thomas.berubeg
Wandering the World
not at all! seems very good.
and they're all in the stories thread.
and they're all in the stories thread.
not at all! seems very good.
and they're all in the stories thread.
Elizabeth, the daughter, knows nothing of the One, or the Lunnotar. All Cassiel told her is that the gods heavens aren't the True Heaven, but besides that told nothing about the One, that the Lunnotar are correct, or how (or if) true heaven could be opened. In that same line, he said that people had to improve what they had.I dont have the exact quote, but IIRC, Goodreau's daughter says something along the lines of that they will be together when the One comes. This, plus that being the ONLY thing written with Goodreau, makes me wonder exactly how far he will stick to Cassiel's Agnosticism and how far he, as an individual, is willing to go and how much he is willing to stake on being reunited with his daughter.
Veil Worshippers, and priesthoods in general, are representatives of their deities. It is accurate to say Goodreau lost Elizabeth to the gods, because that is exactly who and why she was sacrificed to and for. Elizabeth died because of religion, which is exactly what people flock to the Grigori for.Remember that his daughter was not killed by the gods- She was killed by a Veil Worshiper during a ritual sacrifice. Goodreau, as an individual, understands the dangers of the religious fanaticism, but his duty as a father is one of the overriding character traits I wish to exemplify. He was/is Bannor, after all. As for following gods, the very presence of the Luonnotar UU (Replacing the Druid) is representative of some sort of widespread cult in the Grigori lands that substantiates some sort of religious activity (Nevermind that the Cult of the Luonnotar doesnt ACTUALLY know about the Luonnotar, but rather guessed at his existence).
That's a play mechanic argument, not a lore argument. And lore wise, it's off: you're making positions based on player knowledge, not character knowledge.Nevermind that the Grigori have a glaring flaw in their current status (which could be changed) between lore and gameplay- Cassiel, a supposed philosopher and mediator, has access to the earliest and the most powerful heroes in the game if used correctly. For a Civ that starts the game running Pacifisim, that strikes me as a bit odd.
I specifically made a point of using collective, not absolute, description. As a people, the Grigori are agnostic. As a government, the Grigori are agnostic. Individual Grigori adopt religion, but they aren't allowed to press it to others, and the government can't support it at all. That's not even a Cassiel thing, it's a Grigori one. Magist C. has written about it around here somewhere.Speaking of which, you're also a little bit off in your idea of the Grigori. While they are by and large an Agnostic and Godless people, religions can spread to their cities, and in the lore, there is nothing saying that the Grigori DONT practice religions on an individual basis. And remember that this is all under Cassiel- not Goodreau.
The solution to that would be to restore the ability of Lunnotar to build the Altar themselves, like they used to. That makes a very handy solution, and I can't even remember why they took it away in the first place. Make that part of Goodreau's unique trait, even, and bam.Under Cassiel, there is a clear basis for not practicing religions openly, but what if the Grigori were under Goodreau? They still retain their agnosticism, there is nothing forcing the player to build the Temple of the Luonnotar, and there is nothing making the National Wonder that effective. The whole purpose is to give a way for the Grigori access to the Altar Victory, something which makes sense considering the Luonnotar's presence in Grigori lands.
I disagree about what I disagree with, and think you're wrong about what I've already said. Nothing more, nothing less, and to be honest there isn't much less we could be differing on in regards to your proposal.Goodreau's funding of the Luonnotar in the lore is a choice that I didnt take lightly, since I effectively have to write the next chapter in his story, and still be truthful to the original character. I wrote him significantly after the point where he joins the Grigori, and I also wrote him as an individual that funds many independent entrepreneurs, whether they be adventurers, business owners, artist, or researchers. But I have to think from a gameplay perspective as well as a lore perspective- They have Cassiel, the Agnostic Philosopher, Esirce, the Tolerant Mediator, and then there is Goodreau, who was Financial, and is being replaced with a better version that focuses on the Grigori Adventurer Mechanic, but also gives the player the option to go the builder route as well. Its the same way why the Grigori arent blocked from the Theocracy Civic- its a concious decision to do this by the player and I want to give them that option [the Altar Victory] earlier.
Elizabeth, the daughter, knows nothing of the One, or the Lunnotar. All Cassiel told her is that the gods heavens aren't the True Heaven, but besides that told nothing about the One, that the Lunnotar are correct, or how (or if) true heaven could be opened. In that same line, he said that people had to improve what they had.
In the Cassiel pedia entry, Goodreau (Tamur) comes before Cassiel, completely renouncing the Bannor and religion that neither protected his daughter or comforted him after, and pledged to do all he could to help Cassiel. He doesn't go "I want my daughter back," or any stated or implied goals of bringing her back to life, but ends the pedia entry with his daughter telling him to follow Cassiel's creed.
At no point does Goodreau hear about the One, the Lunnotar, or the Alter, as any means to reunite with Elizabeth in his life time.
Veil Worshippers, and priesthoods in general, are representatives of their deities. It is accurate to say Goodreau lost Elizabeth to the gods, because that is exactly who and why she was sacrificed to and for. Elizabeth died because of religion, which is exactly what people flock to the Grigori for.
The Lunnotar are an immigrant group as much as a cult, and a fairly close-knit one; the historical analogy would be jews, who were always distinct and for whom conversions into the group were not historically common*. The Lunnotar are treated the same as any other religion, pagan or otherwise, and while this provides the same protections (which is why they come to the Grigori) it also entails the same restrictions (no government funding of a temple or organized conversions, as MC once put it). A government subsidy for the Lunnotar violates one of the basic principles of the Grigori government.
*In the Grigori lands, the pressures against organized religion and prostelyzing would apply to the Lunnotar as well.
If anywhere in the lore proves that religions simply dont exist in Grigori lands and dont spread at all, then I'll let it fall. But its hard to imagine that there isnt the occasional temple that exists somewhere. Goodreau isnt proclaiming a theocracy or advocating a state religion, he is simply funding the creation of a temple from out of his own personal funds.Goodreau's Pedia Entry said:However, I am a merchant, and I see an opportunity here. Ill give you a chance to spread your faith amongst the people as I have let all religions do so, and you will have a stipend to construct a temple in Midgar. But hear me well- we are no theocracy.
That's a play mechanic argument, not a lore argument. And lore wise, it's off: you're making positions based on player knowledge, not character knowledge.
See above as to why this is not true.Your defense rests on that Goodreau would single out and support the religion of the Lunnotar because they are correct about the One, can build the Altar of Lunnotar, which will then bring back the One which will allow Goodreau to reunite with his daughter, which is his overriding objective because he's a Bannor family man.
Except...
-Goodreau wouldn't have reason to know/suspect the Lunnotar to be anything but another cult who's prayers are never answered. The Lunnotar are never mentioned as being exceptional except by accident, which he wouldn't know.
-Government/governors supporting any religion, subsidy or otherwise, goes against Grigori, not just Cassiel, lore. Individuals can do so, but the government doesn't. That's why it's agnostic.
I am well aware of this. But at this point, I can only reffer you to my arguements I've already made. This Goodreau is not the same Goodreau as before, there has been a LONG period of time since he met with Cassiel. People, and characters, are not static elements. They can change with time, and I think I've accomplished portraying that growth.-The Altar of Lunnotar can no more claim to be able to deliver than any other of the World Wonders before they are made. Goodreau isn't a player who can look at the Civlopedia, see 'wow, this will bring the One into creation, thus allowing me to reunite with my daughter in life.' He can no more do that than other leaders could plan to build the Tower of Mastery before it was actually possible. You can't forward plan off of a tech tree you can't see.
Admittedly, using "He's a Bannor" was a rather stupid arguement. But keep in mind that he is still a Father. The concept of a family differs little between the Bannor and the Grigori, and that is something that I dont think will change. One does not simply stop loving their children because they change nationality.-Goodreau openly turns his back on who he was as a Bannor. It's part of casting aside Timur in the first place and becoming Goodreau. He came to Cassiel to help, knowing Cassiel and the Grigori, not the other way around.
I specifically made a point of using collective, not absolute, description. As a people, the Grigori are agnostic. As a government, the Grigori are agnostic. Individual Grigori adopt religion, but they aren't allowed to press it to others, and the government can't support it at all. That's not even a Cassiel thing, it's a Grigori one. Magist C. has written about it around here somewhere.
That's why I suggested changing the wording so that Goodreau himself would donate his own money on his own behalf for anything. That would be him as an individual, that would work well as a leader trait, and it would neatly sidestep most of the problems I see and go back to the gameplay arguments (about whether they need a new building in general, a replacement for an already existing one, or just a leader trait).
IIRC, it was removed because the Luonnotar could build ALL the levels of the altar, where everyone else had to wait for Great Prophets to do so.The solution to that would be to restore the ability of Lunnotar to build the Altar themselves, like they used to. That makes a very handy solution, and I can't even remember why they took it away in the first place. Make that part of Goodreau's unique trait, even, and bam.
My objection is there being any basis for Goodreau to support the Lunnotar as a ruler of the Grigori, let alone being reflected like that. On a lore standpoint, I also question the basis for any assumption for Goodreau returning to good old-fashioned religion after religion is what drove him to the Grigori in the first place.
In Erebus, if you want a religion of good that opposes evil, whether vengance or otherwise, you have them. If you want to meet dead family, you can do that too (whether dark arts or simply dying yourself).
And if you want to build the Altar of the Lunnotar, any religion can do that.
I'm not replacing a building, I'm adding an entirely new, optional, national wonder. The original plan was to replace a building with an exact replica of the Museum. The only change is that it would give it a Priest Slot as well. This idea has been changed to be a National Wonder that replaces no buildings and is completely optional.But the Lunnotar don't really have anything in particular to offer. The One doesn't offer prayers, it's not good for the life expectancy in general, and the only benefit is that other gods won't touch you, which really isn't the matter in question.
In short, I just don't see any reason why Goodreau would/should get a unique priest option at all in the context of being a Grigori leader.
I disagree about what I disagree with, and think you're wrong about what I've already said. Nothing more, nothing less, and to be honest there isn't much less we could be differing on in regards to your proposal.
I think meritocracy is a great idea. A Adventurer-centered leader would be cool. Overall, I like what you've done. I even think you could go for more. I just don't think replacing a unique building for a leader-specific unique building with a priest slot with your justification is good enough.
Your objection has been to a good portion of the character and concept, which would require me to re-write the pedia entry (for a third time) to reflect the more adventurer-based aspects so that it leaves out the Luonnotar but still reflects Goodreau's personae. If he doesnt have this building, why did he meet with the Luonnotar in the first place? Half the pedia entry is gone right then and there.So my objection to this point has been... a proposed unique building and half a sentance in your proposed civlopedia entry? Sounds about right.
Don't you love how pages and pages of text can be simplified into a single, irreverent reply?On a side note, I love how one simple thing can generate pages and pages of text.
Is this project still coming along or has it been dropped?