Xenocide and the Speakers for the Dead

"Salamanca, 790AD"
Written by Sullla

Temujin mopped his brow free of the sweat that lightly dewed his forehead. Within seconds a fresh dribble of moisture burst out, due undoubtably to the sweltering summer heat in these tropical latitudes. Accepting the inevitable with regards to the climate, he turned to review his gathered army once again on the plains below his high vantage point.

The khan had assembled a mighty force here to do battle with the Iroquois, upon whom the Mongols had recently declared war. Equipped with new cavalry forces, they had already razed the city of Niagra to the ground and moved deep into the territory of the Iroquois Confederacy, seeking to destroy the capital city and smash the power of their foes once and for all. This mission was considered important enough for Temujin to risk going himself in person to command the armed forces; for as good as his generals were in battle, no one was as skilled as the wily khan. After weeks of marching through enemy territory, he knew that today was the day in which the campaign would be decided. The city of Salamanca lay just over the horizon in the east, close enough that last night they could see its lights shining out against the darkness. Drawn up to meet them in front of the city was a vast host of forces, considerably larger than what Temujin had brought, there to make a final stand outside their beloved capital. Rumor had it that Hiawatha was commanding the Iroquois army in person; Temujin hoped that it was so, because he knew that the chief was no general and would likely make serious mistakes in the heat of battle.

There was little to do this morning; he had already made his rousing speech to the men last night around the blazing light of huge bonfires, letting the sound of their answering roars echo out and down the grasslands below to the city where the people would cower in fear at the noise. The plan for today's action was already set as well, at least as much as any plan could exist before a battle, but Temujin stopped to speak with his two right-hand men one more time.

"Yes, yes, I know; my job is to command the left cavalry wing and defend our flank on that side," said Magdalai tonelessly. He once again had the blue-collar job to play in this battle, with the goal of defending the left from Hiawatha's cavalry. "I won't let you down in this fight, sir," said the man in sincere tones.

Temujin liked Magdalai a lot; another individual who had virtually no recognizable talents but scraped, clawed, and bit his way into power and authority. Unlike his other general for today's action, he could afford to give Magdalai a longer leash. "Good. If you see an opportunity in today's battle, I want you to take it. Anything can happen out there, and I don't want you held back by outdated orders. You have my trust in your decision-making abilities."

"Thank you sir!" exclaimed the other man. Temujin nodded and left, leaving a very eager Magdalai behind. The khan was known for keeping everyone working for him under very tight control; this was truly an honor indeed.

Magdalai was already out of Temujin's mind, however, as he strode up to the tent of his other commander for the day. Ogodei was in charge of the right side of the line; his cavalry would be the striking arm of the Mongol force, with the goal of punching through the opposing Iroquois force and taking the enemy army from behind. It was the sort of straight-forward task that the bull-headed Ogodei should be able to handle well - so long as nothing unexpected came up. That was the one thing that Temujin worried about.

"Oh, what am I supposed to do today?" said Ogodei blankly when pressed on the issue by Temujin. "Uhh, charge, of course! Don't worry, we'll carve them to bits and smash the rest of those guys from behind. It'll be easy!" he promised offhandedly.

"See that it is," was the curt response from Temujin. He was holding the center of the line today, back with the reserves to deploy them when and where necessary. If all went well, Ogodei would break through on the right side and he would send his forces to exploit the gaps in the Iroquois lines. The Mongols were outnumbered today, but Temujin well knew that an army attacked from behind or in flank could quickly turn into a panicked mess, easily slaughtered by a much smaller force. He also expected to have a technological edge, as his cavalry was equipped with rifles while the Iroquois still fielded knights in armor and even Mounted Warriors with bows and arrows. It would have to be enough; there was no longer time to make more changes.

Barely an hour later the two armies were drawn up on opposing sides of the field, facing one another across an expanse of several hundred yards. Temujin had five divisions of infantry in his front line, mostly equipped with muskets and a few with the newer rifles, and three more divisions held slightly back in reserve. His own small group of elite bodyguards, the Iron Fists, was also back from the front line to follow the khan around the battlefield. His cavalry was divided into two halves and placed on either side of the field to protect his flanks, with Ogodei commanding the group on the right and Magdalai the left. It was a fairly standard formation, one from which he could adapt to the changing conditions of the battle.

On the opposite side, the Iroquois had taken a similar shape. His infantry was considerably larger in number than Temujin, at roughly 12 divisions, and also equipped with muskets. Hiawatha had packed them all tightly together, with little allocation made for a strategic reserve. His cavalry was also on the wings, but in a very unusual line shape which made little sense from a tactical standpoint. The Mongols were outnumbered in cavalry by more than a 2:1 ratio, but fortunately the Iroquois mounted units were of a far lower quality. It appeared as though the Iroquois plan was to simply overwhelm the Mongols with sheer numbers; if that happened and the lines broke, it would be the Mongols that were butchered on the field.

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With a series of prearranged signals by flag, the Mongols intitated the battle first, their warriors screaming out a battle cry as they advanced at a disciplined walk. The Iroquois responded by rushing forward in a crazed mass, firing their muskets as they went. On the sides, the cavalry of both sides charged forward to engage in a confused mass of fighting. The crashing sound of the two armies meeting was immense, punctuated periodically by the screams of the dead and dying.

Temujin calmly waited with his guards in the back of the battle, waiting to see what developed. The smoke of musket fire formed a dense cloud covering much of the battlefield in a thick haze, preventing the khan from seeing directly what happened. He relied on a series of messengers rushing to and from the commanders of each division to serve as his "eyes" in the field. Temujin quickly learned that the two groups of infantry had reached a deadlock in the center of the plains, with neither side able to break through the lines of the other. He nodded when hearing the message; that was what he had expected, and it meant that his numerically smaller forces were acquitting themselves well.

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The first word from Ogodei was very good news; he had routed the Iroquois cavalry and was moving forward. This was countered by bad news on the left, where the overwhelming Iroquois numbers were threatening to pierce the line there. Temujin dispactched one of his reserve divisions to steady that side, hoping that no breakthrough would occur. For that matter, there had been no word from Magdalai yet; Temujin had no idea where the man was, and could only pray that everything was going well over there.

About an hour into the battle came word from Ogodei that the situation had dramatically changed. A hastily scribbled message told the story: "Advanced into a trap. Many, many enemy units on the right. Defeat imminent, please send help!" There was no time to waste, so Temujin rallied his forces and charged as fast as possible to the right side of the lines, bringing his final two reserve divisions and the Iron Fists with him. Arriving at the scene, he found that the situation was even worse than he had feared; the entire right side of the Mongol army was on the point of collapse, barely being held in check by the shattered remnants of Ogodei's cavalry. Even as he watched, Temujin saw Iroquois infantry streaming through a massive gap on the right side. Within moments, his right would collapse and the battle would be over.

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Roaring a battle cry, Temujin lead his forces head-on into the gap. Bullets whipped and cracked past his head as he directed men here and there with his sword. They had managed to plug the hole, but it was clear that this was only a temorary relief. The enemy forces had overwhelming numbers on their side, and Temujin had lost all contact with the rest of his army. Every division was fighting on its own now, and if even one of them should break... An Iroquois face reared up in front of Temujin suddenly, and without thinking the khan cut him down with his sword. It was not a ceremonial one, and the edge was wickedly sharp.

With a start, the khan realized that most of his bodyguard had been killed around him, desperately trying to hold the lines. Snarling to himself, Temujin held his ground and smoothly killed one man after another, dancing from form to form as though he was fencing rather than fighting for his life on the battlefield. He could see the purple banner of Hiawatha in the rear of the enemy lines, mocking all his efforts. It was all lost now, the battle was a failure. Hiawatha had anticipated exactly what he planned to do and used his numbers to full advantage. To Temujin, the pain of knowing he had failed was worse than any physical ailment.

Without warning, Hiawatha's flag in the distance toppled and fell from view. Temujin blinked from surprise; what was happening? The Iroquois seemed to sense that something was wrong; suddenly they were hesitant, no longer as sure of themselves. Temujin was not about to waste the opportunity; rallying those around him, he led a renewed charge forward. Within moments the source of the chaos was apparent: someone was attacking the Iroquois lines from behind! With the enemy forces packed together so tightly, there was no space for them to turn and meet the new foe, and panic quickly broke out. A quarter of an hour later, the battle was a rout as the Iroquois forces were slaughtered from all sides by Mongol attackers. The situation of those inside the dense pocket of trapped Iroquois was horrendous, and the slaughter went on for most of the day, with very few escaping to live another day.

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It was a grinning Magdalai who later that day explained the sudden and unexpected victory. He had destroyed the outdated Iroquois cavalry on the left easily and realized that there were no forces at all in reserve to check them; everyone had moved to the right side, including Hiawatha and his guard. Magdalai had broke off pursuit of the retreating Iroquois cavalry and wheeled his forces around to smash the main body of the army from behind. The Iroquois high command was the first to fall, Hiawatha being crushed to death under the iron hooves of one of the horses. His body had been recovered from the field, but it was in such deplorable shape that there was no chance of displaying it as a trophy.

"Even so, it was a close thing," remarked Temujin to his new top general. "If you had been even five minutes slower in attacking, we would have been overrun and it would have our bodies burning in the fires." He made reference to the massive pillars of sooty flame being used to clear the battlefield even as they spoke. The khan's face hardened until it was as tough as steel. "But I'm still bothered by one thing. We were betrayed out there today; they knew exactly where we were going to hit them, and they overloaded the right side to take advantage of that." It had cost him dearly too: Ogodei was among those who had not come back from the fight. He had charged right into a wall of iron pikes; they had known that he would be coming. There was even less remaining of Ogodei than there was of Hiawatha.

"I swear that I will find out who was the traitor in our ranks and make him pay dearly!" vowed the khan in an icy cold voice. Magdalai backed away, feeling a tinge of fear for the first time in his life. At least there was an easy target at hand for Temujin's anger; Salamanca and all of the Iroquois Confederacy were going to be in for some rough treatment in the days ahead.
 
Some more pictures. The actual capture of Salamanca:

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The end result of the war; don't piss off Temujin by messing with his family. ;)

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And the world in 850AD, showing the Mongol gains.

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The story has now caught up to the actual turns, so I can't update again until Speaker plays. When that happens, I will post back here.
 
The Speaker for the Dead knows all.

Deep in the heart of Salamanca, the great chief Hiawatha presided over the Iroquois people. A friendly people they were, preferring to spend the day lounging around a fire, passing a pipe. In this haze of smoke, great ideas were discovered and lost. Who could think when there was a pipe that could be refilled? Who could remember what was said when they had been sitting there the whole day?

Like I said, the Iroquois were a friendly people. But with their heads stuck in the eternal clouds, they had no understanding of the outside world. Call it ignorance. Call it naiveté. Call it unfortunate. Call it the truth. With the founding of Allegheny, a beautiful village founded on a fertile neck of a river where weed could be grown to supply the entire world several times over, Hiawatha unknowingly encroached upon the rightful land of his neighbor Temujin, Genghis Khan of the Mongols. Had the abrupt man bothered to question Hiawatha, he would have learned the simple reasoning behind this contentious happenstance and much pain might have been avoided. How was Hiawatha to know that Temujin had his heart set on building his own settlement near that river? After all, Mongolia was surrounded in all directions by wide-open expanses of land. Hiawatha was the only neighbor, but if he had put down the pipe for even a second he would have noticed just how unneighborly Temujin really was. But I am too far ahead of myself.

By 1550 the former, Hiawatha's burgeoning nation had reached a crossroad. To the south, Caesar’s Rome had grown too large. Caesar could no longer be placated by the monthly shipments of smoking materials from the Iroquois nation. What was Hiawatha to do when legions as far as the eye could see marched upon his settlements? The formerly placid Chief became enraged. Who did Caesar think he was, trying to treat Hiawatha like that? Over the course of a few bloody days, as the Iroquois men, strong and vigorous, were awakened from the blissful existence they had previously thought was life. They discovered emotions they could feel. They discovered feelings never knew existed. They experienced hate. They experienced anger. They experienced darkness. They put the pipes away and the smoke dissipated, bluish streaks ascending to the heavens.

From the moment the first Iroquois warrior spilled Roman blood, the Iroquois nation could never return to the life of oblivion that they had so dearly cherished. For as blissful as their pipes made them feel, a state of war provoked other feelings that were infinitely stronger. Hiawatha laughed in the face of his invader, turning back legion after legion as the Iroquois war spirit grew and grew. Like an older brother holding back his flailing younger brother with an extended arm, so Hiawatha held off Rome, all the while moving sending its enthusiastic citizens from the crowded Salamanca to the country, as the Iroquois nation expanded. Finally Caesar realized the error of his ways and profusely apologized to Hiawatha in person for his crimes. Offering the crazed Chief his own hand-carved pipe, Caesar brought Hiawatha back to a place he forgot had existed. In a moment the Iroquois flame had been extinguished as the pipe was again lit. The Iroquois were again at peace and the clouds returned.

It was here that Hiawatha made his gravest error. Rather than send a trained diplomat to act as emissary to the insignificant Mongolian country to the west, Hiawatha rewarded his favorite grower for years of good supply, sending him on an exotic vacation to Karakorum. How was Hiawatha to know what fire burned deep in the caverns of Mongolia unseen to the human eye? How was Hiawatha to know the brainless, gutless, tactless mass of blood and skin that he was sending to discover that fire? Hiawatha, like every other world ruler, thought of Mongolia as a weak and insignificant grain of sand in the mass of desert that occupied half its land. Hiawatha, like every other world ruler, thought of Mongolia as a weak and insignificant tree leaf in the mass of jungle that occupied the other half of its land. But they were all deceived. Deep in the fiery heart of Mount Hovd, an army was being bred with unthinkable malice, as Temujin secretly had designs for Allegheny, for Tonawanda, for Cattaraugus, for Salamanca. This was not a world for nice people, and Hiawatha was the nicest. This was not a world for friendly people and Hiawatha was the friendliest. This was not a world for simpleness and Hiawatha was the simplest.

The Mongolian-Iroquois wars are well documented and I need not rehash them here, but on last day of his life, Hiawatha discovered what it meant to be Mongolian. The traitorous man he personally met with to discuss the imminent battle of Salamanca explained to him in no uncertain terms why everything had happened as it had. How could the Iroquois spirit exist in such a harsh terrible world? Rather than watch the end, Hiawatha dispatched his War Chief to lead the Iroquois army, knowing he would be hopeless against the superior foe. Hiawatha retired to his tent, where he would lie until he was carried to the field near the conclusion of the battle, which he took no part in, where his remains were desecrated beyond recognition. Lighting his pipe for the last time, Hiawatha breathed in the pungent smoke he both loved and hated. “It’s too bad I didn’t know how it was,” Hiawatha thought to himself as his strength slowly abandoned him, flowing from the self-inflicted hole in his chest where his knife handle disappeared. “I rather like this place.”

The Speaker for the Dead sees all.
 
Nice writing guys, keep it up.
 
i have read ALL of the Ender books by Orson Scott Card- Ender's Game, circa 2100 AD, Speaker for the Dead, circa 4100 AD, Xenocide and Children of the Mind circa 4130 AD.

I also have read the first two of the Bean series(the other 2 arent out yet)-Ender's Shadow, circa 2100 AD, and Shadow of the Hegemon, circa 2103 AD.


Happy Reading!
 
It's a lot harder to play even succession games when your online time is restricted to the random hour grabbed in a computer lab between meals and classes. I really don't have time for this as long as I'm studying at Oxford, but I do intend to continue with the game when I return home in August. I mean, I've got the next few chapters of the story planned out in my head, and it would be a shame if no one ever found out what was going to happen to Temujin and the rest of the gang. ;)
 
Temujin returns! And yes, this story will be finished. :)

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"New Faces"
Written by Sullla

Golden sunlight shone down from a cloudless sky to play across the streets and tall buildings of Karakorum. A soft breeze stirred the leaves of the trees in the city's parks and sent their shadows dancing in reckless abandon. Birds called out to one another in the air above as they swooped to and fro in the timeless dance of a late summer day. It was the sort of afternoon that sent uplifted hearts, that brought inspiration to lofty poets and joy to small children.

It was a day almost too beautiful for the grim business at hand.

Temujin, adorned all in black, stared down from his high vantage point atop a balcony of the palace. His position afforded him a stunning panorama of the large open space known as the Iron Square below, typically a parade ground for the military and other large-scale operations, as well as a view of the Darhan Road stretching off to the east through the streets of the city and beyond. An enormous procession was slowly winding its way down the broad thoroughfare, bringing the most beloved member of the Mongol ruling family home to his final resting place in the palace. The mood of the vast crowds choking the streets and every rooftop with a view was somber, and the usually bustling city was eerily silent. All traffic and commerce in Karakorum had come to a halt for the day, but it was not a day for celebration. Rather, it was a day of national mourning, and every Mongol from Baruut-Urt to Bayanhongor was paying his respects to Ogodei on this date.

As the funeral procession crawled its way up the streets towards him, Temujin took a moment to reflect back on Ogodei and the few other men of power and influence around him. Ogodei had been a good tool, a fine military commander and never one to question orders. The people loved his overblown emotions and coarse humor, and in many respects he had been the public face of the government to millions of Mongols. Certainly, the ordinary person had had far more contact with Ogodei than with the reclusive and enigmatic Temujin, who was making his first public appearance in ages today. Ogodei had always been ready with a one-line comment for the press to print in the newspapers; frequently something outlandishly stupid, true, but he had become almost the default spokesman for a state than never felt the need to justify its actions to anyone. Yes, Ogodei had been very good at what he had done, Temujin thought. Replacing him was going to be a chore.

And who was there available to take up the duties of the fallen commander? Militarily, Magdalai would become the senior general of the armed forces, but for all of his skill on the battlefield, Magdalai was no more of a public figure than Temujin. His short frame and heavily scarred face would never play well with the public, and Magdalai was more likely to pick a fight with a member of the press than stand around for hours listening to their questions. The death of Ogodei also brought Sabotai to the rank of second-in-command of the military. Sabotai was a grizzled veteran of many combats, a career officer who had long worked with Ogodei as the brains behind their victories. How he would handle formal command remained to be seen, but it was likely that Sabotai and Magdalai would work well together.

But while Sabotai was close to a military genius, he was just as ill-suited for a public role as Magdalai. Who did that leave behind? His sons? Jochi was making his first public appearance in over a decade today, and most of the guests present in the royal box today were trying to figure out the identity of the tall and slender man whom they had never seen before. The notion of Jochi acting as the media outlet for the government was almost laughable. Chagatai offered some more promise, but the man was entirely too wrapped up in the affairs of state, both domestic and international, to do the job properly. An elitist at heart, Chagatai would never be able to understand the common people. For that matter, his popularity was still tainted by his pacifistic stance long ago in the first great offensive war against the Iroquois. Chagatai would never do.

No, none of the men he had available would be able to do the job properly, the khan realized. He would simply have to find himself a new tool, one that would follow orders and do as they were told. His remaining sons almost certainly continued to scheme against him and jockey for power and influence; they would hardly be Mongols if they did not. And there still remained the issue of who had betrayed them at the Battle of Salamanca, a mystery which still eluded even Jochi's efforts to ferret out the individual. There remained a spy somewhere in his ranks, and Temujin would not rest until he discovered who it was.

Temujin barely watched the carriage bearing Ogodei's body as it rolled up the streets, so intent was he on his own internal plotting.

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"Next!" barked Temujin roughly to Sabotai. The graying general showed the failed candidate out the door and admitted the next one in to the audience room. Temujin was interviewing various prospects for the vacant public relations role left by Ogodei's death. So far, the men had not been promising.

The next figure shown in the door was a startling figure to behold. He was a big man, almost as tall as Ogodei had been, but where the other man had carried a hefty amount of girth, this person possessed only muscle. His dusty outfit of a canvass shirt and faded brown trousers with a small golden pin of Temujin's Fist attached above the heart identified him as a member of the Iron Fists, the khan's elite military bodyguard. The real shock though was his face, an unmarked perfect oval studded with sapphire-blue eyes and topped by sandy blonde hair, physical traits almost unheard of in Mongolia. A ladies' man by the sight of him, but no one could get into the Iron Fists without being tough as nails. Temujin despised this pretty boy on sight.

"What is your name, boy?" he said gruffly to the newcomer.

"Naadam, great khan," he replied with a bow. The man was smooth, Temujin would give him that.

There was no reason to stretch this audience out. Temujin would be blunt. "All right. Now give me one good reason why I should give you this post."

Naadam was equally blunt in reply. "I've always gotten along well with people, sir. They seem to love me and accept anything I tell them." A dangerous glint appeared in his eyes. "That will make it easier for you to control them and have them believe whatever it is you want."

He knows how to play the game, was the thought that went through Temujin's mind. Dangerous, but potentially too good at what he does to pass up. "You have the position," he said out loud. "Sabotai, show him out." Naadam bowed again and exited with the senior general.

Temujin remained in the room behind his desk, not moving until he was sure the two were gone. When that was the case, he knocked twice on the polished wood, then paused and knocked again. A hidden panel in the wall slid open silently to admit Chagatai, who had been listening unobserved within. Temujin spoke up to the younger man, who was (as usual) clutching a folder full of notes, "Tell me, is he what he seems to be? I don't recall ever seeing him before and his appearing here at this moment is entirely too conveinient."

"I know it may be hard to believe, sir, but he really is Mongolian. From far to the north near the Scandinavian border. Reports say that he's demonically fast with a sword, which would explain the unscarred face. And it says here," Chagatai briefly glanced at one of the papers in his hands, "that he was recently promoted to the Iron Fists from the main body of the army. Most of the old members were killed at Salamanca, if you recall."

"I DO recall, all too well," said Temujin, fixing Chagatai with a baleful stare. "On that issue, what have you found concerning our betrayal on that battlefield?"

Chagatai shrunk inwards, knowing it was never a good idea to give the khan bad news. "Unfortunately nothing as yet, great khan. My considerable efforts have not turned up any new leads."

"Then you had better double them, understood?" Chagatai nodded yes enthusiatically. "Get out of my sight!" roared the khan, sending his son scuttling from the room. After a moment had passed, Temujin knocked again on his desk, and Jochi emerged from another hidden panel where he had been listening to both conversations. The khan fixed him with a level stare before finally asking a simple question. "What do you think?"

Jochi shrugged. "Plots inside plots, with treachery and danger on all sides. Has it ever been any different?"

Temujin nodded slowly in return. With the Mongols, how could it ever be any other way?
 
"The Short Victorious War"
Written by Sullla

Footsteps pounded down the carpeted hallways of the great palace of Karakorum. Servants, maids, and other staff turned curiously to regard the impatient boy hurrying past them, only to smile and perhaps cover a laugh behind a raised hand as they recognized the small figure. The boy passed dozens of people in his hasty flight down the halls; past haughty courtiers in brightly decorated costumes who feigned not to notice his presence, past scores of cooks and their servants preparing the daily meal in the vast kitchens of the basement, past guards who stood unblinkingly on guard in their resplendent gold uniforms with rifles clutched at the ready. All noticed the boy and immediately took no notice of him, for the sight of Mordecai was a familiar one in the halls of the palace.

Small of stature and possessed of a nonchalant (or what some would unkindly call meek) demeanor, Mordecai was not one to stand out in any crowd. Although nearing manhood as reckoned by calender years, Mordecai still had yet to fill out and grow, and thus usually gave the impression of being a gawky boy - as was the case now as he charged down through the passageways of the palace. As he galloped up another staircase taking the steps two at a time, he reflected back on the unusual circumstances that had brought him to the nerve center of one of the most powerful empires in the world.

"I'm sure you can find some sort of use for him, sir," said Magdalai as he addressed the khan. They were in Temujin's personal study, and the sight of the legendary older man behind his imposing desk had left Mordecai in a state of stunned awe. The young boy was standing half-behind the veteran general, trying unsuccessfully to hide his fear.

"Oh really?" asked the khan in his deep voice. "Tell me, boy, what talents do you have? What is it that you do? And," he said, turning to look at Magdalai, "this had better be worth my time."

Mordecai realized that Temujin was staring directly at him and gulped nervously. His eyes were twin daggers that seemed to pin Mordecai to the wall, boring into him and forcing him to reveal all the most secret intentions hidden in his heart. "Speak now Mordecai!" hissed Magdalai into his ear without turning. "I got you this audience, now the rest is up to you."

"I... I have no talents, great khan," he mumbled softly. "That's why I came here, to Karakorum. There was nothing for me at home..." he trailed off uncertainly.

Temujin shot Magdalai a black look, asking without words why his general was wasting his time. Magdalai could only shrug and reply sheepishly, "He said he had to talk to you, that it's important he be here. But the boy doesn't know why any more than you or I do; he just feels that it's important in some way. I don't know either," he ended weakly.

"That's it?" said Temujin increduously. "You just FEEL it's important to be here? Magdalai, arrange for this boy to be sent back to his home."

"NO!" shouted Mordecai, forgetting where he was and who he was addressing. As that realization slowly hit him and the two men turned to look at him, the face of the boy drained of color. "Please don't send me home; I... I left my family behind. I can't go back now. Please... you don't understand what it's like being the weakest and the smallest..." A tear leaked unnoticed from his cheek to drip down to the soft golden carpet.

"More than you'll ever know..." said Temujin softly, too softly for anyone but Mordecai to hear. He focused that impossibly intense gaze on Mordecai again. "All right, boy, I may be able to find some use for you after all. I need someone to run messages for me and do other odd tasks, someone completely apart from the infernal politics of this court. You seem like the sort of person I could use for that..."


And so Mordecai had come to be the personal messenger of Temujin, his comings and goings unquestioned by anyone in the palace and his person unassailable by even the toughest and strongest of bullies. Because Temujin had quickly grasped the truth of something that Mordecai had not even known about himself: he DID have a special talent, an ability to see and hear at a far superior level compared to the average person. Unbeknownst to everyone in the palace who ignored his presence, Mordecai was able to see what they were doing and hear their whispered conversations - and then report it all back to Temujin when "delivering" a message. His endless running of letters from Magdalai to Temujin and back again had no purpose other than to spy on what others in the palace were doing, a plan that was concealed from all but the three of them. Even the khan's sons thought of Mordecai as only the errand boy he appeared to be.

But today was different, which was why he was now racing through the halls at breakneck speed. Today had come word that war was brewing, the first war that Mongolia had faced in ages, and the first chance for a whole new generation of soldiers to be ground up into the remorseless machinery of battle. Mordecai burst into the simple office that Magdalai used when he was stationed in Karakorum, startling his friend and protector.

"Come quickly! The khan says that we're at war!" blurted out Mordecai eagerly.

"What? Take me there!" replied Magdalai, leaping to his feet. Within seconds the two were racing together back through the maze of passages in the palace.

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The War Room was a large, stark room almost devoid of all furnishings hidden deep within the subterranean bowels of the palace. A long table which could seat several dozen if need be ran down its center; it, like the walls of the chamber, was made from cold and unyielding steel. Today the room was almost empty of visitors, as the khan planned to meet only with his most senior advisors to discuss the planning of the upcoming war with Scandinavia, leaving fully three quarters of the table free of guests to be covered with maps and charts of all kinds.

When Magdalai entered the room, he saw that the other members of the War Council were already present. Temujin sat as usual at the head of the table, his intense gaze focused on a large map of the Scandinavian border and the concentration of forces in that region. To his left, also focusing on the same map, was the grizzled General Sabotai, no doubt planning the best route of advance through the plains of southern Scandinavia. Chagatai was seated at the khan's right hand, trying without much luck to seem interested in the strategic planning of the older two men. War had never held much interest for Chagatai; he had always been more of a builder and diplomat at heart. Further down the table next to Chagatai was Naadam, who lounged contentedly in his chair, seemingly unconcerned with the whole business. Temujin looked up at Magdalai's entrance and motioned him to the empty seat next to Sabotai so that he could begin the day's business. There were no others present; Jochi was somewhere deep in Viking territory sowing chaos and dischord while Mordecai could not be admitted to this meeting without blowing his cover as a simple messenger. It was a very small group considering how much power was at their disposal.

"As you all should know by now," Temujin began, "I annouced to the Scandinavian ambassador this morning that we were entering into a state of war with their nation effective immediately. I imagine that was a bit of a surprise for him to swallow with his breakfast," he went on, prompting light chuckles from the others.

"Should we have him killed as a message?" asked Sabotai to the khan.

"No, there's no need," Temujin replied. "I've already put him on the first train out of Karakorum. By the time he can get to a telegraph to pass on the word to Trondheim, our cavalry will have already crossed the border." His mouth opened wide into an unpleasant grin. "The Vikings have been at war with Korea for ages now; their military is almost completely spent. It's time for us to step in and reap the fruits of battle for ourselves!"

Temujin's face hardened and he seemed to be looking inward for a moment. "And to pay them back for the last time we fought them, such a long time ago." Magdalai realized the khan was talking about the Battle of Hovd, a struggle so long in the past it had been even before the Mongols possessed iron. Had Temujin really been there? It had been ancient history even when Magdalai was young.

Snapping out of his contemplative mood, Magdalai realized that Temujin was issuing orders. "...advance along the coast as far as possible, taking the high ground where necessary. Don't try to attack any large cities without artillery support, got that?" Sabotai nodded. "Magdalai, you're in charge of coordinating the cavalry. Stick with the infantry for the most part and guard our supply lines, but if the chance comes to make a lightning strike deep into enemy territory, you do it. Understood?"

"Yes sir!" he replied. He would have free reign in the campaign, just like at the Battle of Salamanca. The thought brought a smile to Magdalai's face.

Temujin had already moved on to the others. "Chagatai, you're in charge of coordinating industrial production for the war. We need more of everything, but artillery most of all. Make sure that the rails follow our army's path; I don't care how many workers die in the process, just get the rails built! Mobility is everything. And if at all possible get me some of those new planes up in the air."

He turned to look at Naadam. "As for you, get in the papers and start twisting the facts. Make it look like we were attacked, that shouldn't be too hard. I want to see news stories, posters, and billboards all villifying the Vikings before the week is out. If our ethnic Scandinavians on the northeast border revolt over this war, I swear I'll sack your ass right back where you came from!" He looked around the table. "Has everyone got that?"

"Yes sir!" came the response in unison. For all that it was called the War Council, Temujin still called all the shots.

* * * * *

Erikk sighed despondently and covered his face in his hands. His military uniform was soiled and tattered; his usually neatly-trimmed beard a frayed mess. A hastily bandaged wound in his shoulder still pained him with every move; Erikk thought the piece of shrapnel was probably still inside his body. It was hard to believe that it all could have come to this, such a miserable end for his nation and his people.

It was the Mongols, of course. It was always the Mongols that haunted him, the Mongols that stole into his dreams in the night and woke him up sobbing hysterically. The Koreans were the ancient foe, and they had done much of the damage themselves, but it was the Mongols that had destroyed Scandinavia. Attacking out of the blue, their lightning campaign had conquered more cities in weeks than the Koreans had in years. Their artillery pounded his cities to rubble, their cavalry was everywhere to mop up the survivors, and those damned railroads followed their armies everywhere, forming a lifeline back to the Mongol heartland.

Yes, it was the Mongols, the infernal Mongols who were responsible for turning Scandinavia into a lifeless wasteland. And he, Erikk, had held the life of Temujin in the palm of his hand once! The memory made him clench his bloodied hands in anger. Hovd... it had been so long ago, a different world back then, when the Mongols were the weakest of nations and the Vikings one of the strongest. If only he had disobeyed Ragnar's orders to make peace!

But Ragnar was dead now, having committed suicide in his underground bunker rather than be captured by the victorious Mongol armies. Of all the Viking commanders, Erikk was the only one still alive, holed up in the shattered remnants of his command post in Stavanger. It was an icy wasteland, an appropriate place of exile for a general who had publically criticized the king and been demoted as a result, but now it was the de facto capital of the country. Or what was left of it.

Shapes moved out in the haze of smoke; men on horseback who must be Mongolian. Erikk prepared to give the order to fire when a voice called out, "You! In the bunker! Surrender to us now and we will let you live. There is no reason for you to die meaninglessly!"

The handful of men gathered there turned to look at Erikk. Officially, it was his duty as an officer to never surrender to the enemy. Even the thought of doing so was considered treasonous in Scandinavia. But treason to what, exactly? His country no longer existed and it was pointless to pretend otherwise. His life was surely forfeit, but most of his men were still young, too young to throw their lives away in a token act of defiance. Erikk called back, "Your offer is more than generous. I will accept on the condition that you swear to guarantee the lives of my men."

"I swear it," answered the voice. "Now please come out of there."

There was nothing to do other than trust the speaker; the Mongols could simply wait for their artillery to arrive and blast the bunker into oblivion, so Erikk painfully walked out of the reinforced doorway to meet the unidentified voice. He was met by a squadron of Mongol cavalry; their leader smoothly dismounted and removed his helmet. The man was of average height but possessed of a supremely ugly face, and looked to have seen more than a fair share of fights at some time in the past. "My name is Magdalai," the man said. "And you would be..."

With a shock Erikk recognized the four small silver swords on the shoulders of the other man's uniform - the rank the Mongols used to identify a general. What was a general doing on the battlefield? "My name is Lieutenant Erikk, General Magdalai," he replied. "I believe that I may be the acting senior officer of the nation of Scandinavia."

"And would you be willing to sign a treaty of unconditional surrender to Mongolia?" pressed Magdalai.

Erikk sighed. "I do not wish to, but I see no other choice given the situation," he answered. "My nation is dead; all I can do now is look after my people who have survived."

"I think that is wise, Lieutenant," said Magdalai. "I will have some formal documents drawn up to make this official, but we can seal this off the record right now." He extended his hand, which Erikk accepted and shook. Magdalai regarded Erikk reflectively. "You seem to have good judgement and a willingness to accept the reality of the situation; I may be able to persuade the khan to put you in charge of the rebuilding of Scandinavia. That is, speaking strictly confidentially; I can't guarantee you anything. Would that be acceptable to you?"

"Yes, actually it would," said Erikk gratefully. Perhaps his life might not be entirely over after all.
 
Picture time. First, the pre-war situation in 1250AD:

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Rolling across the border to pick up the game's first leader:

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Trondheim burns to the ground under the heels of Magdalai's cavalry:

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Jochi makes an appearance in Scandinavia too:

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Erikk surrenders to Magdalai at Stavanger:

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And post-war Scandinavia in 1300AD:

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Enjoy! More to come as it is written. :)
 
Writers,

Your writing has been extremely enjoyable thus far, and is very well written - smooth, yet full of information. Conveying details, without being sterile. Please continue at length!

You took an interesting early game style for Mongols, as most usually adopt the mindset and style from the time that the civ is chosen. It seemed hairy for a while, but you've done well with it, and have come into your own without untoward difficulty. I must say that I've been hooked, and anxious to follow the story, as well as to try strategy myself, even though I tend to be expansionist, scientific at first. Thank you!
 
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