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:gripe: In going through my notes on structure. I came upon this entry: "3rd Act; Opens w/ bang; w/3rd Plot Point; Leads into character’s low point."

It says "character’s low point," not "world's low point." As the world collapses, my main character is currently positioned to weather the crisis rather nicely. :cooool: This cannot be! I must cast him down into the mire so that in Act III, he can be resurrected.
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Edit, later:

Problems solved. :D I need only shove my character into the ever-enlarging economic vortex. This will destroy everything he's been building up in the 8 chapters of Act II. :trouble: And clever boy I, I've figured out just how to do this. :devil:

Alas, it's 04:45. Time to put away the creative writing and turn to administrative matters. :cringe:
 
Ideally, if you're creating a unique setting for your story, your world will also become a character. So if you're planning to throw everything into chaos like this, you are giving at least one of your characters a low point.

Kinda like in Star Trek, the Enterprise itself was considered a character (no kidding; some kid wrote a fan letter once, asking for an autograph from the Enterprise - the office staff sent a photo of the ship and wrote "With best wishes, U.S.S. Enterprise"). People mourned when it was destroyed in Star Trek III.
 
Ideally, if you're creating a unique setting for your story, your world will also become a character.

In his worldbuilding manual, Way with Worlds, Steven Savage opines that in fantasy & science fiction, "Your world is actually your main character. Every story in your world is, in a way, a tale of that world no matter who the "real" protagonist is."

Here, my worldbuilding centers around economics, to wit: world trade, corrupt businesses, economic oppression, slavery, etc. Yes I do have dwarves, pagasi, a witch, magically-powered golems, fairies, nixies, gnomes and the like, but I also have attorneys, bankers, insurance companies, and pages-long contracts in minuscule print. :deal:

I spend twelve chapters painstakingly constructing my malignant house-of-cards, and then in Chapter 13, I give it a shove and watch it come crashing down. :mwaha:

But the pain is not felt by the world. It is felt by the peoples of the world. That's why I had to toss my main character into the maelstrom, so that the readers can feel what he's feeling. :run:

BTW: Power outage all day. So no internet, no administrative stuff. Instead I dove 1400 words into Chapter 13. :wavey:
 
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With no power, how did your computer still run? Or does it have a fantastic battery that lasts more than 3 hours? (that's how long mine gets)


I just created four new family members for one of the Kingmaker: Rise to the Throne characters. Their first meeting is going to be... interesting. As in that their first impression of him is "Um... why is the King of Griffinvale inspecting repairs to the castle roof in the pouring rain? Doesn't he have people for that?"

Seems the "people" didn't get around to it, and the King is a bit peeved right now... right at the time when his long-lost cousins he's never met turn up for a visit.

The setting of Griffinvale has lots and lots of islands in a vast freshwater lake, with a mixture of mountains and forests. It rains there, it's foggy (the computer game did a wonderful job of depicting this setting; I actually looked out the window during one gaming session to see if it was raining here), and it's mysterious. I hope the game company does more in this setting, because I've already thought up easily a dozen different ways the story can continue.

Three weeks until NaNoWriMo starts...
 
I reckon since Zkribbler lives on an island with spotty utility access that he has a bunch of charged batteries laying around for emergencies. Plus a generator.
 
I reckon since Zkribbler lives on an island with spotty utility access that he has a bunch of charged batteries laying around for emergencies. Plus a generator.

I have a laptop. :p I ran its batt down, then for lunch, we went to Kayla'a which has a diesel generator, and recharged.

I do have a solar generator, which is weak and is a pain to set up. So we decided instead on a good lunch + the kids got to go swimming.

Kingmaker: Rise to the Throne: You have me kind of interested in this. :think: It's only ~$7 here [resolving the main complaint on Steam], and it can be played on my laptop [which is my main concern]. Plus, I've been thinking about jettisoning my blanket aversion to puzzle games.
 
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From a rough sketch, I made my first attempt at drawing a map for my Wee cover art [a la Tolkien].
It did not go well. :vomit:

Colored pens on white paper...looks like the work of a third grader. :shake: I'll try again later with colored paper.

BTW: I bow down to anyone with artistic talent. :bowdown:

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Second attempt: Much better. :whew:

I took out the colors, took out the cutesy waves, hills, & forests which did nothing but add clutter. I roughened up the shoreline and added river mouths and bays.

I did everything in black felt tip, but the printing is hard to read. :( I might try again after lunch, doing the printing with a black fine-point pen. :undecide:
 
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Kingmaker: Rise to the Throne: You have me kind of interested in this. :think: It's only ~$7 here [resolving the main complaint on Steam], and it can be played on my laptop [which is my main concern]. Plus, I've been thinking about jettisoning my blanket aversion to puzzle games.
:thumbsup:

The Collector's Edition is better than most CE's - I don't use strategy guides that often unless I'm really stuck, but I'm determined to learn how to do a couple of the puzzle types I'm not good at. The artwork in this game is fantastic, and the extras include some nice wallpapers and music tracks.

What impresses me most about this game is the story. So many Hidden Object games just have a vague plotline that's quite forgettable, and the focus becomes finding the morphing objects, the collectables (assuming you're playing the Collectors' Edition), and solving the puzzles, rather than becoming immersed in the whole thing. With this one, the story grabbed me and won't let go.

With the game taking place over a 30-year timeframe (okay, most of the events take place on the same day, but the events were set in motion 30 years previously), there is so much scope for more stories (not that the game developers would go for prequels, so I'm going to do that myself), and the Collector's Edition does have a bonus chapter called "Act of Deceit."

And of course I want to know What Happens Next. That's one indicator that the story is good - the reader/viewer/player wants more. Even if they have to write it themselves.


As for price, I get my games via Big Fish Games, and once or twice a month they have 65% discounts for members... which means Collector's Editions go on sale for $6.99 USD. I've occasionally received email discount codes for even better CE discounts, one time as low as $4.99 USD.

From a rough sketch, I made my first attempt at drawing a map for my Wee cover art [a la Tolkien].
It did not go well. :vomit:

Colored pens on white paper...looks like the work of a third grader. :shake: I'll try again later with colored paper.

BTW: I bow down to anyone with artistic talent. :bowdown:

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Second attempt: Much better. :whew:

I took out the colors, took out the cutesy waves, hills, & forests which did nothing but add clutter. I roughened up the shoreline and added river mouths and bays.

I did everything in black felt tip, but the printing is hard to read. :( I might try again after lunch, doing the printing with a black fine-point pen. :undecide:
Are you using plain paper or graph paper?

There are some good map tutorials online, such as this one, and here's a whole batch of Google hits, including YT tutorials, websites, and images.

At some point I've got some mapmaking to do, fleshing out the very basic map in one of the puzzles in Kingmaker. As near as I can make out, the kingdom of Griffinvale is situated in a vast lake (I'm assuming all that water is fresh, not salt, as I really don't want to get into researching how ocean currents would figure into a setup like this), so parts of it are somewhat like Venice, with little canals and bridges here and there. What I want to do is figure out where and how it's situated relative to the rest of that region of the world.

The pre-story events that set the present-time game events in motion (present-time being 1039 AD) involve a crusade (not a spoiler; this is mentioned in the trailer), so I've been trying to figure out who the King was at war with, and where it is relative to Griffinvale. This game isn't set in any specific European locale, nor does it mention any RL historical figure.
 
:think: It took me awhile to figure out the accept/reject feature of Open Office re proofreading. Open Office appears to lack Word's feature of auto-advancing to the next proposed change, so I have to move myself to the next change which can be difficult to find when exchanging a period to a comma. Also, I now have to right click. It's all doable, but a little annoying.
I'm four pages into Lovelash Locket.
 
Are you using plain paper or graph paper?

Plain paper.
Thanks for the links. :hatsoff:The first ones seem to be for RPGs while I'm trying more to mimic Tolkien's map of Middle Earth, but at this point, everything's helpful.

:think: Although I was planning on a Thunderhead City street map for the cover art of Lovelash Locket, what might be more fun is the floor plan of my MC's house, a la treasure map, showing where Ford has hidden the locket. :nya: For this I will need to mimic RPG maps. :yup:

[No map drawing for awhile. I ate too much for lunch. Can't move.]
 
Plain paper.
Thanks for the links. :hatsoff:The first ones seem to be for RPGs while I'm trying more to mimic Tolkien's map of Middle Earth, but at this point, everything's helpful.

:think: Although I was planning on a Thunderhead City street map for the cover art of Lovelash Locket, what might be more fun is the floor plan of my MC's house, a la treasure map, showing where Ford has hidden the locket. :nya: For this I will need to mimic RPG maps. :yup:

[No map drawing for awhile. I ate too much for lunch. Can't move.]
You're welcome. :)

I don't see the RPG map tutorial as a problem, because a map can be used for whatever purpose you decide.

BTW, you should see the maps created for the Fighting Fantasy gamebooks. They're artistic even if you have no intention of ever playing the game.

Of course they did put Yaztromo's Tower on the wrong end of Darkwood Forest, but oh well... I found a workaround for that, and after a chat with somebody who's written scads of semi-pro source material over the years, I'm happy that he said, "If you need to add a town or village here and there, go for it."
 
...which led me to this guy doing a map in 5 minutes
, which led me to discover that Open Office Draw can do the same thing. Tomorrow, I'm off to Tagbilaran, but the next day, I'll give this a try. :D

Edit: Oops, the next day is root canal. Don't know how that slipped my mind. :mischief:
 
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:gripe:I can't figure out how to do something as simple as drawing a squiggly line, such I would need for a coastline.
Can you trace something out of an atlas? Maybe turn it upside-down so it's not immediately recognizable?

How squiggly do you need it to be?
 
How squiggly do you need it to be?

See what the guy did three posts up up in the Five Minute Map? Like that.
I've been looking at tutorials and have concluded that Open Office Draw can't do the things Photoshop can do.

I might go retro back to pen & ink, like this guy here.

 
It might be easier to make an Inkarnate map first and then use one of these tutorials to make a more "official" looking version.
 
What about MS Paint? You can make all kinds of squiggles with the freehand drawing tool.

(yes, I know it's not included in Windows 10, but it's downloadable for free)
 
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