Haiku Instead?

Each haiku poem
should only have a single
sentence in each line

the poem above
is not really a proper
haiku. Nor is this.
 
Actual thought (ie, came to me in haiku form)

Red four-door sedan,
Braking unpredictably,
I ******* hate you.
 
Fifty Q Fiftyson
Cant remember
The syllabic structure of a Haiku
 
Walking many miles
The cold glass of water calls
summer has arrived
 
I doubt you forgot
But let us repeat once more
'Tis five, seven, five.

Five, seven, five is weak

Who the heck chose those numbers

Why don't we make it five, seven, two-hundred-forty three so we can have some prose with some actual reading material in it instead of something that reads like a sound bite by a politician running for office
 
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