Supposed size of Westeros?

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They sure have fast horses, then.
 
At some point it becomes a gas giant rather than a rocky planet.

But there is a crapton of things that prevent such a planet to look and work even remotely close to how Earth does :p

Sure, but we're talking less than an order of magnitude here.

Making Believable Planets

Big Planet is 3x the diameter of earth, about half the size of the figures Cutlass gave. I think the size of the ice wall is more of a problem than the planet.
 
Sure, but we're talking less than an order of magnitude here.

Making Believable Planets

Big Planet is 3x the diameter of earth, about half the size of the figures Cutlass gave. I think the size of the ice wall is more of a problem than the planet.
Even "less than an order of magnitude" different would lead to a MASSIVELY different world. Westeros basically looks like Earth.
 
^The irregular season system is one of the worst/most exposed elements (quasi-pun). It likely would have been cool in a less cosmopolital setting, eg if there were just some hyperborean settlements in previously uncharted territory which was said by legend to be functioning quite differently due to reasons.
But now it seems that there is zero astronomy studied in the asoiaf world. Don't those people even look at the sky for anything other than ravens or dragons, and just mirant stella?
 
The maesters use telescopes to try and figure out when winter is coming. They talk about it here and there, implying they have some sort of astronomical system. Also at least one of the maesters at one point sort of poopoo's magical thinking about the comet and basically says it's just a comet stupid.

I mean there are plenty of other things to nitpick if you want, e.g. biology, chemistry, physics, basically it's all out the window at various times since this is a magical fantasy land. The scale issues never actually occurred to me, I just looked at it like Mise, i.e. they get there when they get there.

If I was reading Arthur C Clarke I might be a little curious what was really going on, but I'm not.
 
^The irregular season system is one of the worst/most exposed elements (quasi-pun). It likely would have been cool in a less cosmopolital setting, eg if there were just some hyperborean settlements in previously uncharted territory which was said by legend to be functioning quite differently due to reasons.
I'm pretty sure that the irregular seasons are just purely magical in nature and will be one of the big reveal at the end of the story.
 
As to the problems with the scale, it really comes down to whether you find it an interesting and compelling story despite those flaws. Which it's generally pretty good at, I think. But it would be better if the scale made more sense. The easier it is to breeze steadily through a story without any 'wait, what?' moments, the more pleasurable the read is overall. So a story can work despite 'wait, what?' moments, but would be better off without them.

Reminds me of this piece written about someone who said that the Twilight book series changed her life.

Twilight. Hear me out. I've been a reader my entire life. I was the kid who earned so many BookIt! pizza coupons that we never actually used them all. I was allowed to take AP 9th grade English in 7th grade because I just got it. My senior English teacher and I developed a self-guided curriculum for the year because I'd already read everything on the syllabus. So being a reader was never the problem. I never fell out of love with reading.

After high school, I started reading more contemporary work. Dan Brown was a big deal while also being taunted for his terrible writing. I read all four (at the time) of his books and decided he wasn't for me, but I understood the appeal. I did this over and over with popular authors, and usually I walked away thinking, "Ok, well, that wasn't personally meaningful, but I understand why it works for some people."

Enter Twilight. It's 2008. An entire nation is collectively losing its mind over this series. I'd read and enjoyed everything from Anne Rice to Dracula. I'd seen The Lost Boys. Maybe it would be ok.

After finishing the first book, I read the rest. And then I decided to be an editor because there is just no excuse for a book to make it all the way to print before someone notices how ****ing terrible it is. No excuse.

I went back to school (I was working in a wholly different field then), left my job, started working freelance, and have edited roughly 200 novels. I still freelance sometimes, but now I work as an editor for a magazine.

And it all began because Twilight made me so furious.

And there's the thing, a good editor should catch those 'wait, what?' moments, and work out with the author how to get them out of there. I'm not saying the author can't do this all on their own, but a good working author/editor team really should catch the most of that.

edit, found something Plotinus was saying about editing.

I'd never rely on automatic spell-checking/grammar-checking. I've far too much pride in my own pedantry for that!

I generally make very few errors of that kind when writing, luckily, but I've always obsessively read and re-read what I write over and over again, so I will almost always sport any errors I have made. Plus I'm just used to doing that from my time as a proof-reader anyway.

This also does help to pick up a lot of things that aren't errors but are bad phrasing, e.g. using a word two or three times in quick succession. It's amazing how much of that kind of thing I pick up on a first read-through of something I thought was fine as I was writing it.

But of course many such things will remain because no-one can effectively copy-edit themselves, which is why no-one can rely on their own abilities to spot them beyond the mechanical proof-reading stuff.



Yes, most e-books should allow that. If they don't then they've not been properly formatted and it kind of wrecks one of the major advantages of e-books!



I'll look forward to that and definitely let us know about it. I'll be sure to give updates about my experience with this once I have any to give! So far the main thing has been contacting vast numbers of review sites asking for reviews. There are a couple in the pipeline, but they take a long time.
 
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Regarding scale, in episode 1 of the first season it is noted that the King and his party "ride for months" to get to Winterfell. Of course just two episodes later it is said (iirc) that it takes around a month to get to Winterfell from King's Landing, and later on it takes a few days for the Red Woman to reach the Brotherhood without banners.
So the show itself is not consistent with its own scale either, although i can easily see why it would not be that wise to have them openly use the smaller scale already in the first episode. But they could have had Cersei say "we have been riding for so long" instead of "for months"..
 
Alternatively, due to the massive size of the theoretical planet, a day is much longer than 24 hours and they have special breed horses that are like, really fast.
 
Yeah, the scale issues made it more difficult for me to imagine the world, which in any story, but in particular a fantasy series, is kind of criminal. But after a couple episodes I just shrugged it off, because I was so into the story and characters by that point that I didn't care so much about the world or country itself. To use Illram's much better phrasing, "they get there when they get there".
 
It would seem that they left it ambiguous in the film version. We know that King Robert undertook a fairly long journey to reach Winterfell. If I'm not mistaken, it's very conceivable to travel 2000 miles in a month or so during the medieval times, especially if there is a good road.

The height of stuff is what seems less believable, but plenty of medieval fantasy stories suffer from the same problem, and usually magic/aliens is the explanation.
 
If I'm not mistaken, it's very conceivable to travel 2000 miles in a month or so during the medieval times, especially if there is a good road.
Err... Would be rather extreme.
Especially not when it's a whole royal convoy, which is considerably slower than messengers.

I remember a map from my history books, which indicated the average time needed for horse-powered transport (coaches for example) to go from the capital to other cities. It was about two weeks to do 500 km.
 
Assuming horse speed of about 4 mph, which is still realistic for a royal train, and traveling for 10 hours a day, which is probably achievable in the long days of a long summer, 2000 miles is achievable in 50 days.
 
In 1805 a fast paced French army division could cover about 20 miles a day in good weather; forced marching could add another 10.
 
And what it tells us is that when well-supplied and with purpose, 10,000 men can move quickly. Weather and supply being the most critical issues. In the case of Westros, if a hundred people were fully supplied, they could probably travel 30 miles a day. If they were depending upon Inns and castles for supply and lodging, then the distance between those points would set the daily mileage and not the speed of horses and wagons.

Multi day layovers would slow things further. Best case I'd say the 2000 mile trip would take 80-90 days; more likely six months.
 
A royal convoy with a leisurely pace and a fat, comfortable king would not reach near as much, though ^^
Adds that even with roads, terrain is not flat, and that a road doesn't go in straitgh line so if it's 2000 miles on the map, it's probably closer to 2500 or 3000 on the ground.

So count maybe 10 to 15 miles a day, for 2500 to 3000 miles... It's closer to one year than one month :p
 
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