A Bastard's Empire (alternate history)

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OOC: This does not deal with a Civ 3 game. Nor do I claim that this story is historically accurate at all, especially after the point of divergence. It is an alternate history of sorts, after all, emphasis on the ALTERNATE, and it will most likely go nowhere near where our real history did. Note also that unlike stories like By a Single Decision, this will be heavily character based. Ironically, though, the main character is not in the initial post... Well, he is in a sense... :mischief:



But for mercy, the entire world would have been different.

Mercy for a young woman, Caroline, that would be. Our tale starts in the Early Middle Ages. About 497 CE, to be exact, on the eastern frontier of the Frankish Empire. Of course, it was only an Empire in name. A loose federation of nobles who roughly aligned themselves with the ones in Paris for little reason but their own protection. And of course, sometimes those nobles didn’t want that “protection” anymore.

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The day had dawned cold and red, and Clovis, King of the Franks, was determined to press on westward as quickly as possible. This was a prime area for raiding, and by raiding it enough, the people of the area would want to be with the raiders instead of the raided. Such was the nature of the Frankish Empire, such would it ever be.

Clovis was at the moment, however, frankly bored. They had been riding along this Roman road since they pitched camp at sunrise, and his army had not yet seen much to plunder. He turned in his saddle to view the rest of his army. It was a ragtag little band if you were going by Roman standards, but of course, the Romans were long gone. Their little Eastern Empire still vaguely claimed that the Germans had stolen the area, but then, the Romans had always been a little slow to grasp the situation. One could call them tenacious. One could also call them stubborn to the point of stupidity. Either worked, really.

The army might have been little compared to a Roman Legion, but it was not a small matter in the local area. In fact, they were probably the most powerful force in the area. About 2,000 horse and 8,000 men at arms, with twice as many camp followers, meant that he could deal with any nasty surprises that came up. Like the various Celtic raiders that were scattered throughout Britanny. They would have to be subdued this year, before the end of the campaign season. Before his freemen went home.

While he was deep in thought, a few of his forward riders called out. They began a heavy gallop back towards him, and he reigned up, raising a hand to call his army to a halt on its march. The riders came to a halt beside him, and the eldest, Carolus, spoke first.

“My liege, there is a village up ahead. A decently sized one, as well, I’d estimate as many as 1000 to 5000 people in it.”

He smiled. “Excellent. Call up the army. Cavalry first, hopefully we can surprise them.”

“Sir,” Carolus interrupted hesitantly. Clovis’ eyes flashed with a hint of anger, but he waved at them to continue. “They have a decent wall, as well. Most of it is stone, reinforced with wood. I think they saw our forward scouts at the least, not the main host, so we might be able to surprise them.”

“Gods willing,” Clovis said. “Like I said, cavalry first. We will make for the gate and attempt to take them by surprise enough to get through the gate without too much trouble. This probably won’t happen, of course, so tell the forward rank to light firebrands to burn it down. Also get those infantrymen to work, bring up a battering ram, it shouldn’t be needed, but we should be careful.”

“Yes, my liege.” He galloped off.

Clovis, meanwhile, galloped back to the cart in the baggage train which held his personal belongings. Rummaging through it, he found a mail hauberk. Slipping into it, he found his helmet, a battered iron pot that at least deflected a few sword blows, but he was loathe to show it in Paris. And, of course, he favored double bladed war axe.

Thus attired for war, he remounted his horse and galloped back to the front, where his cavalry were assembling. A few men at arms were running around, giving the front ranks torches. He smiled to see his orders followed so efficiently, though he did frown a little on that idiot a few dozen feet down the line who was trying to eat the torch. He took a torch of his own, and watched as they slowly lit from torch to torch. Finally his was lit, and he passed it on further. He checked down the line, waiting for all the torches to be lit...

“Franks! Free Peoples! Men of valor, men of courage, men of steel! Today we will ride to glory! Today we will ride to victory! The empire of the Franks knows no bounds, and today, another city will be added to it! Follow me, that you win a glorious victory! Follow me, and let ever man do his duty! Charge!”

The cavalry line began to trot forward, then to a canter, and finally was racing along at a full gallop. They raced over a low rise, and then they saw the city, a massive, sprawling expanse. It reminded him vaguely of Paris as he urged his horse onward, towards the gate.

The city walls seemed to rush up to meet him as the horse galloped onward, further, further. Cries of alarm came from the watch towers of the city as the line approached, narrowing to meet the gate. They came on at a charge just as the men tried to close the gates. A few of the riders behind Clovis managed to loose an arrow or two from horseback, and he had to commend them. It gave them a little time, and they might just make it–

No, the gates closed. He reigned up on the horse and tossed his firebrand with the full power of his arm. It landed atop the wooden guard tower that loomed over the gate and set it alight in ten seconds. Cheering, his men threw their own firebrands, and soon the whole gatehouse was alight.

The gates remained closed, however, and there was little they could do to stop it, until suddenly Clovis remembered something he had read in a book, and turned back to his cavalry as they stood, watching impatiently.

“Men! I remember from a book long ago that the charge of a thousand cavalry could scatter the walls of even ancient Babylon before them! This gate is not nearly so thick, and it is weakened by fire! I ask you to follow me once more, and break into the city!”

They cheered, and with a great roar the men galloped up to meet the gate. Horses rearing, they pounded at the gate with their iron shod hooves even as the men hacked at it with their swords and axes. The gates splintered and then shattered, and the horde of cavalry burst into the city. Marching to meet them were what he took for the city guard, a few hundred men wearing mail armor, roman helmets, and carrying pikes.

“Carolus, take your men to the right and find a side street to outflank them. The rest of you, stay here with me!”

A large contingent of cavalry broke off and rode off to their right as the rest of the cavalry watched with some trepidation at the advancing pikes.

“To hell with that!” Clovis suddenly shouted. “Dismount and attack on foot!”

Following his own words, he neatly leapt off the horse, and brandishing his axe, he led the charge to attack the pike line on foot. The Franks used their large shields to glance off the pike blows, and slipping in between the separate pikes in the phalanx, they charged up to the pike men. The pikes, to their credit, were brave, they kept the pikes up and tried to maintain the wall, but it was all in vain as they were cut down. Clovis’ axe soon was dripping with blood, and his chest was splattered with it, though none of it his.

The pikes were finally demolished as Carolus brought his riders up around behind the pikes, and the Franks now ran back to their horses, mounting again just as the infantry reached the gate and began to pour into the city themselves. Now the entire Frankish army ran amok in the city, pillaging and plundering. Clovis lost count of how many he slew as he ran about, killing all that resisted. He needed no plunder, so he didn’t bother to take much. A few gold amulets from the various people he slaughtered, nothing more. By high noon the entire city was in Frankish hands, and was now the subject of a ferocious sack.

Clovis, again, took little part, riding around the city to see how it was progressing. For the most part the Frankish soldiers did not seem to be too cruel, but he knew that to the inhabitants, they must seem like hell on Earth. Hell on Earth...

While he rode, his thoughts turned, like they often did these days, to hellfire and damnation. Suddenly he felt an enormous sympathy for these peoples. Gods, I might as well be a Christian!, he thought derisively, trying to suppress the feeling.

But at the sight of a young women who was being tossed about by Frankish soldiers, who were shouting cruel taunts and threats at her, who, indeed seemed on the verge of rape, he broke.

“Men, stop that, immediately!”

They looked around hesitantly, and started. Yes, my liege, sorry, my liege, they babble at him, and retreated off to find somewhere else to burn. The women looked up at him with searching, intelligent green eyes. From that moment, he knew, he was in love.

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OOC: Hope you liked. More later, probably tomorrow. :coffee:
 
Interesting. Different heirs for Clovis?
 
Not quite, but close. This is more of a speculation on what would have happened if there was a great conquerer where there was none in OTL...
 
Chapter I: Intrigue in Toulouse (515 CE)

The sun glinted off of his helm, and he basked in the light even as he raised shield and sword protectively to ward off any blows of his opponent. His opponent shielded his eyes; William, seizing the opportunity, rushed forth with a flurry of blows. The sword danced in his hand, left, right, above and down, feinting and parrying, slashing and jabbing, until Gaiseric, his opponent, fell down into the mud of the practice yard.

“I yield,” Gaiseric choked out as William smiled in humor.

“So the Bastard’s won another match, has he?” a voice came from behind him. He whirled, looking around the yard.

“Who said that?” he asked, eyes flashing with anger.

“I did.” The man who stood in front of him was none other than Amalaric, King of the Visigoths.

“Sir,” he said tersely.

Another warrior turned at this and yelled at him, “You will speak with more respect to your true king!” aiming a blow at William’s shoulder. His own sword flashed up, quicker than an eye could blink, meeting it, and throwing the offending brute back a few paces.

“Silence!” Amalaric called. “You two will not feud. William is disrespectful, yes, but I am not his true liege. His lot is with the Franks... Whichever king you now claim allegiance to,” he said, smiling mockingly.

William seethed internally. “I–”

“Do not believe they ought to be separate?” the king interrupted. “Oh, I know your sentiment. An odd custom, those Franks have, dividing the empire up.” Examining his fingernails, the king continued, “But quite useful to us, no doubt. I have no Frankish king to worry about. Four is, in this case, less than one. A shame that they couldn’t have let you inherit the throne, no? But then, you weren’t his eldest, let alone legitimate.”

William nearly snarled at the king. He knew that the king hated bastards, aye, just because he was a child, a bastard ruled his kingdom for almost twenty years. That was understandable. But why did he have to rub salt in William’s wound for it?

“But on you will go winning battles, no doubt, my bastard Lord, and wether or not you are legitimate or not, wether or not you are a Frank or not, I will still make use of you. There have been disputes with Basque farmers on the frontiers of the realm about taxes and some such. I will send you to entreat with them.”

William’s anger disappeared, replaced only by curiosity.

“You would have a hostage–a bastard Frankish hostage–be your diplomat?”

Amalaric smiled. “It is an assignment to... let us say... prove your loyalties. I know you bear no love for your brothers, and as it were, you have no use as a hostage anymore, like it or not. They will not shy away from attacking the Visigoths just because their half brother resides there clashing swords...” The king trailed off, looking around at the men in the practice yard, who were staring at them. “Men, get back to your training. William, go to my study as soon as you change out of that damned armor. It stinks.”

William left the practice yard, some of the men sniggering at him. He heard more than a few muttered “Bastard Lord”’s behind his back, but he did not turn. He was genuinely intrigued by the hints that Amalaric had given him.

In a few minutes, the mail, helm, and sword had been given to a trusty servant, and, dressed in more suitable attire to address a king, he entered the palace. A few guards waved him through, doubtless they were told he was coming, and he set off to the study, not really paying attention where his feet went.

What would Amalaric want with him? The king had always hated bastards, so he felt a lordship was out of the question. Besides, there was the issue of his religion as well. He sighed. He did not belong here.

Clovis had been shrewd, he could not deny that much. What better way to secure peace with the Visigoths than an exchange of hostages, especially one that he didn’t particularly care much about. His half brothers had all jeered at him in private on the day of his leaving, of course. They had hated him, especially the youngest, Clotaire, who was just half a year older than him. They hated being associated with each other, as the older brothers had been apt to do. The oddest thing of all was that even to the day he left forever, Clovis never told him who his mother was.

And now, in the Visigoth court, where he had been for eight years, still an outcast, still shunned. They were all Arians around here, they practiced some bastard version of Christianity that denied the divinity of Christ, even! Their Latin was nonexistent, and sometimes William wondered how they ruled their subjects with such a different culture. It was as if the head of a snake had been sewn on the body of a cat.

But somehow the Visigoths had persevered, and he had grown to manhood in this “court” of theirs, never really a part of it. He ate alone, slept alone, and even prayed in a common shrine on the outskirts of the city, where the rest of the men here prayed in the palace.

Suddenly he found himself walking nearly past the door to the study. Starting, he fell back slightly, and knocked thrice before opening the door. Amalaric sat at his desk, scribbling a note. The king looked up. His was a young face, lined by years of waiting. It struck William how the king was about as old as he. Amalaric had always tried to assume the position of older brother, just because of his position of birth.

“Well. I suppose you wonder why, exactly, I wanted you for this mission?”

William nodded mutely.

“It is a queer thing, this kingdom of mine. Their people are strange to me. They speak a different language. They pray to a different god. One might even wonder why they call me king. Do not you?”

“I was contemplating that myself, sir.”

Amalaric smiled. “At least you’re honest. Half of the fools in this court are exaggerating the truth to flatter me, the other half are outright lying. But that’s not the problem I was discussing. Now, the problem we have is much more grave. I have no common ground with these people of my realm.

“However, you were raised a Frank. You are a god fearing Catholic, you speak Latin as well as any native born tongue. You have a head for figures, and yet a mind for battle at the same time, and an arm for a sword. There are some assets which are better not to be wasted. You, William, are one of those.” He smiled.

William forced a smile of his own. A tool, was he? “I am pleased that you think so, my king.”

“I have been contemplating the problem of the realm for many a day. And I have come to a conclusion. William, I will make you a Chamberlain of the Roman type. You will speak with the authority of the king and rally the loyalties of the realm. You will be a great man, and history will remember you.”

“As a footnote.”

“Yes, as a footnote. But it would be better to die as the right hand of a great king than in the mud of the practice yard of one, or on some field of battle against your own brothers as a common warrior, surely?”

“It would,” he admitted.

“Exactly. And it would serve me as well to make you Chamberlain, no? But I must know that you are loyal. I must know that you serve the king. And the right king, mind you, not one of those damned brothers of yours.” The kings eyes gleamed with pride at his own perceived intelligence, so much so that William barely stifled a laugh in a thick cough. “Thus, I send you on this. Prove to me you are worthy... And I might give you not only a lordship, but legitimize you as well.”

Now William raised an eyebrow. “I shall consider my options...” he said, weighing his options. It would be good to get the good favor of the Basques... “And I shall consider them in the saddle, on my way to Bilbao.”

The king nearly grinned. “Excellent! I shall give you 20 loyal retainers of mine, and you shall be off on the morrow... With some local official who I gather knows the situation in detail. He speaks Latin, as it were. You are dismissed.” The king returned to his letter, smiling.

William left, smiling for a very different reason.

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The Visgoths, eh? I don't really think even a great conqueror could save them. Unless he wins the annual civil war big time, ofcourse... When we "get variants", as a Russian althist writer once remarked.
 
das: I think you'll see, and most likely nitpick the finished product. But you will see, in any case. :p
 
I remember reading a story where the Visgoths up and rebuild the Western Roman Empire, then break apart, then get reunited again only to lose in circa 16th century to the Saxon rebels (the North German ones), as they bought firearms from the Mongols. The Saxons get independance and burn down the Visgoth capital (which was on the Rhine, in the center of the new empire), throwing the empire into anarchy. No clear PoD was given.

Perhaps this is it.

NESers among you: Stats have finally arrived in StNNESIV.

Hey, thanks!
 
NK

Please keep going. Almost any tribe, nation, clan, sept or gang, given the right PoD, can rise to greatness. Even with his nitpicking, das may admit this - otherwise there would be no alternate histories! Besides, I'm enjoying the tale.
 
I think nitpicking destroyed more than a few of my ideas in the Alternate Histories NES thread a month ago.

This looks pretty good! A story is always better than a turnlog, and there are a lot of those in these forums. Dachspmg likes...
 
Dachspmg said:
I think nitpicking destroyed more than a few of my ideas in the Alternate Histories NES thread a month ago.

This looks pretty good! A story is always better than a turnlog, and there are a lot of those in these forums. Dachspmg likes...

Those weren't nitpicking, xen had good points against ur germany no restricted sub warfare.

North king, if this ends up like ur other neses, ur head will roll on the ground before long by angry polar bears...
 
alex994 said:
Those weren't nitpicking, xen had good points against ur germany no restricted sub warfare.
Wrong idea...

Take your time NK, don't want this to die!
 
Please continue.
Almost any tribe, nation, clan, sept or gang

Please write up a realistic scenario for Luorovettlan as a great power, barring extreme geographical change after which it just won't be Luorovettlan. ;)
 
Yeah. I'm just plotting out the next chapter, having abandoned two ideas of how to tell it. I know what's going to happen, I just don't know quite how to describe it without being cliche or boring.
 
OOC: Late, aren't I? Sorry about that.

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It had only taken a day for them to start to ride off, and now William was another day into the ride, making hard and fast for Bilbao. Well, not Bilbao, his guide had informed him. The king was very wrong on that count... This was a local border dispute, and powerful though the Basques in that city were, they did not rule the ones near the Visigoth border.

They had already passed the nominal border into Basque country, however, they were not truly in the land. The guide informed him that he would know. The land would be different at its very heart... and it was, as he passed into it late that evening.

They had just reached the crest of a yellow grassed hill, and sprawled before them was a green, beautiful, rugged valley, a tributary to the Ebro splashing merrily at its nadir. It... felt different, he couldn’t really say why. Perhaps it was that it was green compared to the dust of Spain. Lush, in a way. Forested. Green. He laughed at the repetition of thoughts inside his very own head.

The retainers looked at him oddly, those who were close enough to hear him. Though those who knew him well were rolling their eyes, not staring in puzzlement... He talked to himself far too often for them to notice much anymore. He turned in his saddle to the guide.

“When should we get to the clan?”

The guide shrugged. “Hard to say exactly where the clans reside. But we’ll know–”

A shout interrupted them.

“Cuidado!” Then, “Strigo!”

William paused, ironically doing what they had requested. “That was Euskara... Then Latin,” he said under his breath. “Basques.”

“Hail!” he called out in Latin. “Any of you lot speak Latin?” of course it was a wasted question if none of them didn’t... and then he snorted when he remembered their second greeting had been in Latin. Of course they spoke Latin.

“Certainly!” a shout came back. “Do you take us for barbarians?”

A look around at his men said they, at least, did. But he was more polite than that. “No,” he called. “We’re here to resolve a boundary dispute with a certain chief of yours.”

“So you are, eh?” the man switched to Euskara. “Cursed Visigoths.”

William smiled. “Can you lead us to the chief?”

“Aye that we can”, the man said, stepping out of the bushes to the side of the road. He was dressed as a warrior, but there was no hint of barbarism about him. “If you’ll just follow us, then you’ll be there in no time. Might want to dismount, though, rather hard to ride up some of these slopes.”

Grumbling, his men did so. William himself had no complaint, he was sick of his horse.

The company followed the little party of Basques, each making jokes in their respective native tongues so as not to insult the other. William, of course, understood both sides... And from the look on the Basque party’s leader, he did too, but was taking it rather worse. Fortunately, it all passed without incident, and after ascending a rocky slope to climb to a town nearly hidden by forests, both parties were too tired to be insulting each other much.

The Basque party leader squinted up ahead. “Hail! Get Henri, we have some Visigoths for him to meet!” he said in Euskara. A few men in the red roofed village stirred.

A man, William presumed him to be Henri, stepped out of the village. He looked more than enough battle worn, with a large scar slanting across his right cheek, and wore a short sword from his right hip. His stance proclaimed he knew how to use it, as well.

William left his horse with an attendant, and walked up to meet him. “I’m the Visigothic ambassador.” He noted that Henri’s eyebrows raised slightly at his Latin. “I’ve come to treat over this border dispute...”

“Indeed,” the man said in a deep voice. “Please come into my tent. Albert, some wine, please!” He smiled. “We just traded for some excellent wine, I’m pleased to tell you.” They passed beneath the open door and into the house, where a small fire was rumbling next to a few plain wooden chairs. “Please sit down.”

William handed the chief a letter. “I am right in assuming you can read?” he asked, seating himself.

“Of course. We aren’t barbarians...” the chief muttered. Suddenly, though, the chief glared at the letter, and looked up, squinting at William. “Who are you?”

“William Martell.”

The chief nodded, and then abruptly drew his short sword. “So this is your little plot, eh? Well, a shame I’m going to kill you before you can execute it.”

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Amalaric laughed to himself as he ate at a royal feast that night. Sending away the Frank had been one of his better notions; sending him away with a letter that proclaimed his guilt to the world was one of his best notions. No longer would the arrogant, ambitious Frank try to annoy him, no longer would he be a potential claimant to any throne, let alone the Frankish.

He was so busy congratulating himself that he didn’t notice the messenger for a couple of minutes. When he finally looked up, he raised an eyebrow in surprise.

“So the Bastard of Clovis is dead? Is that the news you bring?”

“No sir. Something else.”

“Well, spit it out, then.”

“Sir...”

“Don’t Sir me, get to the bloody point.”

“Aye, s–my liege. Rather bad news, my liege.”

“Bad news, so I gathered. If you don’t tell me soon, I’ll have your head.”

“Aye, sir. It is... The Basques... The mountain clans have raised a new flag, the red flag of rebellion sire.”

“Damn them. Did the assassination go well, in any case?”

“There is another rumor, sire. The Basques... swear allegiance to a William, Bastard of Clovis.”
 
The plot thickens. I wonder what happened to that chief...
 
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