Pure NES

Oh you don't mind if i create the history from 1000BC to 100-200AD do you? I just kinda got carried away with the maps :p so i have maps for 1000BC, 750BC, 500BC, 250BC, 100BC, 0AD, 100-200AD :D

err thats 7 update type thingies, but it will probably be fun i think
 
It's fine with me. :) My own second story should come later tonight.

das, though, I'm not sure where your capital should be.
 
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Even the flowers can be deadly in life. The leaf of a nightshade, perhaps, extracted into a tea. It was what had killed her grandfather. He had gotten nauseous, the blacks of his eyes expanding. A rash broke out, and he said through a strangled throat that he was flying, before he had died.

Not only could flowers kill you just as dead as knives, they generally had a unkinder way of doing it.

So it was, and so it would ever be. But the fools that ruled the nations that be would only look at the knives, never at the flowers. That, at least, was her advantage, and one she intended to use, for she had few weapons at her disposal. Disowned and dishonored for the simple matter of her gender–the succession rules were unfair, foolish, and wicked. Perhaps, though, there were ways of getting around them. Perhaps.

Amyra carefully fixed her hair with a few small pins, and examined herself in the silvery looking glass with a self-critical eye. Her long, dark brown hair flowed down her back, though more gathered than if she had simply left it–she looked neater than she had, certainly. A few artfully stray locks framed her blue eyes, and her smile was radiant. She was ready to face anything.

A short flight of stairs upwards took her to father’s study, where he sat, pouring over maps calmly, regarding the surrounding realms with opportunistic eyes, searching for a weakness.

“I am glad you have come, daughter. Though it is best that you change out of those clothes before the day is done; you will not be needing them.”

“Father?” She did not know what he meant. Nowhere she could go in court would have her change out of this clothing. When she said as much, he merely smiled tiredly, and nodded.

“That is so.”

She was more confused than ever.

“My dear daughter, Amyra, what I am trying to say is that you have remained a Princess in the Tower for far too long. That you need to see the world, and more importantly, find someone to wed to. I would never dream of marrying you off to some unwashed savage, and sadly, that is all we have in our area. You shall visit the great ports of Pontus, of Byzantium. Of Illium, Nicosia, Tyre. You shall see the world, my dear, and you shall find your love.”

“But... But I am barely six and ten, father. I can scarcely do this... I won’t know what to do... who the people are, what we are...”

“You will be guided, my dear. And you are the Sun of our kingdom, you will be loved wherever you go.” He smiled again. “You are beautiful, and I have no doubt they shall be fawning over you from the Don to the Nile. You are beautiful.”

She did not flush at all, to her credit–she was the most beautiful maiden of Azov, by far–she had inherited little of her father’s stubborn steadfast looks, and much more of her Illian mother whose flowing beauty had been the legend of the kingdom. Before she died and I came along, anyway.

There was the problem, of course, that she was not going to be able to use her charm and grace on people she knew. These were unknown factors now, people she had never met, and she would have to study them carefully if she was to gain her influence over them. More importantly, though, she was leaving home...

“Father, what are you to do for heirs?”

He blinked. “My son, Paedor, he is alive, no?”

“Much good that does us, father. You know as well, if not more than me, that my dear brother cannot be left to rule a kingdom.”

“He need not rule.”

“You have no strong heir, father, I call that vulnerable.”

“Paedor is legally–”

“Paedor has only half his wits about him, and those have only lingered through the potions the healers were able to conjure up for him, father. He might as well be dead–and he certainly won’t rule.”

“He remains an effective figurehead, though, while Elleone...”

“Elleone is a babe.”

“He is almost one now.”

“Almost one, and still crawling. Your enemies will slay him without a second thought, and he cannot protect himself.”

“I know that. But he will have time to grow, time to learn–”

“And if he is denied that?”

“Are you suggesting...” His eyes narrowed.

“All that I am suggesting, father, is that you are mortal, and can take wounds or poison as much as can any other man. And you have far more enemies than most other men. You are a ruler, father, and in peril, both from the enemies you watch and those you do not. It is the way of kingship.”

“I know this, daughter. I have lived longer than you, ruled longer than you have lived. And I do not intend to die.”

He smiled, and quieted her when she tried to protest with a hand over her mouth. A fury took hold of her and she slapped him with the full swing of her arm. He caught her wrist before she could deliver another stroke.

“You should be grateful,” he snapped. “I let you pick out your husband, a favor that I probably should not do, one that I only do because I love you so. Now, must I have my guards drag you, or will you find a husband in the south?”

“I will go,” she said, tears welling unfelled in her eyes, as she was denied her birthright again.
 
das, though, I'm not sure where your capital should be.

Yathrib, which in this world won't be renamed into Medina. ;)


Just to make sure there is no misunderstandment, Tyre is rather burned-to-the-ground right now. Ofcourse, its unlikely that the news have already reached the Black Sea.
 
das said:
Just to make sure there is no misunderstandment, Tyre is rather burned-to-the-ground right now. Ofcourse, its unlikely that the news have already reached the Black Sea.

Exactly. :)
 
niiiiice. I've done two of these before (tho not from an early age), and I am pretty sure EQ did a few times as well.

Ill join once i have time to read everyone else's stories.
 
Sadly there aren't a lot of those yet.
 
By the time you finish the other half, Panda, I might actually get around to writing my next story. ;)
 
OOC: To keep this alive, I'll post this little story for now. Will write more later.

IC:

Every being, whether god, man or beast, knows the emotion of self-satisfaction. In some, it is aroused by an amorous victory; in others, by a succesful solution of a mathematical problem. By those moments of self-satisfaction, one can determine what sort of a being this one is, what is its primary passion in life.

Pharoah Necho was an intriguer above all. It was not in his harem that he most enjoyed himself; it was in his Nile galley, where he, relaxed physically but strained mentally, plotted and schemed. The business of everyday rule was not something he enjoyed; he was never a one for micromanagement, and so he left that to his buerocrats, occasionally killing most of them off to make sure corruption and disloyalty were subdued (a lesson he learned from his very first attempt to expel the vile Punics). No, for all the 53 years of the rule the realm of domestic policy never in particular interested him, outside of rebellions and conspiracies that he artfully rooted out. Foreign policy was his true sphere. All manners of foreign policy - that is, diplomacy, espionage... war. Well, the latter wasn't too attractive to him nowadays; he was quite old, and ever since the first Punic War he grew disillusioned about the glory on the battlefield. Those battles, unlike the artful strategems and maps, were an ugly, confusing affair. Too many factors, too much risk. Ah well, Necho thought - apparently, not even gods are perfect. Which is just as well - we should all strive to be perfect to become even somewhat better than we currently are, and we must never grow satisfied with the current state of affairs. One has to move on, to strenghthen his empire, to conquer and destroy...

Pharaoh Necho was an intriguer. He knew only one pleasure greater than the one he felt when a plan was being set in motion, when he felt his duty done and was awre of the greatness of his plan, when doubt and pessimism didn't yet overtake him - that pleasure came... now.

As Necho lie there in his Nile galley, staring at the Sun and surrounded by deaf slaves, the lying moron Yuya, for once, delivered a report that was mostly true. Necho knew it because he was previously told, in less detailed and extravagant style and in separate reports told by those people he did trust - the Eyes of the Pharaoh - about his success. About the success that was even greater than expected.

On one hand, Phoenicea was crushed at last. Tyre was destroyed, its fleets were defeated and the remaining outposts of their empire - not including Didonia (OTL Alexandria) that was at last returned to the Egyptian fold - were in disarray, desperately trying to survive. Let them survive, thought Necho while Yuya continued to speak about Necho's genius and about the valour of his armies. Who cares about Carthage and Sicily, anyway, when there was such an opportunity? Trully, patience and hard work pay off! After all these years, luck smiled, and smiled well.

For that barbarian Zheshuha was dead as well. His empire was large and unwieldy, and he had no heirs, as he killed off all his children after their attempt to displace him. Nor was his empire stable and consolidated; many tribes were only loyal out of fear. A true ruler must learn not just to scare his people into submission, but also to turn their fear into love. Zheshuha didn't.

Now that he will die, his remaining lieutenants will fight for power. The Yeshuan Empire had no chances of surviving that - not after Necho was through with it. It was doomed from the start, but this made things even easier. The only more-or-less stable entities left between Egypt and Mesopotamia were the other Phoenicean city-states... but they could be swayed. A few promises, bribes and comrpomises, and they will gladly embrace the coming of the Egyptians.

Pharaoh Necho felt the divine pleasure of self-satisfaction that wasn't hindered even by the presence of Yuya. He won, won at last! At last, he has achieved the goal of his life. Now it was time to find the next one, after just one little campaign...

Necho pondered on that. He was old. His son was a brave warrior and a capable tactician, but... not much else. It is best that he gains as much as possible from *his* skills; war has a way of building up prestige and popularity, and all that will be quite useful for the young Akhaten when Necho will... become a god, as Hittites say - as if he wasn't a god already. But before he does...

The decision was made. Pharaoh Necho and his son Akhaten will personally command the expedition to the eastern lands.
 
I'd join, but I can't stand reading long stories. Also, I can't write anything to compare wtih anything that is already here. Maybe if it was in Israel, but too late for that. *sigh*
 
Ermaneric put down his hoe and wiped the sweat from his brow with the back of his hand. His arms were muscular and sun-tanned, his hands rough as leather from working the land. His was a farmer's body; the soil was as much a part of him as the blood in his veins.

A waterskin hung from his waist, and from this the Gothic farmer took a long draught. He looked up at the sun as the cool water ran down his throat, restoring strength to his tired body; it must have been about noon -- time for his daily break, and his small midday meal.

Ermaneric sat on his usual stump, and placed his sack on the ground in front of him. Untying the string which held it togeter, he revealed his lunch -- black bread, sheep's cheese, and a strip of dry smoked meat. The cheese was soft from having sat in the sun; Ermaneric didn't mind this at all, but he decided he'd have to keep his lunch sack in the shade of the great oak on the edge of the ryefield if he didn't want to risk melting his food completely. This was quite a radical decision for this simplest of Gothic yeomen.

The scent of warm, fresh sheep's cheese wafted through the air as Ermaneric spread it over the torn half of his loaf of black bread. A bird stood on the ground a few paces from Ermaneric, moving nervously about the young lunching ploughmen, safely -- timidly -- just beyond his reach. The creature moved slowly closer as he lifted from the opened sack the small strip of meat, to add to his cheese-smeared bread; with every motion the Goth made, the bird retreated, though never so much as to be back where he had begun.

"You've got nothin' to be scared of, little fella," said Ermaneric, to the empty air as much as to the bird. "Here; I've got plenty enough to share," he assured his feathered companion, as he tossed some breadcrumbs and a tiny piece of meat on the ground.

"Ye've got plenty for birds, sure; but could ye spare a morsel for a poor traveller in need?"

Ermaneric turned his head toward the dirt path running past his field, to see the figure of a man carrying a great traveler's sack. He was tall and muscular, with dark hair and the same bronzed skin which comes from constant exposure to the sun's fiery light. From his chin grew a short beard, and his dark hair was long and ragged; upon inspection his clothes were dirty, but of good manufacture from fine materials. From his belt hung an atypical dagger -- Egyptian, from the looks of it -- in the leather hanger common amongst the Goths. But it was the glint in his eyes that gave the man away -- Ermaneric would know those laughing eyes anywhere.

"Theodoric, you old bastard!" Ermaneric exclaimed. "What brings you back to these quiet reaches?"

The traveller was indeed the Theodoric known to Ermanaric, the son of a local farmer who had felt too big for the land, too smart to work the soil with his back; a brash young man who at 16 years of age had set off for Dacia to be a merchant and adventurer. He had returned to his ancestral country only occasionally, and then only after an absence of some six years; most folks had said he was dead, or chained into a rowing gang on some Phoenician trade-galley, never to return. But he had returned; and he returned in grand style, carrying with him the riches which could be won by those who were smart and quick in the towns and cities of the Black Sea.

"I got tired of living the luxurious life; I was sick of waking up with a different women every morning, of having too much wine and food on hand. I was so bored of my silk bedding and Syrian tapestries that I wanted to burn my entire townhouse down. The gambling, the races, the whores -- they just lost their appeal to me, that's all. And besides, I missed you good country folks and the sleepy little hamlets of Gotland."

Both men laughed at that one, and embraced.

"Ermaneric, you stupid dirt-turner! Damn, did I miss you! Now how about some of that bread?"

There might have been enough food in the bag for a Goth and a bird, but two hungry men and a flying animal were simply too many mouths to feed on a loaf of bread and a strip of smoked meat. Ermaneric led his old friend back through the field to his cottage, where they could eat a proper meal. Smoke was rising from the simple chimney, curling in small grey trifles up above the thatched roof of the old home.

"The wife must have water boilin'," Ermaneric said, thinking out loud. "O' course, it's dreadful warm out here; hot water won't do any good. There's beer in the rootcellar; I'll bring up a keg, and we'll welcome you home in right style."

The farmer retrieved the oaken barrel from the earth and laid it out in the main room of the cottage. With mallet and wedge he tapped it, dispensing the first great mug to his companion, and another for himself.

"So tell me, merchant-man: what really brings you back to these parts?" asked Ermaneric, after they had both had a chance to sit and cool off with their drinks.

"Well," began his guest, "it's a complicated matter. You see, I've lived the last three years in the city of Byzantium -- she's a great trading city, built upon the very rock where the Black Sea becomes the Mediterranean. I made my living by trade -- wheat and cotton from Egypt, wines and fruits from Hellas and the Aegean -- and the gods know I made a damned fine living at it, too. But the single most important trade I took part in was the spice trade. You know, people go crazy for that stuff -- salts and spices from Arabia and the Orient. The put it on their food, for flavor and for preservation -- you might try some on this smoked meat, my friend -- and they'll pay gold and silver by the ton for it. I made my money by reselling the stuff in Byzantium -- she's a big, rich city with big, fat people who like to eat like pigs. You see, the Phoenicians control the distribution of it all in the Mediterranean; they get it from Arabia or China or wherever the hell it comes from, and then my contacts in Tyre and Sidon sell it to me, and I sell it to the Byzantines at a marked-up price. Believe me, it doesn't sound like much, but it made me rich, rich in ways you can't even imagine -- I wasn't kidding about silk bedding and innumerable women, let me tell you."

Theodoric stopped to take a deep draught of his beer. Ermaneric tried to mull over all his friend had told him, but still failed to see why this would send him back to Gotland.

"If you were so rich and all, then why did you come back?" he asked, still puzzling over the fantastic tale he was being told.

"Well, here's the catch," said the merchant, as he wiped the foam from his lips. "You know how I said I get my supplies from the Phoenicians? Well, most of it comes from Tyre -- that's the biggest, most powerful Phoenician city. They basically run the show in the Eastern Med. The problem was, they got attacked by somebody or other... rumor has it it was a bunch of Bedouins, though some folks insist it was war-demons and Tiwaz himself. Whoever it was, they just about burned the place to the ground and killed -- some say ate -- everyone in it. You can imagine how that would cut my supply of goods; and as if that wasn't bad enough, the other cities have fallen into disarray, meaning I can't get ahold of their products -- and what's more, with all these different hostile fleets roaming around in what used to be Tyre's waters, nobody wants to send tradeships out to sea. Basically, the bottom fell out of the whole market; so I figured I'd take what I had and try to weather the whole thing out back here."

He took a long drink and let out a loud belch, as though to signal the end of his epic story.

Ermaneric sat and ran his fingers along the grooves of his mug, trying to absorb all he had heard.

"So all them Tyre folks, they're all dead... and all the other Phoenicians, they're all confused and disordered. And you say there's gold and silver down there?" Ermaneric was thinking as hard as he could.

"More wealth you can imagine, my friend. More than you can imagine."
 
"Ave, Praetorio." Announced the man who entered the court, his right arm raised in salute.

"Ave." Replied a man sitting behind a raised, gilded counter. His face was obscured in shadow by the dim light. In acknowledgement of the man's salute, he bowed his head slightly.

"Your business, praefectus?" inquired a man sitting on another raised counter slightly lower than the Praetor's. His sarcastic tone and raised nose implied a sense of arrogance.

The air hinted of expensive insense, imported from the east. Fragrance danced around the room, permeating every membrane of the occasion.

"I have important information, honorable Quaestor. Information which is vital to the Republic." He added, "Information which is vital to the Praetor, praise his soul." nodding towards the raised man with the shadow face.

The man who spoke was thin, his arms long, and his hands spindly. His eyes were dark and mischevious, and his nose was aristocraticaly prominent - giving him an air of nobility. He replied to the Quaestor's tone as if it were nothing, and on the surface did not appear to notice it. However, his calculating mind, as with everything else, did notice it; and so he carefully stored the information within his head, for future reference.

After a period of silence, the Quaestor, who was conferring to his colleagues next to him, and his papers in front of him, finally spoke -

"Very well, tell us this information." he said, once again sarcastically.

"Of course", he paused, his dark eyes fixed intently upon the Praetor's shadowed face. "As I have said, this information is of the utmost importance, and therefore must not be spoken of outside of these halls to none but yourselves."

"Yes, go on." The Quaestor urged, his interest piqued.

"I have recieved, from the highest source, that Tyre is no more."

A silence filled the court, followed with murmurs between the Quaestor and his colleagues.

The thin man continued unhinged. "It seems as if bedouins are responsible, these being marauding desert men of a most terrible filth. They have, in quick time, sacked the city, and with it the former empire. Tyre is no more, and shall no longer threaten our trade."

He paused oncemore for emphasis, looking around the room and speaking again. "However, though we maintain our control of Latium, our power is being challanged in the south. The southermost states of Oscany and Messapicia have now refused to pay the tithes due to Venice, perhaps because of Carthaginian pressure. Syracuse too, has refused to pay the annual tithe, and the King has begun making payments to the Carthaginians. Meanwhile, the Carthaginians continue their build up of Sardinia, and Venetian goods have been oncemore subjected to an increase in tarriffs within Carthage itself."

Stopping oncemore, he examined the faces of the men before him. As he had spoken, their faces has gone from being smug, arrogant, and uncaring to somewhat paniced. The Quaestor, however, remained with his nose raised, and waited for the man to continue.

"We do have good news amidst all of this. The city-states of Cumae, Privernum, Antium, and Tibur have all pledged their alledgiance to us, and have continued their payment of the annual tithes. Our armies remain secure accross the alps and the Ligurians have been finally subdued by our strong presence. The fleets, meanwhile, continue to protect the trade routes and monitor foriegn activity along these routes. Venice, as always, remains most strong and most serene.

And with that note of optimism I, Praefectus Niccolo Julianus of the Serenissima Cohors, end my report to Signorium and the Praetor of the Republica Serenissima in hopes that you will use this information to its full potentiol. I thank you, most honorable Gentlemen, for granting me audience.

Ave Venetia!"

"Ave Venetia!" Answered the Quaestor and his colleagues.

And with that the thin man turned around, and left the the chamber quickly, flanked by guards with red tunics and silver breastplates. His deep burgundy robes flowed behind him, and as he left, the guards shut the door.

The Praetor, his face obscured by the shadows, thought carefully as the men below him murmered about what had just transpired. Such information was of vital importance, and though, as the man whom had just left, he seemed ignorant of it, he carefully stored it within his mind, for future reference.

Dark times were most certaintly ahead.
 
The exiled tribe?

Exiled Arabs Strike Again? No NK NES should be without those, IMHO - that might be why your last one failed, no Exiled Arabs there.
 
The sun was already setting as Shlomo-Suleyman, having already sighted the familiar surroundings of Ma'rib, had to stop in a wadi oasis.

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There were just three of them, noted Shlomo as he jumped from his wounded horse and raised his hands. The bandits approached him, their knives drawn.

"Surrender!" - one of them shouted.

"What do you want?" - asked Shlomo, lowering his hands ever-so-slightly.

"You can keep your rags, everything else goes to us!" - shouted the largest bandit, who told him to surrender. He grinned maliciously.

Shlomo made a move for his sword, quickly dodging the deadly arrow that another bandit launched at him. That one was the only one with a bow; an unexpectedly good bow, at that. Probably stolen. Then with the skill that he had gained while campaigning in Phoenicia he attacked the startled bandit leader, evading his knife and cutting through the bandit's robes with ease. Still, something went wrong - the bandit leader was wounded, but not at all fatally. Cursing himself, Shlomo braced himself, while another arrow cut his left ear badly. He ignored the pain; he was concentrated on the battle.

Roaring, the bandit leader tried to charge at him, but the wound proved more serious than Shlomo had first thought. The huge bandit collapsed before reaching Shlomo, who promptly beheaded him in one sweep. The third bandit wisely stayed aside, so Shlomo only needed to deal with the archer. Another arrow hit him in the left arm; evidently, the archer, even if skilled, wasn't used to this bow. Shlomo charged at him, forcing the man, who had a rather hideous scar as Shlomo saw more clearly now, to drop the bow and fight him with his knife. But a nice jatagan curved sword, a Phoenician steel sword that was Shlono's trophey from Tyre, had many advantages over a knife. True, it can't be thrown nearly as well a knife (for Shlomo's enemy did throw the knife at him upon realizing that he had no chance of hitting him otherwise), but it was longer and stronger.

Another head littered the sand. The third man was nowhere to be seen. Shlomo was panting heavily, he took the knife out of his abdoman, tried to cut off a piece of his clothings to bind the wounds, tumbled as he moved to check his horse, and collapsed.

His dried-up corpse was discovered eight days later, by a caravan.

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Suleyman, as he was called before travelling all the way to Yathrib with a caravan and joining the growing Yeshuan sect under the name of Shlomo, was not a hero. He was an experienced warrior, a trusted acolyte of Yeshua himself, he personally led many charges and led a small group of his men into Sidon to help the rebels there when Yeshua ordered him to do so. But he was not a hero; his deeds could not be compared with neither those of the ancient Warrior-King David whom they came to avenge, nor with any of his warriors; nor was he anything like the great Yeshua and his trusted lieutenants. And his fame... was almost nonexistant. If one were to ask an average Yeshuan soldier who Shlomo ha-Shebi was, he would either say that he knew him not, either that he was a "brave warrior". Not much else. Those who served under him said that he was a brave, cunning yet cold and unfriendly commander, a one who could not be loved or even be considered a friend, but a one whom it was impossible not to admire. A few would also note that Yeshua trusted him, and sometimes even consulted him; but then again, such was Yeshua that he often consulted the lowest of soldiers when it seemed like they might have some good ideas or useful information.

Shlomo was not a hero. He knew it, and knew that he was hardly well-known. So when, on the fourth day after the fall of Tyre and Sidon, just as the hysteric mourning of Yeshua was over, a man approached him and told him that David - ofcourse, not the ancient king, but one of Yeshua's commanders and the one who was in charge of combatting the assassins, the spies and the traitors that constantly assailed Yeshua's army - wanted to meet with him in private, Shlomo was quite surprised.

David ha-Yidi was an uncommonly-old man, his true age unknown yet rumoured to be a hundred. And indeed, he did look very old, yet somehow still moved and talked, and fought. Or used to fight until his right hand was chopped off by a Nabatean. But what he has lost in strenght with age and wounds he quite made up for in cunning and wisdom. According to the rumours, he was the one who organized the negotiations with the Phoenician leaders, the mastermind behind the plan that gave Tyre, step-by-step, to the grand Yeshuan army.

His voice was, however, not a one of a frail old man. There was steel in that voice, as he explained to Shlomo that with Yeshua's death, the tribes will once more turn to squabbling - and that it will doom them all, unless they could be united again. The Egyptians in the west, the Hittites and other barbarians in the north, the Persians in the east... Even their present Phoenician allies wouldn't hesitate before backstabbing them in their time of weakness. And then, it will all be for nothing.

That must not happen. He and Yehuda, the shofet of the Kindaim who were the most eager amongst Yeshua's Bedouin converts, the husband of Yeshua's daughter and one of the most famous and popular of Yeshua's lieutenants, seeked to act before enemy spies do. Tribes needed to be persuaded to acknowledge Yehuda as the successor of Yeshua; and messangers to them were already sent out. No - David had a different yet similar task for Shlomo.

Egypt was most probably going to turn on them soon. Spies have confirmed that envoys from Egypt were in the Free Phoenician cities, up to no good. Through the immense Sinai Canal, now out of Phoenician hands as well, a huge, never-ending caravan of huge "trade ships" travelled, ostensibly in a trading expedition. That was quite suspicious as well. The Egyptians were the most immediate threat, and the most vile, for it was hard not to see that the Egyptians seeked to take over the entire Red Sea.

Alas, the Yeshuans had practically no fleet to even attempt to counter the Egyptians. There was one kingdom that could help in that regard. Its fleets weren't as large as Egyptian ones, and by itself it was not really too strong. Yet with it on the Yeshuan side, and with the steps being taken to save the empire, they would stand a real chance to fight back the Egyptian onslaught.

That kingdom was Sheba, in the end of the Red Sea. Sheba, from which Shlomo came and whose language and lands he still knew and remembered, to some extent anyway. There was no better choice than him, even if he is not recognized there - indeed, perhaps it would be even better if he is not recognized. Shlomo readily agreed to carry the message there; but to make sure that the message was not going to fall into the wrong hands as he was to travel along the Arabian coastline (somewhat risky, yet this was the fastest route), he was told not to take the message itself. No, he needed to memorize it.

And memorize it he did, before setting out for Esion-gver on the next day. From there, he sailed for his home, to see it for the first time since he was thirteen. He used to live just outside of the Sheban capital, Marib, yet he has forgot it; his imagination drew mighty sandstone walls, but those were the ones he saw in Tyre - suddenly, Shlomo realized that he didn't remember his country at all. Some words... the Tihaman coast... he didn't even remember his mother!

His past was lost, and there was no gaining it back, if only because both he and the land he grew up in, the land that he didn't even love but just knew that he was born there, were now irrevocably changed. He would not come as a Sheban who, after many years of absence, came back to his home; he would not even mention that he was a Sheban. No, he wasn't Suleyman. He was Shlomo... not even ha-Shebi, he was Shlomo ha-Midbari, Solomon of the Desert, for he came to Yathrib from the desert, not from Sheba. He was Shlomo ha-Midbari, a toughened warrior of the Yeshuans, who under other circumstances would have purified this peculiar land of Sheba with sword and fire, but in those strained circumstances agreed to tolerate the existence of the Shebans, for they were needed for the grand designs of He Who Brings Into Existence Whatever Exists.

The Egyptians were nowhere in sight, and he arrived peacefully at Mocha. Disguised as a merchant, he purchased a fine horse and rode hard for Ma'rib. He nearly made it there. But God has decided that he should not see Marib again, and that his message remains undelivered, that any alliance between David and the Shebans should not come, or at least come much later than expected. Strange are His ways!
 
"Such things are not our concern."

The King put his goblet down on the polished wooden side table, and tapped his finger repetitively against its gilded side. Alaric was getting on in years, and had little patience for the meaningless rambling of this young traveler. Tyre? Arabs? His kingdom was the realm of the Goths, the domain of rye and barley. What did he care if some desert chieftain or other had sacked some city in the Levant? He didn't tax the city of Tyre; his game didn't run in the forests of the Levant. No, his interests were a good deal closer at hand; all his eye could behold was his, and he had little interest in anything he couldn't see.

"He's a fool," thought Theodoric, as he looked the old king over. "A blind old fool, who can't even understand when a golden opportunity has been thrust into his lap. He'd he perfectly happy to sit here on his throne and collect tithes on wheat bushels until the day he died. He has no vision for his people; he'd as soon let them spend eternity as poor, stupid farmers as get off his lazy ass."

As though to prove the point, Alaric reached for a leg of pork laying on the tray on the banquet table to his left; and, finding his arm some few inches too short, signaled for his attendant, a young Sarmatian slave with the physique of a natural-born cavalryman, to bring him the offending leg, and a second to make up for its insolence in evading his reach.

"Your Majesty, I think you fail to understand the gravity of this situation. What we are witnessing is a complete shift of power in the Eastern Mediterranean, a realignment of kingdoms unprecedented in history. This is an opportunity to make something out of this country, to finally rise above the station of our ancestors. We can't just grow grain and raise pigs forever, Highness."

That last word was said -- spat, practically -- with a venom concealed only by that fortunate combination of the merchant's great effort and the King's great lack of attention.

"Would you have us abandon the old ways, trader? Would you have us turn our backs on our ancestors, on the traditions that have sustained our people for hundreds of years? We aren't all seduced by the gilded palaces and glittering whores of Byzantium, Theodoric-son-of-Athalraed. You would do well to remember from where you came," said the King of the Goths. He snapped his fingers, as if it were an afterthought; a concubine -- blonde, Gothic -- took his silver plate from him. A second -- this one Thracian, dark-skinned and beautiful -- wiped his lips with a cloth napkin, then bowed and withdrew to the harem-chamber.

"Indeed, Your Majesty. I now recognize my folly; it is wholly aparent that our race is immune to the siren-calls of glittering metals and gorgeous women. I'n't that right, darlin'?" he asked, as he winked at the petite Gothic brunette waiting in the corner of the throne chamber. She blushed, and turned away; a wise move on her part -- Alaric didn't like people, least of all wandering peddlers who told foolish stories of far-off lands -- flirting with his concubines.

"I think you had best leave, Theodoric-son-of-Athalraed," declared the King of the Goths, straining to hold back his anger.

"Yes, Majesty, I think you may be right. I will go. But I beg you, sire, remember this warning: no kingdom can survive on bread alone forever."

Theodoric had no idea just how correct he would prove to be.
 
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