Lighthearter

Lighthearter

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    That's not semantics. The gods don't actively intervene in everything though, otherwise Seth would kind of be screwed already.

    Just wondering, what's your perdiction as to what's going to happen to Seth? And Jason?

    Also, I didn't get your email yet.
    G
    I've changed my mind as to what he's really going to end up doing a couple of times. I know now what organization he's affiliated with (You don't, just so you know) and I know how his story is going to end, but even I haven't completely figured him out yet.

    You also assumed the gods were on Dan's side. That's not necessarily true...
    G
    LOL! Did you refrain from zombies entirely in yours?

    Why do you have such a personal thing against them?

    If you don't like living dead, you may have some problems with my story down the road, especially the planned finale.
    G
    BTW: What don't you like about Land of the Dead type settings?

    I had a question, do I actually need to explain what Andawall was doing in the Wildlands? Is it too "convenient" if I don't? The thing is, Andawall is supposed to be a mysterious character. The story isn't really about him. He's really there to help Dan and Nick out, you're kind of supposed to wonder about Andawall. Is that section a problem the way it is?

    Oh, and you mentioned that Jason fooled the gods, have you ever considered that he... still... might have you fooled?
    G
    Yep, that is how it is. I don't mean to complain... I'm excited about the prospects of this thing. Thanks for all the help you've given me so far, and feel free to be brutal. The occasional comment regarding things that you do like is nice, but my feet definitely need to be held to the fire. If I don't know what my mistakes are, I can't fix them.
    G
    I'll get this thing workable;)

    Its tricky to get description right... I feel like its always either "Why do I need to know this now" or "Wait, where the crap did that come from"?

    It sometimes feels unwinnable, but I know I've got time.
    G
    I'll double check and clarify.

    Do you think the story is capable of grabbing your attention more quickly, but just needs some sections to be done better, or do you think the story simply wasn't all that great until that point? I obviously can't really start the story on page 150...
    G
    You're not going to like the finale:p I haven't gotten there yet, but that one is going to have even more Underworld stuff. That, and the entire world is going to start resembling the Underworld.

    If I didn't catch you until near the very end of the book, I probably didn't do as well as I thought I did, unless you're just picky:p
    G
    If you get 21 done, please send it, even if you don't get 22 done yet.

    I'll most likely do your 9 tonight, after I finish editing my own chapter 7.

    Was 21 a bad chapter?
    arya126
    So why did SW2 end? I was checking out the thread, and it seems like a game I would have really enjoyed.
    CivOasis
    There's now a militant cult around a neo-Hawai'ian religion in CityIOT. Hardly true to history, but just in case you were interested...
    Kinich-Ahau
    According to your sign-up post, the Kingdom of Hawai'i desires to control the Japanese Islands- thing is, the 501st Legion already controls the island of Kyushu. In order to avoid future border conflicts, perhaps Hawai'i would agree to relinquish Taiwan to the 501st Legion in exchange for Kyushu?

    Edit: Nevermind, RS ninja'd me, he controls all of Japan.
    Ailedhoo
    In that case Vinsin Vancore will enter with his army of troops, ready to install a dictatorship!

    Vancore, unlike other villains, will arrest personel... although one may wish to have simply be killed by the Big Brother Mussoloni figure instead of being subjected to "treatment."
    Ailedhoo
    Can one be neutral?

    If not then I will simply import Vinsin Vancore into your game so he can conquer.
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