Watcha Writin'?

I will need an ark. I will need a reason why the ark wasn't cannibalized for its metal.
I will need a home planet with lots of flying critters. (Altho once they get to their new planet, they will need the ability to fly in perpetuity.)*
I will need lightweight wood, but even bamboo, when it falls, falls down not up.

I will need a reason for this migration...Valka's toxic mists?

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*I'm thinking of a decades-old SF story entitled "With Morning, Comes Mistfall," i.e. with dawn. the planet-wide mist that covered everything receded. If my home world had these mists & if they are Valka's toxic mists, this would explain why the birds have evolved to fly at night instead of nest. :yeah:
I've been made aware that there is a fictional character named "Valka" and I've been getting questions about whether or not that's where my username comes from.

It isn't (and I'd never heard of that other character until recently). "Valka D'Ur" is a name I made up to use as the leader of the Uridian faction in the Lalande scenario of Civilization II: Test of Time. It's a science fiction scenario with a 4-level multilayer map that includes the planet Funestis, orbital platforms, a moon called Naumachia, and a gas giant called Nona. There are 3 alien factions and 4 human factions. The Uridians are one of the human factions.

Getting back to tweaking the genome on your world: It's not enough to do that. You need to account for the planet's existence, period. Take the RL example of Vega. It's been around for far longer than humans have existed, but it's still a very young star. Astronomers have detected proto-planets that might be forming. But Vega doesn't actually have real planets yet. It might not be around long enough before it blows itself up.

This is why I have a really hard time suspending my disbelief when a story comes along with this type of star that supposedly has a planet with life at all, let alone intelligent life. I can forgive storytellers from decades ago because they just didn't know. But nowadays we do know, so what you don't want to do is have a setting that will make anyone who knows basic astronomy immediately say, "Waitaminute, that can't happen."
 
I was referring to this:

BTW, Niven's novel A Gift From Earth has an interesting bit of world-building. The only habitable part of the world is a very tall mountaintop poking out of a toxic soup of an atmosphere.

Agreed, I should do more research on my star. I'm more interested in high radiation than giantness anyway.

BTW: Wiki has this to say about Vega: "Although a planet has yet to be directly observed around Vega, the presence of a planetary system can not yet be ruled out. Thus there could be smaller, terrestrial planets orbiting closer to the star."

But when I create some world-building that causes you to raise a skeptical Spockian eyebrow, I need to fix it. :yup:
 
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I was referring to this:
Ah, okay. :)

It's Niven's toxic soup, not mine. And given the current debate over judicially-forced organ "donation", cloning, and stem cell research, this decades-old novel is very relevant in present-day. It's a shame it's not that well-known (I seem to be the only Niven fan who bothers to mention it when talking about his books).
 
Hrumph. :hmm: I'm back pecking away at my Count of Monte Banco novel tonight. But there's no rhythm, no magic. I can hear Truman Capote declaring, "That's not writing. That's typing." :sad:
 
Returned to my newest story (1600 words in) and decided to make it a dry-witted comedy. Changed it from third-person to first person and modesty renamed it to "How I Saved the Galaxy."

Ben is about to be apprenticed to a no-nonsense marshal, which will provide opportunities for some interesting personality clashes.

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Later: Blackout for my section of the island tomorrow. So no internet. I will rundown my laptop battery, then go to Kayla'a for lunch & recharge it.
 
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Later: Blackout for my section of the island tomorrow. So no internet. I will rundown my laptop battery, then go to Kayla'a for lunch & recharge it.

Power was back on when I woke up.
Internet was back on when I finished breakfast
Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy! :goodjob:
 
I've spent the last couple of days being too sick to write.

In coming out of that, I've lost my obsession with "How I Saved the Galaxy," and so can return to "The Count of Monte Banco"--which I will finish by the end of November as a kind of quasi-NaNoWriMo. :whipped:

Later: Weird day. :undecide: I spent the day not writing qua writing, but rather going back and filling in plot holes. Those had been bothering me since forever. I feel much better now. :whew:
 
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I've been getting scads of NaNoWriMo emails lately, pestering me to "announce your novel".

Honestly, it's not something I need to "announce." Just log on to the site, fill in the form, save everything, ignore the messages about region-specific forums (haven't bothered with those for years), and sit here and see where the story is going to go.

I've still got Kingmaker running around in my head. I'd be tempted to do that for this year's NaNo project, except that it's open-ended, not outlined, and I don't want to spoil it by having to worry about daily post counts.

A conversation with someone else about it has inspired a couple of story arcs I hadn't thought of, and has sparked the creation of a new character, and a possible romance.

Of course there's going to be court intrigue involved with that, given who I've made the new character related to.
 
I've still got Kingmaker running around in my head. I'd be tempted to do that for this year's NaNo project, except that it's open-ended, not outlined, and I don't want to spoil it by having to worry about daily post counts..

I learned of NoNoWriMo on an Oct 28th & immediately tried to cobble together a plan in just 3 days. It was a disaster. :cry: A novel without an outline is like a ship without a rudder or charts.
 
I learned of NoNoWriMo on an Oct 28th & immediately tried to cobble together a plan in just 3 days. It was a disaster. :cry: A novel without an outline is like a ship without a rudder or charts.
Exactly. I tried the "outline, what outline?" method on far too many occasions, and should not have been remotely surprised when it became an exercise in frustration and futility. I never managed to finish even a Camp NaNoWriMo event until I had a proper outline and knew where the story had to be at certain points (I'd sometimes veer off-track in a few places on the way, but not too far to make it impossible to get back).

The reason I'm indulging in Kingmaker notes and bits of dialogue and scenes here and there (as well as having a larger ongoing narrative in my mind; if only thoughts could be directly transcribed on paper, I'd already have most of a novel done about that) is because my Park Ranger notes go waay beyond the point where I left off in July. I don't think I'm going to run into much trouble outline-wise next month, as I know where most of it has to end up.

That said, a new installment of the game came out a few weeks ago and put some new information down on the main character. So I need to work that in somehow, as it predates her life prior to the events depicted in the first game.
 
In looking ahead, my plan was:
Chap 13: Everything collapses.
Chap 14: Revenge on Bad Guys 2 & 3
Chap 15: Revenge on Bad Guy #1
Chap 16: Resolution

But in looking at what I still have to write, I don't think I have enough.
I'm now looking at:
Chap 13: Everything collapses; Revenge on Bad Guy #3
Chap 14: Revenge on Bad Guys 2 & 1
Chap 15: Resolution

So one less chapter than I'd planned. :undecide: But I think it'll be okay. :please:
When I get to the end, I'll re-read.:coffee: If the ending seems rushed, I'll worry about it then.
Plus, I have my wondrous editor lady in Texas. She'll tell me how to fix things. :hammer:
 
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I took a good whack at Chap 13. I wrote myself into and out of two corners--albeit I had to add ~500 words to Chap 9 to do so. One more good writing session, and Chap 13 will be done. :salute:

I had an insight about my airborne planet in "How I Saved the Galaxy," With no metal, how do people shave? Do I have a planet of bearded men and hairy-legged women? :dubious:

Later: Cutlery will also be a problem. ... Chopsticks for everyone!
 
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I took a good whack at Chap 13. I wrote myself into and out of two corners--albeit I had to add ~500 words to Chap 9 to do so. One more good writing session, and Chap 13 will be done. :salute:

I had an insight about my airborne planet in "How I Saved the Galaxy," With no metal, how do people shave? Do I have a planet of bearded men and hairy-legged women? :dubious:

Later: Cutlery will also be a problem. ... Chopsticks for everyone!
Just say that their ethnic group doesn't grow hair (other than on their heads, if you want them to).

Cutlery can be made of bone as well as wood. Or they can eat with their fingers.
 
Cutlery can be made of bone ...

I thought of that.

Bones are made of calcium, the fifth most abundant element in the earth's crust. Except I got no planetary crust. :dunno: Yet calcium is needed for everything from bones to heartbeats. Clearly, I need to come up with some eco-mechanism that brings calcium into the food chain. :think:

Preferably, some eco-mechanism that allows calcium to fly [like calcium-encased hydrogen bubbles :dubious: ].
 
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Just say that their ethnic group doesn't grow hair (other than on their heads, if you want them to).

Or...I have established the population's adroitness at GMOs. Just genetically alter my people not to grow hair. This is a hot, loincloth-wearing-type planet. :whew:Having hair would be counter-productive. :think:

Hmm, lots of radiation too, which means melanin-darkened skin.
 
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Bones are made of calcium, the fifth most abundant element in the earth's crust. Except I got no planetary crust. :dunno: Yet calcium is needed for everything from bones to heartbeats. Clearly, I need to come up with some eco-mechanism that brings calcium into the food chain. :think:

Preferably, some eco-mechanism that allows calcium to fly [like calcium-encased hydrogen bubbles].

Calcium presents me with a two-part problem: One, I need a virtually inexhaustible supply. Answer: Collisions in the planetary rings result ring dust settling into the upper atmosphere. Two, get these inorganic minerals into the food chain. Answer: High above where my story takes place are floating farms using ring dust to grow leafy vegetables, etc.

Water is another problem. There are no rivers, lakes, reservoirs, aquifers, etc. So I will need rain, lots and lots of rain.
 
Calcium presents me with a two-part problem: One, I need a virtually inexhaustible supply. Answer: Collisions in the planetary rings result ring dust settling into the upper atmosphere. Two, get these inorganic minerals into the food chain. Answer: High above where my story takes place are floating farms using ring dust to grow leafy vegetables, etc.

Water is another problem. There are no rivers, lakes, reservoirs, aquifers, etc. So I will need rain, lots and lots of rain.
If you have at least one moon, all you need is a cow to jump over it. Or something like that. :p

As for water, it consists of hydrogen and oxygen. If these people are that good at genetic engineering, they should be able to make H2+O2-->H2O happen.
 
The planet has to have a core - the Roche Limit for gas, or even liquid, is incredibly low.

What you're describing is, basically, life in the upper atmosphere of a gas giant, where heat and pressure forbid going down within, oh, 1,000 miles of the core; however, in a rich biosphere, there could be a plausible exchange of material upward, through wind and predation, etc.
 
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