CurtSibling
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Chukchi Husky, that is very neat and cool - I dare you to put some colour on him!
Drawing a little... again!
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In my recent comicing efforts for DYOS, I've found myself running up against some problems with drawing eyes. I'm trying to keep the faces in a very light, cartoonish style, but taking the eyes down to a single line or dot leaves the face too empty, and making a normaly shaped eye with a defined pupil often takes too much room. Also, with things so small, it's hard to get much expression out of just the shape of the eye, but if I work in a set of eyebrows then things get cluttered again. 
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Here's more of my sketches from the fantasy story I'm writing... or trying.
Its a oricsh warrior, genetically engineered with warlock arts - half human and half demon.
(ignore the feets, I forgot to finish them.
Oh, and forgive me for the akward pose and the hidious scanning job)
Its a oricsh warrior, genetically engineered with warlock arts - half human and half demon.
(ignore the feets, I forgot to finish them.
Oh, and forgive me for the akward pose and the hidious scanning job)Attachments
Chukchi Husky
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CurtSibling
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Interesting evolution there, Chukchi!
I like drawing anthro characters too, on occasion.
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I like drawing anthro characters too, on occasion.
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Rheinmetall
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Chukchi & Curt.
Yuri2356
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And once again...
BEHOLD!
To be shaded, coulourized, and Jazzed up in the Near future.
BEHOLD!
Spoiler :
To be shaded, coulourized, and Jazzed up in the Near future.
Rheinmetall
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If you don't mind, I could take a stab at coloring him.
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Bah, nothing new coming from me. I'm just not in the mood for drawing.
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The cyberman image is totally awesome!
(good song too)
(good song too)
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Go ahead and take a shot, if you want to. Just don't try to claim him as your own.
Cheers!CurtSibling said:The cyberman image is totally awesome!
(good song too)
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Hey Yuri
Cyberman is ok, it has imo some good points, but if you want some critisism as well:
-There is no central point of focus; all the lines are of the same density more or less, according to their nature (more defining ones, more detailed ones, intermediate etc). This makes the drawing a bit lifeless, or at any rate less lively than it could have been. The guitar, again, struggles for the same focus than the rest.
-Depth (perpective creation) is not at its finest. The legs could be placed almost in different positions, with the left one infront of the right, and it still would look relatively the same (you obviously mean to have the right leg - i mean the right from the observer's point of view- infront of the left, but the left leg is not sunk in space that much).
The torso is too flat. This makes it 2d, and does not help with perspective.
ps: i am not a painter, so i am not comparing work. Im sure you draw a lot better than me. I mean this as potentially beneficial critique
-I do not know the song, so i cannot make any comment about it
Cyberman is ok, it has imo some good points, but if you want some critisism as well:
-There is no central point of focus; all the lines are of the same density more or less, according to their nature (more defining ones, more detailed ones, intermediate etc). This makes the drawing a bit lifeless, or at any rate less lively than it could have been. The guitar, again, struggles for the same focus than the rest.
-Depth (perpective creation) is not at its finest. The legs could be placed almost in different positions, with the left one infront of the right, and it still would look relatively the same (you obviously mean to have the right leg - i mean the right from the observer's point of view- infront of the left, but the left leg is not sunk in space that much).
The torso is too flat. This makes it 2d, and does not help with perspective.
ps: i am not a painter, so i am not comparing work. Im sure you draw a lot better than me. I mean this as potentially beneficial critique
-I do not know the song, so i cannot make any comment about it
Yuri2356
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Hey Yuri
Cyberman is ok, it has imo some good points, but if you want some critisism as well:
-There is no central point of focus; all the lines are of the same density more or less, according to their nature (more defining ones, more detailed ones, intermediate etc). This makes the drawing a bit lifeless, or at any rate less lively than it could have been. The guitar, again, struggles for the same focus than the rest.
-Depth (perpective creation) is not at its finest. The legs could be placed almost in different positions, with the left one infront of the right, and it still would look relatively the same (you obviously mean to have the right leg - i mean the right from the observer's point of view- infront of the left, but the left leg is not sunk in space that much).
The torso is too flat. This makes it 2d, and does not help with perspective.
ps: i am not a painter, so i am not comparing work. Im sure you draw a lot better than me. I mean this as potentially beneficial critique
-I do not know the song, so i cannot make any comment about it
Thanks for the comments. Most of this should be corrected once the shading and colour is applied, I just put that one out because it was 1AM and was just so satisfied with how well the base had turned out.
As to the song - [wiki]Iron Man (song)[/wiki]
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Semi-new image, as seen on my Myspace account...
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A little self-portrait!
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