WRITE YOUR OWN STORY 3, the serious editon

Mark2010

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The Rules:
Each post must be AT LEAST 1-3 Paragraphs-8 sentences per paragraph
You must wait for 2 replies before posting again
No flamming, trolling, or insulting others (Of, course)
No Plagarism please
In the event of simultaneous (However it's spelled) posting the people after the first must edit their posts to fit in with story. Same for ppl posting after that edited post.
No chit-chatting in the story. Pls post on-topic, only to continue the story.
Another rule is the story has to be serious and make sense. No randomness and stuff. Has to be either horror, action, suspense, drama, romance etc but no comedy.
And it has to make sense and fit in with each and every post k, lets begin


Emilo awoke from the alarm clock. He turned off the alarm tiredly and awoke from his bed. The 16 yr old scratched his black hair and went to the bathroom like a drunk. He washed his face, brushed his teeth and went downstairs to get some breakfast and to see if his parents were up. He checked the alarm clock from his room and saw it was only 6:40 A.M.

"Still got time to eat, good." he said to himself and went downstairs. "Mom, dad you guys there."
No one answered, the slightly musculer thin and brown skinned boy went to find something to eat for himself in the fridge.
"Why did they leave me here, they dont go for work this early."
He thought as he opened the fridge. He picked up some milk and closed the fridge when he saw a note. It said-

Be back soon- Your parents

"be back soon? where the heck would they be?" Emilo thought. Then as he was about to get a glass of milk he saw something outside his kitchen window.

"What the hell?" Emilo thought as he saw-
 
...his long dead grandfather. "Man, I need some coffee," he tought and started to brew the coffee. While the coffee brewed he prepared for the day, he grabbed his golf bag and his hat. After having coffee, he gulped down a glass of milk and an orange. Soon, he heard a honk, it was his friends, this satarday, they were going to play a golf over at Oak Park Golf Club. There was someting odd about his friends car, but he couldn't figure it out. He put his clubs in the trunk, and stepped up to the back left door.

When he got into the car...
 
The car converted into a giant UFO! Emilo's friends took off their masks to show that they were in reality aliens from another world. They blasted off. Emilo was tied up. "Why are you doing this to me?!?!?" she asked. "We are from Planet Ropavikopotorakonitrogenictid 3. We have found the perfect specimen to do experiments on in you!" The ship landed on Ropavikopotorakonitrogenictid 3. There was the alien Queen. An insect creature with long pinchers and oval-shaped eyes. The Queen said...
 
... "Where's my bloody biscuit?" Then she snapped one of her 14 fingers, and her servant appeared. It was the long lost grandfather of Emilio (with some alienishness to him)!

Just as he was about to ask what was going on, he woke up uncomfortably on a rusty old bench. "FOOOORE!!!!"

He crouched down and just barely dodged the golf ball. Jennie, one of his friends, said, "Hey, it's about time you woke up. Come on, we're leaving. You fainted a while ago, for no apparent reason. It's good that you're back. What was the matter with you?"

Emilio was groggy. "I wonder if it was that milk. I knew it tasted kinda funny."

Just then an old main at the course came to Emilio and his friends and informed them that...
 
Emilio's parents had been caught while they were robbing a bank. "At least now I know where they were this morning" Emilio says to himself. Suddenly he falls down on his knees, looks up to the sky and starts screaming "Why? ...". This time around Emilio, who is not sure whether he's awake or still dreaming (after his 'alien' experience), starts pinching himself all over his body. His friends gather around him with their golf clubs in their hands. Roberto, his best friend since years, slaps him in the face to get him out of the shock he's in. Accidentally he breaks Emilio's nose. They call 911, and as the paramedics arrive they give Emilio a shot of ...
 
Novocaine. "What the hell? I am not getting a ****ing filling you idiots!!!" he screamed at the paramedics. Then one of them grabbed a stretcher, hit him over the head with it, and knocked him out. He woke up in the hospital. As he groggily sat up, a nurse walked into his room, faced him, and...
 
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