EltNESIII: Some Assembly Required

Johvi was surrounded, the Warlord, his apprentice General Goruk, they stand outside the feeble walls and holler.

“Charge again!” they shout, and the other Generals know better, it is a waiting game now, not a race to death, their warbands stay back.

Arrows fly into the charging warband from inside the city, feeble or no, the walls are working, Stoney warriors charge into the field against the Warlord’s lonely line.

Within the warband there is panic, total confusion, and a distinct feeling of abandonment, of being overextended. Panicked dogs flee the field, hard copper clubs bash skulls, sharp copper blades slash skin.

An arrow flies across the field.

A though taken by destiny the battle seems at once to stop and mark it’s course, fast and true, all combatants turn at once to see the arrow fly.

Into the Warlord’s heart.

He shudders, almost as though he will continue the battle unfazed, as though he could not accept defeat in any way shape or form. But these hopes are soon extinguished, Goruk grabs the Axe where it falls.

Mercy is for the Weak.

These Stoneys shall learn that much, Goruk swears it.

Goruk calls the retreat, and his warband runs back towards the line like a pack of frightened mongrels.

On the field, the Alpha male sinks into the mud.
 
Against the sea the town stood, and the salty air blew the Druids long hair as he stood before the crowd. They had gathered as he had entered the town, from the fields all the people came standing before the hall. The rising wind seemed to call to them, the stranger before them with the wolf skin helm smiled and raised his arms in a gesture of greeting and friendship that was familiar to them.

“I have been sent by the Great Druid to convey the will of the Spirits” his dialect was different but the language was familiar to them this stranger spoke their native tongue. They were moved by his words, they worshiped the spirits of nature as well, it was soon apparent that this stranger wasn’t very strange at all. The Druid leaders of the people did not become high priests without certain skills, the ability to sweep crowds into frenzy with their words was crucial to the Druids. Before long the people of the village began to clamor their agreement to his words, he explained that all the villages who were the true people of the Spirits were being invited to a council.

His words hinted that the Druids had been sent to decide if villages were blessed by the spirits and he would soon decide if they were to be invited. In a frenzy the villagers made their desire to join the great Council clear, the Druid smiled and again raised his arms. The crowd cheered for him and took up the cry “To the Council!” The chief of the village, an elder wise with years but still strong, stepped forward and was met with demands from his people, “To the Council!” they shouted.

“Peace friends” silence fell at the Druids words. “It gives me great pleasure to officially invite you” he said addressing the Elder “to the great Council, the spirits have told the Great Druid of a holy place on the ethereal plains near Larkhill.” The crowd cheered again, it was clear to the Druid that whatever the chief said the people of the village would accompany him to the Council.

“Druid we will follow you to hear the words of the Great Druid and the will of the Spirits,” the village elder said. This had been easier than he thought it would be, the people of this village at least would come to the Council.

Before nightfall the people of the ‘Village by the sea’ took up their hammers and their staves and joined the Druid on the long march back to the encampment. His red and black patterned kilt and sash, a family crest, impressed the people of the village. The cloth’s fantastic dye and patterning showed skills that some of the villagers hoped to learn from the people of Druidia.

Across the Isle the Druids sought out the villages of the native people, all those who sought the will of the Spirits. The Druids speak with the voice of the Spirits and their words easily more the hearts and minds of lesser men. Crowds who hear them speak often swear that the winds whispered their words the waves echo their voices and the birds sing to accompany them. They would need to use all their skill to convince the strong leaders and the elders of the Isle to come far from home to meet with strangers. It was up to them to bring the people to the Council, could they do it?

Only the Spirits knew.
 
Remember, orders due in roughly 58 hours. I'm liking the stories, guys. To those I owe PMs: Tonight, after I get home for good.
 
The generals were arrayed around a capfire, outside of Johvi, far from those battered walls.

“Gurok,” one of them says, votes, one of the younger Generals.

The older General frowns at this, he cannot stand Goruk.

He looks to the apprentice already holding the Warlord’s axe.

The fallen Warlord’s axe.

Cocky, stupid prick.

“Aud,” he says.

The whole council gasps, a name other than the apprentice, Goruk’s grip on the axe loosens for a moment, never before has a candidate for Warlord even had to vote, but he is worried that every precedent will be broken tonight.

“Aud,” says the next general, another of the older Generals, one of them who elected Busmuyek.

The generals are still shocked, looking from one to another, jaws slack.

“Goruk,” one of the younger Generals says, still holding on to a younger tradition, something that meant so much more to him than the older Generals.

All eyes on Skeepeyo, he blushes. Blushes! He cannot believe that he blushes here in front of all the Generals, he says nothing, embarrassed.

“Goruk!” Goruk himself charges forward shouting.

Gasps again, the Generals all look at each other as tradition is trampled here tonight.

Skeepeyo has regained his composure, though he is still shocked by what he has witnessed.

“Aud,” he says, of course Aud, how many times had she saved his life?

She smiles.

Aud, no… the Warlord, not Aud, never again Aud, reaches over to pry her Axe from Goruk’s hands.

“I will remain…” Goruk says, “The apprentice?”

Aud frowns, “I was hoping not, I was thinking of going in a different direction.”

His eyes start to bubble up… tears! The generals laugh at him, “Who then?” he shouts.

Out of the darkness, Skeepeyo the younger emerges.
 
A great circle began to form as the villagers began to set up encampments, 3 miles in diameter preserving the beauty of the ethereal plain. The first village that arrived were met in holy plain by the Great Druid, they were welcomed in the name of the sprits he raised his arms in an all too familiar sign of greeting. Their chieftain a gruff man with a broad chest went with the Great Druid to the heart of the plain and there they spoke of all that was soon to come to pass. The Great Druid tasked each elder or chieftain to create a name for their clan they must go to their people and choose a name that suited all concerned. Hide tents and lean tos were erected each in the fashion of the particular village they began to interact with the neighboring tribes immediately as they share religion and culture they were open to the strangers.

A stone of polished granite beautifully carved and deeply set in each were the runes onio, do, tri, and so on; was given as a gift to each village as they arrived. This stone was placed at the inner edge of each village’s territory and served as a ‘property line’ as well as a gift of such magnificence that the simple farmers of the villages were blown away. Each stone marker given to the arriving villages was engraved with a rune, the runes were symbols representing numerals, the first village was given the number one and their camp was set in the far east of the circle. Their understanding of language had not yet progressed to the written word and the runes engraved and cut deep in stones fueled the fire that already drove them to learn from the Druids. The stones were set in specially measured and dug divets in the deep green field, each placed at a precise location referencing the solar cycle, and each equidistant around the rim of the ever growing encampment.

In a fortnight there were more than a dozen different villages in the circle they began to seek out the masons and smiths of Druidia and sought to learn from them. The dyers and teachers were always followed by those whose thirst for knowledge could not be sated they yearned to learn to make the things of beauty and power that they craved. Not only from the Druids did they learn, knowledge flew like fire between the villages and clans who occupied the great circle, new tactics for farming, tools, and skills. The level of excitement grew as more villages arrived each day; the newcomers were willing to learn and moved by the power of the druids, as all were.

The Great Druid spoke with the chieftain or elder of each group as they arrived with great ceremony the gifts were presented, the stone and the greeting the people were impressed. To the chieftains the Great Druid said “Welcome Friends” raising his arms in a gesture that was familiar to all the peoples of the Isle, “Great deeds will you witness here, this holy place has been chosen by the Spirits.” As the stone was presented carried and set in the holes cut in the earth by four strong men, with grunts from the men and a loud thump the beautiful stone slid snugly into the earth.

“Great Druid” said the large elder his people cheering and dancing “We are honored by your gift and honored to have been invited to this great Council.”

Again the villagers cried “The Council!”

“Elder come and speak with me” the Great Druid said motioning to off across the ethereal plain.

In the weeks of gathering the Great Druid sent a scribe to each village in turn to teach at least one person from each village the runes for their clan names and other basic symbols. The concept of written word astounded most of the simple farmers and villagers of the Isle, they sought to learn. The Great Druid sent to each new clan those who sought to teach the art of dying and their style of weaving. The patterns that the Druidians were able to create mystified them and again filled them with a desire to learn the skills of the Druidian artisans. The Great Druid urged each village to design a tartan to represent them, a simple way of distinguishing from which village a man came.

The mirror of the sun came and went.

Sunrise, thick mist swirled in the morning light, through the mist came the Great Druid. He stopped by the carved stone set in the earth and called, the rune onio shone as the mist was burned away by the rising sun. Work was already in progress when the call came, Jaai elder of the Clan Aithne stepped forward and greeted the Great Druid. Across the plain the men came carrying a stone not the equal of the gift stone smaller and made of polished black granite. In the center of the clan camp they placed the stone still sitting on the carved log handles the Clan looked on as the Great Druid began to explain.

“This Stone” the Great Druid began in his usual booming voice “Is to be part of the Council!” he said indicating the black cube beside him, and the clansmen cheered. “Each stone will be engraved with the runes for their Clan name, and the placed in the holy plain.”

Again the clansmen cheered and clamored their ascent and delight for this second gift, and soon they were discussing the best way to engrave the stone. The great circle continued to fill until it consisted of tens of thousands of people, each village soon choose a Clan name and were each tasked in turn to engrave their stone with their clan name and return the stone to the Great Druid. Soon the stones began to be set in a close tight ring near the center of the great ethereal plain but unlike the gift stones they were set much deeper and were flush with the ground eventually creating a shining black stone circle a few hundred feet across. In the center of the circle wooden supports ropes and levers began to be piled stacked and lashed together making a few lattice wooden towers. The thousands of clansmen encamped around the plain saw these wooden towers in the center and wondered what they could be for?

Only the Spirits knew.
 
((OOC: Happy V-Day, lolz))

Johvi sat before the feet of the new Warlord.

“Have we cut off the rest of Stoney?” she asks Skipeeyo. He nods.

“They’re still getting food from the Norse,” he tells her.

She nods, “good,” she says.

He has a perplexed look, it asks the question for him.

“Let them waste it,” she answers.

All those worthless, broad, burly women, cooking, growing crops for their men. All the load bearing matrons that she just could not stand.

Raising children.

She despises them, the children, the mothers and fathers, all the happy little lives.

She turns back to the camp, and says to Skipeeyo, “Let it burn.”

The first torch arcs up above the walls.

A new Warlord begins her reign.
 
The excitement had reached a fever pitch, from the center of the black stone circle in the middle of the ethereal plain the encampment of the clans was an unbroken circle. Each lived peacefully with their neighbors, learning new skills, where before they were villagers they were all now proud clansmen. All the Druids had returned all the villages that would come had come, the Great Druid had worked tirelessly and now the time was near. The Spirits had smiled upon him he could not have imagined this day when the journey to this point began as he had stood on the cliff watching the winter festival.

In the holy plain the Great Druid stood watching as the preparations continued all around him even now. Here at the end, and the beginning, they had come to the death of the year this was the longest night of the year. The solstice, excitement ran through the camp like wildfire the word had gone out a week before, from clan to clan, friends and brothers spread the news, each man said to each other in fevered voices “the Council would soon begin!”

At midday the Druids went forth, each to the clan they had invited to the Council and to them they said, “Brothers, Friends the Council will begin at moonrise.” When the clansmen heard these words they began to sing and dance, traditional songs and rituals of the winter festival. “At dusk the Clans will gather in the center of the Holy Plain. May the Spirits guide us and show us the way!” then the Druids departed to their own people to prepare for the great Council.

Shadows grew long across the plain.

In the gathering darkness they came, a few at first those who could not wait and then more hundreds and thousands gathered on the ethereal plain. The wooden support structures stood in the center of the black stone circle. Each clan’s name engraved on one of the polished black stones set in the earth. In the plain there were pyres standing seven feet tall stacked logs soaked in oil, the anticipation was palpable the excitement electric, the spirits were in the air.

As the sun sank below the horizon drums began to beat from the rim of the circle and the masses of people parted as logs just wide enough to support the monolithic stones thundered across the plain. Each stone was moved by rolling it across the logs and each was accompanied by one of the Druids, they moved slowly, approaching the center of the circle. As the stones passed through the crowd the new clansmen stared in amazement, these stones were polished and identical they were like nothing the people had ever seen. The masses jumped in and began to help moving the giant stones; the pace quickened and before the last light had faded from the sky the stones had reached the center.

The Great Druid stood on a wooden platform, which stood with a deep hole at its base, as the last stone was moved into place sitting on their logs looking like the rays of the sun splayed out in a circle. The flames leapt up in the single pyre in the middle of the circle fifteen feet separated the flames from ring of wooden towers. The last stone came to a halt just below its support tower; each had a very deep identical hole at the foot, the Great Druid raised his arms and began to speak.

“Brothers, Friends,” The great Druid began, silence fell in the masses and he continued. “The Council will begin at moon rise, the Spirits smile upon our brotherhood. This holy place will be a temple to the Spirits; it will stand for all time!”

Workers sprang into action, ropes were thrown around the monoliths and tossed to other men who scampered up the wooden towers and soon they were calling “HEAVE!” A roar went up from the masses as the first of the incredible stones began slowly to rise from the earth and stand reaching for the heavens. They were set up in pairs, inside the black stone circle, before long the lever and pulley system began to function like clockwork and the large ring of stones began to take shape. As the work continued and the stones rose to stand like giants, marvels that the once simple villagers had never hoped to see, through the masses another procession of stones moved each identical, curved blocks of marvelously cut stone.

By the time the second procession reached the center of the singing and dancing masses the last of the enormous blocks had been set in place, workers packing the earth around the stones foundations placing support wedges and ensuring the precise measurements. Leavers were put in place, hundreds of men pulling together they strained calling “HO,” the first of the cap stones began to rise from the earth slowly to the heights of the towers. Once in place the master artisans took the place of the workers on the towers, working together to precisely position the cap stones to ensure the integrity of the temple. The cap stones each shared the giant monoliths, fitting together perfectly as they were slowly inched into a perfect unbroken circle. Thousands of people worked together and the work took place all around the circle at once, workers heaved the stones slowly from the cold ground and set them high above the earth on top of the tall pillars.

When the circle was complete ropes were thrown again around the cap stones and they were pulled inward, all pulled as one and the stones of the circle pulled tight a blade of grass could not slip between them. The stones made a huge impressive ring, even the Clansmen who had come all the way from the far north were astounded at the beauty and the power of the temple. As the ropes fell away more logs were piled on the great blaze in the center of the wooden support towers, the Great Druid once again climbed one of the towers, again raising his voice and silence fell.

“Friends, Brothers, the hour is near. The Spirits indeed smile upon our fellowship, this marvel which has been planned all this long year is the gift of the Druids to the Spirits and the Clans who belong to them.” He paused then raised his arms, “The festival will begin at moonrise!” He sat talking with his Druids as the time passed, before long he stood again calling out to all the people.

“The time is neigh, brothers friends, the moon rises.” he pointed and the people turned to see the shining white light peeking over the horizon. The masses roared and began to stomp their feet in their excitement “Let the Council begin!”

Flames leapt up in the pyres all around the plain the people began to dance and sing again wine was brought by servants and spits carrying roast pork, steak, and venison were brought and laid near the fires. The feast began and the revelry reached new heights, dancing wildly the many became one, singing the songs of ancient tradition and new songs praising the spirits and the druids. The Spirits were in the air, the people were drunk with excitement the wine flowed and the feast continued all night, the pinnacle of the festival was the beginning of the New Year at dawn. What would come with the rising of the sun?

Only the Spirits knew.
 
((Part two of the Wovvolken Valentines day double header))

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They met in captivity, he was quite taken by her eyes.

Deep brown eyes, pools as limitless as her caring soul, their vivacity was matched only by her luscious hair.

She was beautiful, her sturdy load bearing hips, and so kind, she always cared for the young, sought them out and nuzzled them, cradled them in her arms.

He so wanted to be the one to give her one of her own.

He ate his porridge at night, always as near to her as he could manage though it was not easy. She got a lot of attention from all the others, sniffing about her in a barbaric fashion.

She was too good for them, he knew, a refined female like that, she needed someone who understood the finer things. Could provide for her, do his equal share of work, the rest of them were just a bunch of lazy slobs. They would just ignore the young, leave everything to her to do. He would bring her porridge, drag her bucket all the way to her bed, anything she desired.

But he was always so silent around her, his own hair stood on ends, nervous, frightened.

Frightened! He was a brave male and never backed down from a confrontation, he had been in quite a few fights growing up, he had held his own, never panicked or backed down.

But she… she scared the hell out of him.

At the porridge line this night he is right next to her, his hair stands on edge again.

She smiles, almost laughs, looks right at him.

Looks right through him.

He blushes, if blushes is the right word, his cheeks kind of draw back in embarrassment and he brings his arm over his face, no words.

Now she does laugh, it comes out as loud barking, but he doesn’t mind, he dares to smile back.

And the days turn to weeks as they grow together, always near one another, always happy, smiling, bounding in the grass together.

On the morning of the winter solstice she gave birth to his first cub. The Thunder Gods roared their approval and a flock of owls, no mere ravens or geese, a whole flock of owls sat atop the bear stables until the evening, watching the newborn as it’s parents looked from the cub to the other, wide smiles on their snouts.

He would grow to be the father of all domesticated, civilized bears.
 
Boom.
The Drums reverberated all throughout the Gundi Valley. For the Day of Ceremony has
Boom.
The new Emperor Dasten Gras, was to be given the sacred and political powers by
Boom.
Both of the council of Kettic. And a new compact was to be proclaimed. A new age has
Boom.
And as thousands of the people of Kettic Arrived at the Imperial Palace, the Emperor accepts his
Boom.
And both the crown and the scepter gives him complete power over all of kettick.

It was a day of celebration, as was the day before that of mourning. The Drums kept their steady, unchanging beat up and down the River at different outposts of Kettick, as they all churn in the same beat. Thousands of peasants and city-lubbers alike arrived from the east beyond Zanari, their war ended by the news of a fair and just compact for all.

The new age has arrived.

For three more generations, the 'Big Four' as the master minds Mayors Urshan, Tuveon and Bishops Salheen and Fermost. Urshan soon became the Mayor of Zanari, and was refused other posts due to the ever growing size of the city. Tuveon became mayors of countless towns and villages beyond his hometown, now a small city in its own right in what became known as the Land of Copper. Salheen became the next High Theocrat, for once the bitter theocrat who has led the Religious advance and turmoil has died. He was declared holder of the divine spirit unanimously and unpolically. Fermost became the a religious diplomat, spreading the word of god past mountains and through rivers. Together, they elected four more emperors.

Kettick was entirely changed by their domination of politics. No longer are the leaders of every city and village 'Mayors'. The first mayor to rule over numerous Villages, Tuveon, declared himself a Pradganmart, a Supreme Governor, and declared the mayorial seats under him free for elections. The Religion of God spread even further as some priests urged their congragations to migrate away from kettick for new lands for political freedom, while others migrated closer for stability. Trade ensured as the river held more and more ships every day. Perhaps the Empire itself needs ships for trade and battle, but for now, each farmer and merchant will always have on hand a cart and a raft.

When Fermost finally died and ended the age of the Western Four, Kettick is a new country ready to march for all of Gundi.
 
For thousands of years they had celebrated this festival, some danced in the darkness some danced near the roaring fires soon it would be time only an hour remained, the druids lead the dance. The festival had been growing ever more frantic since the rising of the moon, and now the dawn approached. The Great Druid climbed the tower and began to speak from his perch above the seething masses, his booming voice rolling like thunder bringing silence to the previously uproarious crowd.

“Brothers friends, the hour approaches, we now come to the beginning of a new year; nay a new age is upon us, the Spirits have shown us the way. Behold” and the Great Druid raised a long staff above his head barely visible in the growing light; he snapped the stave in two saying. “One alone is weak” he put the two halves of the stick together, easier to see now, and snapped them together and again raised it on high. “Two together Can be broken,” he raised the thick wad of four pieces high above his head and called louder still. “But as many we are strong, Strong, STRONG!”

The masses of clansmen exploded roaring their approval for the Great Druid’s words stomping their feet and singing loudly. From the center the Great Druids voice rose again bringing silence, there in that darkness as the stars began to align their world began to change forever. A chant began slowly and as the New Year approached a vote began, simple but effective, pebbles and pinecones. There was no need to count the decision was overwhelming waves of pebbles, the people demanded unity the druids had succeeded. Here in this holy place a confederation was born, a fellowship of all the people of the blessed isle, together they would face the future. Nothing could daunt them now that they were united soon the entire world would hear the words of the spirits.

The kings approached the horizon, between the two eastern pillars, pointing a line to the earth.

There in the misty darkness the people took up the cry “Avalon, Avalon, Avalon, the blessed Isle!”

The masses turned to the lightening sky again to stare at the point where the stars pointed to the plains. Still chanting, they waited with bated breath as the light grew in the sky, they watched east the east the wonder of this night was more than any could have ever imagined. All they had ever known was blowing away on the morning breeze, a new world would soon be built here together. The drums began to beat as the seconds counted down the drums leading the song and harmony reigned as all the voices rose as one in song.

An ancient song sung with friends and brothers to welcome the New Year and to celebrate the old.

We two have paidl’d i' the burn,
from morning sun till dine ;
But seas between us broad hae roar’d
sin auld lang syne.

For auld lang syne, my jo,
for auld lang syne,
we’ll tak a cup o’ kindness yet,
for auld lang syne.

And there’s a hand, my trusty friend!
And giv's a hand o’ thine!
And we’ll tak a right gude-will draught,
for auld lang syne.

As the Sun broke the horizon bringing warmth and life the crowd roared again a deafening sound reverberating for miles, crying to the heavens. Surely the Spirits smiled upon them, the future was bright and the people sang together the many became one. The Isle would never be the same again, they would see to that, the people would change the face of it forever; together they would build a brave new world. The sun shone bright upon them they danced in the morning light.

Thus was born the nation of Avalon. What challenges would face them this year; there was so much to be done, could they keep the people together?

Only the Spirits Knew.
 
Been busy with Valentines... order will come tonight.
 
Update more than half written as of Tuesday night. Yesterday was unexpectedly busy, so I apologize for the slow writing.
 
I have the update written save for 4 nations and the spotlight story, and have had so for a while, however speedbumps and obstacles keep jumping in my way. The update will be posted by sunday night I believe.
 
It has become increasingly apparent that I neither have the time nor the willpower right now to run an NES. My apologies to those who wrote wonderful stories and orders for this NES. :(
 
That really sucks.. we were just about to get to some interesting wars imo.

No chance you could run this, but with a much simplified update?
 
Who would continue with this if I wrote less?
 
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