Abaddon
Deity
Charles you really shouldn't write other characters words for them.
I know he had said its fine as long as it was within an hour. Through this you can write it without having to get back another round of conversation.
eg:
I know its only a small thing, but it avoids you putting words in someone elses mouth? Ok?
I know he had said its fine as long as it was within an hour. Through this you can write it without having to get back another round of conversation.
eg:
"Oh yeah, thats fine. It lies to the East for a 15 minute's walk or quicker if I run. There a valley we commonly use to hunt. I'll take one of your Miltita member's with me to ensure we get there safe."
Li Chuan walked and a member of the Miltia, wearing a short sword, a Round Shield and Scale Armour followed. As they walked Li Chuan asked, "You, please tell me your name."
I know its only a small thing, but it avoids you putting words in someone elses mouth? Ok?