lands it had gained in Lappa, and get to keep the 3 small nations between everyone, but have to return AMSTAR and Aero to independent status. Elt-Le was allowed to keep Lutt-Le, which hi had annexed during the war. Zan and Naz, them 2 nations at the bottom, also united, though they played a very minimal role in the war. Ki-Joulie, the small nation to the north west it annexed, Lappa, Dete'n, and the federal zone of Jerin, became the KEE Empire. Lauren Ki was declared Empress and the capital was declared as Jerin. Eventually, Aero, the Naz Zan union, AMSTAR, and the new Elt-Le all united into the KEE Empire, leaving only Tok outside the union. Peter Hiss was praised by the allies, but angered his people by signing peace when they felt Tok could have won the war. Mel overthrew Hiss, and exiled Hiss to Lappa Primus, now a city in Tok. Mel refused to unite into the KEE Empire, but did not declare war on it.
2 years after the war, something happened that had never happened before. More people in Ki-Joulie supported the Tedofsky's then supported the Ki's. Teddy III, declared himself Emperor of Ki-Joulie. At this same time, Hiss was leading a rebel group against Mel. This was called the Tok civil war. Hiss declared that if he won, he would unite Tok into the KEE Empire. The KEE Empire therefore supported Hiss. Tedofsky, however, supported Mel... the 2 united and the Tok civil war turned into a war between the bulk of Tok and the most of Ki-Joulie against the KEE Empire. During these 2 years, Dete'n and Lappa had lost much power, and Ki-Joulie had come to dominate the Empire. This war was really an unknown as to who would win in the end. It went on for 2 years, but in the end Hiss and the KEE Empire beat Tedofsky and Mel. A Ki was put back on the throne in Ki-Joulie, and Hiss joined Tok to the KEE Empire. At this time, now the year 123, the KEE Empire met its greatest foe, The Sparks. These people were amazing fighters. On August 26 126, they invaded with their entire army, and 2 days later, August 28th 126, the 100th anniversary of Ki-Joulie, the KEE Empire surrendered.
For the next 400 years, the empire struggled against The Sparks. Some Ki's were king, some Tedofsky's. At the end, the last king, Ben Ki, was killed. But not just killed, killed so that a Ki and a Tedofsky had been in power for exactly the same amount of time. Nether could therefore declare victory as to who was more powerful, Ki's or Tedofsky's. However, Ben's son, was the son of Ben Ki, and Julie Tedofsky II. This son, Oliver Tedofsky-Ki, lead the KEE Empire to victory against The Sparks, but the empire could no longer hold itself together after 400 years of occupation. So on August 28th, 526, the KEE Empire was declared over. Tok, Ki-Joulie, Lappa, had been started and grown by the "8" the mystic spoke about, and Oliver Tedofsky-Ki was a descendant of all 8. He died on that day, making the Empire last for 500 years, not a day more, not a day less. The people that started, the gave birth, were also its death, as they fought and argued. Its greatest strength, its unity, was its greatest weakness, as the Ki's and Tedofsky's could never get along... the mystic was right. This is when you find out it has been Oliver that has been writing these stories, and that it was HE that was the mystic... out story ends, with oliver signing his "Log of the KEE Empire" with the KEE of Julie (5)
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Whats the point of living if you cant do anything stupid?
I have characters and plot, but no setting... also note, there are footnotes attached., signified with numbers (1) (2)... they are full of information, for instance, (1) describes the governmental system Tedofsky wants to have, if this info to you is useless, then don't read the footnotes, but if you are interested, then go ahead.
Our story begins in a year I will refer to as year 0 for ease of reference. Something happens in this year, but it is remembered further along in the book, so lets jump ahead to year 26 when our story begins.
First you are introduced to Theodore James Tedofsky, he is 16 years old, the son of James Tedofsky. He is smart, and good at sports and is relatively good looking, being 5'10" 160lbs, mostly mussels, blonde, blue eyes. He is either Russian or Polish. He is lonely, however. He wants a girlfriend more then anything in the world. Not only that, but in his quest to get a girlfriend he ended up founding an empire of amazing strength. His Empire was made up of two things, one, people that were really lonely, and two, a strong opposition to the government, and a way to replace it. (1) He called the people that were really lonely, Ju's, and those that opposed the government, Ki's, after Kemal Ki, a man of strong opposition to the government, he was a military general, but some feared he may one day make a grab for power, so the government executed him. These people, were commonly called Ki-Ju's. The original name of the empire, the Ki-Ju Empire, KJE, failed in the long run as non Ki-Ju's felt too excluded to support them, so he renamed the empire, the Ki-Ju Ethnic and Extrinsic Empire. Ki-Ju Ethnic, meaning the Ki-Ju's and related people, and the Extrinsic, means foreign or others. Henceforth the KEE Empire was born. Tedofsky had this empire, but most members were poor, they had little or no weapons, but had the will to fight. When James Tedofsky died, Theodore became the true ruler, he began to consolidate power, but by the year 26 he had only 1000 members. That day, Theodore ran across Osmand Ki, who was 26 years old. Osmand was one of two sons of Kemal. The other, his elder brother, Kemal JR. was estranged with Osmand. Kemal never continued his fathers war, but Osmand did. Osmand Ki had a large following, 100,000 members-in-arms, who were ready and willing to fight, 550,000 members who would be called up to service, and 1,850,000 additional members of the public that were sympathetic. Osmand's force, which totalled 2 million, had the money, guns, and support to fight, but not the will. Osmand was about the only one who showed up regularly for meeting, and then only between 5 and 25 members showed up at each meeting. The national council, where all 2 million members were invited, only about 250,000 showed up. Theodore had a force of will and no power. Osmand had a force of power and no will. When they met all hell broke loose... Teddy and Ozzie decided to merge forces. The merge gained support, by now almost 3.5 million said they would support the force, and enough volunteers and money poured in to equip 750,000 men for battle. The Government realised the threat to its rule, and decided to move in to crush the movement, this is when "the war" begins.
Teddy, 16, and Ozzie, 26, had shared history together. At this time, about 2 weeks from when our story began and about 10 days from the merger, James Tedofsky dies. Teddy and Ozzie both had their mothers die at an early age, so now both were without parents. Nether had really had a brother, and they didn't have any real friends. They immediately became the best of friends. At James Tedofsky's death bed, Osmand was there. This was the first time James saw Osmand and remembered he knew his father. After thinking about the movement, he told both of them something that had happened to him 26 years ago, when he was just 20, and before the current King {or president} came to power, and before Kemal was famous. He told a story that He, his date, Kemal, his girlfriend, and 2 other couples. These 8 were sitting together, and a mystic walked by, he pointed to the 8 of them and said "your empire will be born today. This empire will reign for 500 years, not a day more, not a day less. Your families will be its birth and will be its death. Your greatest strength will be your greatest weakness..." at that point the mystic turned around and literally vanished into thin air. James realised that it was that day that he and his date fell in love, and that very day that Kemal and his girlfriend conceived Osmand. It was also this day that one of the other couples, a man by the name of Lappa, would start an empire of his own, and the other couple, the man would rape the woman, who would give birth to a child she later abandon, that child later named himself, Ken Hiss.
It was about this time that a Teddy met Julietta Andropov. Theodore James Tedofsky pointed out that his name had 8 and 8 letters, and so did Julie's and that his middle name, James had 5 letters, as did Teddy and Julie {Pellaken=8 Nicholas=8 Boragina=8. Do you now know why 8s is my lucky number? What month is the month we met in numbers, august...}. He said they were "made for each other" Julie was rather small, only 5'2" blue eyes, blonde hair, and was rather feisty, but lonely at the same time {my dream girl...} Teddy only knew Julie for one week before she was captured by the evil King. During this time, the 2 of them had sex. The battle for control over the nation, between the rebels, Teddy and Ozzie, lasted 9 months, and started with Julie's capture. At the end of it, there is a real romantic, dramatic scene...
Teddy and Ozzie both are commanding troops that are storming the palace, Teddy enters from the east entrance, Ozzie from the west. Teddy's troops made it to the Imperial Bedroom first. Where the kind was holding Julie, and holding a gun to her head. Teddy ordered the troops to secure the building and let him alone with the King and Julie. The bedroom has 2 entrances, east and west. Teddy noticed Julie was really fat, was she pregnant, who was the father??? Julie couldn't talk as the king has his hand over her mouth... a verbal struggle insured, until Ozzie's troops {without Ozzie} entered the room. Theodore said to hand Julie over and noting would happen. He did so, and Julie began to slowly walk towards Teddy. At the moment, the king made an evil laugh, and mumbled "THAT would be so cruel..." then aimed the gun at Julie. At that moment, one of Ozzie's officers shot the king, but it was to late, the King had shot, the bullet got Julie right through the heart... Julie fell into Teddy's arms
"JULIE!!! NO!!! You'll be ok, I will make sure of it, I am King now, I will use all the powers of the kingdom..."
"no... uurgh... my time has come"
"NO!! I LOVE YOU!!!"
"Teddy! Promise me, you will find someone else, I don't want you to be lonely forever"
"But Julie, I love you"
"PROMISE ME!"
"I promise..."
tears
"Julie.... goodbye"
"goodbye teddy..."
"I will always love you"
"as will I... you--- uurgh..."
"save your strength"
"No!. The child..."
"yes, YES"
"is... is.... yours."
At that moment Julie dies, and Ozzie rushes into the room he sees Julie lying there. Teddy yells "save the child" then falls from an earlier sustained wound...
When Teddy awakes, he sees his child, a daughter. He names her Julie. Julie Tedofsky. Through out the next year, Theodore gets sick from his sustained wound, eventually, he dies when his daughter was only 1. At this time a great argument starts over the future of the nation. Teddy and Ozzie had always conflicted cause Teddy was Liberal and Ozzie was conservative. (2) The 2 had ruled as Joint rulers, but when Teddy died the question arose, would Julie take Teddy's place, or would Ozzie rule alone. Ozzie tried to quell the anger by adopting Julie and renaming her Julie Ki. Saying that he would have no children, Ozzie wanted to merge the 2 families. The Tedofsky supporters, however, weren't to happy with this. Julie would be raised with Conservative values, not Liberal ones, and the name Tedofsky would die out. He also renamed the nation Julie-Ki, Tedofsky's wanted it renamed Julie-Tedofsky. A referendum was held on the issue, and Osmand won, 50.1% to 49.9%. This meant two things. One, Osmand won, two, if there ever was a civil war on the issue, the nations would be totally destroyed. Osmand then implemented his idea for peace, he founded 2 parties, the Ki Party, full of his supporters and conservatives, and the Tedofsky Party, for Teddy's supporters and liberals. The planet was also renamed Ki-Joulie, and Ki-Ju came to represent a person of Ki-Joulie, not someone lonely anymore. Osmand then handed Julie over to the Tedofsky party, where she was renamed Julie Tedofsky. Osmand, however, ran into his curse. Despite never wanting to be in politics or ever be the leader of anything, he was now the King of the nation, and could not resign, as his brother Kemal, would probably start a civil war, and if a Tedofsky took the throne, it would spell disaster as a civil war would surely ensure, so the man that never wanted power, was stuck with it.
The story takes a break, and doesn't pick up for another 100 or so years.
Note-all footnotes will be sent by request
Le part, deux
Part 2 picks up in the year 114. Osmand Ki is now 114 years old, and STILL ALIVE!! He has been King for the past 92 years, making him the longest living ruler of any nation, ever. {all you really have to know is that Theodore James Tedofsky III is a relative of Julie Tedofsky and Theodore James Tedofsky the original. Lappa II and his son, Lappa III, are related to Lappa I, who was one of the "8" I talked about earlier. Peter Hiss, is also a relative of one of the 8, his life was unhappy however, as all the Hiss children were a result of rape, and all grew up in unloving homes.} Osmand had a good relationship with the Kingdom of Lappa, but a bad relationship with the Tok Empire. Lappa II was the king of Lappa. Lappa was a large 'paper tiger'. These nations look powerful, but in truth are not. Lappa claimed itself to be extremely powerful, but in truth, it was weak and empty. Tok however, was the opposite. It appeared weaker then it was. It was a large nation with many people, but it was poor. When Peter Hiss came to lead Tok, he realised that only through war can he save his nation. He declared war on all his neighbours. Ki-Joulie took this chance to take advantage of Lappa, whom it has been warring with for the past many years over a piece of land both nations claimed. In a hand to hand battle, Peter Hiss killed Lappa II. Due to the government of Lappa and other nations, (3) Lappa III took over. Lappa III was young, and lonely. He was depressed and seemed never happy. He now lead his nation in war against Tok and their massive forces.
Theodore James Tedofsky III was the Chief General, or Generalissimo of Ki-Joulie. He wanted to declare war on Tok now, before they could annex all of Lappa. (4 map). In the land there were many nations. Lutt-Le and Elt-Le were at constant war, they have been since the beginning of time. Dete'n with filthy rich, more then half of all the money in the area was in Dete'n, but their military sucked. There were also 3 nations between Dete'n, Lappa, Tok, and Ki-Joulie. The war began when Tok declared its support for Elt-Le it its war against Lutt-Le. LL had recently gained the advantage on EL in a large battle, and Tok wanted EL in power in the area, as the government of EL was friendly to that of Tok. To get troops to EL, Tok needed to cross AMSTAR, and AMSTAR refused passage of Tok's Troops. Tok threatened war, at which time the southernmost of the 3 small nations between the 4 large powers, declared war on Tok, in support of AMSTAR. Tok's forced annexed the nations quickly. They then wanted to move on to the next, the north westernmost of the small 3, which also bordered Lappa. Lappa feared an attack by Tok, declared that it would move in to that nation, in support of it, should Tok invade it. Sure enough, Tok invaded, and Lappa declared war on Tok.
Lappa II was killed when Tok made a run for the capital of Lappa, Lappa Primus, which was rather close to the Tok-Lappa boarder. Lappa II met the Tok army in the field, and challenged Hiss to a hand to hand combat. Hiss won, but had to retreat his forces in the end, he could not capture Lappa Primus... for now. After the 2nd of the 3 was captured to Tok, they moved on to the 3rd, and it fell quickly. Tok then moved on to greater conquests, attacking both Aero and AMSTAR. Aero was Dete'n's 'little brother' kind alike Canada is to the USA. AMSTAR surrendered before to long, but Dete'n sent troops in to defend Aero and pretty soon, Dete'n was in it war. Tok now could send troops to EL, and did so. Peter Hiss' #1 friend, advisor, and Vice President, Melvin Affleck, wanted to finish of LL and Aero, but Hiss had other ideas... Hiss gathered a large army and readied it to attack as Ki-Joulie. Melvin was appointed in charge of the attack. Mel's army crossed the boarder, and made quick gains. Osmand and Teddy tried to defend as best they could, but their armies were simply not ready. Osmand appealed to Dete'n for assistance, but they had signed a cease-fire with Tok and were unwilling to ally with Ki-Joulie. Osmand even offered a federation at the end of the war, that would include Ki-Joulie, Dete'n, and other nations. Eventually, the armies of Tok were closing in on Ki-Joulie City, the capital of Ki-Joulie. Osmand fled to the capital of a recently annexed nation, north west of Ki-Joulie. Osmand declared that if Tok captured the capital, he would surrender. Dete'n also declared that should Tok capture Ki-Joulie City, it would sign a peace treaty with Tok, and Lappa, which had recently lost Lappa Primus in battle, declared it would totally surrender to Tok, if Ki-Joulie City was lost. Teddy III was placed in charge of defending the city. His forced took on Mel's forces at about 11pm, August 27th. The next day would be, not only Teddy I's birthday, but the official birthday of the empire. The battle raged, and Tok's forces came closer and closer to the city, just across the river. Tok pushed Ki-Joulie's forced back, and back. 100 meters from the river... 50 meters.... 25.... 10.... 5.... Eventually, only a small number of troops were left, just on the other side of the embankment... an area that would normally be flowing with water, but part of the river was diverted upstream to try to flood the Tokish troops out. At that exact moment, a rather large army from Dete'n emerged from across the river, out of the city. Teddy III thought that the Dete'n had attacked first, to gain the city, and keep it in any peace settlement, he turned the gun to his head, prepared to kill himself. But as the forces of Dete'n approached, they did not shoot at Teddy and his troops, but rather at the forces of Tok. They crossed the lowered river with ease, and quickly forced the troops of Tok back, Dete'n had finally accepted the alliance with Ki-Joulie, and was now in this war against Tok.
Soon there after, Dete'n and Ki-Joulie pushed Tok back to the boarders it had been to when the war began, Lappa, however, was literally out of troops. It surrendered, unconditionally, to the Dete'n, Ki-Joulie Federation. The 3 leaders of these 3 nations agreed on some basics about the Federation. First, to inspire the troops, they would call it the KEE Federation, named after Teddy I's old empire. The capital would be Jerin, and the area of Jerin would not be a part of Lappa, Ki-Joulie, or Dete'n, but rather a federal zone. Soon, KEE Federation troops were scoring victory after victory against Tok. They pushed deep into Tokish territory, making their way to TOK, the capital of Tok. Lappa III commanded the forces around TOK, but Lappa quickly found himself surrounded. Tok had gained the upper hand, and surrounded the force surrounding TOK. Tok also regained all land it has lost since the time the KEE Federation was created, including capturing Lappa Primus again. Peter Hiss, who was in TOK, knew if the city was captured, all his gains would be useless. It was this day, Osmand Ki died. His brothers granddaughter, Lauren Ki, only 15, would take over as Empress of Ki-Joulie. Peter Hiss took this chance, Dete'n never had 1 single powerful leader, and Ki-Joulie was in a period of Change, he therefore negotiated with Lappa III, as commander of the KEE Federation. The 2 signed a peace deal: KEE would pull out of the area around TOK, and Tok would be allowed to keep all lands it had gained in Lappa, and get to keep the 3 small nations between everyone, but have to return AMSTAR and Aero to independent status. Elt-Le was allowed to keep Lutt-Le, which hi had annexed during the war. Zan and Naz, them 2 nations at the bottom, also united, though they played a very minimal role in the war. Ki-Joulie, the small nation to the north west it annexed, Lappa, Dete'n, and the federal zone of Jerin, became the KEE Empire. Lauren Ki was declared Empress and the capital was declared as Jerin. Eventually, Aero, the Naz Zan union, AMSTAR, and the new Elt-Le all united into the KEE Empire, leaving only Tok outside the union. Peter Hiss was praised by the allies, but angered his people by signing peace when they felt Tok could have won the war. Mel overthrew Hiss, and exiled Hiss to Lappa Primus, now a city in Tok. Mel refused to unite into the KEE Empire, but did not declare war on it.
2 years after the war, something happened that had never happened before. More people in Ki-Joulie supported the Tedofsky's then supported the Ki's. Teddy III, declared himself Emperor of Ki-Joulie. At this same time, Hiss was leading a rebel group against Mel. This was called the Tok civil war. Hiss declared that if he won, he would unite Tok into the KEE Empire. The KEE Empire therefore supported Hiss. Tedofsky, however, supported Mel... the 2 united and the Tok civil war turned into a war between the bulk of Tok and the most of Ki-Joulie against the KEE Empire. During these 2 years, Dete'n and Lappa had lost much power, and Ki-Joulie had come to dominate the Empire. This war was really an unknown as to who would win in the end. It went on for 2 years, but in the end Hiss and the KEE Empire beat Tedofsky and Mel. A Ki was put back on the throne in Ki-Joulie, and Hiss joined Tok to the KEE Empire. At this time, now the year 123, the KEE Empire met its greatest foe, The Sparks. These people were amazing fighters. On August 26 126, they invaded with their entire army, and 2 days later, August 28th 126, the 100th anniversary of Ki-Joulie, the KEE Empire surrendered.
For the next 400 years, the empire struggled against The Sparks. Some Ki's were king, some Tedofsky's. At the end, the last king, Ben Ki, was killed. But not just killed, killed so that a Ki and a Tedofsky had been in power for exactly the same amount of time. Nether could therefore declare victory as to who was more powerful, Ki's or Tedofsky's. However, Ben's son, was the son of Ben Ki, and Julie Tedofsky II. This son, Oliver Tedofsky-Ki, lead the KEE Empire to victory against The Sparks, but the empire could no longer hold itself together after 400 years of occupation. So on August 28th, 526, the KEE Empire was declared over. Tok, Ki-Joulie, Lappa, had been started and grown by the "8" the mystic spoke about, and Oliver Tedofsky-Ki was a descendant of all 8. He died on that day, making the Empire last for 500 years, not a day more, not a day less. The people that started, the gave birth, were also its death, as they fought and argued. Its greatest strength, its unity, was its greatest weakness, as the Ki's and Tedofsky's could never get along... the mystic was right. This is when you find out it has been Oliver that has been writing these stories, and that it was HE that was the mystic... out story ends, with oliver signing his "Log of the KEE Empire" with the KEE of Julie (5)
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Whats the point of living if you cant do anything stupid?
