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"Geff he isn't answering!"

If you mean Kyle, hold on a second, I'm trying to get backstory from Terrance.

And yes, to the swearing. So long as it isn't overwhelming, I'm fine with it cropping up occasionally, if CFC's auto-censor permits it.
 
OOC: Backstory sent.

"Kyle, please" I said, holding his head, "Trust me. Geoffrey is a good man and Joseph is tricked..."
 
OOC: In fact both

"You, the one by Geff looking for help and Kyle...who the (some really bad words) are you! Both of you
 
Geoffrey looked at him with dead eyes. "Sure, fine, whatever. Let me finish up my current job though" He looked down at the ground for a moment, collecting his thoughts. He walked away from the wall towards Joseph and Jose. "First I gotta help Joseph find Viktor Vassilev so he can help me find the Red Finger for Jose." He did some quick calculations in his head "Yeah, that's it" he muttered to himself "That's all you have to do". "Anyways" he continued "Then I should be able to help you, but the way this is escalating, I might not make it through this job, in short, I will, just not right now."
 
Again, swears are ok. I'd prefer the asterisks to the parentheses.

Kyle stepped back a second. Feeling bold, he stepped forwards.
"I'm going to arrest you, and the police-men will induct me!"
 
"Don't call me kid, I am 23!"
Joe put his gun down.
"Sorry, so you want help?"
He looked at Kyle.
 
Kyle steps back, confused. Asking for him to be arrested became "Do you need help?"... that didn't make too much sense...
 
Geoffrey turned to Kyle "Shut up, the police are ineffective at best and downright useless at worst. Go on, scram, can't you see the adults are chatting?"
 
"All help's great, thanks, and sorry for calling you a kid." I walk back to the gutter and grab the M14 I put there, and return to them.
 
Kyle glares at Jose, but decides he'd rather not get shot. He flees, following where the survivors ran off to.
 
"Jose I am deeply sorry...but I had to do it."
He patted him on the back, and gave him the rest of his jerky.
 
"Tell you what, Mister Investigator Person, I'll help you to pay for you helping me. Sounds good? Believe me, if you are dealing with the Mafia, you will probably need a good shot," I say, M14 in hand.
 
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