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K doke, well i think we should wait until everyone contributes another:) its not likes theres any rush.
 
Well, here is another addition the the Hallowed Bible. Any comments, criticisms, or is this okay?


And so, the the humble scribe and priest of the wonderous Meleet spoke for the great king, bringing forth the words of the beloved Meleet to all those true seekers of what was right and of light. Hear, remember, for the words of a sacred god are not those to be idily listened to and forgotten.

And so, at the time of creation all was well and good, the hands of Meleet worketh great things, and nothing else can be expected. But the unseen force, the all-evil came forth from the firey depths, to create its own. And so was Dinsog thus brought forth, ever the one against whom those of Meleet strove against. And from him was born the evil. That of robi_d and his neferous minions came, they always brought the darkness into the land infected by them. The crops grew blackened, the trees dried up and burnt depite there being nothing but the presence of those of Dinsog. And so was Meleet aroused, seeing the evil. A battle was fought throughout the Meleetian world and destruction was wrought against the land, and so the name of Meleet was darkened with the death of many of his followers, but those of Meleet persevered and sealed the world from that of robi_d, but they still remained. But throught this peace in the land our Great Meleet was so
given to sleep, and so he did until those of Dinsog and his neferous minion Robi_d and the other underlings came out from the prison that was formed out of the will of the people for the Wonderous Meleet.

And so thorughout the years, as long as those of Meleet showed forth to Meleet the worship due Him, those of Dinsog were restrained in the Grace of Meleet. But as those of Meleet waivered in later days, turning on their god who had preserved them in former deeds, the restraining hold of Meleet was weekend, and gradully, as with the slow spoiling of the counterfit silk, copyed from that of the sacred Jungle, those of dinsog were enable to corrupt those who were weak, namely the Iroqi, weak in the ways of Meleet, and so were foolishly converted to the ways of a forgien god. And while the Meleet slept, so the Iroqi won, but the cries of the people of Iron were heard, and in the end, Meleet came to bear for those of his name, for Meleet brooks no rival, and the doom of those who will not go back on their foolishness will die.
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that looks good lost_civ, but it is a little long. could you cut a little bit out, as i don't think that will fit on the parchment paper. now, with that one written, we now have 4 scrolls ready to be released publicly. if you guys want, i can convert it to parchment paper either today or tomorrow, or someone else can post it, but i think it is important we post these scrolls this weekend. :)
 
Prune the words of Meleet! :eek: Do you know what happens to those who dare prune the words of Meleet? The fires of the great volcanoes are not even worth compare! ;)

I'll see what I can do. :)
 
I'm not close/ Been too busy. Sorry. Perhaps lost_civantares' work could be split up into muptiple scrolls?
 
I'll do that, but I'm also rather busy, so I might not get to seperating and extending the last part till later monday or tuesday eastern us time.
 
uh, BCLG, i was just trying to convert your creation story onto the parchment paper and i wasn't even halfway through it when i ran out of room. i don't think the story needs so much description in Meelet creating the world. i think the focus of the story should be about him creating the races, instead of the world. so, could you cut down on some of the world creating part?
 
Crazy question, but why can't we have 2 page scrolls? If it turns out to be too much to have to be on 2 scrolls, then that's fine and we can shorten it, but I wouldn't think that it would be too much to put the thing on 2 scrolls.
 
Yer just use multiple scrolls theres no need to break all of it up just put it onto a few scrolls.
 
*gasp* Would the Great Meelet want us to write his words on multiple parchment sheets? Let's give it a quick test: i'll just go put the Creation story on 2 pages...ok, i still have feeling in my extremeties and i'm not blind...i guess the Great Meelet was ok with it. ;)

alright guys, i'll put larger scrolls on 2 sheets. i should be able to finish all the stories that need converting in the next hour, so should i post them in the public forum tonight?
 
Yep go for it, add them to the first post as well as posting them in a new post, could put them in chronological order as well.
 
alright, i finished converting the Creation story and lost_civ's first story was already converted a while ago, so 2 are done. i won't be able to finish soon though, as i just found out i have more homework than i thought. i'll try to finish everything by 9 PM (my time) though.
 
greekguy said:
*gasp* Would the Great Meelet want us to write his words on multiple parchment sheets? Let's give it a quick test: i'll just go put the Creation story on 2 pages...ok, i still have feeling in my extremeties and i'm not blind...i guess the Great Meelet was ok with it. ;)
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We have to work this into a future scroll! :lol:
 
finally updated the bible, posted it in the main forum. the other nations should eat up our scrolls like robi_d with a box of glazed choclate donuts. :lol:

btw, thanks for the comment donsig. i guess we'll see if we can put that line into a scroll in the future. :)
 
maybe we could write a story implying we want peace in our land for generations to come...you know, to lull D'Nuts into a false sense of security. :D

also, some other scrolls could be about us building our first harbor or something trade related. i think we'll be trying to get a lux. trade with MIA soon...that could make a good addition to the bible.
 
lost_civantares said:
After my scroll about the wrath of Meleet I don't know if we can do that!:mischief:
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well, we could say we want peace for years and years and then put a disclaimer in tiny, tiny text at that bottom, saying something like: D'Nuts will be destroyed by the wrath of Meelet. the above scroll is BS...D'Nuts will be conquered. :mischief: :lol:
 
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