Hmm...last time I checked, P'yonyang was the capital of North Korea, not an Inonesian city in northwest Australia. Good mod, nonetheless.
**EDIT**
-You should change the Inonesian city names
-Australia wasn't really "settled". Aborigines inhabited the continent, but didn't have any towns. It wasn't until the British made it a penal colony that towns or cities were actually formed
-Charax should be deleted, and Ur should be placed one square northwest
-Beijing is not where you have it. At 1 AD, I'm pretty sure Beijing was where it is now
-The Iroquois weren't really around during 1 AD. They were more of a nomadic tribe, without cities.
-I'm not good with British history, but when was the island of Britain settled? I didn't think it was before 1 AD, but I may be wrong
-I also don't know Japanese history well, but I would've thought that at least a little larger part of the island of Japan would be settled
There are quite a few more mistakes, but for your first scenario, I commend you. These suggestions are constructive criticism, nothing more. It's not easy making your first scenario, but you did a very good job on it. I hope you will consider making a second version. Oh, and welcome to the forums
-GE