I just d/l'd this & am looking at it now. Here are some issues I'm finding:
1. In the civ selection screen, the Hebrew civ links to the pedia entry for the Babylonians.
2. The introduction screen is badly written & contains many grammatical & spelling errors. There's too much that needs fixing for me to list it all here, but here's a list of the words that are misspelled in the order they appear: equipped, Nile, queen, fled, G-d, king, pestilences, Canaanites, Philistines, Moses, Jericho (x3), Sinai, A & VP.
I also recommend either using the term "Hebrew" or the term "Israelite," but not both & not "Israel." It's a tad confusing when you use multiple names for the same civ. Pick one & stick with it.
3. The pedia entry for the Moses unit. The effects page is only 2 sentences, yet it has one grammatical error & 1 spelling error.
The description page is a mess. It looks like it was copied from a place like Wiki. The reference numbers aren't necessary & the attempt to add the Hebrew spelling of "Moshe Rabenu" didn't work. It's not necessary to include the "Rabenu" title as that was added centuries later & is only used by Jews (basically, it means "rabbi").
4. The copy on both the description & effects page of the Slinger unit pedia is all messed up.
5. Some of the 13 starting Settlers are named after tribes, which is cool,
but there is a Settler named "Jew," which is just silly, & a Settler that hasn't been renamed. There were 12 tribes so it's easy to stay with the theme & name all 13 Settlers after one plus one for the Levites.
6. The pedia entry for the Egyptian Swordsman is about Roman gladiators...
I sent a couple of Scouts after the goody huts around Egypt & the rest of my units are off on the trail to Jericho. Will return with more reports.
Edit:
7. I got the Ark to Jericho, but nothing happened...
8. Cathedrals should not be in this scenario. They came along many centuries after this scenario takes place.
9. Either Tyre or Sidon are in the wrong place. I'm not sure which, yet.
10. I marched right through Moab without ever meeting any Moabites or even seeing their cultural border. Either they're not really in the scenario or they're in the wrong place.